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Maybe? WTF does LOLLKNSDFLKNLSKNLKNLAKNLAKSNLKNALKN LKNAKNA NNRRGH mean?

I am letting Big Sam know that I have enjoyed his most recent orgy posts. I am still laughing about the Quamp 5.1 virus.

Nope. Red?

K: Kenny

I am by no means a good source for this sort of thing, but I might have a thought or two for you. I am reminded of scene in - was it Gladiator? (hated that movie) - where the nemesis of the protagonist had killed his family. The 'good guy' and his little band of soldiers came back to find them dead (hung) and the nemesis going on about how he had defiled them (while his soldiers laughed, of course). I'm sure he used words like whore, and how the boy had cried like a little girl, etc... Anyway, so what my point is, words can have a lot of power in a situation like this. The antagonist is going to take a great deal of pleasure (because he's evil, right?) in humiliating this woman. It's going to have to be a very public setting to maximize the effect. Things like exposing her, allowing her no way to cover up (perhaps by binding her hands behind her back, or something similar), touching her wherever and however he pleases while taking obvious delight in her discomfort, etc. Certain acts are probably going to be more humiliating than others for her. Think about her character and what she would find most unnatural - it really depends on how far you're willing to go, but the possibilities are nearly endless. Having him give her over to the common soldiers for their amusement is certainly one way to go. Or perhaps just have him threaten her with it if she doesn't do exactly what he wants her to do (a good way to keep her from trying to bite his dick off when he shoves it in her mouth, ne?). Well, I guess that's all for now. It's a tough topic, for sure. Good luck!

I have to agree with Pixagi on the tears issue, and sweat? Eww. Unless she's really getting ridden hard, or the climate is really, really warm, it's probably not going to be much of an issue (unless it's nerves). If she were doing more of the actual work, say by being on top, then perhaps I could see it, but since she's not.... Throwing out an example here. I didn't undress all the way, I went down to negligee and stockings, so I was still mostly covered. Since this is back in the middle ages, you can do a lot with her in her undergarments. Whether it's a simple chemise and hand knit stockings, or something more elaborate will depend on her societal background (most likely). I also didn't feel any pain or bleed, of course that's prolly because I had already done away with my hymen myself (). When that occurred it was a short, sharp pain, barely enough to make me gasp, and some light spotting (like you sometimes get at the beginning or end of your period). At any rate, I really didn't feel much of anything the first time and just lay there with my eyes closed waiting for it to be over with. Thankfully, sex has gotten much better since then. From my own experience, and that of friends, orgasms aren't very likely the first time. I'm sure that there may be exceptions to the rule if the guy is a generous lover, but your male lead doesn't necessarily sound like he would be. I have to beg to differ with NightScribe about the earth-shattering orgasms without clitoral stimulation. Some lucky women do have very intense orgasms with only vaginal (g-spot) stimulation, but there again, not too likely with an inexperienced female.

I am caught up. I am off to take a shower.

Boris Yeltsin

Yup. Red?

^ Has called < on <'s safe answer. < Will take perverts over prudes any day. V Likes to pervert prudes.

I am not surprised.

Wesley Windham-Price

^ Not! < Cat lover. V Pervert.

I am never going to get caught up if everyone keeps posting! *wails*

Nope. Red?

Civilization

Nelson Mandela

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^ So zen ^'s levitating. < Thinks it is cruel to the rats. V Think it's cruel to the cats.

Nope. Daz?

Nope. Daz?

I am also happy to hear that Daz had fun.

Um, here? Seriously, we're prolly your best resource. If she's that shy, she's not going to be on top. It usually takes years, or even decades, for someone that self-conscious to become comfortable with their bodies and sexuality. Given that she doesn't like people to look at her, she'll probably try to have as little ambient light as possible. There's going to be a lot of blushing and probably some instinctual, modest covering up of her nudity (covering her exposed breast by crossing her arms over her chest, for example) and even a fair amount of giggling, if she's exceptionally nervous. How embarrassed she will be depends on two things. How patient he is with her and how much she want him. Deep seated desire, even innocent desire, will go a long way towards countering her embarrassment . Alcohol will too, anything from a self-administered glass of wine to calm her nerves (if she's the type to do that), or her love interest plying her with liquor to loosen her up. It just depends where you want to take it. I really, really hate the way a lot of 'first time' scenes are handled in fanfiction. The anatomy of virginity is almost always misinformed, and they are either stereotypically painful and bloody, or the 'innocent' girl acts like a seasoned whore. Sorry. [/rant] Just make sure you really know your anatomy. If not, research it! As far as first time stories, just ask. I'm sure there are people here who would be willing to share.

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