GeorgeGlass

My AFF reviews always end up in the spam folder. For me, the issue seems to be that review emails don’t come from “noreply@adult-fanfiction.org”; they come from “noreply@adult-fanfiction.orgMIME-Version: 1.0.” I’ve tried adding this address to my contacts list, but Hotmail tells me that it isn’t a valid email address and therefore won’t let me make a contact for it.

My story is in progress! I’m not sure how long it will take to finish, but I will definitely do it before 12/25.

The problem I’ve noticed, is even when a user white lists our mail server, we STILL get marked as spam.  Not always, but often enough for it to be an ongoing issue.

Oooh maybe I do need to read all the other stories in this series to read this one.  Well…let’s see how fast I can do that. 😅

The semi-final piece of “Master Plan” is posted!
Chapter 8: The Ultimate Submission
With this post, all three of my in-progress stories—“Master Plan,” “Developed,” and “Red All Over”—are one step away from completion. I will try to get the final chapter of “Developed” done next. 

The semi-final piece of “Master Plan” is posted!
Chapter 8: The Ultimate Submission
With this post, all three of my in-progress stories—“Master Plan,” “Developed,” and “Red All Over”—are one step away from completion. I will try to get the final chapter of “Developed” done next. 

Re: “Red All Over”
From ninesenshi on November 11, 2023
First of all, thanks for giving this story it’s first review on AFF! And I’m glad you’re liking it.
There’s one chapter still to come, and there will be plenty of dominance, so stay tuned.

Even for the best mystery authors, there’s some readers who’ll likely guess it right in the opening line based on the spent cartoon-themed condom that’s hanging from the ceiling fan.  Thus, the trick is to make sure it’s a good read EVEN once the mystery isn’t no longer a real mystery.   You’ll want some red herrings, of course, along with some irrelevant details – for the lazy writer, the red herrings can be from changing the plot half-way through

I Literally made an account, specifically to reply to this post, so I hope you see this.
I would say if you’re attempting to play with your reader’s minds, then it would be best to keep the mystery a surprise for the end.
I would also suggest, leaving a few very small hints of things that seem out of place, but not drawing any real attention to them, hiding the ground work for the real story, in plain sight.
If you do it like that, you can wrap up the first chapter as a fun, false start, for the mystery at hand.

Well, I sent chapter 3 of “Red All Over” to Fairy Slayer for beta yesterday, and it’s already back!
Chapter 3: Priya

Well, I sent chapter 3 of “Red All Over” to Fairy Slayer for beta yesterday, and it’s already back!
Chapter 3: Priya

Alright, now that I have a moment, let me talk a bit here!
Well then I think you nailed it. 😁  There’s something I can’t quite describe about the stories, something you can feel about the world of the Hyborian Age, and I got that same feeling from your story.
And he actually led with that one!  I don’t think he started shit-talking her husbands until after mentioning that he strangled her baby in the womb.  That does make me wonder about his goal there.  It felt like he was deliberately antagonizing Berta, but I can’t see what that was supposed to accomplish...aside from being the world’s most epic suicide, I suppose.
Sorry 😅, I was bad at wording it there.  I meant I spent a while trying to work out if it took place in actual Medieval Europe, rather than a fictional equivalent.
Aha, so it was a bit of surprise to the author as well as the reader!  Writing is kind of an interesting process like that, both creation and discovery, in a way.
 
Apologies for that bit.  I actually went back and forth about whether to even put it in the review, as I didn’t want it to sound like I didn’t enjoy the story.  Maybe he just didn’t seem that bad compared to other spouses I’ve read in stories like this; I don’t know.  I don’t think you did anything wrong as a writer, I promise. 
Thank you!  I’ll do my best!

Well, doing NaNoWriMo is slowing my smut writing down a bit, but it definitely hasn't stopped. So my next smut-goal is to finish drafting chapter 3 of "Red All Over" and get it off to beta.

From InBrightestDay on November 04, 2023
The Ultimate
Yeah, it’s meant to be medieval fantasy. And I had a little fun with the world building.
Speaking of which, after that it's a pretty hot sex scene.  I'm not generally into anthro stuff, but the Ursans are human-like enough, and generally the story doesn't focus too much on their nonhuman traits (aside from mentions of their muzzles during kissing), so it didn't bother me.
It took me a while to figure out what the creatures beyond the portal would actually be, such that I was well into writing the story by the time I made up my mind. So those details were added in later.
He is a bit neglectful, in the sense that he has been prioritizing his responsibilities so much that Merri isn’t getting a very big share of his attention or energy.
I had in my mind, but didn’t really put on the page, that in this world spouses are held to a slightly higher standard in terms of marital attention because marriages are time-limited.
Thanks! Looking forward to your end-of-year story.

Well, doing NaNoWriMo is slowing my smut writing down a bit, but it definitely hasn't stopped. So my next smut-goal is to finish drafting chapter 3 of "Red All Over" and get it off to beta.

Wow, @InBrightestDay, you really captured the essence of the story.

Wow, @InBrightestDay, you really captured the essence of the story.

I’m going to do it sort of half-assed and try to finish—or at least make serious progress on—the novel I started with NaNo 6 years ago. I’ve finally finished the one I started after that (in 2020), so it’s time to get back to this one.

It is unfortunately way too late at night for me to post another review or respond to Invidia, but I will get to it tomorrow.
In the meantime, please enjoy this dramatic reenactment of @GeorgeGlass’s story.
 

So, who’s tackling NaNo this year? *raises hand sheepishly* 
It’s been a few years since I dove in and drove myself to the point of insanity trying to cobble together 50,000 semi-coherent words, but I’m hoping it’s the kick in the pants I need to get back to writing regularly. Wish me luck, and don’t get between me and my Keurig for the next 30 days.  

From InvidiaRed on October 21, 2023
Glad you enjoyed!

A new chapter of “Developed” awaits your lustful gaze!
Chapter 3: The Girls Next Door

Well yes but I guess I’m trying to figure out what counts as thinking like a human or an animal. I’ve seen examples of animals becoming more human or entirely like but only speak in simple terms.

For instance, one example I saw in a different fandom than what I’m writing for now, had a rabbit turned into a human completely. However, they still thought like humans. The reasons they were changed is because they wanted to “do it like bunnies”. Which the rabbit turned human did with a human woman.

Re: “Master Plan”
From KitsuneStar on October 24, 2023
Thank you! As I’ve done in a few other stories, I’m trying to capitalize on what I’ve so often heard about dom/sub relationships: that by and large, it’s really the sub who is in control. Nicole chooses to be subject to humiliation and force because it turns her on. 
In any case, thanks for the comment, and I hope you’ll enjoy the final chapters.

I think what @BronxWench was getting at was that the important thing is whether the creature THINKS like a human or an animal. That is, if it has an animal level of intelligence, that’s what makes the sex act bestiality, because the creature isn’t smart enough to give informed consent for sex. (BW, correct me if I’m wrong.)