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the last option, i dont have the option to log out, only log in

yes sorry the archive site, been a hell of a day. i havent loged into aff from this computer before, so there shouldnt be any cookies? ive only used one email for aff

ive tried the 2 passwords that i used on the main site but cant log in, keeps rejecting my loging and it wont let me reset the password, i get the email but it tells me the reset is nolonoger valid.

ive updated some more of the chapters, up to 17 now. I’m hoping it corrected all the mistakes, probably not though. hope you all enjoy.

ah yeah, it took a while for it to drop down, tested it out on my own story and a few others, longer list takes longer to show up, smaller is almost instant. connection issue?

is it auto enabled or does it have to be turned on?

I don’t know if this is an option or not, I haven't seen it. having an option to select the individual chapters of a story in a drop down list, instead of having to hit the arrow/next to get to the next chapter would be useful for stories that have a large number of chapters in them. if this option does exist, how do I enable it?

I agree, wasnt too sure what to make of this but after the 5th time reading it (Yes I did) because something felt off, it sounds like to me that someone has high opinions about things and feels they are icky and sick, well guess what buttercup, thats the real world. So you told someone it was ok to do bad things ….. your a dick, even if you told them to do good things, its still their choice to or not to do it. Fiction is just that, fiction, its not real but can use real world things in any number of ways. Its up to the reader/viewer to understand that it is just a story/show/game, if you can not tell the difference, you need to have your head examined. Frankenstein, Dracula, Sherlock Holmes, The three billy goats gruff, all just stories I have a story that is and will involve torture, does not mean I want people to suffer from it or to do it myself, its all about plot and story, if anything in a story makes your skin crawl, and its that kind of a story, good job. if its something simple and just a life style thing or what have you, thats too bad. there is nothing wrong with making content that is shocking, dismaying, hurtful, appalling, or outrageous. once a pon a time, it was seen as scandalous if a woman showed her ankles, look at the world now. if you are emulating something from a movie that is hurtful to people or yourself, physically or mentally, yeah get help, but if its just the narrow minded views of someone else, the world will eat them for lunch.

umm ….. who are you? that might help along with what stories you are talking about. in my experience as a half assed writer, your comfort does matter but thats not all that matters. not trying to inspire you or anything ….. because not sure who you are, just take it as a lesson of life, that you will not always succeed, that you will fail but thats part of learning.

ive see it also used as a pleased sound (just red a story) like if someone is getting something they really wanted they mewed in pleasure.

ive only heard female character use it, but yeah never understood its ….. context?

what about mewed and other versions of it? I actually never understood its literal meaning in the context of <The girl mewed>

good points all around. so what are some other sound words that might be used (generally speaking) that could be hard to place? cooed we kind of covered, but what are some other ones that could be used to create a feeling of expression from a character? grunting, groaning, growling (all G’s? ) are easy I think, so what else?

Yes, I personally had a hard time with writing because I was a descriptive writer, you knew about every crack in the wall, the dripping of blood etc etc etc. it was easy for me to make 1 chapter into 75 – 100 pages long, now ive set to no more than 20, 15 being the actual goal.

@_@ soo many choices now. I think something shorter than what you showed there pippy would be more my taste. <She said in a purring voice>? <She quietly purred>? <Her satisfied voice purred>?

its just normal girls, so how would you make it sound more figurative than literal?

indeed. so after mind blowing sex, indicating that while she might enjoy a …..8th? round of it, would purr to decline? “you fucked my dry, I couldnt take another round with you” she purred. ???

purred ive seen work as when someone lets out a pleased …. hum? most of all related to sex. cooed had kind of confused me because as said above, its used to make children feel better but ive also seen it used for sexual acts too but not sure how to convey it correctly.

humm ok so example wise. you have a character thats been fucked really REALLY good, he/she is exhausted and the other person that fucked them into bliss, prompts for another round. the one that got fucked,would ( ) their pleased but firm no. I thought that Cooed or even Purred would have been good, but because these are sound words, I am not sure that I can place them correctly. thoughts?

when is the best time to use the odd little sounds people make when X is happening to them? sounds like “Cooed/Cooing” how is it best used?

to me it just comes down to how the summary feels, how ever long you make it, confidence i dont think matters in that respect, either you have the right summary or you dont. did it give you enough of a tease to get people interested? did it give enough of a description of the general plot? did it communicate enough of a struggle for the characters? will there be pizza at some point?

in ways yes, but its a part of his true feelings, only enhanced, but a one time thing.

its your story, do what you think feels right for it.

the easy way to explain what happens, would be that he is contaminated with something that adds to his disposition towards some people, but because of this stuff, it makes him react more to it. so he isnt “innocent” in the idea that he felt X ways about things, but the normal him would never have done it, I think would add to the world breaking feelings that happen to him.

indeed, I think that this character would be more on the angry denial side of things, followed by his world coming crashing down.