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maybe. i just wanted to try and get it to come out sounding right, that it could be understood and make sense about what's going on

lmfao, you just gave me a funny as hell mental image on that one foe. using the sink idea, the vagina would be the sink and the drain would be the cervix then right? now if im not mistaken, the cervix would act kind of like a shield, only allowing what actually went in to pass through, because the cum itself isnt alive just the sperm and normally only about 10% ? actually makes it close to the egg. i want to make it so that as much as 70% - 80% gets in there, even though his sperm production is increased from a teaspoon to a tablespoon.

lol BW it was how you were asking in the first few lines, that threw me off for a min

ok lets see if i can make it simple. girls got infected by bad energy that is making them really horny, almost like in heat along with other things. guy has good energy in him, his energy can heal them but has to be just as turned on as that would affect his energy. if he is in the midst of having sex with them, his energy will be able to connect to theirs, because they are so horny it would prevent his normal energy from being able to do its job so it has to be in the same mood? two of the girls do something that affects their cervix to try and allow more of his sperm to reach their womb just so it can sit there and for lack of a better word, radiate the energy into their bodies, pregnancy isn't going to happen from this. my logic is that oral or annal will kill the sperm that needs to sit inside the body for some time to be able to make the changes and save the girls from death. i only used the term "Magic" to keep it simple for explanation for anyone that doesn't know the Naruto universe.

i had to read that a few times to make sure i understood it, first half confused me. ok so still remember, i'm still hashing this all out and nothing is set in stone, other than they do something to help get as much of his cum inside their wombs. my thinking was this. the external os is what the tip of his dick touches/enters, not deep inside the cervix canal, but just at the entrance there. not having a cervix as im a guy (duh) i dont know all the joys of what any of this would feel like so i really only have google and anything that you or the other ladies tell me about on here, wife has limited education in the matter so i would imagine that just being at the door, would be less painful than being in the hallway sort to speak. my only goal is to have the girls do something that lets him fill them with his cum during sex, like i said not the cheesy hentai inflation or womb penetrating monster cocks that gets said girl pregnant in 3 seconds. the reason its important is because he was not expected to release as much in each girl as he does, they are getting probably ......... ten times the amount of energy from the guy, this will affect them later on and be a key part for the story later. i dont NEED to have the tip of his dick actually penetrate the cervix, just exploring options.

anyone have any thoughts on this? any unforeseen problems that i could run into?

lol he needs to have sex with them, he has to be fully in the thrall of having sex for his energy to be at the right frequency to heal them, if not its just wasted energy in them thats going to do almost nothing

hummmm. im thinking of something like in the first transformers movie where government hired students, the facility is a research station kind of like on Avatar, the government is using the planet for a relay station for communications with ships etc, but like in Avatar, there are interesting things on the planet that require research and many many samples. military presence is very limited, about .......... 250? military personnel, 100 are marines/security, the rest are other staff like coms officers etc. scientists and students, im thinking of about ....... 500? students, 150 scientists, 50 custodians, 150 engineers to fix the broken stuff and keep lights on. 1100? people on the station.

it would appear that i have forgotten to explain a key part of the idea. its not the guy doing any of this, its the girls because aside from desperately wanting to be cured from whats going to kill them, very slowly and painfully while driving them mad by hormone overload, every hormone being activated at once, causing them to experience puberty like symptoms, pregnancy/birth, horny, PMS ......... all of it at the same time, actually reminds me that i need to explore that more in this chapter too. i used "uncomfortable" because i was reading a thing where some women say they love it when the cervix is touched/fucked, others saying its an instant sex mood killer and everything else under the sun, hell ive seen a vid where a woman actually pieces her nipples with inch long spikes and appears to get off on that ....... i dont. anyways, the guy is just going with the idea of having sex with the girls, cum in them and they get fixed by it, not that hes not having fun having sex with three lovely women in one day. the girls are told "behind the scenes" that the more cum he releases and enters their womb, the better as there is more energy that will heal them sort to speak. the reason i have it that sex is required, is because the bad energy infected them while they were sexually aroused, now they are currently in a state of constant sexual arousal and nothing can stop that until they are cured (masterbating etc isnt giving them the release they need) the guy needs to be sexualy aroused too as that would affect his energy and allow the energy of the girls to synchronize the other two energy to their settings in effect cleansing them of the bad energy that would be turned into their own energy. damn that sounds so complicated. i'm just trying to find a good way to allow slight interaction with the cervix that wouldn't give the impression of something from one of the SAW movies. yes this is a Naruto story and if anyone can come up with a better idea that would allow him to fire off his loads almost directly into the womb, within some reason, i'm open to suggestions.

lol ok so this is what i have as it stands. Woman A: uses her "x-ray vision" (not really just what i'm calling it) to press the tip of guys dick against the opening of her cervix when he cums inside her, does it 8 times and each of his loads is 1TBS Woman B: uses "Magic" (not really just simple to call it that) to open her cervix allowing the tip of his dick just barely inside her cervix and again cums in her, this girl get 4 loads Woman C: uses "Magic" to open her entire cervix telling her body its time to give birth, allowing his entire tip inside the opening and is willing to put up with any pain (they have a history, shes been mean to him) and gets 6 loads woman A touches the tip to cervix, woman B gets half of tip inside cervix and C gets entire tip inside cervix. im sure the last 2 sound more uncomfortable to most women, mostly the last one, but at least its not a horse cock of 10in entering the womb

yeah in the first story, im not after blood gore and extreme pain. i am open to some discomfort and a little bit of pain. so the 2nd girl uses "magic" to fool the body into thinking she is giving birth, causing the cervix to dilate like that so that he can cum almost directly into her womb. i think the 3rd girl could do something similar, just not to the same extreme, where it does open, but just his tip is pressed there each time he cums, might still need some work on the finer points of it

lol i just dont want to state something that would be incorrect in the actual sense of real human biology. if the measurements are correct, then it would take a dick about ..... 10in long? to make it into the womb just by length alone, give or take. but that doesn't mean i cant use magical ways to make it less of a problem for the majority of the sperm to make it to the finish line so the 2nd girl could use "Magic" to cause her entire cervix to just open up as if getting ready to give birth, just no baby in there, so maybe the tip would just enter the cervix. would it be possible for the muscles in a womans vagina/cervix or what have you create suction? i once saw a video of a woman that was able to smoke with her pussy, take a drag and blow it out ...... unless it was fake (smoking pussy 100% turn off) the guy has enhanced his sperm with "magic" that must for lack of a better word, flood their bodies with his energy to cure them from something that for lack of a better word, infected them with bad energy and will kill them, if the sperm dies then the energy is gone so they have to swim around inside for a while and flood the bodies with the energy and allow the body to adapt to it and be purged of the bad energy as it slowly absorbs the good energy. so i need ways that would sound somewhat possible to make an entire deposit inside the girls womb, hes not trying to get them pregnant, just help cure them ...... for now.

right, i do want to avoid that, the sexual encounters that the guy in my first story is having right now are supposed to be the gentle first time together getting into things and learning what both want. but the ultimate goal is for him to in some way or another, to unload as much as he can directly into the womb of 3 women. the first girl who i have already worked the idea out (she used x-ray vision to press his tip to her opening) i figured the 2nd girl uses "Magic" to open her cervix and have him kind of slide past, that brings me to a question, is the cervix just the "Door" to the womb or is it the passage to the womb too? the 3rd girl, im actually not sure on how she could try and make sure to get as much of his cum inside her womb other than using something else to prevent any pain and maybe force him right into her? open to suggestions on it actually

lol ive heard that as well, but i hear alot of conflicting things too, and i find it hard to split what is opinion and just is. like some women like annal and others dont, but i know that it can also hurt alot if done wrong and could be dangerous depending on some things. also, is it just in the vagina that is supposed to be the deadly area for sperm or does that continue into the womb? even though i can write it any way i like, it would be good to have the info in general for my notes. as for the horror story, i was thinking about an alien creature entering a woman and turning into some kind of hybrid or something.

so trying to be accurate as best i can, how far can sex and penetrating the cervix actually go? I know that unless a woman has dilated, the cervix is nothing short of the great wall of china with one very small opening. typically, if a guy is able to press into it i know that it can cause some pain and discomfort, but how far can it go? also, if for some reason the cervix is actually open, just for the sake of argument because of "Magic" how far could a guy penetrate, would it be safe to a point and would it be possible to enter to womb? i need 3 good ways to almost ensure that when a guy cums that 99.9% of the sperm enters the womb for one story. i also need the info for a horror story im thinking of writing.

lmfao yes, im thinking at least .......100 - 300 ish years, still haven't decided yet. going to have an alien (not Aliens) encounter

yeah, i wasn't too sure about there being a title name or anything for a facility or what have you like that. now all i have to do is come up with a design and a name for the place that will be researching a M class planet (their the guinea pigs to see how many things can eat you) so im thinking it would require ......... i think 6 departments, not looking up the name at the moment but. animal/fish/bird research. plant geological planet wide. contaminants planets weather 6th one i had it then lost it of course there would also be housing for the students and staff, the barracks and armory followed by a sort of command center.

well my idea is that it would have about 150-300 people there, being the students, professors, support staff and security (armed with mostly non lethal weapons but some that are) and the facility is doing a global analyzation of the planets environment and animal life. i was unsure if because it was supported by students or not if there would be a different kind of name attached to it or anything instead of just calling it Facility 963, or Alpha station etc

so there has been something bothering me for some time now, ive tried google but i am not getting the answer i am looking for. i want to know if there is a different kind of name for a research facility that would be operated mostly by college/university students, like if you were to go to south american and study new plants or animals etc. I have a story in mind that takes place on an alien planet, i guess you could say almost like pandora from JCs Avatar only different, more M class. would that kind of facility have some kind of special tag to its name or something that would identify it as being full of students and the like or no?

i think its all about the description that you are using. if the description of a story is too vague, it doesn't give people the desire to want to read it, you might get some people that do get tempted and will read it. now that said, it also depends on the fandom and the story elements itself, there is a 90% chance that i wont read a story with dick girls in it or Male pregnancy, but thats just me. I would recommend that you ask yourself, is it the universe thats the issue or the story type, what can you change and what can you not, what will help the story and what will destroy it. in my opinion, a Saw story with romance in it, not going to happen, though you will probably get some people that will read it, will they enjoy that romance in a horror setting? i think that it also depends on the type of elements that you are adding in, romance isnt just romance, there are many kinds of it just like there are many kinds of sex if you add in toys, positions and numbers of partners etc. if you have survivors romance, the hero and X person being forced to support each other and make it out alive and have that kiss in the sunset type of thing, it could work. now that all said, i think its really up to you, write your story the way you want it, dont try to please everyone, but dont ignore everyone. have a set goal for the characters in the story, be it surviving the alien monster, or getting off the mountain etc and have the romance already set in place or happen by accident, but again thats my opinion.

so im editing a scene in my story where a guy and girl are having a romantic ish moment of sex, the girl has loved the guy from when they were younger and now she is going to have him. i have him starting with kissing her and slowly sliding down her body, planting feathery light kisses all the way down, lightly tending to her breasts for a few moments but eventually ends up eating her out to a small orgasm. he asks her if she is ready for him and is very considerate of what she feels and wants, the sex is slow and personal and not a jack hammer. she does eventually get on top of him and ride him hard so she can have an earth shattering orgasm, then they lay in bed cuddling, her still on top of him. story is more detailed than this, but what more could i do so that the scene is more .... powerful?

i have seen many stories where a character is way ooc but its never explained and i think thats the real issue. if you just start to write a fanfic on anything and don't explain the changes in the universe that would effect the character, then most would think that its going to be based on canon data, but as a writer you have no obligation to do that and it could be too much useless information that means nothing. example: canon version Bob is an elite knight from ..... some mystical kingdom and holds a strong standing of honor and loyalty to his king. fanfic version Bob found his king in bed with his wife/girlfriend and became enraged, turning his back on the kingdom forever, he became dark and twisted into a black knight. in that little quick thing i made we have an explanation of the change in story. but really like many will tell you, its your story and you can do anything you like.

for some time ive been thinking of making a Naruto Avatar crossover, adding in both the actual lands of each other into a part of the nations, like the land of fire etc, and that the Avatar would still be the Avatar it would be something different in that some kind of cults or religions trying to find a balance in the elemental forces. in reality they would just be another kind of ultimate weapon for the nations, like a 2nd type of tailed beast or whatever you want to call it. i think it could work but would take alot of reasearch

ok i think i have it worded properly ..... maybe. slight change of topic, does anyone know what a japanese cottage/hut would be called, something that would not be for a peasant, but for some one of mid status or something. a place where a person could live for a while and maybe have a lady visit for a bit, kind of like a temp bachelor pad?

i think its kind of both. from what i understand at least, unlike mormon polygamy, the wives would actually have a say in things in that, if they want sex or not, kids or anything that a normal marriage would entail, that the husband can not simply snap his fingers and demand to be "serviced" or anything of that kind. it is like poly in that they are all living in the same house, some of the girls though would entertain each other on their own as they please. hence why i thought of making my own version because its not really like the types i had read about, that i did find