BronxWench

Word_Slave took all her works down, and has asked that any saved copies not be shared around. We support her request, and ask that you do as well.

Honestly, the mechanics of release are the same. I think the key lies in whether or not the person giving the blow job has any experience at all. If not, then while he might not have anything to compare it to, other than his own hand, it might be a bit clumsy. Does she perhaps have trouble going past the head, and will she use her hand a bit? Might the actual ejaculation surprise them both? It doesn't need to be like a cannon going off to startle a girl giving her first blow job, not to mention the taste of semen for the first time. As far as he's concerned, not having anything to compare, he won't notice that a mouth can be looser than a vagina, even with a bit of pressure from the tongue, and there's teeth in there to watch out for. These are the things to work out in your on head before you even start writing. And keep in mind that what goes on in your readers' heads is almost ALWAYS smuttier than anything you can write, so give them the framework and let them fill in the squishy bits.

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So, to try and use the format provided, you're asking for: Subdomain: Television Fandom: Black Sails Do you have a story for it? Yes, I'm working on one. That about right?

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Aaww, good dad, then! Seriously, my step-sis lives in Brooklyn, and it's always an adventure going there. I also wind up doing business in downtown Brooklyn, but I have at least 3 getaway routes mapped out after I say goodbye to the boys at HQ.

First of all, once you're past the age of two, there is no accidental grabbing of tits unless you're Mr Bean. Second, this is YOUR story, and YOUR character. He will respond the way you see him responding. If you need to test every single sex scene for accuracy, probability, or sexual titillation. then you are in the wrong genre of writing. Writing erotica, or smut if you prefer, is as much about using what works for you as it is trying to entice and arouse readers. For example, I write sexual encounters between two men. One of the two may or may not be a virgin. I can't use personal experience since I'm not, in fact, a man, but I CAN use what I know of how men have responded during sex with me. I don't need to describe every thrust, every sensation in exhaustive detail to set a mood. Hells, I can make a reader squirm happily without actually saying anything explicit at all, but that's because I'm getting more into WHY my characters are having sex, and what's going on in their heads as well as their bodies. Here is an example, part of which I used elsewhere on the forum. It is not slash, in deference to your tender sensibilities, and it is NOT up for grabs. I don't share my work, even if it's only fan fiction. This is to show how to write sex without actually writing sex: I don't think most readers will have a great deal of trouble figuring out that they had sex, and are about to do it again. And they get to fill in the blanks as to exactly what my two got up to, and I'm pretty sure my readers' imaginations are not only up to the task, but probably a damned sight better than my poor words would be.

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I'm telling you, Brooklyn is NOT the place to be. And Park Slope is way overrated, and overpriced these days. On the other hand, at least it's not a hipster hangout. Or full of strollers.

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I have this image in my head, of trolls playing Stratego. This is not a good thing.

If the only thing in the chapter is the tease, it's actually a violation of the Content Guidelines portion of the Terms of Service. We don't allow teaser chapters here at AFF, which may be what's setting off your reviewers. I'd strongly suggest you make sure that you have no teaser chapters. We sweep the archive weekly, and we do issue warnings and follow up on them quite diligently. That would be the "This is a moderated archive" part of DG's news releases.

Lovely. A troll.

Hey, no making jokes about my home town, now... New York is actually a great city, if you keep in mind that it's really a bunch of small towns. Every neighborhood has its own character and as long as you avoid the tourist traps, it's pretty friendly, too.

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Jersey, well, enough said there. New York, on the other hand, is a great town!

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I have no idea if these fit the bill for you, but: Weaseled When all is lost, can Arthur find a new beginning? Lucius/Arthur Anal,Angst,BDSM,Bi,BP,Death,D/s,H/C,HJ,Humil,M/M,N/C,Rim,SoloM,Toys,Voy,WD,WIP Raptus Regaliter – Royally Screwed Lucius wants to avoid some paperwork. Lucius/Arthur M/M,N/C,Slash Glad It’s Friday Yes, that day had begun rather swell.� Lucius bursting into Arthur�s office unnoticed on a Friday. Not such good idea. Lucius has always been a gentle lover why would that change now?? Angst, D/s, Attempt rape, Rape, Tort, M/M Muggle Ministry Relations (or Lucius Gets Fucked) Arthur comes along with Lucius on a wild goose chase - but who's misleading who? M/M

::pounces angeldust:: I can't believe someone else knows about sin eaters. You are hereby given a reprieve from all pitchforking in future for being amazing!

Thank you! I take great pride in being crazy, since for the longest time I was merely eccentric. Hopefully we'll see some of your stories here, too. Honestly, this is a very supportive place, even if the reviews aren't as forthcoming as we'd all like. (Says the crazy person who writes obscure shit... )

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::readies the torches::