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Nah. You do and you'll end up with .... How to Woo a Witch, Cruel and Unusual Punishment (great title...fluff fic), Playing the Cad and the like. Great for some people, but if you like the darker side, you'll end up looking like Sylvester in the cartoons where he's had castor oil. Although, I did like Fat and Sweat and Squishy Noises - but there's no Draco in it. It's just funny.

Okay, here's an eternal WIP (sorry, but I really liked this one): The God of the Lost And a completed (but AU) fic (Draco's a Veela - I don't usually like them, but this one he's vicious): Moonlit Ritual For a tip: stay away from the Veela fics. Draco always turns into a sap by the third chapter (exception of the above and one or two others that are too poorly written for me to rec to anyone to read them - if it makes my eyes bleed, I'm not going to ask anyone else to endure it.) And, stay away from MLC (Marriage Law Challenge) fics - this was a WIKTT thing, then leaked into "Hermione becomes the HP Mary Sue". One exception for Draco: From the Ashes - I have not finished reading this, so it may get fluffy - but where I stopped he was still a berk. My personal fav by AkashaTheKitty was Master - dark, twisted Draco who does something...nice? (sorta) Darkfic, character death: Obsession Is

If you are dead set on that "no AU" bit, then I don't know if I can help you much. Most D/Hr is AU by definition (they never would have been together). But, the best I ever read was The Crimson Jess. It's a darkfic, but I like Draco better that way. (Fluffy Draco is too AU for me.) I'm currently reading Get Too Close (WIP). I also liked The Beggar Thief And though it's not a Dramione: Spinster I know there's a ton of stuff to sift through if you go to the cat, but there are some other sites you may want to try also: Granger Enchanted: Malfoy Manor It's Always the Quiet Ones (D/Hr) FFNet D/Hr (Completed) search (AKA The Pit of Voles) One Tree Hill Dramione Not knowing what kind of Draco you like makes it hard for me to give you recs - are there any Draco types you abhor? And, since you like D/H, may I suggest The Problem with Purity (DM/HP, SS/HG)

Danny Phantom Secret Secrets review board - id 256144 wordord: strockrocked! = story rocked! id 257273 wordord: goget get = gonna get Vlad master ch 2: bad tag - no data after "wrong>" - which means no stroy data for me to check; ch 3: wordord: drink ink = drink Width of a Thread - squished line: I [line break]I'll explain later, I promise." One and One - disclaimer insufficient (it's in the body but not the disclaimer field) Secret Secrets - wordord: sm ove over = smooth over it saf safe = it was safe fA waA wave = fly. A wave rzed zed = realized hyes yes = his eyes has has = She has about. ". "No? = about him. "No? ever had had = ever. He had could The The = could do. The andbbedbbed = and grabbed huHe dHe didn't = hurt. He didn't meanttingting = meant sitting breebreeze. = the breeze. Tr war wasn't = Tucker wasn't sig signal = bat signal ch 4 - orphan dn'tdn't get = couldn't get school I doI don't = school, but I don't uncomfbly bly = uncomfortably addition far far as = addition. As far as parentsyouryour = parents or your nervousn Dan Danny = nervous and Danny td bod both = they'd both slightHe wHe = slightly. He he ed ted to = he wanted to to elf elf = to himself teahan han = teams than re imp important = really important somethinTuckTucker = something off," Tucker replieden hen he = replied. Then he readino mao many = reading too many tay aay around = to play around oft ext = of that "She sla the the = "She slammed the notput put = not to put suddenly lipslips, = suddenly dry lips, Woul reg = Would he er'ser's weight = Tucker's weight thoth oth = the other low Dan Danny's = lowered Danny's contr. "r. "For = container. "For archarched = and arched ch 6 just stops at the bottom - appears to be missing text Infernal Flames and Sorrowful Ashes - triple-spacing between paragraphs Wars of the Dead - triple-spaced paragraphs A new lease on life ch 18: squished line: "Not only had he [line break]wooed Maddie successfully," Ember's Conquering - for some reason, the final line of the story comes below several lines of spacing and after the author's note... ? Fast Times in Amity Park - please check into author's claim to have rights to story - original author not credited, but mentioned that the story was forcibly removed.... Welcome to My Phantasy ch 4: odd line break: ""Do you know why you're separated? [line break]Do you know how to fix it?"" Hex and Ember - The 'motto' is incorrectly cited. The quote is actually verse from G.K. Chesterton, 1906 English Hymnal. The Iron Maiden song that 'steals' it (I suppose a hymnal is considered public domain?) is "Piece of Mind". Rock my world, baby - ch 3, song not cited. (only one stanza and I don't know the song) CONTROL + ALT + DELETE - ’ appears when there is supposed to be an apostrophe. ch 3 has †where there should be right-side double quotes and “ for left-side double quotes, as well as the ’ for apostrophes. It stops at "I wake to quiet male..." ch 5 and ch 6 have ‬ (needs to be replaced with a space) and †(needs to be deleted) appearing. Chapter 6 also needs song citations: "Krwlng" by Linkin Park and "You Oughta Know" by Alanis Morrissette Correction Fluid ch 8 is a disclaimer - it's already covered in the top bar. You can delete this. Eternal Love, Jazz's Story *New* - duplicate text in chapter 1: "Eternal Love [line break]Part 1 [line break]This is my attempt to continue a love story." Also, author quotes another story and credits original author (Phantom180) but doesn's cite the story quoted... I assume it's this one. Say My Name ch 1 and ch 2 are encompassed as chapters 5 & 6 of The Ghost-Boy Chronicles. They don't fit with the "main" story, so I can only assume something happened and somehow these got merged in here? Eternal Love - bad HTML tags at top of chapter one. Beast ch 2, ch 3 have a huge section of blank space at the bottom. (check age, AN bottom ch 3) Danny Phantom and the Phantom Clan has characters based on the RPG "Rym World" - not disclaimed. An Unexpected Double Date - Kim Possible not disclaimed A New Beginning -Transformers (1980s) not disclaimed Vanishing Act - Invader Zim not disclaimed (and if it weren't for the actual use of Danny's name at one point, I would count this as misplaced). Time\'s End - squished lines: ch 1: Danny changed back into his human form causing Erin's eyes to widen. [line break] "How the hell did you do that?" ch 2: The evil future self of Danny Phantom was loose, and there was no way to stop it. [line break] Danny, Sam, and Tucker all sat down and listened to Erin's story. ch 3: "So, you're from the 70's huh? That's cool," Tucker said smiling. Erin smiled back even though her heart wasn't in it. [line break] "Did you do the disco and all that stuff?" ch 5: The body belonging to the voice crept out from the shadows causing Erin to shake in fury. [line break] "What do you think you are doing Jarrett?" ch 7: She opened her mouth to scream, but a large hand covered her mouth muffling her voice. [line break] Erin's mind was racing. "Why didn't I sense him?" Specter Hunters - steals the surnames of the Ghostbusters. It's not disclaimed, noted as an homage, or cited. If it were one name, it wouldn't have caught my attention, but it's Stantz and Venkman that are both stolen (and appear in the same sentence). That was ch 1. ch 5 steals Melnitz (Janine, the receptionist). Master PC: Phantom Edition - idea based on another author's fic "Master PC" - author JR Parz - I googled it only because I thought this was some obscure XO....I was sort of right ... Point is, the Master PC fics are not cited or noted in any way, and AN: "I claim the story as my" (bad syntax is author's)--but it's not theirs when the idea was originally someone else's....sort of plagiarism? (Because the original Master PC fics didn't have anything to do with Danny Phantom.) - Original author specifically requested that television characters not be used in conjunction with his universe and that he "WILL NOT appreciate anyone writing a story where the sex involves preteen"-he defines this as under 16. Danny is fourteen. Creator's email. ***glitch: ch 9 is squished. With regards to real companies mentioned in fics, please look at Gencom Danny Phantom. The company in question. Should this not somehow be disclaimed? Wanting You - large blank space at the bottom of ch 1, ch 2 squished line: "plate of food before [line break]him."

Danny Phantom The Most Haunted Story in History review 3000030779 - I'm not sure about that one - sounds like a very harsh criticism of abandoned fics and not a review. Photo Opportunities review board p 3 is stretchy cuplrit: 3000016004; p5: 3000016725 ????; 3000019007 - stalker much?; p7 - 3000019901 not a review; p8 - 3000031214 not a review Daddy\'s Little Girl delete 2035464419, 2035573932 (not a review) Infernal Flames and Sorrowful Ashes delete 2035372655, 2035373510, 2035373512, 2035544133 (not a review); combine 2035447896/2035447899; delete 3000017392 (flame - I'm all for concrit, but there's a way to give it and that isn't it) Therapy delete 2035133384, 2035135361 (stupidity); 2035305289 (social commentary not a review) ----Need to check author's age. Secret Secrets delete 236407 (it's funny, but it's not a review); combine 2035400346/2035400347 Helpless delete 2035617395 flame a new lease on life combine 2035580202/2035580467 Amongst the Pain delete 2035558602, 2035559043, 2035560234 (self), 2035558828 (response to self) Wars of the Dead delete 2035513464 (troll); check 3000035543 - offering to write for the author? not "can I have your fic?" but "do you want me to write this for you?" ???? Astral Affections delete 3000011825 (dup) Welcome to my Phantasy combine 3000017674/3000017675 Notebook Paper delete 3000012743, 3000012759 (flame), 3000012769 (self) Mirror of the Heart combine 2035437550/2035437915; delete 2035438220, 2035530705, 2035535375 (not a review); delete 2035440875 (orphan-and not a review); delete 2035464159, 2035638393 (self); delete 2035515516 (posted by a minor); delete 2035519672, 2035632547 (dup) Caught! review 3000020323 - I'm fairly certain I read somewhere that website ads need to be in profiles only; this one's in the reivew. In Bed With Vlad review id 3000029699 -same as above - user LawWren DP: Incubus combine 2035584072/2035584296; delete 3000013228 (check for whoring); delete (edit?) 2035585870 -there is review in there, but it's a promo for another story on FFNet An Unexpected Double Date delete 3000029950 - that's nice and all, but not a review The Ghost-Boy Chronicles delete 3000014541, 3000014542 (not a review) Change of Life combine 3000019946/3000019949, 3000020138/3000020139 A Second Chance at Life combine 3000031268/3000031269 In the Enemy's Fortress delete 3000030218 (not a review) Reunion delete 3000029022 (dup) Beast combine 3000029262/3000029263 Danny's new hope review 3000036164 disclaimer warn 06/24/10 ...that is the worst grammar (aside from the double negative in the last batch) in a disclaimer ever. It must have been horrible for you (not) delete 3000035720 (or edit) -the comments about review whoring aren't necessary. Simple Physics - combine 3000026990/30000266991, 3000034962/3000034963, 3000034967/3000034968, 3000035030/3000035031, 3000035042/3000035043/3000035044/3000035045, 3000035054/3000035057; delete/edit 3000027467 - promo's another user's work in the review; delete 3000027953, 3000027956, 3000028083, 3000028348, 3000028349, 3000028351, 3000028352, 3000028509, 3000029078, 3000029900, 3000034848 (not a review); delete 3000029434, 3000029692 (flamish) (OMG-Roy42 writes frickin' novels for reviews - honest!) Don't Knock It - seriously, can you get with the guy that left review 3000035237 (he left lots on Simple Physics too) and let him know that's entirely too much to say "you didn't leave me enough to review on" ? His review was 1450 words! And this is part of it: "In fact, the whole fic...doesn't lend much to a review." (But you took 1450 words to say that?!) Birthdays combine 3000034155/3000034156 ....And that's just the review boards.... Therapy ch 2 is AN review responses Sinners, Saints and Sadists - please read AN bottom. Now, please look at FFNet version. 18 chapters vs 1 chapter? And why would author not edit out the part about not wanting the story here? Mirror of the Heart - chapter 3, 4, 5 excessive AN Novel of Lust, Master PC: Phantom Edition - please check AN - edit needed (or you could remove the disclaimer portion of it since it's covered in the Disclaimer bar.) --finished

Magni Nominus Umbra - place holder

differnt ports? - definitely not a story. I don't think that even qualifies as a prompt... Odd Pregnant - is that a summary? And the crack on the "making us worship Satan" and "I am really Franz Hopper posting" (I did a little correcting for the quotes)....um, what?!?

Code Lyoko - Courage the Cowardly Dog Percussions - delete 2035366252 and 3000012633 (flame/trolls) only 2 left, 1 was still troll review, nuked ish - combine 2035231777/2035231950 - for separate chapters, no combining needed Operation L.O.L.I.C.O.N.S. - delete 2035639773 (troll) - no longer in review board Baby - delete 2035231721 (flamish) - harsh, not a flame Broken - delete 2035642551 (not a review) - no longer on board A Heart's Promise - delete 2035596384 (flame) - no longer on board The Series Of Love - delete 266722, 272423, 275168, 280764 (self); 277385 (rspns to self-review); 2035107710 (troll); 2035114364 (fed the troll); 2035346660 (blank), not there Jerimies Birthday Present - delete 264072, 265726, 266720, 280766, 286510 (not a review); delete 2035129840 (flame); combine 2035129805/203519832; ch 1 AN bottom review whore A Night of Passion - delete 2035125420 (conv) stormy night - delete 2035169873 (I don't think this user knows what a review is) kisses -delete 2035505575 (o.k...); combine 2035512336/2035512364 Gone - delete 2035477121 (so nice of this user to tell the author where to post their fic - as in not on this site; haven't read it yet, but people are aware that "adult" doesn't just mean "sex", yeah?) Lessons - delete 2035095622, 2035095676, 2035095677 (dups); combine 2035136300/2035136301; delete 2035267330 (not a review); delete 2035496794 - accuses of plagiarism? - will check into.... combine 2035496789/2035496801/2035496811; delete 2035502371, 2035503444, 2035503596 - conversation Temptations Cont. - check review id 3000013823 - accuses author of being a minor The Shower - delete 2035531588 (flame- and the flamer link brings up null void...delete user, doesn't delete reviews?), 3000014224 (flame) Lovely sex - delete 2035596079, 3000013716 (self); delete 2035600419 - admitted knitter! (another null void) Code Lyoko - delete 2035548575, 2035576329 - accuse of plagiarism? - will check into... differnt ports? - delete 2035611640 (flame), 3000012813 (flame), 3000014054 (flame), 3000026789 (flame) -and that leaves "0" ... College Fun - delete 3000011545 (old disclaimer warn-2006), 3000027841 (flame but funny) Last Chance - delete 291759, 292034, 2035095138, 2035109881, 2035159073, 2035182129 (self); 291930, 2035118714 (dup); 305161 (conv); 2035180702 (troll-stupid pplz get reported to modz), 2035186086 (don't feed the troll!); 2035206545, 2035462701, 2035463221 (not a review); 2035446126 -admits user is a minor (not signed in); combine 2035091856/2035091860, 2035093761/2035093765, 2035109831/2035109837, 2035136294/2035136303/2035136314/2035136324/2035136348/2035136351; edit 2035229062 (review and fed the troll -don't feed the trolls! They come closer when they think there's a meal!); ch 8 is AN. Odd Pregnant - delete 3000018856 (flame) Jim's Subdigital Odyssey - delete 3000020399 (self) A Lovely Detention - delete 3000020400 (self) Passion - delete 3000020752 (self) Code Lyoko: Count Down - combine 2035582740/2035583767/2035583768; check 3000012752 (questions age) Pairings: Ulrich/William - ch 2 is preview (AN) - delete Pairings: Aelita/Jeremy - delete 3000015326, 3000020377 (self); delete 3000027163 (flamish); ch 4 is a preview (AN) - delete Aelita\'s Wish - review 3000030538 accuses of plagiarism (will need to check out) Always there - delete 3000031028 (conv) Feel My Love - review 2035185644 starts trollish, but then compliments the author on writing better than the creators...?; delete 2305512579 (troll); combine 2035581505/2035581512; ch 2 is AN only Vrai Coloeurs - delete 3000016830 (gratuitous rant about someone having been deleted?) Het Meesterwerk ch 2 is AN review whoring only The Way Things Were Meant To Be ch 1 is a teaser only. The Secret of Lyoko ch 2 AN top review whoring, ch 3 AN bottom review whoring Detention ch 2 is AN finished through to the end this post 5-21

Code Lyoko - Courage the Cowardly Dog Doggie Love - disclaimer inusfficient (full title is on the sheet) Percussions review id 158677 wordord: ie use user Kakate = I'm the user Kakate ch 1 starts out squished : "pointed his finger directly at" then goes to normal type. wordord: the restrest at = the tip rest at tigss. [line break] ss. = tightness. and squished line: "but smirked "Don't worry" Deadly Essence wordord: happenedse ose = happened. Those (bold belongs to author) doof tof the = door to the par for for = partner for Turnr Bar Back = Turn your back hands of f...[line break]... = hands of fate... (?) ish wordord: t het here = this here momentglarglare = moment to glare entpapepaper = entire paper unreunreasonable = how unreasonable peopleFourFour's = people in Four's was g deg dealt with = was generally dealt with igd Ond One = ignored One ch 2: i [line break] op [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t = ish [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t liker cur cute = like your cute (je ne se quoise - it's not wordord but that made me cringe - je ne sais quoi) was wasn't = he wasn't younk tnk = you think scioucious = suspicious d awa away = drift away ch 3: don't ion ion it in = don't mention it in "W [line break][line break] = "What-" he phe part = on the part ored.red. = occurred. thive ive = that Five ch 4: irritat"I d"I don't = irritated. "I don't " "That's right - the first " needs to be deleted and there should be a line break nocontcontinuous = noticed continuous ch 5: wereallyally = were really develotorstorso = developed torso Dit! it! = Drop it! (?) blanketund und = blanket around woefullonelone. = woefully alone. ch 6: hov abo above hwn awn = hovered above his own wronwrong = was wrong this se, es, = this serious, confuOne.One. = confused One. inupteupted = interrupted old ioneioned seersucker = old-fashioned seersucker they adu adults = they are adults acceptablet hit his = acceptable that his octopthe the = octopus, the soed. ed. = softened. ch 7: f" Be" Bemused, = fez!" Bemused, ch 8: glance ove One One, = glance over at One, blinka bia bit = blinked, a bit ch 9: (triple-spaced paragraphs) matls. ls. = materials. ch 10: (triple-spaced paragraphs) coulke. [line break] ke. = could take. Operation L.O.L.I.C.O.N.S. wordord: bladed en sen sword = bladed shinken sword (best match I could find; bokken would be silly since that's wood, and not blade....but since the author thinks 'did noticed' is correct grammatical construction, they probably had bokken...) theoks oks = then looks and was confused. he thought = ???? missing text? (bad author?) "I think soy?" y?" = "I think so, yeah?" He opened and and showed - probably author error, can you delete second 'and'? penetrait her slowly making making them - delete second 'making' please (cringe - even wordord didn't really want to touch this fic...) Broken - third paragraph from the end - just one sentence, but there appears to be text missing because it doesn't flow from the paragraph above it (rest of the text seems to flow pretty well, so thinking maybe a glitch?) A Heart's Promise - song lyrics not cited in ch 21 (they're part of the text recited by the characters) - song is "Count on Me" by Billy Gilman Jerimies Birthday Present - review id 265482 wordord: show'ss sos so = show stories so Last Chance: review id 2035463221 tipped me off (was the only thing the review said) - ch 8 is now orphan due to whatever issued happened (but doesn't matter b/c AN anyway) jeremie loses his head - squishy! (I would think it was poorly written poetry but for the one sentence that manages to stretch the length of the table) The Series of Love wordord: him oh his bed. = her on his bed. (ase ase you've = (In case you've each r lir like = each other like you, whi whispered = you," whispered schooe bee began = school,' he began shcidecided = she decided hid "id "Uhhh," - he said "Uhhh," Yumiled led = Yumi pulled Jerem ere erect = Jeremie's erect firsfirst = the first hir her = hit her roomroom = her room takAeliAelita = taking Aelita to cto curious = but so curious oppe fre from = opposite from mie mie = Jeremie hhesthest = his chest waimi mi = wait until Yumi NOTot; = NOT!" [line break]--- s?&qs? = it is? aligalign="left"> -delete There's missing text at the bottom of ch 1 - open '<' and the story abruptly stops (not that I'm complaining), and the that's missing should probably be checked for wordord. ch 3: Mrs. Hertumi umi = Mrs. Hertz, Yumi Aeli[line break]" = Aelita. Jerimie's Birthday Present wordord: Jerisittsitting = Jerimie sitting ch 3: (there's paragraphs in this one!) Ahis his = AN This ---and this is admission of posting someone else's work! />-delete log asg as = as long as Code Lyoko - disclaimer insufficient (XO and doesn't mention second fandom) Code Lyoko: Count Down ch 5: triple-spacing just before paragraph starting with "Sissi sat on her bed in". This paragraph is broken up in strange places in the sentences - user error? weird draw? Because the author includes more than one character's speech in the same paragraph, I assume that those four sentences before the next triple-spacing are part of the same paragraph. Aelita\'s Wish - squishy lines: "It starts off with Yumi, Ulrich, Odd, and Jeremy outside talking about the [line break]most recent XANA attacks. Ulrich starts it off...." "want it so bad. So it [line break]can be like the old days back on Lyoko. Oh well I guess Jeremy can't be that bad."" "knew what was going on [line break]but she did not know what to do. At first she thought she should go get the others but then another thought crossed her mind. Let her fuck me. After a few minutes she decided that she was going for it and called in. [line break]"Sissi are you all right?" " "With that said Sissi ran to the door with the strap-on on and completely naked. She pulled open the door that Aelita had been laying on and Aelita fell in. She was then distracted by Sissi's beauty. Her perky and erect [line break]tits and her smooth and round ass. Sissi used this to her advantage and pulled Aelita's skirt up over her head stopping her from seeing and escaping. Then she could see the wetness between Aelita's legs. "Your very [line break]wet already," She said. "The fun has only begun!" " "shirt and started to lick [line break]Aelita's nipples." "then realized that he could [line break]not control her when she reached it but he kept on pushing." "And he stood up and [line break]removed the strap-on so that would never happen again." **ch 2: "While Aelita and Sissi were having sex the others where wondering where she was. And while they were wondering Jeremy found out that a tower was activated. So he sent everyone out to look for Aelita while he [line break]headed for the factory. Yumi was sent out to look for Aelita in the girls dorm and boy was she in for a surprise. At first she only heard the moans and the bed moving around, but as she moved closer she could [line break]here the voices. And she heard Aelita's..." "over her. [line break]Yumi did not know what to make of this." "sex some time after. [line break]But that is another story. Aelita would always wonder if maybe she could have had something with Sissi. But that story is better left untold." Always there - odd line break: Yumi snapped...Positive. "I'll always..." ... and love lots of space at the bottom of the chapter. ch 14: ""Scanner Yumi." ... one" (three lines squished) ch 16: ""Wwwooooaaaaahhhhhh!" ... over them." odd line break ch 27: paragraph: ""Sorry." ... asleep also." has some really weird spacing issues. Shadow's End squished lines: "'Nice going Yumi, the look on Mrs Hertz' face was pricessless.' Aelita complimented. [line break]A loud beep went off and Jeremy growned. Opening his lap top he set it on the ground." "though something was about to happen. [line break]She stepped into the scanner and watched it close firmly in front of her." "Just hang in there Yumi. Ulrich is just in the elevator now.' [line break]Yumi could see Aelita crouched behind a rock wall. Making a quick right, Yumi leapt down to join her. Two megatanks and another crab guarded the activated tower." "'I'll see you guys tomorrow. I just have to pick up my books from my locker first.' [line break]Odd made a face." ch 2: "...sector five, Aelita lost some of her value. [line break]But still…" "air but at the first attempt of getting past them, they backed up and blocked her path. [line break]Landing heavily she withdrew her fans. Yumi cast them with as much force as she could gather." "The tower came into view; a ghostly white smoke surrounded its mossy walls. [line break]Yumi passed through the seemingly solid tower." "William swept out his arm and caught her easily around the waist, forcing her back to the ice face. [line break]Looking down Yumi couldn't suppress a small cry of horror that escaped as she watched two Kongers leep from the digial sea..." ch 3: "eccentric mix of both. [line break]'You're not trying to kill us.'" Sissy;s revenge - don't think it was intentional, but the double negative makes the disclaimer invalid - "I don;t not own" Also, the AN at the bottom just stops - is there more data that got cut off? (Not that I really want you to find it; this made me gag all the way through - the least they could do is spell the characters' names consistently within their own fic, even if it's not correct.) Vrai Coloeurs ch 3 squished line: "The girl named Jackie grinned when the bottle stopped spinning, pointing to another girl. [line break]"Truth or Dare?" she asked customarily." - and I would like to note that the author has either never seen the "American" peace sign or has never seen the British "victory" - the hand faces a different way for each of those gestures. Revenge of Eclipse - disclaimer: "Eclipse Publishing Fanfiction" - what? (I hate AI.) Code:Naruto ch 3 squishy, ch 5 squishy, ch 6 squishy

A Better Fate - most recent addition fitting Snape/OFC See Me for Detention (check your warnings if your not into D/s) Haven't read the above, just scanned the first page of the HP Canon w/OC Het cat, here Right now there's only five pages. When we finally get over to HP (shudder from the enormity of it) I'm sure there'll end up being lots more. You can try scanning the Het root in main HP section from the back (that's where you'll find most of the stuff that can be sorted into the existing sub-cats that never was moved-mostly because the authors don't use this site anymore). I did personally like The Lady and the Snake for a short PWP.

Not really asking for a judge to get involved. Would like to point out a couple of things though: 1) He's ripping info from another site without permission. (Yeah, it's fanfic, this brings me to point 2) 2) None of the stuff he's ripped is disclaimed anywhere - by ripping what pieces he does (and he chops them up to make his trollish posts) he omits the disclaimers. 3) He doesn't have an age restriction anywhere on his site that I saw. I didn't have to bypass anything to view erotic material. (Most places you have to show ID just to purchase a Harlequin romance novel. Most of the stuff I've read on AFF isn't that tame. And none of the stuff he's objecting to is.) I say "he" always because in one of the posts I reference above he makes very graphically lewd comments about his "dick" and says at points "question to the ladies" - so he's admitting his gender. But let's get back to the basic point - his entire site is there only to create strife and discord. He has navigated AFF with the specific intent of finding and flaming authors whose material he doesn't like based on the warnings they put on it. He wants to express his opinion, fine. But he's come to a site where he knows he will find material he objects to solely for the purpose of objecting to it. I'm not okay with that. And I'm really not okay with him creating an account, agreeing to the TOS here that says he won't troll, and doing it anyway just because he feels like he "should" because he thinks he has some moral high ground.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600011979 - French needs to move to NE archive http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30744 - Portuguese -> NE please....wordord - and I don't speak the language so I can't help, sorry.

This is the user. Here's the problem: I haven't gotten around to navigating his whole site yet, but, he's taken a lot of fics from AFF and broken them apart and flamed them on his website. Now, I may not agree with the subject matter in the fics, but he's looking for them to tear them apart. I found his review here on cleanup (and posted a note on review forum), but I don't know if you have a way to track reviews? He trolled this on his site here Here he includes direct links to stories on AFF that an author has written to respond to his trollishness. And here's where he shows his stupidity: "think we should assume that by "Psyche" cybersexbomber means "Psylocke"? I would think so, although I very much like the idea of him only hearing about the X-Men secondhand and getting confused by Cyclops, Psylocke, and Cyclops' nickname Cyke" - there was an X-Men character named Psyche. Here's another link on her (in case you don't like wikipedia). There are lots more examples - he does one a week. That's 52 authors a year who get flamed by this guy for no reason other than putting the correct warnings on their stories and then people reading it anway and not liking it. Can you make him go away? Can you do anything about his site? Not a writer, but I don't think the writers deserve this type of reaction just because someone doesn't like their work. If I don't like it, I don't read it.

Blues Clues - Class of the Titans Crashman Christmas - insufficient disclaimer (no "no profit" clause) Calcite Copulation - insufficient disclaimer Virgin Planet wordord: clot tot too = club not too togetas has he = together as he tsy. sy. = too easy. htowatowards = face towards thndernderness = the tenderness wshe = when One evening wordord: Linkhe ihe = Linka (she sshirshirt = sweatshirt surprisingly, that's all there was - maybe because the author had no spaces between sentences...? Loyal-Heart Babysits comment"I d"I = commented, "I childrenps ops = ? Bounty Hunters - triple-spaced paragraphs ch 1 fight over the hot spring AN Ch 1 & 2 top is squishy (but the story isn't) - and is the warning that the story contains sex really necessary? Of Showers and Dolls -squishy! Camp "Mating" Lazlo 2 - disclaimer insufficient - doesn't disclaim anything! Unknown, Unknowns - review id 3000028420: seriously uncertain if this is wordord or bad typist: tgough abaout Bodndocks = thought about Boondocks wbbnt = ??? The Boondocks: Eleven Years Down the Road squished line: bullets left Niko s gun. (may be author error-he wasn't kidding with that AN at the top- badly in need of a beta) Thug Luvin' ch 2 has a song at the bottom that isn't cited. It's not in typical lyric format is probably why it wasn't caught before. If you're just scanning you might think it was conversation snippets...but it's a song - "Back That Ass Up" by Juvenile Thug Luvin' ch 3 - song lyrics not cited - "A Woman's Worth" by Alicia Keys The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: Cats Don't Dance: New Dance, After Work Hours, Day at the Office, Wild, Wet and Worked Up, Morning Rain Class of the Titans: Hands, Lips, Heat Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Captive, Captive (deleted scene) Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Sex and Waffles, Playing Dress-Up The Boondocks: Something Wicked, Owned The Boondocks: Quiet Like Thunder, Dim as Lightning

Blues Clues to Class of the Titans: Sex Clues - delete 3000014588 (nothing there), 3000019472 (rspns to another rev), 3000029997 (troll); combine 3000033904/3000033905 (same user same day) Virgin Planet - combine 68332/68335, delete 253133 - promo his own fic in a 'review' of another's work in same fandom? One evening - delete 254670 (flamish) Loyal-Heart Babysits - delete 2035113743 (flame) delete 2035244608 (dup -same user as 2035244614 and contradicts?), delete 3000035202 (flame-not only did this user hate the fic so much they flamed it, they wrote an article about how bad it was on their own website and put the link here for anyone else to read.) Morning Reflections delete 298022 (dup), ch 2 AN top & bottom review whoring Joystick - review whore AN bottom Camp "Mating" Lazlo - delete 300019923 (self) Brandy and Shandy ch 2 -if you include the section of ch 1 that was copy pasted as part of the AN, it's 797 words - excessive. It needs to be deleted anyway-it's extraneous. and on the review board, delete 2035373761 (self) B&MW-Curse of the Vampire Dog! - excessive AN 1005 words Brandy\'s Nightmare delete 2035642770 (flamish) Unknown, Unknowns - delete 3000028382-rspns to author's review left on their story Thug Livin' - combine 3000014638/3000014639/3000014640, delete 3000018748 (flame); ch 6 is AN. --finished

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...7&chapter=4 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...6&chapter=8 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...9&chapter=5 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=17 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=19 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...3&chapter=9 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...1&chapter=9 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=11 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...8&chapter=6 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...8&chapter=7 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14762 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...1&chapter=3 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...7&chapter=4 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...5&chapter=9 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...7&chapter=3 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=12 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=32 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...6&chapter=5 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...6&chapter=7 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...3&chapter=6 (and a preview) http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...6&chapter=3 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...8&chapter=2 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...8&chapter=3 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...4&chapter=5 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=20 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...&chapter=21 and they told on themselves in the summary...

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600017150 - fic search (I have to take a break from cartoons sort - some of that Ben 10 stuff ... ick and ugh don't cover it)

Cartoons: Ben 10: unexpected attraction - AN bottom: "note the credit of this rewrite goes to the author killed 2 death" author on fic: Shakespeare --If you look, he said that he wrote the original, it was rewritten by someone else, and then he posted the rewrite. If you could email this in though, I'll still take a closer look. DG

Biker Mice From Mars: Tension - other than the author's note that the OFC (who is only mentioned and doesn't appear in the fic) is supposedly the child of two of the characters of the show (Stoker and Carbine), this fic doesn't seem to have anything to do with Biker Mice From Mars. Character list for reference. I'm going to have to recommend this be moved to originals. Don't know where in there it would go, but I can't even find a reference to the Biker Mice world in this fic - other than the AN, which clearly states "A little slash I like to call…fun with OC's". There's not even a reference to one of the OC's having a tail (Maverick) which he would as the sibling of the above mentioned OFC. (new cats needed) Ben 10: Alien Force - These are the fics where Ben and Gwen are 15 and Kevin is a good guy Blind Falling Into Place Defeat Alone in the GTO Aliens Made Them Silence, Continued Going Down the List The End? Probably You Cousin Love I Can Fix That Alien Kidnapping Gwen Lucks Out Ben and Julie's Lemony Days Ben 10: Ultimate Alien - These would be Ben/Gwen 16. Series just premiered 04/23/10. A friend or lover Captain N: The Game Master (had a cartoon and a comic) Bounty Hunters features Samus Aran, who never appeared in the cartoon, only the comic. New cat needed on comics for this. Should this category be in the movies section? This is a 75 minute cartoon, granted, but it's not a series, and everything else I've read in this area so far is a series. The Boondocks: Eleven Years Down the Road needs to move to the comics cat. One of the main characters appears only in the comic strip, not the cartoon. (The story was pub'd in 2008-even if Casear makes it into the current season of the cartoon, the story still needs to be moved.) Danny's new hope belongs in the Sky High XO category - action takes place in their universe (mostly-it starts DP, then moves to SH). Darkwing... Possible? should be in the Kim Possible section - action takes place in both universes, but focus is on KP verse. Queen of the machines I'm actually not sure what to do with this one. It's CSI Las Vegas XO, but ch 3 & 4 XO w/ real people... The Tale of Cinderella - this is misplaced. It's not based on the Disney movie at all - the sisters were Anastasia and Drizella there. Here it's Marianne/Portia/Elisabeth. This should be in Fairytales etc. Disney Bonanza 2003 - same issue with Queen of the machines ... real people make an appearance in this one. If I absolutely had to stick it in a cartoon cat, I'd throw this back to Misc XO (f*ed up) The Secrets of a Dragon , Dragon Up!! , The American \'Pet\' need to move to American Dragon: Jake Long Should Initiation, Dark Fire, REV 22:20, Father I Have Sinned and She Will Burn be in The Hunchback of Notre Dame movies cat? There's already at least one Disney one there. Okay, here's an odd one. Hunchback of Notre Dame (Disney movie) and Hercules (Disney movie) XO femslash: Megara's Sexual Experience ... I'm not sure where it should go. Both are full-length animated films, not series, so I really think should be in Movies archive... but the island they're on wasn't discovered by Europeans until 1814. The island is a part of the Cook Islands, which (even though I suck at geography) puts them in the area of Australia, so they're in fandom neutrality as far as location. There's no Disney Misc in movies, or I'd say throw it in there. ??? Doug got Abducted ... the problem with this being in Disney Misc is that there were two Doug series. One was Nickelodeon and one was Disney. The author of this fic doesn't have any details for me to be able to know with what information I can find on the two which series he/she is writing from. But since the author does merely reference the title of "Doug" I would assume would be Nickelodeon, and there fore doesn't belong under Disney at all. (Disney named theirs "Brand Spanking New! Doug" and then changed it to "Disney's Doug".) In the Janitorial Closet - XO is feature-length films Alice in Wonderland and Atlantis: The Lost Empire (per author summary). So should probably be moved to Movies. (I am not seeing where the name "Reginald" came from though....) I'd put it under Atlantis because the named characters can be traced there, but not to Alice. Evil, Be Thou My Good should be in the Tarzan, Disney category. Author put it here because other Villains are mentioned, but the relationship - the interaction in the story, is really only between Clayton and Tarzan. Dragonphetamine needs to be in Kingdom Hearts XO once the disclaimer is fixed (entire story takes place at Maleficent's castle). This move will eliminate Flight of Dragons as a category in the cartoons section. Curiosity question: Why is KH not in the FF section of Games? It is essentially a FF/Disney XO perpetrated by the creators. Or were you planning to move and just haven't gotten there yet? Manga categories - please move: Devil Devil - info. There's only one story: A Matter of Responsiblities El Alcon - info. One story: Until our next battle

Here's one from another site- I haven't read it yet, but was recommended last week on the WIKTT yahoo group: http://www.sff.net/people/corgi/textualsph...DotH-letter.htm - It was written pre-HBP.

If you think that was bad, try this: The Unevitable Fate - author admits to typing a phone conversation and posting as a story. And you know what makes me laugh? The reviewers who want to tell the person off. "Come back when you descover some talent." "It didn't make any sense once so ever" I think by the time I got done ripping the review board apart, there might have been one review left that didn't count as a flame....

Thank you very much, JayDee! I appreciate it. DG, should we put in a new cat then? Since it is a separate series? Or leave as part of BB? Will put on the sheet and let you decide.

Thanks ever so, Melrick! Raiding Love ch 1 is a place holder

I appreciate correction. I do not appreciate your tone. I am on the cleanup crew. I am doing what is next in line for cleanup. I will modify my recommendations to DG. In future, there is a way to notify me that I am incorrect without attacking me. Batman Beyond: The Zeta Project - I do not know who Zee and Ro are, IMDB doesn't have any info on them for Beyond either....so I'm going with misplaced. (I do not have a reccomendation on where to put this. JayDee? Expertise needed.) The New Suit in Town - No Batgirl in BB - either cartoons or comics from what I can find. OFC plays the part, so not sure this qualifies as an XO or just revival of an old character because the author wanted to.

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600046689 - add chapter open, and not a story, so please delete DG, author profiels under shadowninja not under admin control: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296864144 (2009) (author of above) http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296857458 (2008) Do not know if this is same user you have had so much trouble with previously. Wanted to let you know this was out there.