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AN Chapters
RogueMudblood replied to TimedWatcher's topic in Review boards/AN Chapters/Excessive AN fixed
http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...5&chapter=2 - Summary will also need to be changed to reflect the deletion of the AN chapter. -
http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544213368 - challenge issued, not answered. http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600007879 - not a fic - a rant about 95 things the user doesn't like about fanfic - for the record, "German guy" had a name - Martin Luther. http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600015091 - challenge issued, not answered (and it's rosary, not "rosery" - I'm finding Catholic fics tonight)
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Batman Beyond to Biker Mice from Mars: To Beej or not to Beej - song lyrics not disclaimed Betty and Che - disclaimer issue - using real person XO w/ cartoon character (where to put? and needs to say do not know for Che Guevara) Child of the Dark Knite wordord: "LadiLadies" - "Ladies "anstensten" - and fasten "d't y't" - didn't "tr brr" - to her "foemoremories" - forbidden memories "man man" - The man "haveken ken" - have broken "hbeenbeen" - have been "betacceaccess" - better access "coldaskeasked" - cold?" asked "mono coo cover" - money to cover "olhe mhe met" - old, she met "t wot woman" - smart woman "shouly ily in" - should fly in "medicastorstory" - medical history "man Ter Terry" - man gave Terry "ry ery effort" - Every effort "bconnconnected" - been connected "Someblemblem" - Some problem "bere ere" - be there "goticatication" - got medication "Jac Jack" - No, Jack "nd mod" - needed "int introductions" - for introductions "nexte ite" - next time "ade one" - advance "car care" - Take care "thekesmkesman" - the spokesman Passion - chapter 11 has a ton of blank space at the bottom - glitch? Batman Before ch 11 - visible HTML: <I>ounce</I> Garage Wars wordord: &nbs"I'm"I'm = "I'm &n'> "You = "You &nbsreadread = Bread pi "Mo "Modo, = pizza. "Modo, an> - ? realluld uld = really could &nbnbspnbsp; - delete I was.o:p> - missing data, please fix. bhellhell = be a hell o end end = other end andn fan fall = and then fall sty style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> - missing data? p;&np; - delete thatnie nie = that Vinnie &n&nbs -delete Vinnie'ad sad = Vinnie's head Grey Mouse 1 wordord: &nbnbspnbsp; - delete me.n stn style='font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:black'> - missing data? Marc saispanspan> = Marc said. &;&nb; - delete &;&nb; - delete fon.&nn. - foreign. sp;&sp; -delete &n&nbs -delete &;&nb; -delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete my downdown = my way down "Okay"aid aid = Okay," I said .an> -delete "Who's ?" I?" = "Who's this?" "Just ask" I said quietly. "I'll take him out for you. Then you could come back to Mars with me." - squished line, and then the formatting went all to hell. dwhenwhen = door when &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete &nb> -delete keep wa warm = keep her warm to k thk = to drink p> - delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete "Family feud." > - delete '>' It wase.&ne. = It was insane. arounhrothrottle = around," Throttle time."> - delete '>' almos gos good = almost as good Where are you?!"o:p> - appears there is missing data here. (or the author just jumped track, never can be sure) minufor for = minutes for sp;&sp; -delete tcorecoreboard = the scoreboard an> - delete Grey Mouse 2 wordord: p;&np; -delete baccouccount = bank account aurneurned = and turned sp;&sp; -delete touchnto nto = touches into p;&np; -delete p;&np; -delete ley ley said. "des,des, we haven't evenn hin him = Charley said. "Besides, we haven't even seen him p stp style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> (ugh!) -delete &;&nb; -delete n'> -delete >-delete leo:p>o:p> = legs. "Yeahsp; sp; = "Yeah. dingding = standing p; Sp; Stoker = Stoker ohe whe = off the Prkiarkians = Plutarkians o:p> -delete tyletyle='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> -delete (sigh) "Stt!" t!" = "Stop it!" n'> -delete taistaist = the waist stoostood = I stood andes.&es. = and knees. bottip wip = bottom lip I a d a deep = I took a deep &;&nb; -delete &; ";-delete Shock Treatment wordord: t int in = night in kno wer = know, we tan wan = the one .&n I n -delete apartmenhichhich = apartment which cheespanspan> = cheek. .&nbs wo wonder = I wonder &nbnbspnbsp; -delete &nbnbspnbsp; -delete Id.&nd. = I said. ted oed = to need drinkbsp;bsp; = drinks. He looklooking = He was looking it tit = get it he che = of the I kd thd = I kicked < sty style='color:black'> -delete &;&nb; -delete doknowknow = don't know gaspgasped. = I gasped. sta Thr Throttle = stairs, Throttle &nbs"Is -delete sp;&sp; -delete p>-delete rea out out = reached out het iet = him get &nb/spa/span>-delete she t mit = she isn't sp;&sp; -delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete p;&np; -delete whotorytory. = whole story. fire I s I said = fire me," I said mtay tay = me stay sh/spa/span> = shop. &n&nbs -delete don'te abe = don't know &;&nb; -delete a le nle nervous. = a little nervous. pan> - missing data? asking because the next sentence makes no sense. Innocence Lost - huge section of blank space bottom ch 2 Decisions and Sarcifice - bottom chapter 3: "geovisit();" - ??? lifted from another site and copy-pasted here? This whole story has lots of blank space drawn in - triple-spacing between sentences, large gaps at top and bottom of chapter, that sort of thing. It's WAR! - are there sections of this story not appearing in the archive? Otherwise, author jumps around a lot without telling readers what's going on. I'm not seeing any weird things - no half tags or draw issues that I can tell from looking at it, but there's got to be something. ....Okay, starting in chapter 9 it's doing the blank space thing (like Decisions & Sacrifice above) Aftermath -space draw issues Tension - massive space draw at top and bottom of fic (top is after AN and after internal title) Movie Night Crack - disclaimer not specific on no profit clause Tear Us Apart - space draw issues - glitch? Shattered Freedom, ch 3 is squishy. ch 6 has lots of space at the bottom. ch 7 has triple-spacing between paragraphs. ch 8 has sporadic triple-spacing and a huge chunk of blank space at the bottom. ch 13, ch 14, ch 15, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, ch 21, ch 22: triple-spacing, huge blank spot at bottom. Ch 19 also has a big spot at the top between AN (internal title/author) and beginning of story.
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Cartoons
RogueMudblood replied to RogueMudblood's topic in Review boards/AN Chapters/Excessive AN fixed
Batman Beyond to Biker Mice from Mars: Bevis and Butthead's discovery delete 2035555767 (flame), 2035590952 (flame), 3000013938 (flame), 3000034634 (?) To Beej or not to Beej review whoring in the summary?! That Man of Mine delete 2035102178, 2035124461 (troll) The Bogeyman delete 2035164457 (self) What the Future Holds delete 2035391035 (trollish), 2035633485 (troll) // Inside the story, there is AN: "Well be prepared for a crappy story because you've got a crappy writer" and "I'm back with chapter 2 of what is probably the most awful story to grace this planet, but what are you going to do?!?!?" .... I've never seen that type of self-flagellation on the site before. What do you do when author makes statements like that? Gwen Lucks Out delete 3000035355 (self) Gwen Tennyson's Alien Encounters combine 3000033504/3000033505/3000033506/3000033507/3000033508/3000033509 A Small Problem delete 3000031563 Breeding Season delete 3000030235 (flamish), 3000031248 (self) Ben Tan delete 3000029488 (dup) Define 'Incest' delete 3000027159 (response) unexpected attraction delete 3000020882 (response); 3000026875 (del user) The Irresistable Ben 10 delete 3000027318 (dup) Ben 10: Kissing Cousins delete 3000019608 (not a review), 3000019984 (flame) Shattered Freedom delete 3000011600 (response) Tailspin delete 3000013013 Crimson Midnight - AN ch 1: "DO NOT read if you are under aged" - is that really necessary? Decisions and Sacrifice - something is wrong when the AN is three times as long as the actual chapter. I don't trust my word count on this - I'm getting 429, but I think maybe my WP isn't counting some things as words? ...and chapter 2 AN: "I am making no money from it. However if you wish to donate said funds, I would be delighted to recive" - Is this considered a solicitation? ... and I could be wrong, but the dialogue here sounds lifted. Dark Descent - "Copyright J. Hellraiser, All Rights Reserved." AN - this needs to be removed. Also appears here and here - I understand author trying to state plot is theirs, but I'm concerned as to possible legal issues here. Return Home ch 7 - AN better left to profile note - delete Shattered Freedom ch 1 is a "previously" - a section from another of the author's stories. As is the first quarter of ch 2. I would think that the first chapter was originally a placeholder and should be deleted. The first part of the second chapter....if author doesn't want to say "You should read XXX first" then I guess can't really stop from doing this, but it seems redundant. Define 'Incest' ch 3 - blank - check the author ???? --finished -
Batman: Therapist? (already noted misplaced forum) states in bottom AN that the story is also under the X-Men section with characters Storm and Wolverine. This is the X-Men story. This is the story already posted to Justice League section (which is where the first one should be). Two of the stories need to be deleted. Fun While Grandpa\'s Gone AN bottom confirms it includes author's other fic Fun at the Pool - just a change in characters to change fandoms.
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TOS violation: Story uploaded to multiple sections: http://comics.adultf...hp?no=600060037 http://cartoon.adult...hp?no=600040222 http://movies.adultf...hp?no=600090253 The cartoon one is listed in the Misplaced forum because it is not cartoon-verse Batman. *************************** Next is Kai http://cartoon.adult...hp?no=544193914 - wrong cat http://cartoon.adult...hp?no=544193913 - wrong cat http://cartoon.adult...hp?no=544193912 - wrong cat http://comics.adultf...hp?no=544193917 - wrong cat http://comics.adultf...hp?no=544193916 http://comics.adultf...hp?no=544193915 - wrong cat I'm going with comics on this one. (and review whoring - maybe I can find something else this user has done to violate TOS) (Also see TOS violation forum for one changing character names into X-Men fandom from Justice League fandom) -finished
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In Batman: Q & A - there's nothing there Bat-Mite's Girl ch 1 is an introduction - needs to be at the top of actual chapter, not a separate entry Blood Bonds - not a fic - character listing
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Joker's Betweenquel should be in the Batman Beyond section. Feline Curiosity should be in Batman (all movies) per the AN. - eep! It's already there. Nightwing/Black Canary should be in Batman comics Batman: Therapist (BM) should be in Justice League section per AN. - Already there. (sigh) ***edit*** The New Batman Adventures wiki - did not know about this one, thank you for prompting me to search, JayDee. As a result, am modifying the following on the sheet (we will need a new category): Wet dreams come true white rabbits Renee's Interesting Night The Land of Make Believe The Discovery I will upload a new sheet tonight, taking out the two that Melrick deleted for me (thank you, good sir) I stand by my recommendations above this change; the dup stories do not belong in both cat.s and as far as I can determine there was no Canary in the cartoons. If I am wrong, please let me know. ***end edit*** I've put notes on the sheet - did you know there were several different Batman cartoons? I don't just mean Batman & Batman Beyond - I've got one other definitive cartoon series noted on the sheet, and one animated movie (didn't know if you'd want to move that to movies, or leave here, since a cartoon, so didn't list in this post.) When we get to the other Batman sort sections, here's a wiki.
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The Untimely Secret Santa by Jay Jay Holiday Rated T
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Nosex fic on FFNet - but it's one of my favorites because it's well-written: Gulo Gulo Their XO archive AFF HP XO archive - but I can tell you for a fact that there's nothing under Het or Fem as of today for the XMen.
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Sorry - was trying to help one of the people searching for a fic and found dups: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544197574 - This one has 7 chap http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600000165 - This one has 14 chap I swear I'm going to start searching each archive we get to for the word "repost" in the summary before I even begin reading. (at least, when we get to big 'uns-the little (I have 9 stories, yay me!) areas are pretty easy to spot)
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I love google http://kh.never-wake-up.net/ http://kingdomheartsfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page haven't navigated - don't know if you need to join to read. What's here (haven't read): The Key to a Heart Victorix Summer Day Fun Nights with You A Sliver of Light Alternative The Sun and the Moon Anonymous Het: Creature of the Night That's just with +Kairi +Sora SQL checked and ignoring everything that came back with M/M or F/M/M.
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You're a little vague there, hon. I get you want R/J/S, but if there's a specific fic you're looking for, I'm lost. Haven't read 'em, take a look: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=36802 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544182808 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544179231 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544174145 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544174147 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30234 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30242 There's plenty more. You can try searching with +James +Remus +Sirius click the SQL Boolean box and click search and see what that gets you. You may have to tweak it a bit, but that's the basic format for you. Also, you can skim the Slash section starting from the back in general and you'll find a lot.
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Regarding Dave - if you've ever seen the movie Regarding Henry, then you know from skimming this that it's stealing the storyline. Since it doesn't go beyond the one chapter, I'm really not sure about this one -is this classified as plagiarism, or just a completely unoriginal author? I don't know about this one. I sent you an e-mail already about author's other fic. I've never really been a fan of putting characters from a fandom into another work - XO is one thing, but this isn't even close. It's too closeto copying for my tastes.
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6teen to Batman: Corruption reivew ID 3000033215 - ??????? (As far as I can tell has *nothing* to do with story.) All Dogs Should Have Fun review ID 3000017617 is self-review Self Esteem - noted issue on glitch board, but will also say here: stretched. A Night To Remember review ID 300019181 flame - nothing constructive just that was boring because there was no "lomen" Regarding Dave review ID 2035588767 delete - there's nothing there. Dominance review ID 300003371 -delete (not a review) Friends for Life - Friends for Real combine reviews 3000017026 & 3000017027 (same reviewer/day) Haley Confesses - Please delete: 3000019554, 3000019578, 3000019579, 3000019631, 3000020045, 3000020127, 3000020132, 3000020163, 3000020186, 3000020459, 3000020864, 3000025978, 3000025983, 3000025984, 3000026046, 3000027908, 3000028005, 3000033732 - these are all conversational or author self-review Haley Confesses ch 18 AN chapter - please delete and review whoring bottom AN ch 17 Haley Confesses II: The Handler - (sent you an email about author) - please delete reviews: 3000027909, 3000033733, 3000034137, 3000034351, 3000034828, 3000034829 Just Practicing delete review id 3000013749 -flame (idiot alert too) and can you delete the top AN - it's a response to the flame. (Hello, this is why we have mods. If peoples is stupidz we reports zem to ze modz.) Shake\'s Anger delete review id 2035335442 (nothing), 2035429302-Troll The Unevitable Fate delete review 2035147702 (flame), 2035230847 (troll), 2035342580 (flaming troll), 2035395440 (flame), 2035395450 (flame-and I still say that anyone who tells you to improve your "grammer" just needs to shut up), 3000012126 (nothing), 3000013192 (flame), 3000014037 (troll), 3000019936 (self-review-although you may want to put this as AN on the story-with some judicious editing) A Fry to Remember delete review 158733 (flamish), 198116 (flamish), 211918 (flamish), 226649 (flame, but funny), 245491 (flame), 245581 (flame), 256686 (f'in troll), 2035233053 (fed a flame), 2035317631 (fed a flame), 2035372972 (how do you feel about negative commentary that isn't a flame, e.g. ew.) combine 2035501295/2035501298 Fun at the Pool ch 1: excessive AN (726 words), ch 4: excessive AN (777 words) Arthur's Friends delete 3000014143, combine 3000014594/3000014595 As Told By Ginger Doghouse Fun review whoring AN bottom "More to come depending on your reviews." My Worst Nightmare review ID 2035524343 -flamish Nightwing combine 3000011773/3000011774/3000011775/3000011776/3000011777/3000011778 The Crush delete 2035466897 (flame) and bottom AN ch 1 review whoring The Discovery delete 12167 (self), 27153 (flamish), 111076 (calls author out on self review), 204756 (flame), 2035201394 (flame), 2035208018 (flamish), 2035316762 (flame), 2035324460 (flame), 2035324682 (flame but funny), 20353247001 (flame), 2035326711 (flame), 2035344097 (flame but funny), 2035366035 (flame), 2035423598 (flame), 2035446672 (flame), 2035446679 (flamish and calls author out on self review), 2035511278 (flame), 2035568436 (flame), 3000026881 (flame), 3000029180 (flame), 3000030582 (calls author on self review) - I think I left one review... --finish 5/1
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When you delete a user and they have left a review, is it supposed to leave the link open to their old profile? A Princess' Problem review id 3000016528 is the one in question. And I only looked because it is so close to the author's name I wanted to see if maybe dup accounts.
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6teen to Batman: When the ActionMan wordord: oceanGuadGuadeloupe = ocean of Guadeloupe (the author can't spell, I'm not fixing that) snearnear = seat near Mozenrath\'s Turn Chapter 5 is orphan Self Esteem review board stretchy - ID 2035422387 may be the culprit. Hot and Heavy Mink wordord: SoonSoon = Soon thosetiesties = those panties eqy hoy horny = equally horny waitior Mor Minerva = waiting for Minerva as wella pia piece = as well as a piece The Unevitable Fate wordord: Hunger F. Ma. Matt = Hunger Force. Matt newps fps for = new pecks for A Fry to Remember review board wordord: id 243815: eye *at *attempts = eye ... *attempts id 3000012294: phallyally = physically (this person hasn't read enough fics to recog wordord, apparently) story: "other fry.< <" -glitch phallyally. = physically. Leverage - Squishy As Told by Ginger: Wet Seduction wordord: asuabluable = as valuable Balto - Going Home wordord: gr a r a walk = go for a walk h...h.....oohhh = "Oohhh...oohhh mor Bal Balto = more?" Balto Balto & Aleu wordord: voics cos = voice was nparaparallel = nose parallel fr war was = father was g thg = thing rt, bt, but = retort, but bodyn onn on = body down on ir mor = in her Don'rry rry = Don't worry baositosition = back's position o paw paw = other paw area undeod. (line break)od. = area uncovered. Song lyrics not cited Balto & Jenna wordord: feas tas = felt was occupantt sht she = occupant, but she de.(line break). = desire. herd led legs = her fore legs aga him him = against him this?lto lto = this?" Balto In the summary: the cas wis will = the ??? will (I'd think cats, but it's about dogs, but then, wolves is enough letters, but Jenna's not a wolf...) Harley's Bday - squishy (all 6 chapters) Kid Gloves - disclaimer insufficient (says DC Comics, not Batman) The Land of Make Believe - squishy. The Discovery ch 2 is orphan.
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Here's another: Sex Magic: Test Chapter Preview fic, please delete. And chapter one of Lithium Pt 1 is also a preview - author stops mid-paragraph and then starts at the beginning of the paragraph in chapter 2.
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Ask A Stupid Question, Get A Stupid Answer!
RogueMudblood replied to StoryJunkie's topic in Forum Games
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Since you haven't gotten a response from the mods, I'm going to suggest that you place your query over on the tech support board. Just start post "I can't find my story" and tell them what happened. This forum is for the cleanup project, so I don't think they're seeing your post here.
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I'm assuming this is a story title - can you at least give the mods the link or the archive in which the story is located? They need something to go on please.
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Sorry - just saw that you'd replied here. Would have included abandoned fic link if the author had thought to credit the original author at all. Honestly, I wouldn't have known (because I was skimming the story and not reading it) if the author (thief?) hadn't told on herself in the other story she posted. Either the story was on another site (and a search for key phrases at FFNet turned up nil for shit fics w/ 3 chapters) or it was here and has been deleted (or was on a page I didn't read) Here's the AN: "Also, check out my other story, Life after Edward, I didn't write the first three chaps, i finished it for someone who gave up." Not cool. And I agree, getting extremely old.
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Voldemort's Toy does not have a no profit clause and does not say that the author does not own Harry Potter (fandom) only that author does not own Rowling's characters. Story loaded 06/20/10 updated 06/21/10.
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Just Submit loaded on 06.20.10 is in the wrong subdomain. Would you be so kind as to inform the author to load their moresome story there instead of in Het? Thank you.
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Another - this one's a knitter. Life After Edward, per the AN in A New Life ch 19 (bottom) is not entirely theirs. The first three chapters were an abandoned fic. --working on it