RogueMudblood

Harry/Amelia sub-sub cat One story, Time Turner - strange.

Sometimes it is hard about the grammar. I do so want to fix things, but I can't ghost write things already in the archive. Just post the ick for DG to fix. Some of my favorite complaints about grammar, though, are in the reviews that are so messed up you have to wonder if the author isn't flaming themselves to make people look at their story and see if it really is that bad. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * The Goode Family - Homestar Runner Ubuntu's Football Trip - please check the disclaimer - refers to author in 3rd person...posting someone else's fic? author's webpage and email - is this the same info you have for andromeda1 ? Summer Breeze: What Roxanne Didn't Know - check verbiage of non-profit portion of disclaimer please. I Love Brendon Small (let the wordord begin): fanfic eso pso = fanfiction, so e the the = to be the realouldouldn't = really couldn't abou. J. Jason = about it. Jason shed wed = shuddered ? Mind Games review board: RID 257953 - squishy? RID 2035317534: reaghten. = ??? Is that how the user intended to spell written, or is that wordord? ch 2 wordord: o, ho, = No, Family Affair wordord: He-man did. pan> - bad tag, missing text? Castle Greyskull would be ours!"[line break]o:p>[line break]Soon two guards - random story jump - missing text? (open tag) "I'm[line break]Nyllive, - please get rid of the line break - I think it's caused by the disappearance of the section mentioned above. Alab.lab. = Arms lab. Evil- had had = Evil-Lyn had personremireminded = person he reminded bee...e... = be mine... ers,ers, = Masters, body...< < -open tag, missing text? withs bos = with this witntemntempt. = with contempt. Pineapples - disclaimer says doesn't own homestarrunner.com - is this sufficient, or does it need to disclaim Homestar Runner and not just the website? (Apparently this started out as a book...) The Dereskian Queen - review board wordord: RID 213818: two wi Gi Given = two witches. Given ch 1: wordord (oh so tempting to ask you to simply load in the FFNet version...) Theyed ted = The named cil oil = council chigaingain, = child again, ye Ete = years, me wme = became ch 2 - song not cited: I am Going to the West by Connie Dover squished line: "orods ferk[line break]anonë" after the above, this is what appears: "kan ris il vanna toïl. Mantë ëars eii toil otë gaers feret llorlïe, ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer." the same section on FFNet story: "ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer." I don't know the language. The translation (which is at the bottom of the chapter) is the song by artist mentioned above. This excerpt put into google translator tells me it's closest detected match is Albanian - and it can't recreate the English lyric from the FFNet verse. So, I can't recreate what the original AFF text looked like. Sorry. thpor = thale shuld uld = she could t in in = twice in I-e tre tried = I-" she tried womith ith = woman with WestWest, = the West, ch 3: wordord: ter ier = tutor hoey cey = how they there ere = they were ch 4: wordord: insidhe she = inside. The ch 5: wordord: Can ann and hesterster = Caerlin and her sister rof tof the = rock of the leaning hea of of = leaning heavily of ofs tos town. = of this town. ch 6: wordord: re mre = after dresslowslowly, = dressed slowly, Han yan = How can impotly,tly, = importantly, Ancientoriaoria = Ancients, Moria ch 7 wordord: makr dir = make our All sll = A small rea ready," = "I'm ready," ch 8: wordord: dank haThe = dank haze. was blas mas = was black as tearcearch = their search ch 9: wordord: booksll mll me, = books! Tell me, hosphospital = the hospital ever-presenquidquid = ever-present liquid ch 10: wordord: wounwound = her wound wra by by = wrapped by ng mng = taking rubber eer = rubbed her "Mm Cae Caerlin = " Mmmm," Caerlin woand = wound also, the other chapters have a different formatting - appears it was lost here through ch 12. ch 11: wordord: whereaboutse loe = whereabouts. She thas uss = that was drd tod = dropped hattlattle-ax = his battle-ax somng. ng. = something. him,, ju, just = him, and, just Wthe = When bkeptkept = been kept starting at " t'il andúne." the line breaks need to be taken out. The whole section should look like: Ki hach urë t' il andúne. Lidor li we nesurë derem. Li mae ur kan li anonë. Lidor li we nekhil rem, Ne yuthë gui ki nänd. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne. ch 12: wordord: Darkwoman.The The = Darkwoman." The idioidiots." = the idiots." move frd.[line break]rd. = move forward. ght ght = brought coult fit = could not woman's hea = woman's head. (space draw issue - no missing text in comparison of FFNet and AFF loads - just extra blank space) knoy biy = knows my The Clash of Majicks: wordord: disced, ed, = discovered ch 2: Majicker ter than= Majick older than aan. an. = a woman. iur sur = in your herger ger = her finger ch 3: wordord: hedy pdy pain recereceding. = her body pain was receding. shor her = shoulder s hnishnished = she finished candleligh bad bad = candlelight is bad yor wor = young ch 4: wordord: (Title needs to be fixed - simply Chapter IV) difnt?"nt?" = different?" te ene end = to the end livingbersbers = living members ch 5: wordord: "Oeelieelina. = "Oh, Teelina. almosductductively. = almost seductively. beforossiossing = before crossing sd upd = stared debe ibe = describe Sonsionsidered = She considered coming.The The = coming."[line break]The anlminlming. = and calming. "You'ringringing = "You're bringing ch 6: wordord: "Nog. Ig. = "Nothing. inury ury = ??? rel sta = relaxed br acr = better uncontroly. ly. = uncontrollably. woman'es.[line break]es.= woman's eyes fac"Tsk"Tsk = face. "Tsk h wih = head clescles = shackles meashe she = mean?" she A Home That Far review board wordord: RID 194492: cnue,nue, = continue, please check author's age. I was unable to find anything conclusive. However, this being the second of her stories that I've read... she sounds young. I might excuse as ESL if it weren't for the fact she uses British spellings. Disclaimer will need to be re-worded to include X-Men (comic). (It's in the body, but not the bar, and the non-profit clause is only in the bar.) ch 1: wordord: wonighnightmare = worst nightmare neighbourottwottweiler = neighbour's rottweiler dthe = done nigtwo = night, turnef thf = turned off wohinghings = work things ship the the = ship and the ch 2 ns sis = nights posis tos = positions holdingo hio = holding onto freeir eir = free their frs, as, = friends, whardhard = were hard remaremained = had remained advd ind = advanced brouhim = brought urneurned = He turned def "E = defeat. maundered = maneuvered crtabrtable. = comfortable. pr enr = proper ide tre = idea of thou 'T = thought. sng hng = showing stoppand = stopped ts les = tracks neverngednged = never changed oughough = Although pai att = paid no ttalltallion = the stallion Come Pus = Come on. matheythey = made, they hise, giviniving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped aroit. it. = his side, giving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped around it. thr through = ran through ofame ame = of a name ch 3 wat sot = wasn't "Man-ats?"s?" = "Man-at-Arms?" goget = got to coe = she ch 4 ting ing = training cide ide = can ride unconditd mod = unconditioned faead ead = far ahead finishe."e." = finish line." pullihe = pulling ch 5 hiale ale = her. Kale paddin she she = padding?' she reaod.od." = real good." thrn. rn. = the barn. uncauncan = [line break needed]Duncan ght ght = thought Tomanoman = The woman informatiboutbout = information about thw prw = the new attentionke = attention. "I take duplication of text begins at worord: "If thke" and ends at "in the system." The entire section can be deleted. leve a = ??? ch 6 findthinthings, = finding things, ed sed = gasped s"[line break]" = sir." Shdn'dn't = She didn't red. d. = replied. angeangeling, = a changeling, froere ere = from where cheschest, = his chest, ch 7 inueinued = continued thofesofessor = the professor ch 8 a b a = had a g fro = ground becomee cye = become more as rees.ees. = as refugees. ndernderstand. = "I understand. fr, pr, = favor, "C[line break]"Can = "Can aded aed = adjusted a!" !" = again!" therther = thereafter vegetn, tn, = vegetation, t my my = to be my handschedched = hands ??? text stops - missing text? ch 9 thecherchers = the teachers e. e. = horse. dowe wae = down. He allomselmself = allow himself houchouched = he crouched bre breath = her breath he to hto = he has to ch 10 td. [line break]d. = to bed. timetime = Any time "Ve"Very = [line break needed]"Very ager ger = a bigger ch 11 skedsked. = he asked. reallry mry = really? Try TheyThey = [line break needed]"They kly kly = quickly you thr = you're punc"Dun"Duncan, = punch. "Duncan, pl, he, = plants, med atd = me, and bao Kao = back to ch 12 wholrm srm = whole form keepeye eye = keep an eye chu. [line break]. = chuckle. frite ite = frostbite subordinatooktook = subordinates took wanr...r..." = want her..." s, hs, = rocks, Slowl wen = Slowly, he dmuchmuch = down much happeain.ain." = happen again." cl fee = cloven nea nearly = fall nearly clawgmengment = claw fragment moveoggioggily = move, groggily soute she = south she ral ral = ??? beast'sst, st, = beast's throat, ch 13 theks aks = the tusks g heg = along him , bu, but = him up, but ntednted, = relented, tng hng = throwing himing ing = him, hoping bd bed = beyond goingoing = was going ch 14 a tim = awful ems ems = "Seems cmarkmarks, = claw marks, "S"[line break]"[line break]" = ??? coted ted = constructed Logand hid = Logan held tigThenThen = tiger? Then t itt it = [line break needed]But it farthack.ack. = farther back. Stpullpulled = Storm pulled nee get get = need to get locfor = locker VeryVery well = [line break needed]"Very well thr onr = the air dedingding = descending selvselves. = themselves. her , he, he = her down, he backa hua = back into a nd, nd, = ground, lstelstered = holstered trounround, = the ground, atton ton = attention ch 15 ossiossible." = as possible." Dark Alliance ch 2 has open tag at the bottom: will>/i> Blue Sugar - please check disclaimer. Has necessary parts, but adds that the story is copyright of Kim McFarland. Endsville High - disclaimer needs to be modified: Will need to specify cartoons: The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy, Invader Zim, Fairly Odd Parents, Ed Edd n Eddy, Powerpuff Girls, Dexter's Laboratory, Codename: Kids Next Door, Hey Arnold!, Jimmy Neutron (I don't know what cartoon Steve came from - and at this point I'm thinking if it was ever on NickToons or CN it needs to be disclaimed) Mandy's New Weapon - disclaimer needs to be modified to include Teen Titans ... and does the Necronomicon fall under public domain? And review whoring. Who am I? wordord: RID: 8787: wasy moy = was very ch 1: bittow. ow. = bitter now. hahanghanged, = have changed, felxed xed = felt relaxed aproppropriate = an appropriate h, Ph, Pheebs, = "Oh, Pheebs, tossinflowflower = tossing a flower andfeltfelt = and it felt sidesides, = her sides, Anlovelove = And I love Another World: House of the Holy - disclaimer needs to be modified to include the Wild Thornberrys and Invader Zim wordord: Bod lod = Gino had stupir nor = stupid for houand = hours, way?way? = anyway? A Parent\'s Worst Nightmare: wordord: s gir girl's = scream a girl's mention ndsondsome = mention, handsome Helga and Phoebe\'s Sleepover: wordord: "Wwho?who?" = "With who?" Long December: wordord: letse ase = let these er aer all = after all shoulderefulefully. = shoulder balefully. ch 2: rwherwhere = read where maybcoupcouple = maybe a couple sse. se. = guess. smi smiled. = and smiled. n't n't = I don't l hul = feel I'lkillkill = I'll kill Surprised Birthday Surprise - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer - "I do not make any kind of profit off the series." Not as Planned - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600013473

GI Joe - Gargoyles Synthetic - disclaimer needs to be modified. Right now, it says "I don't own Sigma 6". Yes, that's one of the many deviations of GI Joe; however, should it not say "I don't own GI Joe" ? Threesome wordord: hovedoved, = had moved, secondser, er, = seconds later, who of of a = who was of a somesomeone = not someone sexy s.[linebreak]s. = sexy ass. you sti still = you are still ar asr as = as far as blund. Pd. = blunt end wThe = way. Inot not = I'm not I 911 911." = I dial 911." hawaysways = had always looke her her = looked at her on Gar = on the frois eis = from this sho shot = head shot clawng ing = claws ??? lng fng furious = landing furious veisseissed = very pissed bve hve = believe exhaus "S = exhausted. Somedy bdy bar = Some bloody bar instinctabbeabbed = instinct grabbed deive.ive. = detective. "Don'tk wik = "Don't fuck Th[line break]The = The shining pee peered = shining eye peered believe.t? Ot? Oh, = believe it. What? Oh, expret opt = express it e dae days, = these days, beingart art = being a part ....Is there text missing, or is author just that bad at internal continuity? Promotion wordord: seesngs,ngs, = sees things, hedy ody = her body hndernder = him under hert het = her but qui. He. = quietly. waddenddenly = was suddenly tht."t." = thought." esizesized = emphasized Foxy Lady wordord: in summary: castAngeAngela = castle, Angela review ID 260439: orona ona = or demona story: tsmatsmattering = thin smattering asovinoving = ass, moving cl, th, = climax, "Gargoylesemonemon. = "Gargoyles" ??? Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians - needs a citation for that bit at the beginning in italics - appears to be direct quote from the episode. wordord: anfectfection = and affection Lex needed> > - could be end of sentence, or bad tag. ndifndif]> - bad tag, missing text? wo/p> /p> = word. Lextailtail, = Lex's tail, moann sun = moaned in behhis = behind pro protected = him protected t Lex Lex = that. Lex "Yeah."[line break] /p> - broken tag, missing text? 200 s. - ??? no open tags near this...is there missing text? y the the = year the gargoylith ith = gargoyle. With emos, fs, = emotions, and ed = pissed asy asy = as they fof tof = full of in ain = was in &q...S...So = "...So if]> - bad tag unsp mus = ??? "tstotstone = "Nightstone ass oss = ??? ru tow = running reang hng = realizing swi swing, = the (his?) swing, p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag cla class=MsoNormal> - bad tag ing ing = heading be lon = before p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag yquotquot; = you?" w wer = whom hs ths = heroes witm evm = with him ndifndif]> - bad tag clasclass=MsoNormal> - bad tag (sorry if I missed any, that got boring-though not as bad as that Daria story...) Another Night, Another Kiss review page 4 RID 3000036131 - squishy A Million Reasons ch 3, ch 6, ch 7, ch 8, ch 9, ch 10, ch 11, ch 12, ch 13, ch 14, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, have squished lines throughout, but it's not all squishy. ch 19: ’ = ' To Catch A Killer - also partial squishies ch 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 Never Meant to Be wordord: ch 1: GrahGraham = Graham B> Brooklyn = Brooklyn **starting at ""I don't think that it is wise," " the text is italicized and shouldn't be. Is there missing text or an open tag in the db that I'm not seeing in the archive? There are also some random jumps between segments of the text that make me think there's missing text, and the author references Japanese phrases in AN bottom, but the phrases aren't anywhere else in the chapter. ch 2 squishy! wordord: flowe[line break]Bro[line break]Brooklyn = flowers?[line break]Brooklyn he a, co, = he asked, asBrooBrooklyn. = asked Brooklyn. shed hed = splashed surveillanceaid aid = surveillance," said jolivial = jovial (not sure if that actually qualifies as wordord or "I'm rewriting English") ie eye eye = in the eye theing ing = the racing ? blurring ? hal bel = had all fewondsonds = few seconds Gdid = Gary fa he he = far as he Noo seo = Note to notgroagroan. = not to groan. nitenitely = definitely Ahe fhe floor = And the floor **There appears to be missing text in this chapter also as the author again references foreign words AN bottom that are not in the text. ch 3 squishy! "With a burst of adrenaline, and reached his target and tackled him." - missing part of the sentence, or just bad editing? wouoth oth = would both adglidgling = a fledgling don'nd. nd. = don't mind. sarookrooklyn. = said Brooklyn. bertberto = Roberto ertoerto = [line break]Roberto &nbspnde nde = blonde onlve ove = only have ch 4 squishy! to s to to = too ??? to Ironly, ly, = Irrationally, Roberto stared at the ceiling above [line break]He[line break]He hadn't - missing text. Yo&nbs = York. ela ela = Angela chi chin = his chin courseat aat = course, that ins dis = instant oas tas = one was wai for for = waiting for anceance = distance sisedised = ??? it [line break]it something = Was it something wor words = The words ch 5 - squishy! mangun gun = man to gun thi things = the things laman man = latin man ch 6 - squishy! tRobeRoberto = that Roberto and uthe the = and ??? the Acing ing = According posspossession, = her possession, ed ied = alive intensityfemafemales = intensity that females earor gor = earth for g tog = going r som = raise aulleulled = and pulled Mrste Mte = Mrs Kate thronto nto = thrown into handso hio = hands into 't w't = didn't n't n't = I can't lipslips = his lips ch 7 - squishy! &nbIt'sIt's = "It's eyesenedened = eyes widened introd thd = introduced istiistina = Christina discun.[line break]n. = discussion fa rug = face a hert fit = her just pas passenger = the passenger ch 8 - squishy! ret gra = return, inte tte = indicate blusnbspnbsp;He = blush. He becaue kne = because he evid[line break]tha[line break]that = evidence that goio hao = going to stuff considering what - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text? "Hell&nbs = "Hello." gale fle = gargoyle hea head = her head oud thd = out and ch 9: wordord: inforon oon = information wasnwasn't = he wasn't distracting Ka - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text? pct vct = perfect unonedoned = unbuttoned alaralarm = the alarm K gra = Kane, otheother = The other futh hth= fun with t's t's = "That's e Mre = where nuzznuzzle up against hhroahroat = and nuzzle up against his throat ath ath = around andnfulnful = and painful almommedmmediately = almost immediately &nboberoberto = Robert buils, ts, = buildings, Darlene: Mirror Images 2 (PART 27) - space draw issues - triple-spacing between paragraphs The Out of Towners - squishy! (all 9 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient. Her Crimson Kiss - squishy! (all 3 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient. A Life On The Line - disclaimer incomplete - non non-profit clause - please check for minor. (either that or ESL) Gargoyle Fantasies - disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient; ch 2 - squishy (disclaim Star Wars needed); ch 5 AN top squishy Victims - not sure if anything needs to be added as a generality maybe "I am not affiliated with Barnes and Noble" (although author misspelled) - also references Boris Vellejo - though, for once, there referenced celebrity isn't making an appearance. Mother Daughter Escapades - disclaimer verb tense on profit clause-please check. Boxing Day - check profit portion of disclaimer. Also, all of author's disclaimers say who does own the Gargoyles, not that author does not own them - is this sufficient? SID 600092495, 600092369, and the "S" series below (chapters posted as separate stories) The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: GI Joe: Motorpool Lovin\' , Final Step for BeachHead and CoverGirl Gargoyles: Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians , Alternate Lives 3: Past Sins Gargoyles: Seize the Night , Special Delivery , Stonewall , So... You're Gay...

G through L We will need a GI Joe sub-cat in the Marvel 'Verse section. I've marked them all Marvel on the sheet, but, FYI cartoons and comics are all mixed in here. Since, looking at the way you have the Marvel/X-Men section set up, there is a notation of (all) on a lot of the sub-cats in Marvel, I'm not marking down which are comic and which cartoon. GARGOYLES: Secrets and Lies (Chapter 4) - From what I can gather from the char list from Gargoyles, none of the characters in this fic appear in the series. This wouldn't be a problem if anything in the story placed it in the Gargoyle cartoon 'verse at all. From what I can gather on the section on New Olympians this was supposed to be a spin-off series that never got off the ground. Because this story really isn't based on Gargoyles at all, but on New Olympians, I think it should be in that category rather than here, but I'll leave to your discretion since the title places it with Gargoyles. This is completely anal retentive on my part, but: A Goofy Movie is not Goof Troop. Yes, it has the same characters, but it is a movie, and Goof Troop is a TV serial cartoon. Therefore, Summer Breeze: What Roxanne Didn't Know and Peg's Goodbye Present actually belong under Movies->G-L-> Goofy Movie, A (all) - there were two movies. The cat doesn't yet exist. If you want to keep them together, I understand (less stress on the db?). Situations like this are one reason I was wondering if you wanted a Disney archive...but it would be a lot of trouble to create it since everything is so scattered, and then you've got things like Kingdom Hearts (which you've got under Games) - it's Disney/Squaresoft (SquareEnix now) so it's an XO all on it's own without any help - so where would you put it if you had a Disney archive? Does it go under Disney or Final Fantasy? Or does it stay in Games? And that's just one example... Anyhoo, my recommendation at this point is for a movie cat for Goofy Movie, A (all). Uppercrust Poetic Justice and He\'s Got High Hopes would also need to be moved (from "An Extremely Goofy Movie" -the sequel) He-Man was created by DC Comics (as a character in the Masters of the Universe series). All stories tagged bold on the sheet as this cat will need to be moved. Invader Zim: Into the Web 600041078 needs to go in the other fandom - takes place in that verse. Jungle Book - should this be in movies?

GI Joe Love is Fragile - combine 2035167894/2035167897 - user admits to having meant to post comments together. One (fourth of a) Man\'s Story - review ID 2035465141 - ????; delete 2035465168 (flamish); 2035465173, 2035465192, 2035465202, 2035465206 (self); 2035465198, 2035465205 (convo); 2035465397 (flame) // OK, back to the beginning of the board after making it to the end, delete 2035465088, 2035465110, 2035465113, 2035465126, 2035465135, 2035465166, 2035466485, 2035544199 since author admits to having posted all himself; delete 2035526193 (flame) - and for the love of god check this for minor. Ugh. Inside the Circle - ch 1 is an AN - please delete. review board: delete 2035433120 (self) The Revenge - delete 3000028661 (not a review) Grave Victory - delete 3000026956 (self) The Search for Serpentor's Bride - delete 3000032778 (not a review). ch 7 is an AN - please delete. The Courage to Love - delete 3000034683 ? - left at a later date, but same user saying same thing - 'update' Grave Victory ch 1 is an AN - please delete Gargoyles Threesome - review ID 2035441417 states it is for another story. As there is nothing else by this UID, please see below. Foxy Lady - delete review ID 237263 - not a review, recommended reading. Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians - delete 2035326266 (flame-threatening) Alternate Lives 3: Past Sins - Threesome RID 2035441417 can be moved here, and RID 2035441427 AL3 can be moved to Threesome. Please delete RID 2035291709 - request, not a review. The Dusk - delete 2035217937 (self); 2035291724 - I'm not sure if that's meant to be humorous, but since it's got a frownie, I'm thinking flame Jealousy - combine 3000011793/3000011794/3000011795; combine 3000015101/3000015102 Falling - combine 3000013209/3000013234 GARGOYLES: Secrets and Lies (Chapter 4) - delete 3000030630 (request, not a review) Skiff in the Mist combine 3000029781/3000029837 -only because second RID says meant to incl. in the first. Beloved of the Night Dwellers - combine 3000033966/3000033967 Seeking a Path, WIP - delete 3000032494 (self) Shower to Shower - RID 3000034528: disclaimer warn 10/04/09 - has been corrected, please delete.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600016056 - original? (inspired by HP, poss)

Veracityrules is the author of the first 3 of these, and Ben & Jerry's Don't Have A Flavour Called THAT is by HarrySexMajick

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600024498 - placeholder or challenge.

Harry Potter: Shifty Changes (draco) and Shifty Changes (Severus) and Shifty Changes (3M) by Jaylynn (author in title clearly states all it is is change in character for multiple loads - not even to different fandoms!)

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600021999 - preview

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27838

http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091842 in General - summary clearly states should be in Het and ch 1 features Conner/Illyria (Angel sub of Buffy - and you did set up Het, I checked)

Ok, I know it's funny, but... http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600021839 Is taking the direct verse from Dr Seuss and changing a few words (like you would do in grade school) to make a lewd poem considered plagiarism? - from the AN (top)Author gave 'citation', but, um... not sure... does that count?

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33206 poster (Why is it, when I'm looking for something, I find all the shit there is to find...but not what I'm looking for?) Check out greeneyes listing Escape to Life (someone else posting under her name -posthumous?) and Unknowen Curse summary (review whoring in the summary??) --added both in for workup/processing DG

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012572 - fic search

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600042093 - Challenge issued, not answered http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544182402 - challenge issued, not answered http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544174024 - challenge issued, not answered http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544177031 - challenge issued, not answered http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092810 - challenge issued, not answered http://ygo.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37310 - challenge issued, not answered

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092752 --Just loaded - in the wrong sub-cat Multiple problems: 1) should be in Danny Phantom, not 6teen 2) disclaimer insufficient I recognize chapters 1 & 2....Just like the fic that was uploaded by this author yesterday to Cartoons 6-F->DP->AU (and isn't there anymore - Title was "All Falls Down") I recognized the first several chaps of that ... but I can't seem to find the original works. Now, I read every DP story in the archive, and this is the only archive where I read DP because it's not my fandom. So it's gotta be here somewhere....but I can't seem to find it. Also, author seems to be self-rating, since both this and the other (it's gone so I can't give you a link) had 5/5 for one rating. This is the author. Deleted old account and reposting and adding new chaps (since I can't find the older works) ?

Here you are, loves. Googled it. http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.p...r&id=122053 There's two chaps. Enjoy!

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097267 - chat request; "help with this RL sit" post http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094160 - review replies http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092813 - place holder http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544215879 - gratuitous rant about high school - and sounds like the author was still a student at the time - minor account? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544202657 - author posting a story to start a message board in the archive http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544198339 - ad for an artist http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544189961 - "I'm having computer problems" http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544184814 - Dear John letter ? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544182159 - profile http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544179180 - "What it feels like to be a teen today" - minor account? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27738 - My fantasies while I'm *in* high school - minor account? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=25054 - first chap is place holder, second is "how to handle teen pregnancy"

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544197257 - French in originals non-fiction. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097548 - AN says should be in TV cat not avail so posted in non-fic??? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096293 - not a non-fic. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095131 - summary states is a fictional work, and doesn't read like auto-bio; wrong sub-cat

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600025772 Grrrrr.... author original author original story (but only posted 4 months ago???) link to story from another archive --someone added those files to that file sharing site, quite likely without the original author's permission. Nothing I can do about that, but I have hidden the one here. The OA clearly states that her work will remain unfinished. This user needs to respect that. DG

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095788 "How To" in the archive??? http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544181052 - complaint about attack from an author on a review not left by them

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story....5&chapter=5 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...7&chapter=8 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...5&chapter=2 http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...4&chapter=3 http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...1&chapter=4 ...it's a toss up what I find more irritating. AN chaps or minors. ... I'm still debating... Does this AN count as a TOC? Reads like elongated summary...

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