RogueMudblood

special AN: and another:

The story appears to be fanfic - referencing well-known fictional characters (such as Alucard from Hellsing). It was deleted on the basis that it was misplaced.

Pages 15-11 Defiant - RID 3000057116 - more of a convo than a review Testing The Loyal - delete 3000058883 (user was a minor at the time) When It Rains - delete 3000071593 (del user: 1296872624) Trade Secrets - delete 3000058561 (user was a minor at the time) ch 12 - AN; notation top of ch 1 will need altering with removal of author's "Appendix" I Have Other Uses For You Darling - delete 3000062178 (self); 3000062061 (not a review) story - top AN, "test-run" ? seems to be hinting for reviews? You Never ARGH WHAT AM I WEARING?! - RW-ish bottom AN (only 1 ch) Jetluv - delete 3000062338 (dup of 3000062337); 3000062340 (self) Crash and B'awwww - delete 3000062295 (user was a minor at the time) Beauty Within - delete 3000062221 (self); 3000062305 (convo); 3000062227 - edit or delete outright...needs your eyes-mostly it's about a troll on FFN and plague of this story over there. (referenced in author's FFN profile link) Why Do Good Bikes Dream Of Bad Aft Muscle Cars - delete 3000062341(self) Rehabilitation - delete 3000062940 (req perm to use idea) Blind - delete 3000063240 (not a review); 3000063243 (not a review) Promise Not to Tell - delete 3000063145, 3000063164 (not a review); 3000064151 (del user: 1296842510) Life - RW bottom ch 1 Sorry, Hotshot - RW bottom ch 1 (only ch) Five Phases of Torture - delete 3000062946, 3000062947 (about permission-screened for record); edit 3000062825 (same issue as previous with these two - everything after the first sentence can be deleted) The Senses - edit 3000064504; remove "which I've usually compared to "Dear God it's BULLSHIT"," - makes it sound like she was looking for something to flame, clicking on a MARKED drabblefic ch 3 AN top - remove "GTFO IF YOU FIND THAT DISGUSTING" please Frozen Heat - combine 3000063017/3000063018 Can't Fight This Feeling - delete 3000067261 (del user: 1296858438) Drive-By Download - delete 3000066771 (user was a minor when this was left) Simple Misperceptions, ch 9, bottom, RW Only Mostly Dead - delete 3000067175 (user was a minor when this was left) Don't Stand So Close to Me - delete 3000067316 (user was a minor when this was left) Filthy Whore - delete 3000067664 (user was a minor when this was left)

Pages 15-11 All The Things She Said - citation needed for the song of same title (t.A.T.u. is group) Because - citation needed for the song of the same title (the Beatles - not that I had to tell you that) Beware The Dark - tags: add Rapefic squished paragraphs: "The large mech" "Moans of desire" Defiant - tags: add Rapefic, Abuse; remove Bond - I don't think an unwilling prisoner, even though bound, is what was intended by that tag. He Bangs - citation needed for "She Bangs", Ricky Martin; and appears to have open < i > tag after last stanza. Testing The Loyal - tags: Abuse - I think it will cover it on it's own, but S&M might fit too. Never Underestimate - user error? "The kiss" ... "overload haze." should all be one paragraph Against The Wall - should be ch 2 of Office Antics Discovery Channel should be ch 2 of On Call Trade Secrets - might need a disclaim for X-Men and S.H.I.E.L.D. - XO fic, and the characters from both are referenced, but don't particularly make appearances Worship Thy Master - disclaimer: profit Worship Thy Master Part 2 - obviously ch 2 of Worship Thy Master; also disclaimer: profit Rehabilitation - squishy & RTE Holofun - char disclaim Promise Not to Tell - not sure about disclaimer since calls Transformers a "genre" Obsession - not HJ, anal Fingering Life - ch 1, 3 stretchy Without You - citation needed for "A Stranger" by A Perfect Circle - all 3 chapters tags: Trans and Xeno can come out, OC can come out (it's already in the summary), Beast can come out Sorry, Hotshot - take out Shouta - it doesn't apply.; Minor1 definitely applies, Bond, Rapefic Five Phases of Torture - tags: it doesn't have ANY; it needs Rapefic, Tort, Anal, Fisting, MC; I'd consider Xeno, because there's human-to-mech sex... the humans are raping the mech. Frozen Heat - disclaimer: profit; citations (they're in the disclaimer instead of the story) Romp - RTE; squishy - chapter two of 600045554 Hunt - RTE; squishy - chapter three of 600045554 Optimus Prime's Hobby - RTE; squishy; tags: remove "Other" Only Mostly Dead - RTE; squishy

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600044126 duplicate posting of http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600042580 He added some stuff - apparently intended to re-write, but it was never done. It's the same story already posted though.

A Long Time Coming - appears to be a preview fic TfEC: Profiles - exactly what it says - profiles of the characters - all 14 chapters - there's no story; seems author intended as companion to TfEC: Cassette - not sure what you want to do with this one

Pages 20-16 Army of You - delete 191737 - flame; 199880 - needs edited-everything before "this piece" can be nuked as kindling; 2035325798 - kindling-can take the part after "{" and put on 2035325800 since she admits to being same reviewer; 2035605681 / 2035605687-second one is same reviewer leaving their e-mail Nemesis Calling - delete 167762, 187286, 2035346771 - minors when reviews were posted Ain't Misbehavin' - delete 2035443913 - duplicate of 2035443912 Dream Man - delete 3000044640 (not a review -plugging her own fics) Innerspace - edit 3000013298: can delete everything before "I like this" as it's response to review left on her own story. TfEC: Cassette - delete 3000047547 (minor when posted) how human came to be - delete 3000015433 (flame); 2035490705 (self); 3000015556 (self); 3000017634 (self); 3000017650 (kindling) 3000017597 - edit: everything before "i would have" can be deleted as kindling ch 24 - AN; ch 30 -poll/contest AN top; ch 36 - AN; ch 44 - AN Transformers: Energon City - need edit 3000041507 ?; ch 8 - teaser To Protect and Service - AN bottom RW Stud - delete 3000074901 (flame) File Work - 3000013213 - edit out parenthetical flame of pervious concrit reviewer 3000015182 - edit out parenthetical statement of disgareement user is aware of between the previous two reviewers The rest of the body of each review does pertain to the story Conga - delete 3000054725, 3000054728 (user was a minor at the time)

pages 20-16 Crush - squished line: "oh wait, it does sound like you. [line break]If you must know," "I'm not sure if [line break]it's because" "licking every [line break]stripe," worord: une Ho Honestly = uneasy. Honestly tags: Angst, UST Army of You - review board wordord: 111179 sex be sbe = sex can be story: Staeam eam ceded; = Starscream ceded; screscream = Starscream Mron ron = Megatron sycophancy becomou.ou. = sycophancy becomes you. as you think you " = author error? nouff uff = no rebuff ddomidominion = down dominion your nor nor = your ???, nor servitnd snd = servant and tlverlver = to silver tags: Violence Nemesis Calling (sorry if I missed something - I don't tend to want to learn Latin while I'm reading about sex) anticipain - not sure if that's wordord or not lonong ong = long, long ing ing him down = ??? him down tags: Violence, Bond, Abuse Hot Music - RTE issues; squished lines throughout -looks like "justified" may have been selected here... ...I'm missing a huge block of text, or author thinks that introductions lead directly to fingering. Right before: "Tra>Tracks only smiled while his free hand moved up" wordord: plcablcables = ??? cables ratherd cod = rather odd Tra>Tracks = Tracks shof yof = shaft of nevuessuessed = never guessed stronrustrust = strong thrust Ain't Misbehavin - tags: take out Humil and either M/M or Slash; superfluous. Eyes Wide Shut - as there is a movie title of the same name, does that need to be disclaimed in any way? tags: Voy squished line: "bit ..... [line break] strained?" Delicate Situation - tags: Bond Presence - tags: MC (possession) Dream Man - squished paragraphs: "Since she..." "Elita?" Regrets of the Day - squished paragraphs: "The long," "As gasps" Innerspace - tags: Voy, Exhib - that M/F needs to come out - there's two Het couples, two be sure, but then this turns into a 3M very quickly. Teddy Bears Picnic - tags: Solo Springer's Party - tags: Fingering, Oral Heaven is on the Top Floor - tags: Fingering, Oral; from what I can tell, should be chapter two of Golden Heat Command Meetings - tags: SI still raced, she[line break]had talked and loved the[line break]power that and pulled her[line break]closer letting The True Price of Friendship - tags: NoSex Gifts - tags: take out "Bi"; needs GB instead, maybe Trans Abomination - The First - tags: NoSex; can remove "Other" Just to Pass the Time - tags: Need to take out Xeno - unless we're going to mark all the fics that way, it doesn't make sense. Besides, they're not alien to each other. Need add: Rapefic TfEC: Cassette - tags: Rapefic, TF (human instead of mechanoid) and can take out BDSM - being in handcuffs while you're raped by a police officer - I don't think it qualifies how human came to be - ch 7 squishy; bottom of ch 8- he's talking to himself? (see other post on "sammy"); ch 22, ch 23 - squishy To Protect and Service - tags: Bi needs to come out Stud should be chapter two of Welcome Home, Noble Voyager Twisted Affections - do you want to change N/C to Rapefic? At My Mercy should be chapter three of Welcome Home, Noble Voyager File Work - squished paragraphs throughout Scourge Pays - tags: Rapefic TfEC: Minicons - tags - Minor needs to change to Minor1; needs TF; take out Bi; add Tort (police officer placing his gun within the orifice of a minor child); and I'm not seeing the Incest. Hidden By Armor - tags: Needs GB Transformers: The Fallen - tags: needs TF Conga should be chapters four and five of Welcome Home, Noble Voyager Twin Ties - tags: Needs GB

http://anime.adultfa...hp?no=600043266 - don't think it's Avatar; characters are Arabella, Jasper and Gabriel; might be original fiction. edit: PM'd Shadow to take a look; Dany says she's very familiar with fandom. edit: Shadow says it's not ATLA. Definitely thinking original fic then.

Hot Tea - RID 3000028220 (trollish); delete 3000035083 (minor); 3000043922 (non-mod warn) I'm the Only Gay Eskimo In My Tribe RID 3000028227 (trollish); RID 3000035447 flamish Moonstruck - delete 3000039048 (non-review) Aang and Katara's Private Dance Party - delete 3000047933 (dup) What it Really means to Love - AN top ch 1 indicates this was previously a placeholder; ch 3 AN top RW Outtakes (see dup post); RW bottom chapter 1 Zuko's Fruition(Sequel to Zuko's Obsession) - delete 3000054766 (minor)

Hot Tea -over-fucking-tagged; M/M, Bond, Abuse (implied), Inc (implied), Oral. Those can stay. Not sure if complete or not, but the rest of the tags don't apply. Aang Pegged - needs tags - Exhib, Humil, Abuse Toph Bei Dong - need tags - Exhib, Voy, HJ, F/D or Herm, SoloM - Trans needs to go, that's not what this is ZUKO’S OBSESSION - RTE error; squished! Zuko's Fruition(Sequel to Zuko's Obsession) - RTE error; squished! Like Father, Like Daughter - disclaimer: fandom; tags: M/F/F needs to come out, not sure SH applies Tempest: The Western Air Temple Part II - disclaimer: fandom

http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091250 = http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600043560 http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091249 = http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600043502

The Jaws of Darkness Do Devour The Guardian Haven't read either - but those are the links in our archive.

from the archive: two in one sentence

Where Things Lead by pansyweasley

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Het Zutara Love Scene - character disclaim Evening - character disclaim?; Minor needs to change to Minor2 The Healing Touch - needs tags, by god! FemDom, Humil, Bond Body Heat - please advise on disclaimer: "Bryke" is in fandom reference to "Bryan and Mike" - is this okay? Ill Met By Moonlight - disclaimer: profit Relaxing the Firelord wrodwrap not turned on, apparently. Not sure if this is RTE issue or not. Example: And continues thru the whole story

from the archive: edit: and:

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600009294 There's the link

Well, I didn't screen it, but I just had "Operations askslag" as the recaptcha text.

w-o-w. next candidate: from the archive:

Het Convincing Baby - delete 3000030083 (del user: 1296809209) <---deleted for invalid email, reviews can stay Here's to You - combine 3000031785, 3000031786, 3000031787 (same user); delete 3000036221 (minor) Peace and War - ch 2 AN only - RW; poll bottom ch 1 Don't Forget What to Call Her - delete 3000035411 (del user: 1296863880) Zutara Love Sene - delete 3000032293 - self The Healing Touch - delete 3000035701 (del user: 1296862265) Cactus Madness - delete 3000033651 (minor) Betrothal - delete 3000032947, 3000033866 (minor) Dreams - delete 3000032995, 3000033022, 3000033062, 3000033121 (minor) Fire Cages - delete 3000032236 (minor)

Femme Taming the Beast - delete 3000018854 (del user: 1296801034); 3000018917 (troll/req); please look at 3000026067 (erm. pretty sure that's a minor-nothing to confirm with) Prisonbending - delete 3000036446 (del user: 1296888567) Water Bending Training - RW top ch 1 A Bender's Best Friend... - delete 3000033429, 3000033433 (self); 3000033497 (beta app only); ch 3 top RW Bending Suki - delete 3000035986, 3000036083 (del user: 1296883150) Azula Bender - combine 3000037160/3000037161 - user typo in orig review resulted in a second to correct typo; edit 3000037243 - flamish to previous reviewer - there is story critique in there as well; 3000037596 - response to flamish responder, mostly.

Actually, if you use the same pen name in the archive, then you may already have a forum membership. Is this you? If so, you simply need to login to your account and go to the area Pittwitch directed you to to create your poll.

AU Just a fic - combine 3000035713 / 3000035714 need combined; reviewer intending to leave e-mail; chapter 6 - AN chapter that is only RW A Bender of Her Talents - delete 3000036359 (del user: 1296887941) A Cursed Blessing - delete 3000037460 (mod warn)