RogueMudblood

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600050428 http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600049718 by http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296884476

"Hello, recapcha? Yes, I'd like to have a manual on how to use your program. Well, you see, every time I go to type in the code, I have to change the language setting on my keyboard, get out the character map for the new language, which I don't read, to find out which button to push... I thought, surely you must have it all in a book for me for easy reference, yes? And is there a way to program quick keys for the most common language alterations I'll need?" Of course, the operator hung up on Bobby when he called technical support. He just couldn't understand why Kanji was such a difficult language to type in. After all, the characters are right there on the keys...

thanks!

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from the archive: orga-sims ... organisms .... hate to say it, but that word in no way made me think of orgasms. same story:

looks like someone already it.

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Pages 5 - 1 Pain Without Limits -delete 3000070895 (del user: 1296842510) Domestic Disturbance - delete 3000071590 (blank?); 3000072494, 3000072502, 3000042475, 3000072933, 3000073075, 3000074422 (pester--these are all the same user) Better Halves - delete 3000073707 (pester); combine 3000073600/3000073602 - user admits to having forgotten to say something Collections--Het Version, ch 3 - AN top - YoPro - the link in AN is to a story that's been deleted. Losing Control - delete 3000075388 (it's been fixed) Collections - 3000067878 - edit?; 3000068229, 3000069008, 3000069045, 3000071172, 3000072640 - edit request; 3000069313 - kinda trollish; 3000074243, 3000074266, 3000074662, 3000074782, 3000078060, 3000080026 - request only ch 12 - AN top - not sure how you feel about that. The Game - not sure how you feel about the legality of that AN; since narcotics are illegal, and user is admitting to being high while writing. - S/He's serious, btw. Nevermore - 3000057135 - pester; 3000057279 - flamish, taking into consideration the other reviews user left; 3000061794 - edit; delete 3000055084, 3000055430, 3000056410 - unsubstantiated Shameless Fangirling - AN bottom RW Odd Couple - not sure about 3000072400 - not a review of the story, just a "I'm not sure I want to read your story" ? Age of the Machine (Market Comodity 3) - combine 3000077310/3000077311 - user forgot to say something ch 23 - AN bottom RWish Becoming Mama Bear - delete 3000057910, 3000062858, 3000082166 - pester; all but first two sentences of 3000054575 are pestering about other stories ch 7 - AN bottom RWish ch 10 - AN bottom ?? ch 12 - flame, AN top ch 13 - AN top RWish ch 20 - AN bottom RWish

I was laughing so hard just at this point!

Pages 5 - 1 Hit and Run Too - should be ch 2 of Hit and Run Title: The Error of Your Ways - needs a rapefic tag Twisted Glass - disclaimer: profit Better Halves - citation for the universal Transfomers greeting The Game - needs Rapefic tag Megatron's New Pet - BDSM tag needs removed; the relationship isn't there - there's Bond and D/s and NonCon to be sure, but nothing of that type of relationship; add Slavery Forbidden Knowledge - character disclaim Watch Me - take out Oneshot (it's 3 chapters); add Abuse, Slavery Collections, ch 27 - disclaim Shin Megami Tensei: Nocturne for char used The Game - add Abuse, D/s, Slavery ... not exactly non-con, but you can definitely tell that there is questionable consent after the sex starts. Unlike the usual "dubcon" fic, which starts out with heavy "convincing" in the sex scenes, this has Starscream saying e wants rough sex, then changing his mind once he's being given the rough sex and not voicing his displeasure. Not sure how that should be tagged. You Belong to Me - BDSM needs to come out - doesn't fit the relationship; seeming duplicated tags: COMPLETE, Oneshot; D/s, M/s; not sure SH fits when it's a Rapefic. Can remove Yaoi / M/M Attraction - also marked both complete and oneshot Nevermore - remove BDSM - no elements of that relationship present - this is Rapefic, Slavery, Abuse, Violence, Minor1, MPreg, Tort, H/C. ch 10, 11 - stretchy ch 14 - possibly needs citation for story scenes from episode "Megatron Rising" and "Megatron Rising part 2" - I say this because author says "skipped a few scenes" from the second of these episodes. (which is obvious as there is no continuity in the story telling, and I was going to ask you to check for a glitch, but it appears was intentional bad writing) ch 20 - stretchy Fourth Set off Wings - tags: add Rapefic Exciting Catch - need take out Oneshot (it's 8 chapters); take out BDSM; add Bond 'Friendly' Persuasion - need take out BDSM Opening Maneuvers - ch1, 3 - 7 RTE, squishy Always With You - reckon you can take the bit about the title search out of the summary; ch 3 seems to have an open <i> tag. Mech Enough - disclaimer wording a little iffy on fandom Traitor - ch1, stretchy; needs tags: Rapefic, Violence, Angst, Anal, Slavery Injustice for All - add tags: B-Mod or GB, Toys Worship Thy Master Part 3 - should be ch 3 of 600045450; citation needed: "I Know a Song (That Gets on Everybody's Nerves)" -Seamus Kennedy Surprise... In more ways then one - disclaimer missing the word "not"; says "I do own"; needs tags: MPreg, Angst, Anal Odd Couple - RTE, squishy 1-9, 11-12 Therapy - need tag: Angst, M/s. I'm inclined to go with N/C since we don't have a DubCon tag Protectors - remove BDSM, Fist; add Slavery, Bigotry, Oral, D/A, UST, Anal Becoming Mama Bear - still unsure how SH fits with Rape. It does have N/C, but you might want to change that to Rapefic so there is no confusion. Needs Fist, DP, MC Odd Moments - RTE, squishy 1-5; disclaimer says TFA - need to just say Transformers since this appears to be XO with G1 Triviality - ch 3 stretchy

aw, it was just trying to be nice. Mebbe it figured since you'd been in it so long, it'd give you a break?

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http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600049836 - this is the original per summary http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600049830 by http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296810148

http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600050428 http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600049718 by http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=1296884476

Pages 10 -6 Shadows of Tomorrow - ch 2 top, very vague RW; ch 3 top, borderline RW; ch 4, top borderline RW; ch 6, top blatant RW for a sequel (for an unfinished fic, imagine that) Energon Soup for the Horny Spark - ch 1 is AN Sent of Lust - delete 3000070622 (self) The New Age - (Market Commodity book II) - delete 3000065980, 3000066417, 3000066548, 3000066626, 3000066795, 3000066883, 3000066988, 3000067551, 3000067798, 3000067799, 3000067850, 3000067899, 3000067900, 3000068108, 3000068109, 3000068234, 3000068270, 3000068271, 3000068685, 3000068686, 3000068687, 3000068740, 3000069223, 3000069224, 3000069225, 3000069650 (self); 3000070456 (convo with another reviewer); combine 3000069017/3000069018 RW bottom ch 4; poll bottom ch 7, 8, 9, 11, 12, 16 Night of the Beast - delete 3000081054 (self) You Lost - delete 3000068896, 3000069034 (user was a minor when those were left) Face Thy Fears - delete 3000069642 (self) ch 1 AN bottom: teaser/placeholder chapter Finding the Good Within - delete 3000062268 (self) Blackmail - excessive AN due to the story teaser Already Broken - delete 3000073180 (user was a minor when this was left) Distance - delete 3000077065 (user was a minor when this was left) Market Commodity - delete 3000063910, 3000063926, 3000063975, 3000063976, 3000063977, 3000063980, 3000063996, 3000064032, 3000064073, 3000064163, 3000064169, 3000064190, 3000064240, 3000064259, 3000064309, 3000064323, 3000064324, 3000064610, 3000064849, 3000065531, 3000065668, 3000065718, 3000067512, 3000067513, 3000067550, 3000067796, 3000067797, 3000067851, 3000068301, 3000068354, 3000070334, 3000072238, 3000080150 (self - StSE); 3000064388 (response); 3000063918, 3000064157, 3000064258, 3000064291, 3000064307, 3000064559, 3000064641, 3000065367, 3000065663, 3000065721, 3000066968, 3000070333, 3000080082 (convo) **as this is a RR, I did not include ones by StSE that were on other authors' chapters in need of edit at line given: 3000064628: "Annnnd Replies" 3000064679: "**Eerie" 3000064833: "--==Responses==--" 3000064839: "**LightingCross**" ch 42 - AN bottom no longer applies, can delete? ch 43 - not sure what you want to do here - because of previous spammer issues in the archive, StSE had turned off "add chap" and had users e-mailing her the chapters, so it explains why she's posting with another author listed as the writer. Since spammer issue resolved, "add chap" turned back on now. Do you want to remove her e-mail, or leave?

Pages 10 -6 Negotiation - tags: add CBT Shadows of Tomorrow - the only tags in the summary are M/F and OC - OC needs to be SI; thinking we need Violence The Choices We Make - citation needed: ch1- "If Everyone Cared", Nickleback; ch 2- "Pain", Three Days Grace; ch3- "You and Me", Lifehouse; tags: needs Rapefic, Tort, Violence The Best Medicine - squished line: "made of [line break] cheddar" Energon Soup for the Horny Spark - waaaay overtagged; what's needed: Minor2, Oral (slightly ambiguous since it's mech sex) - if the author ever comes back and writes more, then more tags can be added. Electric Boogaloo - needs to disclaim Pokemon. (No, I'm not joking); RTE; squishy ... do we have a tag for squirreling? Silent Love - invalid disclaimer At First Glance - tags: Angst Poison - don't think Dom and D/s are both needed; add Abuse Pure Domination - disclaimer: fandom Prisoner of Desire - tags: Rapefic, Rim needed Night of the Beast - disclaimer needs fixed: double negative on ownership; X-Men needs to be disclaimed tags: not seeing BDSM- Bond, yes, and I'd concede D/s, but not seeing S&M; ... how do you tag human/mech sex? Beast? Xeno? Face Thy Fears - needs a Rapefic tag Finding the Good Within - needs a Rapefic tag I Think Not. - needs Rapefic tag Matter of Pride - tags: Nec, Rapefic, Abuse, Violence Dark Obsession - overtagged: right now, AU and WIP are the only things that apply Distance - RTE; squishy; ch 4 of 600045554 Get Off - citation needed: "I Get Off", Halestorm Autobots in Jail - tags needed: Rapefic, MC What Tomorrow Holds - user error: chapter 12 belongs between chapters 7 and 8 per AN. Don't know if, since it's going to have to be moved anyway, you want to fix it Toys and Tricks - RTE; squishy; ch 5 of 600045554

Hunt - not sure about this one

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