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Aren't 'Marvel family' (Ie. Captain Marvel, Mary Marvel etc 'SHAZAM') DC not Marvel?

I was chatting to someone recently about BtVS and Harry Potter and given that book seven is set in 1997 and season 1 of BtVS was the same year. This makes Willow pretty much the same age as Ginny Weasley. So yeah swap those two characters over and what do you get? Harry with a different, shy, sexy, redheaded witch. The problem is, I have no idea how to write a story where that scenario comes about. Any body else up to the challenger?

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600025104 Another request, not a story.

I just deleted a bunch of reviews because the reveiwers were arguing with each other to the extent that their posts took up most of the thread with their disagreement rather than actual reviews. I feel a bit bad about it, really. Other than that, I've pretty much decided that I'd only delete, moderator stuff that it tells me to delete, as well as any posts that included homophobic or racists terms. Though I've never really got much negative feedback or flames to test that resolution.

Well I'm attempting to see if I can plot out a decent DH sequel. But the problem are fitting in the smut, making it different enough from the original to be interesting and thinking up a title. (I was thinking of the phrase 'That Flighty Mistress' referring to Dumbledore's line about adventure in HBP but that might be better for a third Post-DH tale thatI have some very vague idea for.) I've also been trying to think up some PWP oneshots while it do it but the only one that really came to mind was based on Penname's comments regarding needing more kinks and pegging Harry. The idea I came up with was Harry/Hermione BDSM but it didn't really work out when I tried to start writing it. So meh. We'll see. Might not ending posting anything for a while now. ---- Off topic but since you're here MH, how's Chapt 4 of Yule Ball coming along? It'd be nice to read more of that.

Well the key dispute in HPB was the potions book really and Again as far I can tell, she was in the right for the most part. She was right that Harry was gaining a better reputation that he deserved since he clearly didn't grasp the concepts involved, being totally useless again when he's lost the book. The real dodgy bit was how she handled Harry during the first match but again she was in the right to object if she thought he was cheating, even if she handled it badly. She may not be the best of friends to Harry or naggy at times, she;s usually in the right at least morally. The only real exception to that I think is when she flies off the handle and sets those birds on Ron. The book portrays them as doing actual bodily harm. So no she's not completely perfect but she's a damn sight closer than anyone else in the books.

Author's Notes For Chapter 8: "Acceptance" (Final Chapter) I Am A Link! Click Me! Summary (From Plan):- Notes: The Room of Requirement It's a bit of a cliché to use the room of requirement for couples to have sex it but that's simply because it makes so much damn sense. It provides a totally secure private environment that can also provide the couple without ever equipment they might want from beds to condoms to ropes, whips and toys for BDSM fics and so forth. Having characters who are aware of it, not use it seems rather insulting to their intelligence. I've left it off until the end for a couple of reasons: 1) Draco Malfoy was canonically using for most of HBP. Having harry and Pansy use it for sex would mess that up and 2) Though I never got to say it explicitly within the text, Harry is supposed have mentally subdivided his live; their the bit of them that's friends with Ron & Hermione and goes about with his invisibility cloak and the marauder's map and is part of the DA and so forth, and there's the part of him that has random meaningless sex with Pansy. The two parts of him aren't supposed to meet. So he keeps things from Pansy's the cloak, the map and the room (even though she knows about the last one) Obviously as the fic goes on this separation becomes smaller and smaller. Indeed, after they renew their relationship in the hospital wing, Harry's use of the cloak is symbolic of the increasing trust in their relationship. I have attempted to twist the usual use of the RoR by having them discovered there. I have justified/hand-waved this occurrence with the argument that, in my story at leas, the Room being unbreakable into while in use, is not an inherent property of the room but instead was just a function of the room being whatever you need. The DA and Draco specifically needed not to be discovered and their requests to the room conveyed this information upon its formation. When Harry & Pansy used the room; Harry was already established as feeling guilty about keeping secrets from Ron & Hermione, he wanted them to find him, so the room in turn let them. (This explanation is a bit iffy; since I had it be Pansy who defined what the room would be; but the room must constantly update itself as to what its occupants need; for example in OotP Harry needs a whistle and subsequently one appears) Ron & Hermione As I write this, I'm anticipating some comments to my portrayal of Ron & Hermione. Ron is portrayed as simply a loyal friend. He doesn't want to judge Harry's relationship but he also want to look out for him; so he warns Pansy about the repercussions if she hurts Harry. I get the feeling from comments on the board that a lot of people don't really like Ron that much or indeed any of the Weasley clan. And to a certain extend I can see their points; Ron is very rarely portrayed in a positive light after the third book. He either totally useless or actively being obnoxious. It's such a pity that his finest moment is in Prisoner of Askaban where he stands up on a broken leg to protect Harry from what is believed to be the greatest mass murdered alive. So I'm aiming for a blend between late canon Ron (4-7) with the better qualities of early canon Ron (Book 1-3) ie) tremendous loyalty and physical bravery. Hermione on the other hand I'm trying to represent as a bit worse than her canon self; who is based on the author and is pretty much goddamn perfect. Forever loyal and helpful to Harry and whenever they disagree; (books 3 & 6 mainly) its obvious that Hermione is being the most reasonable and sensible out of the two of them. My Hermione though is going to be a lot more abrasive. Basically because she sees Harry's relationship with Pansy as one giant emotional betrayal. (I've always stuck by you and you didn't tell me you were shagging that slytherin bitch for the entire damn year?) She doesn't like Pansy, and she doesn't like her relationship with Harry and she's not going to be convinced otherwise. She also implied in the books to be a close friend of Ginny's and knows she's still carrying one hell of a torch for him, so she's also offended on Ginny's behalf. Boys & Girls Original plan was to have Harry and Ron talk in this chapter while Pansy spoke to Hermione. But this mean Harry would have had a much easier time of justifying himself to ron another guy, (So you're telling me it's all about sex Harry? No ron! I'm telling you its about really really good sex.) and it would have required Hermione and Pansy genuinely come to an accord. (pansy would have used the hating Slytherins is bigoted line again and would have justified her bitchiness as being part of her insecurities and her need to be in the Slytherin In Crowd and would compare it to Hermione's academic excellence) In the end I revised it, partially because I wanted to portray Ron positively and him starting the conversation with Pansy seemed more plausible than her hunting down and talking to Hermione. Who loathes her. Possible Sequel Obviously, The end of this fic, which ends about the same time HBP did, does lend itself to a DH based sequel. Which I do have a few ideas for. The Dumbledore/Harry scene was in fact added for this contingency. It contains dialogue Harry will use to justify to his friends why Pansy accompanies them on the Horcrux mission. (Hermione will not be convinced) I have a general idea what I'd like to do with it up until they get to Grimmuald place. Which is about the first two or three chapters. But after that incorporating her into the ministry raid, the endless camping scene, and the bank raid and so forth is more difficult. What is even more difficult to justify is added in enough smut scenes for it to remain a decent smut fic. I don't much like the idea of them heading out for frequent outdoor scenes in the middle of winter. Or doing it in the tent with Ron/Hermione, right there. Hell, these author's notes are longer than some chapters I've written in years gone by. Hope you found them interesting.

If he turns his evidence off to the police anonymously, there's no need for the police to know he was blackmailing them beforehand. Blackmail is illegal, providing the cops with evidence is not.

Is this just a particular quirk of mine, or does anybody else feel the same way when you get reviews along the lines of; 'this is so good! more please!' I mean I can;t really object that kind of thing right? But I'm still not reassured that the work is good because everyone gets reviews like that. Even fics, I look at and know are just awfully written will have comments. Ratings are even worse. Almost every fic gets five stars and the only really way to tell about the quality is to look at the number of 5 star votes its got. And even then; if its a long fic that's no guarantee. It takes a spectacularly bad fic for the number next the rating to go down to three or two. This is aslo the reason I'm hesitant about rating fics myself because I know what I rank as five out of five has to be a lot more than it seems for other people and I don't want to muck up their average so that everyone who rates everything 5 will see it and skip it. Does that make any sense to anyone else?

Title: It's Just Sex Summary: Alone in the library; two teenagers abandoned by their usually friends, give in to their raging hormones, which leads to an ongoing (and secret!) relationship. Pairing: Harry Potter/Pansy Parkinson. Rating: Adult+ Link: Click Me! --- This a thread that the Archive Mods recommended I set up in place of lengthy author's notes. So Replies for chapter five: Penname Still no plans for the kinky stuff in this story, which will end in the next couple of chapters, coinciding with the end of HBP storyline wise. Like I said before; if I write a sequel; showing the modified version of Deathly Hallows; there maybe one chapter that has them experiment a bit in Grimmauld Place but that's by no means certain. For example I have ideas for how to fit Pansy into the plot but not as many on how to fit sex into it, which would make it a bit of a poor smut fic. On the other hand, have you read Salon Kitty's 'Boys & Girls'? It's Harry/Luna but has a lot of kinky stuff; bondage, rimming, anal play and so forth that you might enjoy. MayorHaggar The quick writing pace is due to me having an awful lot of free time at the moment. Thank you for the detailed reviews. Essentially you are completely correct; the rapid turn around from argument to make up sex is a bit rapid. (I was wondering whether to extend the chapter by having Pansy not come back and have Harry chat her up when he returns to school but I liked the hospital wing 69 too much. Plus I would have to skip over the Dumbledore scene I've used in chapt 6.) Ideally I might have had another chapter between four and five but it would have had to have been sexless and I wasn't sure I could make it interesting enough. And although DHsucks won't be able to read this. Not being an Archive/Forum member. I'd just like the comment that although his/her comments make a great deal of sense. Dumbledore is totally on the level on in Chapter 6. He's trying to be honest and not employ reverse-psychology.

how about 'bare faced'? Would that scan properly?

The idea that when reading we know what is supposed to be there, so we miss what is actually there is pretty bang on the mark. Happens in essays as well. One of my lecturers always advised we finish essays and assignments several days early. So we could not look at it for a couple of days and then proof read it when we've forgotten what we thought we put. Sadly, the desire for reviews and feedback and so forth usually overrides the part of me that thinks I should leave it a couple of days then proof read it again and post it.

In the end there's only one bit of the camping trip I found annoying: When Harry & Hermione are out there alone. JKR pretty much seemed to forget about portraying Ron in any kind of positive light after 'Prisoner of Askaban' Him leaving and coming back just seemed to drag things out and be pretty pointless. I'll admit it did provide some some exposition when he returned but that was about it and that wasn't worth making poor Ron to look like a complete prat again.