InvidiaRed

I love you sometimes <3
That said warm and cuddly seems to be one  of my Achilles heel.

posted

Warm and cuddly is surprisingly hard.
Will post soonish.  Too many double shifts during and on Christamas week ruined my whole plan and feng shui
Powdered Sugar
 

Update was going to upload today but that was before somehow I got double shifted for the next two days.
So sometime this week

Posted!

I’m going to be the last one to post; I’m really sorry about this!  I’m really hoping to have it up before Christmas, and rest assured, you will all get reviews from me!

Sunday night at the earliest I’m afraid.
I want to proofread it again (perhaps the curse of over editing.)

Dang it, empty handed again.  I had a year to work something out!  You’d think I’d prepare a little better by now.  I’ll probably whip something up last minute and give it a proof reading skim right before uploading like I usually do.

Might go with that one I suggested awhile ago.
Santa, his gimp, wife and the quest to find his next ho.

Halfway through mine

Now time to start reading… sorry I’ve not been reviewing folks.

I'll take it on...  And hopefully should be able to get to reading everyone's entries in Halloween...  I have made headroom in NaNoWriMo!  A beachhead has formed, so I can read some.

So who is hosting Christmas?

its midrange fast food. Kinda harsh to say hell on earth.

Someone open a Chick-Fil-A?

From JayDee on October 28, 2019
 
Immunda by InvidiaRed
…thought I might have some missionary position jokes but, holy fuck, another one making me Holy Fuck at he end.
That is one crapsack shithole of a nation you’ve got there, but an interesting one as well.
The kind of wham moment here after she thinks she’s cleansed the altar… that’s some fucking good horror that is. I feel bad for the baby like.
The ending was really grim. So good job on that, too! I sure as fuck didn’t see it coming. Y’all are taking the horror seriously this year!
Mortane is a hell on earth for a reason. Yeah. Nothing like cleansing an evil god out of an alter just for another to be ready and waiting.

He’s got a work ethic, I’ll give him that.

Have to say. Got to respect Asesemana

Posted. Whew! 

But Darling.
Like making chocolate ganache
Or a rich chocolate cake (An extra yolk is the secret) It requires sugar.
Horror requires a helping of light-hearted brevity. You can't have horror all the time or it gets stale, quaint. inexcusably tired.
Especially towards the cynical among us.

You Are Correct. The Gods Of Mortane can’t torture anyone else if they’re fixated on her like they are. She now completely understands the Demon Emperor but unlike him she has strength of character. They cannot corrupt someone who has fought evil all her life. She knows all the tricks and most importantly she has a goddess who she knows for a fact has never let her down. Not once. There’s no doubt or uncertainty to play off of.  She may not be able to hold them off forever but then she doesn’t have to.
While she can’t face them. She can distract them. Since she knows her goddess isn’t impulsive. The Hammerstrike may take sometime but its coming and Trias is fully committed to giving her goddess all the time she needs.
Trias has been permanently rendered barren as a result of the unbirthing.

Reality like to reminds us that nightmares walk among us every day. That pic is horrifying.

Besides, It is a slice of amber. A moment that is profoundly yours. So you can see yourself improve as a wordsmith.
 

But Darling.
Like making chocolate ganache
Or a rich chocolate cake (An extra yolk is the secret) It requires sugar.
Horror requires a helping of light-hearted brevity. You can't have horror all the time or it gets stale, quaint. inexcusably tired.
Especially towards the cynical among us.

Don’t ya dare! There’s no requirement for bloodythirsty terror.
Edit: Also I am looking forward to reading and reviewing!