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Yep...its up. GITG 59. Looks like two more chapters and on to book three We get to play with the Turners next chapter

Damn hangers!.. OK now we have 2 damaged alfabit ops about to undergo interrogation that they probably won't survive and 2 scumbags that should never walk free. Maybe Kare should be the one to punish the scumbags that were her parents. That could be interesting like Evan. As far as the comments on Petra I don't see her as taking over. Yes she is unusual BUT so is your story. I think you have done an excellent job of weaving interpersonal relationships into a thrilling story. Stay the course and FULL SPEED AHEAD.

Johnny and Chester, you and your loved ones are both in my thoughts. We are like family here (brought together by quite an unconventional source) but we look after each other. May god speed your recovery

@JohnnyBanana I'm so glad to hear that. My prayers and my wife's prayers are still with you and your family If everyone reading this forum can shoot some support and prayers to Johnny and Chester, that would be fantastic. Help them through this tough time and let them know we support them.

On the whole Petra front, I like her. In my opinion she is a good addition to the mix BUT i do think that there should be a couple chapters where the original six get some time to themselves, even if its while on a mission or maybe the house is under siege I can't wait to see the new toys in use, especially the mech suits you hinted at

For me, Petra just adds to the uniqueness of Max's life. It's easy for me to see how much she loves both Max and Emma and having both male and female sex organs gives her a perspective that I never really saw with Becca. While most of us LOVE the ideal of a loving, monogamous relationship, the reality is that humans are capable of being in love with more than one person at the same time. We're wired that way but not taught that way. Just my perspective....

EGADS! Multiple cliffhangers within the same story is just plain MEAN! I figured the Turners were bad but a cage?!!! *shudder* While I hoped Kara and Stacy would end up together, having the little brother in the mix certainly makes things harder to predict. Not sure how old he is but perhaps a new playmate for Cat and the Twins....or maybe something else entirely. Now that the Shadow group is being revealed to Max, I can't wait to see the start of Book 3. Snakes in the Grass DEFINITELY seems like an appropriate title. Great chapter but WRITE FASTER, dammit!!!

well part of bringing her in was to give Max a little relief without adding another true male to the mix, but i can tone down the testosterone a bit i guess, there's gonna be an interesting twist on the emma/max/petra group next chapter that should be fun, i wrote in a while ago and i think the coming chapter is a good place to put it. but i'll keep petra's feminine side more in mind

The next time my wife gives me crap about my lack of sheet folding skills! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fq-utbItoy4

Hey everyone! First of all, Chester57...I'm sorry for all your difficulties and I wish you a speedy recovery. Would that the dollar amount of the points I see at the bottom of my posts were real and I'd shoot some over to you to help with bills and such. Sorry, man. Halfway though Chapter 29. This one's gonna be a low-key chapter, just kinda of a nice, relaxing chapter with Jack and everyone to recover from the events of the last saga and transition into the rest of the current one. Won't say whether or not the rest of the saga is gonna be as relaxing but it will certainly be shorter than the other ones (maybe only four or five chapters). Subject to change, of course, but that's the plan for now. Hope everyone had a wonderful Easter and I'll hopefully be getting the next chapter up soon.