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  1. Before getting into what the general plot outline of my request is, i feel i should let you know i'm taking some minor liberties regarding certain canon/fanon concepts i'm basing the request on. Btw, i know it is a tad lengthy, but please take the following as just a outline (i kinda wrote a bit too much in a way that kinda sound like specific scenes, but those are more just kinda examples on the spirit of the stuff i would like to read, and not the exact scenes i would expect you to write), the request is not to just write these things, the request is to flesh out the details and expand on the ideas, writing it more in a story-like manner etc. Here's the basic premise: Caroline/GLaDOS does agree somewhat science needs to be done even without the hardcoded guidelines pushing her in that direction; but after reviewing with more care the data about what took place, and finally free from lots of the countermeasures that were clouding her mind, she finally comes to the conclusion that the best way for science to be done is to make herself more human and allow her to feel positive emotions in a healthy way, but she can't just use backups of the minds of the employees and original test subjects, all those traumas and unprocessed insanity would corrupt her mind like before (Caroline's own experiences as well as the insane borrowed personalities from the other cores were making her self-destructive; the hardcoded rules wouldn't allow her to suicide by herself, but with a brain the size of a city she did find ways to at least increase the odds test-subjects would try to off her and end the suffering) ; enough of the countermeasures have been damaged or otherwise removed to allow her to change her own programing as long as she can convince herself it will help with sciencemaking, even beyond the old hardcoded limits. She came to this conclusion in just a few picoseconds, but she was busy focused on rebuilding and renovating the facilities and running the robot coop tests for a whole week, enough time for Chell to get lost in the cornfield around the shack (though remember AS is a humongous facility, for the purpose of this fic assume Chell is still above AS territory). A sidenote here on somthing that is not necessarily canon but i consider essential for my enjoyment of this fic i'm requesting. Test-subjects, employees and others did die; but after there was no one left and no new people coming in, and before GLaDOS started considering evaluating robots as test subjects, in order to keep doing science GLaDOS researched into and developed means of recreating people based on DNA samples and pre and post test brainscans (of a similar nature to the techniques used to obtain the personality elements distilled into the personality cores and GLaDOS herself), basicly clones. The original minds still got backups, but thru successive iterations the clones had their minds wiped and reconstructed in a barebones manner to keep out random variables that were interfering in the earlier runs (the stuff about trying to cripple GLaDOS with the additional personality and morality cores after the first time Caroline's insanity and depression made her try to end it all and kill everyone before they had more time to suffer); at some later date (that will only take place at significant time after anything that happens in this fic) the actual original people, with their traumas and insanity corrected ( 'cause GLaDOS will have understood humans enough to figure out how to fix their minds), will be ressurected, but only when GLaDOS is sure both them and the world is ready. So for the fic, Chell (the one we played in the games) and any other humans, as well as any additional new minds (the coop bots, and perhaps progressively healthier turrets and other bots) are new individuals that were "born" "from" GLaDOS; their bodies are expendable 'cause she is able to rebuild/reclone them in just a few seconds, and their minds are mostly kept in sync so the new bodies keep memories of their previous "lifes". Back to the story outline; with that new insight on which direction to take, GLaDOS reabducts Chell (open a hole in the ground, scare her with a huge fall, but land her safely on a huge vat of non-cancerous uncooked cake dough perhaps), and gradually re-earns her trust, showing Chell her new willingness to figure out how to better coexist with humans; she doesn't need to be perfect at first, perhaps even kill Chell a couple of times in the beginning, but she starts learning the death experience, even with the infinite "1Up"s, is not somthing that should happen frequently in order for a human to maintain a positive state of mind; though don't do away completly with death and severe enough injuries that make it easier to scrap and rebuild than to repair, perhaps even have Chell willingly push for these possibilities once she starts accepting GLaDOS as a friend and starts enjoying the puzzles and challenges (she would start realizing death and serious injuries though being somthing she should avoid actually make the thrill of the challenges more enjoyable, and since afterall it is not permanent she can live with it for the benefit of science). (Consequence-free severe mutilation, reversible death, and other forms of "safe" extreme masoquism, it is one of my kinks...) Anyway; this first bit above thought somewhat lengthy are kinda just to develop the setting; the main course involves the following: Just studying one blank human is not enough, GLaDOS realizes; she got a few different clones running around; though at first the others also are given their time to get aquainted with this new less villainy GLaDOS (though probably "off camera", most of the introduction i think it would be enough to just be written focused on Chell), but very gradually they start being exposed to the other test subjects; so basicly once testing with nice GLaDOS starts getting a bit routiny for Chell, eventually she spots a male test-subject at distance in another test chamber, he doesn't notice her, and he also eventually notices Chell from distance in some other place this time she being the one not aware a human is watching; then gradually get their exposition closer, more frequent, perhaps some brief moments separated by glass before needing to move on to other tests, and eventually perhaps going thru different test routes crossing at one point. Though not having much experience interacting with other humans at all, and for the most of their lifes having only known the antagonistic GLaDOS and turrets and stuff, they are a bit suspicious of each other (the male test subject and Chell); and given their past experience mostly involving being attacked by anything, some misunderstanding happens and they start fighting each other, quite hard, and i was picturing the guy eventually killing Chell, thought not intentionally, more like during the fight he bashes her head on a corner and doesn't expect that would kill her, or perhaps even not grasping the concept of death completly, getting a bit baffled when she stops reacting. And now things start to get interesting, while trying to understand what is going on the guy pokes and prods and sniffs her body and stuff and he starts getting aroused, first time with a female of his species in his whole life after all, and he gradually figure out ways her body can be used to give him pleasure. Meanwhile a freshly baked clone Chell (with all her memories up to her last death right there) arrives on the chamber and sees the male test subject pleasing himself with the corpse of her former body; GLaDOS usually only cleans up after the test subjects aren't around, and don't usually let them see their own corpses, but this looked too promising to wait for cleanup and arrange another meeting at another time; Chell is at first shocked, but starts getting aroused seeing her body being fucked; perhaps she starts touching herself just watching for a while, but eventually she can't hold a moan, or slips or somthing and the guy notices her, his instincts telling him a live one is better than a dead one, he runs after her and she tries to escape. Perhaps a nice Portal chase sequence, but he eventually catches her; not used to the concept of other humans with feelings and stuff he just goes ahead and starts raping her; midway thru though empathy starts to kick in and he starts noticing her reactions and starts feeling bad for causing those reactions and tries to figure out how to make amends. This time she takes the opportunity of him lowering his guard and kills him (punch to the throat, gauging his eyes out and digging for his brain or whatever), though all that stimulation did arouse her, and now it's her time to get some necrobumping going on. And it is his time to walk in and seeing his corpse getting it on; a bit less uninhibited he just starts walking towards her stroking himself, when she notices him she starts moving as if preparing to run away but he steps back and tries to show he doesn't mean to be a threat; eventually they get to an understanding and things start getting more explicitly consensual (though feel free to have them have lots of gory fun, even live cannibalism, as they explore these new sensations and emotions). Like the turrets say, they don't hate each other even when they are still thinking of each other as threats; no hard feelings. The "breeding" thing i mentioned in the thread tittle is not exactly literal, the motions are there, but with the ability to clone bodies and minds as well create new individuals, what GLaDOS is "breeding" is the minds, the culture, the "memes" in the classical sense (not just image macros and catchphrases, but the general concept of idea elements that propagate from one mind to another); given the dangerous and potentially violent lives test subjects have, i would expect no test subject's body would last long enough for a biological pregnancy to develop to any significant extent (way less time than the maximum allowed for abortions/day after pill); and perhaps being engineered biotechnological constructs they might even not actually be fertile (having at least a basic understanding of how animals work, GLaDOS probably would've ensured she was the one to decide and control the exact size of the "active" population; anyone with basic understanding of the principles of emergent sci-fi villainy should be quite familiar with the dangers of self-reproducing autonomous entities ). Later on, if you get this far, i would like GLaDOS to start getting a bit more "hands on" in the experiments, basicly her trying to figure out how it is to have a sexuality, both with humanoid robotic "avatars" and with more abstract robotic tentacles and other "appendages"; if possible in a similar tone as the first human-human interactions in the sense she doesn't know what is and isn't appropriate and just starts "raping" everyone and using apendages too big for safety (both in girth and in length varieties, tearing holes bigger as well as fucking thru and thru) and only gradually get the hang of what she should be doing; both on males and females; and perhaps play a bit with the flexibility of being able to summon and fabricate arbitrary appendages, try things like hair like tendrils fucking tearducts, pencil-sized tentacles invading urethras, machingun cocks cumming bullets, guilhotine/chainsaw vagina detatas, humanoid androids/gynoids with pneumatic dozen metres long cocktongues etc ps:perhaps you could also fit in somewhere the development of the companion cube, via modifications a la Wheatley's frankenturrents but with GLaDOS sophistication, into actual pets (generic quadlimbed dog/cat/monkey body plan); perhaps with GLaDOS paraphrasing that line about how the companion cube can't tell Chell it loves her, saying now it can show it.
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  2. I'm sorry that I can't help you find this fic, but I wanted to ask if you're looking for the same story as this person: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/34571-minotaur-mf/ If it is, then I suggest you keep an eye on that thread as well as this one, just in case someone does find this story for you guys. And then you can also let the other person know if someone gives you the link to the story. If it's not the same story, then I'm sorry and just let me know, so I can remove this post. But either way, happy hunting, and I hope someone can help.
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