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  1. After living a normal mundane life. When you die. You awake to find you are a prince of the slain. Not just any lord of the afterlife. But a lord of hell. Within your hell you are almighty. Your will absolute. Mountains melt and oceans boil away with just a thought. But you can be undermined, supplanted, exiled, even banished from hell itself if you aren’t careful. A deep and bitter war has been waged between factions for as long as anyone has ever known. Some who believe in redemption and rebirth struggle against those who don’t. Those who fell from their station, against that stand resolute in their station. The corrupted among them who have rebelled against their station and are hellbent on claiming the entirety of hell for themselves. Ever since the discovery that tormented souls produce great amounts of tainted power. And damned souls are the only currency that can’t be fraudulently forged. Who can you trust when the only souls who come to you rain from above and out of the vast cosmic multiverse. You get the dregs, The worst of the worst. And now the fallen are targeting your vice. Your hell. Will you stand alone? Embrace the corruption? Or will You rally with others and protect the damned souls that are your tutelary charges. There is no right answer. Now all of Hell is watching and it is time to make a choice.
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  2. I was a great relief to post it...self editing is a drag. Must have taken me an extra half year to get it done. The plus side is that there are plenty more on queue to get finished now. I was more coming from the show, don’t tell angle. Getting some details about how she actually dress at that scene when Shannon is thinking about how Lupa dress. I sound like a great story idea that will work really well when your dry spell is over. I think your successful use of the prompts is very entertaining. From my point of view NoSex is not really a problem if the story is good enough...except those cases when you in NoSex story happen to get the perfect setup for sexscene. I am so looking forward to the upcoming PWP... I think the idea of her not understanding is fine and you wrote it well. The thing that made me pause was more that I have not really thought about how old her cover persona is. I had kind of assumed Kizzy had been undercover for a while but this chapter suddenly made me realize her “mission” is new if she ever has gotten on a murder scene. I might have missed it but if there ever was an explanation about why Kizzy is down in the mortal world at this particular time I have not seen it.
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