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I got on a roll and by the time I finished the battle scene I realized I'd dropped everyone but the babies LOL Fixed if though

Hey everyone! So, back from my mini vacation and caught up on rest so it's Reality Check Time: - Actually, this one is a complete coincidence: Kayla's surprise for Jack was something I had written literally a day before my wife did the exact same thing. I didn't even tell her about the chapter. How about that? - My buddies and I have a Dude's Day once a month, where we do, in fact, get together at a bar for drinks and wings and general tom-boyishness. The one Jack and his friends went on is very reminiscent of the first one we had, where we were basically asking ourselves, "So what the hell do we do on one of these? - Rhona's attitude is heavily based on the work attitudes and ethics of several people I've worked with, one in particular. I now count them as one of my closest friends so don't be too annoyed with her; trust me, we've just begun to get to know her. - Frank's attitude towards Rhona and holding her spot is also based off the same friend; I don't know how legal it is but there you go. - The tension between the Hannigans is very heavily based on tension I've seen between my parents and my wife's parents. Never a good experience. Now, because we're getting so far in and the story has gone through so many twists and turns, I figure it would be interesting to take a look back on some of the bad ideas I've had regarding the story. Many people wonder at what's going on behind the scene in the story and others wonder what happened and when to make what happen, etc. Obviously, I can't reveal spoilers or stuff that needs to be highlighted for future installments for fear of spoilers (Rhona's brother, for example), but it would be interesting for you and kind of cathartic for me to share the bad ideas that, thankfully, I scrapped before putting them in the story. I'll probably do one per Reality Check, since there aren't as many of them and it's based on past chapters, not the ones that just came out. Occasionally I might put more than one, like if the Reality Check is especially short, but for now it'll be just one. Let's call this segment...Bad Idea Confessional. So, here we go. First Bad Idea Confessional: - It was originally my intention to have Jack force a kiss on Kayla in the first chapter. Well, 'force' may be a bit strong. He was going to surprise her with it. I was planning on having Kayla come home late while he was still up and have him run over to her to check on how she was. She'd reply that she was fine, that the date went great, and that she thinks Craig is a swell guy and all that. Jack, jealous, would then plant a kiss on her so he could claim to have kissed her before Craig did. For obvious reasons, I scrapped it pretty quickly: it made Jack seem like a stalker and would not really lead to a romantic connection, at least not in the way the story needed; not without making it very contrived and rapey. So, yeah, thank God I saw that as the bad idea that it was before it was too late. Have started work on Chapter 32 so hopefully it will be out soon. See you guys soon!

That would bring this AMAZING series to an end. NO let's go another 65+ but without ulcers. B

Emma takes one in the face, eh? Hoping it's from a "Love Gun" and not one that fires bullets.

and at the other site no one would have taken pity on you. mod are sssoooooo much better here, but don't tell them that - don't want them getting big heads!

Hey Samara, hope your doing OK over there

So post already! Geeze I feel like Sam. Notice I said 'feel like' not felt. Bunch of old preverts.

Do a much better job here, you couldn't even get a response to an email there

Yeah, BITG didn't get as many since I basically finished all but the last chapter at xxnx, had over a million hits there but they have a bigger membership. It was in the top 3 or four hit stories before it got nuked...oh well...shit happens...though I think an outsider like me outpacing the golden children was why the rule suddenly happened cause if you go back now, underage stories are getting posted everyday and standing. Happened to Daddycums too, he had more hits then I did and got nuked too. I did notice the underage and pedo stories that didn't have a lot of hits stayed...even after they were reported so there's that

I trust alphabet soup, is that allowed? But I don't let the can anywhere near a string. It wasn't until recently that Canucks had aplhabet groups, other than YMCA.

suits never could handle a walk through hell, don't like getting guts and shit on their shiney shoes...bitter? Me? Nah...

Who says it can't. There is many things going on in this world that we either do not know about or can not tell anyone about without us getting into deep trouble. Like I stated before, release the hell demons on the alphabet company in DC and see if the handlers can handle the demons. I know that my couldn't. Some of them actully got sick on some of our walks in the jungles at what they saw and what we had to do to clean up the mess. I still have nightmares about some of it. That is one of the reasons that I enjoy this story because it allows me to relive some of it and cry about the hurt that is still going on to this day. Magus keep up the great work and let some of the R/L get nicer to take and hope that someday we will have a V/W that we can escape into for short periods of time to get our sanity back together. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.

still...get writing people!...logic and facts do not sway me, only my own heavily opinionated misconceptions interest me

Blow the seals? (backs away as he notices that fangface is reaching for wires ripped from a fan ...) So you should be adding the finishing touches noe huh or is that touching the fins? How come fins are on fishes but wings are not on wishes? Blow the seals? (backs away as he notices that fangface is reaching for wires ripped from a fan ...) So you should be adding the finishing touches no? huh or is that touching the fins? How come fins are on fishes but wings are not on wishes?

And if it was up to him, she'd get em too! But there's a house full of women and I'm sure they would have some say, meaning all the say, in it. That's how it works in the real world. I am king of my castle and I can do whatever they say I want to

Max does screw around, hell he's got three pregnant women with him. The petra thing is just a damaged girl finding herself again, getting her self confidence back, she's bound to step over the line now and again, remember Amy did as well. And don't forget Max, he promised to talk to them about how he's feeling and he's not, so Emma can be forgiven for not knowing what he's thinking all the time. This is just the crap that couples go through, say something insensitive, get snapped at, feel bad, then appologize...having everything all roses and sunshine would be nice, but its not beleivable.