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Summer after 4th year. Draco, bolstered by the Dark Lord's return, decides to get revenge on Hermione. Visiting her house, he places her parents under the Imperious and gives her this Ultimatum: Be his obedient pet, or per parents will kill themselves. From there, the story would revolve around Draco's sexual abusing of Hermione. Not just raping her, but drugging her with potions, punishing her by letting others use her, and slowly conditioning her into a mindless sex toy. Several scenes I would suggest: -Doseing her with a temporary love potion and making her beg him to use her -hexing her so that he can arouse her (Vibrating underwear, make her feel like her pussy/arse is being pounded, like she's being groped, etc.) in the halls and class, tormenting her whenever. -A decent way into the year, disappear her into a hidden compartment in his trunk designed into a sex dungeon. Things I DON'T want to read: Vore, Scat, Waterplay, etc. Basically, the REALLY creepy shit.

I'm like CL, I skim read the sex parts just in case you hid something important in info wise. If Max buggers off those left behind would be open to attack. We all know that the MFs don't care if their primary target has gone AWOL, they still attack. Beside Mr. Director wants Max's toys more than anything else. What we need is Ric, Early, Dave along with Gunny and the Sergeant Major to go hunting the Black-Op team. I think that you plant to cut the characters down via a big battle with the Shadow Group, if you do make it interesting and don't let the loses be to unknowns alone. Get some of those we know by name and use those loses to cause a major change in how the the survivors think and run things.

I think we have enough variety to go around but hey, it's your story. We're just along for the ride.

@Guest_brokenforever She still wears them. I've just stopped mentioning them as much. Also, almost finished hopefully, should be up by this weekend