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Hey everyone! I'm Jashley13 and, until recently, I was posting this series on another website. Unfortunately, due to a lack of management and, shall we say, lack of respect and sophistication among readers, things began to get ugly. To the point that I was actually receiving death threats for writing my story. Why? I don't know. But, out with the bad, in with the good I was recommended to this site by several fans of my series so I'm hoping to start afresh here. I've posted a few chapters of the story (I'm up through Chapter 19 currently in the story) and will be posting more as they are written. Author: Jashley13 Title: She is the One Summary: The life of Jack Harrison and his relationship with Kayla, as they navigate high school and beyond. Feedback: Any and all are welcome. I love hearing responses to my story. Fandom: Original Warnings: Minor2, Solo, Voy URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107407 I really hope you guys get the chance to read and enjoy. This story is very close to my heart and based off stuff that has happened to me, so it has that personal quality to it. Thank you so much for giving me a second chance to let my story be told. Jashley13

There will be times where your story will need more than one chapter to tell what happens. When that happens, plan the path that your story will take and then write that path. If it doesn't gel with one chapter than use more with breaks where they make sense. You are the one who knows where your story will go; you are the only one who can take it there. Ultimately, you are the one who must be satisfied with your work. WE have the easy job of simply enjoying your presentation.

no the older rifles were bolt action. But the 50 caliber berreta and the FAL rifles are semi automatic. That way we do not lose target sighting chambering the next round. When you are sighting a target over a mile away you do not want to lose it having to chamber the next round. Remember his dad was making weapons for the government. Four rifles with 10 rounds per mag is 40 rounds going down range at a time. And if they are smart they would stagger their shots so that they are not all loading at the same time. And if they carry ten mags each that is 400 rounds going down range. Good blood bath and lots of caskets needed.

but the potty is the only place I get peace and quiet when I'm home!

If you are working use the free time to rest and plot, write only if it moves you and no not while you go potty.