Yes, yes. But then I tried to fit words in it and came up with something slightly ... different.
his "ripe, lickable, fuckable ass made me orgasm"
so I added an extra "m", but aside from that, whatcha think?
@Cuzosu
haha omg. yeah I think we all do that. The funny thing is when I am writing I like the idea of making my readers have that reaction , and then when I'm a reader I forget about that.
@Cuzosu
and that sucks about your step sister, but you are right it's not your problem, and there's nothing 'insensitive' about creating a boundary with someone who you can't trust