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I've done 3 chapters properly and a further 2 in segments Title: The Data trap Author: Krakenknight Summary: Tai gains access to a program that allows him to change people in real ways. The problem is, he was the first person to be changed by its power. Rating: Adult+ Pairings: Tai X Just about everyone but Kenyako is the only non Mind controlled one Feedback: Please give I appreciate any feedback good or bad. URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600051458

Hey all, well chapters 1 and 2 are up, I'd love some feedback in regards to how it is structure and the flow, etc, etc and whether it is an enjoyable read. It is multi-chaptered and a Scabior-centric story. Title: A Beautiful Lie Author: djackgirl Rating: Adult++ Summary: Lies never turn out well in the end and for Genevieve, lying was her way to survive in the beginning but it could end up her death sentence if she is found out. Feedback: Greatly welcomed and appreciated, I am new to writing Harry Potter fanfiction. Fandom: Harry Potter. URL: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094229 Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to read this and go to story It means a lot to me. Regards djackgirl