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Hmm, I didn’t realize this was a thing that was out there. As someone who wrote a bunch in the Buffy subdomain, this could be fun.

Start time: 9 pm CST on 1/18. Projected end time is 6 pm CST on 1/19 Manta2g has been working her coding fingers for us, to update the archive to support PHP 8.x and other things that sorely needed to be updated. Members: Updated members dashboard Members have an account and can log in Email system fixed to prevent email providers from bouncing emails Activation and password reset bug fixed Resend activation option available on login screen (This may be needed if having problems logging in) Notifications system (if enabled in profile) Authors receive new review notifications (fixed) stories in the current reading list send notifications when a new chapter is added (New) Authors can now report & hide malicious reviews Authors can now see who has recommended them Authors can see who is currently reading their stories Authors can see who has recommended their stories Authors can add AFF forum links to review replies and story discussion. Authors can now set stories to only be visible to other members (required to be logged in to read) Members can now report stories directly from the archive for TOS violations. New story manager & editor Users: New archive level search engine New archive level advanced search engine Stories can now be filtered by tags Users are people who use the site without an account. Cleaner interface Robust authors/members search Updated TOS, Content Guidelines, & Privacy Policy Content Tags for AI usage Updated contact form Advertisers: New advertising system. self serve detailed statistics Something to keep in mind, once these changes roll out, you’ll need to manually clear your cache and cookies, or the pages won’t draw correctly. Beta Feel free to poke around!

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Under Joan's Bed Thank you! I always had some ideas for more parts, I just never got around to them. If you can’t be buddies with the monster under your bed who can you be buddies with? Thanks again in case you ever stop back by and see this belated review reply!

Holodeck Bitch Thank you for this review! Apologies I did not see/respond at the time, but if you ever happen over this way I appreciate your thoughts. There was the odd episode, I confess, where as a much younger JD I imagined the entire crew naked. It was easier for some, than others, as we got to see Chakotay’s ass in that one episode, and, of course, the Doctor surely has the body of a greek god sculpted there by Doctor Zimmerman. I’m sure while the story there had some sexual feelings of a four legged variety, Janeway was very much a bipedal fancier type in canon. If you ignore that one episode where she and Paris got turned into lizards and had a bunch of baby lizards. Still, it wasn’t as bad as Spock’s Brain am I right, Kiz?

Edit – I put here because of the possible scammer element, but possibly it should be in the spammer subforum, apologies! Got this review, hadn’t spotted it until now. Unless I did and said something previously. My mind hasn’t been great. Saw it tonight, anyway – https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081649 User here – https://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1297031347 so, here’s the thing. There’s been bots and users etc for years over on fanfiction.net (and I presume elsewhere) that post stuff similar to this, and those ones are all scammers. Taking advantage of gullible children or vulnerable adults mostly. As this is a registered user of the site I hesitate to cast such an accusation here but, well, let’s look at the facts It’s a 1000 word POS fic I crapped out just to have one on the Lord of the Rings subdomain and because I was afraid if I actually wrote the Galadriel idea I had, she’d get me somehow. You do not want her as an enemy. I’m not sure I’d even be comfortable having her as a friend. Anyway. So putting aside the story’s short length and literally shit quality, we have the review. Positive but utterly generic, and wanting contact off site. Then, I try google for other reviews by this user and, well, https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081720 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081623 https://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600056826 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600106964 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081666 https://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600107089 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081664 https://lotr.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600081671 I’m not convinced this user’s intentions are entirely genuine if I’m honest. It feels like a buncha almost spam like reviews, all generic, all wanting off site discussion, no money mentioned but come on… Happy to be proven wrong, like.

Hello, sorry I missed this before. I assume you’re long gone but in case you are not anyone else is wondering, I’ve never done commissions (not even for original work!) and while I have done requests I am busy with one at moment so not open for more. Sorry! I hope you got your idea written though.

Another missed review from when I wasn’t doing shit about shit. Bart the Ripper II: Mothersnuffer From ANON - I came on January 27, 2022 Thank you for the comment! I am glad you enjoyed the story. I think that was one of the ones that made the old topless robot fanfic reviewer drink. With good cause!

Progress report on this challenge – 3 chapters basically bar final proofing/editing completed, covering the first part of the structure near the top of this page. I am now working on thew next chapter, which will hopefully be a chunk of the part 2 structure above. Definitely going to be more than 4 parts! However, main reason I am posting is I’ve slowly started going back through my profile and deleting out various spam reviews (lot of super dodgy links) when I saw one I had not noticed/responded to before! Pleasurable Evils review by ANON - Kayla on May 21, 2022 I realise at this stage the odds of you seeing this reply are slim to none, but I still want to say thank you for this review! I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I hope you haven’t had to read anything that’s quite such a … ride since. Thank you again!

The concluding Part is now loaded – link https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110651&chapter=2 Chapter specific content codes: Complete, Humanoid, M/F, TF. Oral sex

The new chapter of “Time’s Error” has made its debut! Chapter 2: Crew Who?

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I really appreciate the clarification there! I’ve seen worse too, but I’m happy with a B. B minus maybe. I can say also you’ll probably want to avoid the Buffy fic I’m working on since there’s a whole lot of frantic sloppy drool-splashing face fucking with extra heavy loads planned for it, on the plus side I don’t usually write sound effects so only 2 out of 3 would be really bad… Also, instead of choking frog I picture a Goblin, Glurk, who just gives the best BJs. “Tavenkeep! Why’s this place called The Goblin’s Head?” “Go see Glurk in the back room, traveller, and take a gold piece.”

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😄 *Joker voice* I’m an agent of chaos… Actually I swear, most days in Florida are surprisingly normal. It’s just every once in a while...

I liked it in particular because it made it feel like a carnivorous plant or something similar, where once a prey animal is drawn in by the “lure”, it still takes a while for the trap to fully close, like the slow-moving tentacles of a sundew. The sudden drop would have worked too (more of a Venus flytrap vibe there), but I kind of like it better this way. This is a fair question, and it deserves the full answer I couldn’t condense enough for the review. So, this was a solid B, I would say. It was pretty good, but I think it could have been hotter. I wanted to lean especially into the positive, however, because I’ve read enough blowjobs in erotic fiction to know that most people write them in ways I don’t like at all. The standard erotic fic blowjob tends to go a certain way. 1. The motion is kind of frantic, like the woman is trying to win a prize for time (that would have been amusingly appropriate here, but the point stands). I tend to find sexual content more arousing when it starts out more relaxed and then kind of accelerates toward the climax. 2. There’s a sound effect that gets made, and it’s nearly always the exact same sound effect too: “Glurk! Glurk! Glurk!” Suffice it to say I am not aroused by the sound of a choking frog. 3. There’s always an emphasis on the amount of drool/spit coming off the blowjob, and it usually reaches the point where I honestly find it gross rather than hot. I know I’ve read seriously arousing blowjobs in erotic fics before, but they’re shockingly few and far between in my experience. I agree that there is room for you to improve, but I gave a positive mention there because I’ve seen way worse.

Here's the latest: –Chapter 5 of “Precocious" went off to beta a couple of days ago. It's the longest chapter of that story yet, at 7,500 words, so I'm not sure when it will be back. –Since then, I've been working on chapter 2 of "Time’s Error.” I have made good progress and expect to post the chapter later this week. –Once that's done, I will shift my focus—to the extent that I have focus—to the final chapter of “RB-X-17." In other news, I’m about halfway through reading InBrightestDay’s Winter Holiday story “Meaningful Gifts.” Really nice so far. JayDee’s new story is now in my queue, as well.

Of all the HOTD stories i read until now, i never found one where Shido gets all the girls. So lets say that Takashi and Kouta are killed early in the game (either at school or after that) and Shido using a drug he found in his father safe (liquid or spray your choise) was able to slowly make all the girls lust for him. If Takashi and Kouta are killed before they leave the school then the girls will have no choise but to stay with shido since not all of them can fight and Shido can start from there. I want Shido to have all the hot women for him and the males of his group even the ones who are married, he can allways kill the husbands.