[Ghost's Sight - Book One of the Witch's Apprentice]

Yay! I’m so happy and excited for you!

[How Many Active Stories do you Have?]

I saw this post and was going to pass it up because it’s absolutely embarrassing how many WIPs I have that are in various stages of writing and editing, but, maybe, if I post this it will shame me into getting my butt back in gear. (sort of like when people post pics of their pets with a sign around their neck, you know?)

I have 37 WIPs and yes, I’m (sorta) working on all of them. Of those, 8 are finished and awaiting editing so they can be sent to the publisher or self published, 14 are half to three fourths finished and the others average anywhere from 3 to 6 chapters.

The sad thing about this all is that even with all these stories unfinished, I can’t stop myself from starting new ones. *hangs head in shame*

[Suggestion: No hotlinked porn pics]

I’ve read through the comments and I get what JayDee is saying but I also see the problem you just pointed out Melrick and it’s a valid concern.

I know this would probably be a big hassle but could you do a NSFW picture forum and make it so no one can put x-rated pics in threads outside of that forum? So instead have them post them in the picture forum and provide a link to it instead within whatever thread they’re responding to? That way, people browsing regular threads wouldn’t happen upon them but it would stop other people from redirecting offsite to somewhere harmful?

Just a suggestion, sorry.

[Beta Readers for Crappy MM Werewolf Series]

I’m looking for a couple of betas who would give me an opinion on my new series. It’s a MM evolving into a MMM, shifter romance with werewolves. The first and second books are done and each run about 50k words, give or take and I have plans to write a third. I’d like people who could commit to reading all three.

I’m not looking for intensive beta reading. I need opinions on the general plot and such, not grammar help or anything like that. If you enjoy shifter books, you’re the person I’m looking for. 

The first book is already contracted for publishing in the summer of 2019 and they’re just waiting on me to get them the second to set the date for it also, so I’m offering a free copy of the books once they’re published, and if you’d like I’ll include your name in the acknowledgements. 

Please either comment here, send me a pm or you can reach me by email at bangbangramallama@gmail.com

[Cold Blooded: The Thread Where We Pretend to Know What We're Doing When People Review the Story]

Hello again! Okay, who’s ready for the last chapter? Just let me get these replies done and you’ll get it.

From Lisa on October 22, 2017

Wow. Just...wow. I had a feeling Jeff was some sort of 'creature', but wasn't sure what kind. It's amazing that after all those years of being best friends and being together all the time, Alan never saw Jeff's anger directed toward him, so he never knew.

I would imagine Jeff is scared that Alan won't ever want to see him again, since now he knows he's not fully human. Or whatever.

Ok, on to the next chapter.

From Lisa on October 22, 2017

Vampirism. Very interesting. lol

So, I'm guessing Jeff's dad feeds off his mom, but Jeff hadn't gotten any of Alan's blood yet, so whose blood is it in the fridge?

Awesome chapter, CL and Tahn!

Oh wow, I get two reviews from Lisa this time! It was a little weird but I think Jeff hid it from Alan because he was afraid this exact thing would happen if he knew...but, I think Alan had to have some idea that something was off with Jeff, he just chose to ignore it because it was easier that way.  Yes, Jeff’s dad feeds off his mom. The blood in the fridge is from the blood bank. Until Jeff has his someone to feed him, he needed blood to make the food he eats stay down and any old blood will do for that. She even uses the donor blood to cook for her husband too. Don’t ask us, we’re just making it up as we go along. Thanks for reviewing!

From Thirdly on October 22, 2017

Wait, how is this the last chapter? Are we getting an epilogue? A sequel? It can't just end right there! There's so much that still has to happen. Alan has to come clean with what he was told and they have to kiss and make up…

I think there was some confusion because though there are 7 chapters, there was also a prologue so there’s one chapter to go. We wouldn’t end it like that, we’re not that mean.  Thanks for reviewing!

From HideAndGoSeek on October 22, 2017

Uuuuuugggghhhhhhh I need to read more of this!!! It's so good and every chapter is a tease! I love it all though 

More is here! We’re so glad you like it! Thanks for letting us know!

From MonaMina on October 22, 2017

Oh holy hell Batman!!! I love the whole chemical make up matchy thing...Very cool. And that's what was making them love each other too? So so sweet...They are literally made for each other. 'SIGH' I can't wait till they see each other...This was a bit of a cliff hanger... but a really good cliff hanger! Pleeease update soon! I gotta know what happens next❤️

It’s my fault the update took so long because it was my turn to do the replies but I was out of town. *hangs head in shame* We hope the cliffhanger wasn’t too hard on you and hopefully this last chapter will give you the warm fuzzies. Thanks for the review!

From Alora on October 26, 2017

I love this story. I needed something with a cute'n'fuzzy edge to it and this has done the job *so* well. 

But now I've binge read all the chapters. 

And I need more. 

Don't make us 'make do' with some gross, liver tasting protein shake - give us more!! 

We’re so glad this story hit the spot! And yeah, liver tasting protein shakes sound awful, blech, so here you go, a chapter instead. Thanks for reviewing!

Chapter 7 is up now!

[Cold Blooded: The Thread Where We Pretend to Know What We're Doing When People Review the Story]

Y’all are only supposed to review when it’s Tahn’s turn to do the replies, didn’t you get the memo?!?! LOL Just kidding, you know we love you and your reviews. Okay, so here it goes:

From HideAndGoSeek on October 13, 2017

Oh man I feel so guilty reading more of your amazing work becauze I'm such a shitty editor/beta/helper/friend but omg you have a gift and I'm addicted. This story is so good (like I knew it would be) and I can't wait to see how this one plays out. I hope everything is going well with your publishing!

No worries! We’re glad you like this one and I’m all  over here that you like my stuff. Publishing is going good, two more books coming out this year with three scheduled already for next year. It’s exhausting but I’m having fun doing it. Oh, and I’m going to send you an email so be on the lookout! Thanks for reviewing, you know they are the only thing that fuels us!

 

From QueenAyame109 on October 11, 2017

Ahhh I'm loving this! I can't wait for the next update!! ❤️

Ahhh we’re so happy to hear that! Next chapter’s up, thanks for the review!

 

 

From Lisa on October 10, 2017

I'm so glad Jeff finally apologized for acting like such an ass. It must be such a relief for Alan that he doesn't have to avoid him anymore. I think Jeff is lonely and he wants more friends, but he doesn't know how to make them. I think he scares them away before they can become friends. Jeff knows Alan's the only friend he has now.

As for Alan -- good for you accepting that date with Seth! I am sure Jeff is NOT going to take this well. 

I'd be curious to find out how their threesome-prom date with Sarah turned out. 

This was another great chapter, CL and Tahn!

Yeah, he’s a moody little sucker but I think it’s because he’s going through some stuff.  Oh, you bet Jeff isn’t going to love the idea of Alan on a date. The prom went great, they danced and partied into the night and Jeff wasn’t even terrible to Sarah.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 

From MonaMina on October 10, 2017

Oh NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! That girl better not be fucking with them...He said she was always nice but asshole friends can pressure people into shit and if she was dating an asshole before and friends with people that were assholes...Maybe she has the asshole gene in there somewhere? And I wish something would happen with Jeff already!!! They are so in love and now this other guy is moving in on Jeff's territory...He seems nice but I already love Alan and Jeff together! I'm hoping something happens where Jeff has to come to Alan's rescue and...I don't know...Finally let me know what the fuck is going on with him!!! Anyway...Update soon please❤️

Nah, Sarah was a nice girl, it’s rare in high school, I know, but she was just nice to them. Don’t worry, I’m sure everything will work out in the end.  And you’ll soon find out what’s up with Jeff. Thanks for the review and we’re so glad you’re enjoying the story!

 

From Dedicated Quill on October 10, 2017

This is so much fun! I love the slow build and am dying like everyone else to know more about Jeff. I also really love their characterizations and the flashbacks. Flashbacks can be tricky, but they work really, really well here.

The tone is perfect, it reminds me of old Amelia Atwater-Rhodes books, like this would fit right in along side hers in the world she created.

Can't wait to read more!

First off, have to say, we might have squeed a little after seeing your review. We both love Loser so it’s kind of cool that you’re reading Cold Blooded and don’t think it sucks.  Flashbacks are hard to do right but this story couldn’t really be told any other way. The big reveal is coming soon there are only a couple of chapters left. Thanks so much for the review! 

That’s all for today, folks! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Chapter 5 is up now!

[Throw your ideas in here!]

7 hours ago, CloverReef said:

What power do you get if you’re dressed like a hamburger?

The power to make vegetarians run away in horror but then on the flip side, you’d mesmerize the meat eaters and that would probably give you mind control powers.

 

[Why do you write?]

33 minutes ago, pippychick said:

Also, despite the crisis mentioned above, I suspect I’m actually quite good at it, unlike, say… football. So I write. And I don’t play football.

You are so excellent at it! You’re one of only fanfic writers I love because even when I’m not familiar with the show or book you’re writing about, I can still enjoy your stories. You make it feel like it’s not just an offshoot of something else because you make it your own and are so damn good at it. And football sucks anyway.

[Why do you write?]

When I started writing it was because I had a story to tell, I had no idea it would be one that would sell. Now, I write because I can, because I like to, because it’s the one thing I can do that’s just for me, because Tahn likes my stories even if no one else does, because there are still stories to be told, and lastly and least important to me right now, because my publisher wants another book.

I think there are as many reasons for people to write as there are people who write. No one has the exact same motivations or things that drive them to put words on paper and saying there are only two is being very narrow minded about it.

[Writing an outdoor winter scene]

3 hours ago, bwm1013 said:

I need an idea for a scene my new KP FF story. In this one, the basic thing is that Kim, Yori, Bonnie, Connie, Lonnie, and Monique play in the snow wearing nothing but hat, gloves, and scarfs. Afterwards, they play with each other. Any ideas on how to make it work?

Maybe an outdoor hot tub on the deck? I can’t see anyone actually wanting to have sex in the snow at all let alone after having been out in it for an extended time. How would you feel anything. I mean, you know how your fingers get numb after a bit? Now think nipples in the same situation. Can’t say that’s sexy at all. Frostbite on your titties would suck massively. 

[Cold Blooded: The Thread Where We Pretend to Know What We're Doing When People Review the Story]

Hello! It’s my turn to replay to the reviews for Cold Blooded so here it goes.

 

From Lisa on September 28, 2017
 

Oh, absolutely, Alan! You guys need more than each other!

I see how it probably looked like to Jeff -- always having to defend himself and/or Alan. He must have been thrilled Alan stood up for him for once.

But...I imagine Jeff scaring off the bullies is wayyyyy more effective than Alan doing it. lol What the hell is in his eyes that scares the shit out of everyone who bullies him? Do they see fire coming out of them? I know, I know, your lips are sealed! lol

This was another great chapter, CL and Tahn! Keep 'em coming!

Aw, thanks for the review Lisa! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story so far. Yep, Alan finally stepped in and stood up to someone and I bet Jeff appreciated it.  And yeah, we can’t tell you anything! To answer your question on the other stories, I’ve been really busy with the whole publishing thing that I don’t have time to work on all my stories. I hope to get a break here soon so I can do more of the fun stuff and maybe update something on AFF. Oh, and if you are actually reading this can you pm me? I have something(s) for you! 

Next chapter is up now!

CL

[Cold Blooded: The Thread Where We Pretend to Know What We're Doing When People Review the Story]

Oh, you did that so good, maybe you should do them all the time.

[Cold Blooded: The Thread Where We Pretend to Know What We're Doing When People Review the Story]

Hello! This here is a thread wherein Tahn and I will reply to your reviews, answer any questions you may have and probably, mostly, just talk to each other!

You’re welcome to stop in and say hi.

[clmustafic review reply and discussion]

1 hour ago, Tahn said:

So, what is the official tally of what all you are writing right now? I don’t mean just what you are physically writing right now, I mean all WIPs

I have a total of 23 WIPs in various stages. I’m currently only working on a few of them really. Mostly Trouble’s on the Way which is a sequel to Bad Moon Arising which is contracted to NSP and coming out in June of next year.

I’m also gearing up to start the sequel to Backdoor Politics but have to finish crappy werewolf story first since it has a release date sometime next August and it’s still about 11k from being finished. I can’t wait to write Kamal and Zijad again, going to get dark…so very, very dark.

[2017 Halloween Party]

I guess I’ll try it this year. And details to come but it might involve puppy pov...

[Putting your e-book out there]

I’ve actually been thinking of throwing something into KU, maybe a short novella. I’ve heard it helps as far as exposure goes. I guess I’m just nervous because I don’t want to lay out tons of money on editing for so little return if it doesn’t extend my reach for the books I have with the publishers. 

What are your thoughts on that? Think it would be worth it, basically giving a book away on the chance you might get discovered by the KU hordes?

[Backdoor Politics now available for Preorder!]

20 hours ago, Desiderius Price said:

Up the ante to signed hardback? 

 

I’m not sure it will ever be in hardback but if you’re willing to wait until next summer, I can probably do the signed bit on the paperback.

[Backdoor Politics now available for Preorder!]

2 hours ago, Desiderius Price said:

when is it coming out in paperback?  

It will be available on November 7^th in paperback as well.

[Backdoor Politics now available for Preorder!]

Aw, thank you both! I’m actually excited for this one to come out and a little scared too.

[Backdoor Politics now available for Preorder!]

Alright people it’s finally here! Backdoor Politics is finally available for preorder!

Fantastic Fiction Publishing

Smashwords

Amazon

Kamal is a by-the-book hitman who keeps to himself. He has very few ties to the world around him since the war that left him broken and betrayed by his lover. An encounter with a fellow thug, whose job it is to kidnap the son of the only man Kamal ever loved, leads Kamal to do something irrational. Stuck in an isolated cabin in the mountains of Bosnia with his hostage, Kamal follows the well laid-out plan of his predecessor, but somewhere along the way things get personal. The boy in his care becomes more than just a stand-in for his father, but a job is a job and Kamal is a professional. Can Kamal get his revenge and the boy or will he have to settle for one or the other?

[Archive ebook downloading]

1 hour ago, WillowDarkling said:

I’m answering this as an author on this site, not as a staff member. But I am pretty sure that there will not be any kind of a download feature added to the site. And as an author, I would not want one. 

I second this. I don’t want to make it any easier for people to plagiarize or steal and sell my work, it’s already too easy as it is. I love that AFF doesn’t have that option.

[Do you write smut that doesn't personally excite you?]

2 hours ago, mastershakeme said:

I looooooove Mpreg  Idk. I’m attempting my first one now, but I haven’t gotten him preggers yet! Awwwww, it’s so adorable!

OhhhhH! What’s a shifter? Are we talking wolves here?

I kinda expect more of us are kinker than we let on! What kinda ‘horrific’ content have you attempted? I suspect some of the people writing these off the wall, disturbing fics, are like closet maniacs  I’m crazy in my own way, but…. I’ve got no murder fantasies bouncing around in my noggin, it’s mostly soppy romance junk! Lol, yay! 

No, not wolves, an ancient race of giant alien seahorse shifters.

I’m not sure most would find it horrific (it’s tame compared to some things I’ve read) but I managed to weave together a little bit of necrophilia (just a tad, the guy was alive when they started), kidnapping (not an actual kid though), rape, torture (physical, mental and sexual), murder and to top it off squished a new born baby’s head...oh and mustn’t forget the dog… Yeah, Backdoor Politics was one of the uglier things I’ve written. It’s no longer posted because it’s being published by a publisher who likes those sorts of twisted tales.

And there’s nothing wrong with soppy romance junk! I tend to write a bunch of that sort of thing too.

[Do you write smut that doesn't personally excite you?]

This is an interesting subject. I used to wonder sometimes about the people who write the horrific things I’ve read but then I wrote something that was probably equally horrific and figured someone was probably wondering the same thing about me. So in short, yes, I’ve written smut that doesn’t excite me in the least.

Oh and I’m writing a shifter MPreg because BW needs something new to read.

[Other places I publish my works]

3 minutes ago, mastershakeme said:

Hey @CL Mustafic You did in fact answer all my questions… I did think The Wall of Shame was going to be automatic. We’re all humans right  I was just imagining Bots deleting everything and I was gonna be gone or something and then you guys will look at me like a criminal. I always assume the worst… I’m going to go ahead and follow you…. I have lots of questions but the thing is I get it answered once and if I’m still confused, I just assume that means I’m dumb and I have to be punished by learning the hard way, like feed me to the wolfs, I wasn’t listening hard enough the first time  Thanks a lot… I do in fact appreciate it. Everything will be peachy keen!

 

There are no bots, I assure you we are all human. Don’t be afraid to ask questions, unless you are rude or assume the rules shouldn’t apply to you because you are some sort of special little person (see above), you’ll always receive a polite and usually quick response from the staff. I’d rather have you ask than have to go through the hassle of warning you which eats into my writing time.

Don’t feel like you need to tiptoe around, we’re really a friendly bunch here at AFF.

[Other places I publish my works]

1 hour ago, mastershakeme said:

Can you explain how we’re supposed to cross post? I was just berated a little in a different post because I don’t have links to the other sites I’m on… I thought for sure ADVERTISING other sites was off limits. I’m not plagiarizing. I don’t know how it works, but all the accounts are on the same email. I’M ME. So I just figured if it was ever needed, I could simply verify I am who I say I am… Flipping terms of service… OMG! I’m not going to worry about it. Now i’m getting frustrated. I shouldn’t worry right? As long as I’m not a liar I’m fine….right? 

I’m on AO3 as well. I like it over there too… I will never understand why there’s no direct reply to messages on this site. Things just seem super old fashioned here… I found an EXCELLENT BETA on these forums though and I learned a butt-ton from her… Thanks @CloverReef!!!

Anyways, I’m on gay authors too… I don’t really understand their terms of service. I have a feeling most of the M/M authors on here are avoiding that site because of it. But I don’t write about necro and minor sex, so I’m free to post. Idk, I’m feeling super judged for cross-posting and I’m the flipping author! Screw what anyone else thinks! lol Sorry, i’m def ranting...

Okay calm down. There are no rules against you posting your stories on every site you come across, the only thing we ask is that you don’t use your story here to drive people to your stories on other sites. Pretty simple. Just follow the rules and you’ll be fine. There’s even a handy forum here that answers many questions new users have: FAQs

As for no direct answers here…you are mistaken. I too have been on other sites and can tell you here at AFF if you ask a question you are guaranteed to get an answer. But, and this is a big one, if you ask a question in the middle of a thread on a completely different topic in the forum you’re bound to get a bunch of answers from other users which may or may not be correct. If you have a truly burning question and really need an answer, I suggest you either PM one of the moderators, (I’m one of them and I would have gladly answered your question if I had seen it but I do have a life and can’t patrol every thread in the forum looking for unanswered user questions.) or start a thread in the designated part of the forum. If you browse through you’ll see that most people waited less than 24 hours for answers to their questions.

As for plagiarism claims arising from cross posting, unless you’re guilty of it, you have no need to worry. Even when we get a report of such a thing happening, we don’t automatically put you in the hall of shame. We do our research and have to have evidence that a story has been poached to do that, which includes contacting the author of the story assumed stolen. As you said, you can prove you are you and that’s the only thing we ask.

You may not love everything about AFF but I can tell you this, the people here are more than happy to help and the archive is actively moderated and every user is treated fairly. If you need anything further on this feel free to send me a PM.

CL