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Thanks for all the feedback, folks! Some of these ideas are great. (I really want to use “Hell in a Handbasket” some time.)

So I’m working on a short story about a mom who gets tired of her teenage son and daughter’s constant arguing and who figures out that the root of their conflict is unresolved sexual tension. So she resolves it by making them have sex. I’m not madly in love with the title ideas I’ve had so far (“Tension,” “Work It Out”), and I’m wondering if any of y’all have other suggestions.

Hey, all. I'm pleased to say that "The Ball Pit" has already garnered over a thousand hits. No reviews yet, though; even in this anonymous online world, it takes a certain amount of guts to review (thereby admitting that you read) a story like that. I was happy when someone finally gave "You Get What You Pay For" its first review last weekend. SWP1: --I don’t have any particular feelings about the original Lion King or the live-action (kind of) remake. Having seen Spider-Man: Far From Home last weekend, I think I’ve seen all the big summer movies I’ve been wanting to see. --Other stories are coming along – I’m doing another cycle through the whole list because I wasn’t sure what I most wanted to work on – but nothing is that close to finished. Ch 7 of Auntie’s Home is maybe halfway done, and ch 5 of TMTM is about a third done. No idea what will be finished next. --The next chapter of TMTM will focus mainly on the Hiranos/Coltrane and on Balthazar/Gretchen/Adyson, followed by the grand finale. --Thanks for checking out ch 8 of Make It All Better. I haven’t heard much else from readers regarding that chapter.

So “The Ball Pit” is posted. Be warned, it is seriously brutal.

Re: “You Get What You Pay For” From InkHeart17 on July 08, 2019 Before I begin responding to your comments, let me thank you for being the first person brave enough and/or pervy enough to review this story. Thank you! "Fucked up sex" is definitely among my favorite literary genres, and I'm happy to share my stories with others who enjoy it. I feel that way about a lot of my stories. I love writing a porn-story within a porn-story. It adds more eroticism while simultaneously revealing something about the character who is telling the story. As I always say, an involuntary physiological response is the sincerest form of flattery. Oooh, that's not a bad idea. I'm pretty tied up with other stories right now, but I wouldn't rule out the possibility of revisiting this one. FYI, forthcoming stories that might particularly interest you are "Goldilocked" and "The Ball Pit." I expect to post “The Ball Pit” some time this week.

Well, I had a burst of inspiration and finished chapter 8 of Make It All Better tonight. Angie and Daddy finally confront the beast, and boy, is she horny. Also made a lot of progress on “The Ball Pit” tonight. That will probably be ready to post later this week.

Looks like the next thing I’m going to post is chapter 8 of Make It All Better. I’ve been stuck on it for a good while (the last time I posted a new chapter of that story was in December), but I’ve finally figured out how the chapter should end, so I’m hoping to finish it in the next few days. Nothing else is all that close to being finished. The next thing I’d like to finish is chapter 3 of Wishful, because after Make It All Better, that’s the story that has gone longest without an update. SWP1, hope you had a great Fourth. I actually did once write a Fourth of July story: It’s called “Fireworks,” and it’s a sequel to my Valentine’s Day story, “Some Girl.”

From Trip on July 04, 2019 Thanks! My top priority when writing fanfic is being faithful to the characters. And because the characters are so distinctive on the show, it’s not that hard to make them distinctive on the page. When I started thinking about writing this story (which was my first Loud House fic), I thought about what kinds of RL issues a boy with ten sisters would have to deal with, and that’s where all of that stuff came from. Thanks for the review!

I watched the most recent episode of She-Ra and the Princesses of Power the other night, and I was disappointed to discover that I'm going to have to remove my favorite piece of dialogue from my in-progress fanfic "What Happens on Mystacor." It was written on the assumption that Glimmer and Bow have known each other since childhood, which turns out not to be the case. Stupid canon. :/ In happier news, after finishing two chapters in two days earlier this week, I couldn’t decide what to do next, so I did another cycle through all 20 of my in-progress stories. Whenever I do this, I hope that inspiration will strike and that I’ll suddenly make a huge leap forward on one of the stories, but that didn’t happen this time. But last night, when I was trying to decide what to do next, inspiration suddenly struck like a mofo and I wrote about 2000 words of “Goldilocked,” a one-shot story (about a girl who breaks into the Three Bears’ house and ends up becoming their sex slave) that I’ve been working on very slowly for almost four years. Now it looks like I might finish it in the foreseeable future. Finally, now that Little Rose is finished, a new story has been added to the List of Twenty. It’s a one-shot called “Day of the Deadly,” and it’s for this year’s Halloween story jam. (Yes, I know it’s only June, but given how slowly I write...) A summary: When the cartel killed Graciela’s brother Enrique, all hope of getting their village out from under the cartel’s thumb died with him. But on the night when the veil between this world and the next grows thin, there may be one more chance.

Re: Country Summer From FlutteringWings on July 02, 2019 Thanks! I started writing this story with absolutely no plan except that I wanted there to be a great variety of sexual activities. I don't write a lot of m/m stuff, but when I do it's usually furry and always involves young characters. Yeah, uber-masculine man fucking young girl does it for me, too. From the beginning, I was uncertain about whether and how I wanted to involve Maisy in the action. By the time I got to this chapter (the third-to-last), I realized that if I was going to do anything sexual with Maisy, I'd better get to it. And then the idea of her scene with Ben came to me. FYI, as most country people do, Maisy has mixed feelings about incest. Like Jeph, she's probably only fucked the boys a couple of times each. Which is pretty much why Bobby Joe wasn't invited. Can't have anyone competing with the birthday girl for anal attention. I'm imagining this bit of dialogue: Earnest: Think we oughta invite Bobby Joe? Mike: Not unless he’s suddenly learned to ‘preciate the supply side of ass-fuckin', no. Well, then, stay tuned. We're done with Bobby Joe, but there might be a teensy bit of Maisy-action in the last chapter. And definitely some Mike + Earnest-action. And a bunch of Mike + Earnest + Geraldine action. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

MiaLover69, glad you’re enjoying the story. The sixth and final chapter is in the works, but I really have no idea when it will be ready, because with the 20 stories I’m always working on at any given time, I have to go where inspiration takes me. So it could be next week, or it could be three months from now. In any case, thanks for the comment!

From Lucius-Walker on July 01, 2019 Wow, I never even thought of that. That’s kind of brilliant. In any case, glad you liked the story, and thanks for the comment!

Re: Little Rose Glad you liked it.

Re: Little Rose From FlutteringWings on July 01, 2019 I knew it was a bit of a risk adding two new major characters so late in the story, because it could be seen as jumping the shark. But I felt that in order to give Randy and Rose a direction for the future and a way to live happily ever after, they needed to find some kindred spirits. Plus a bonus dog. Aw, don’t go putting sequel ideas in my head. I’ve got more story ideas than I can write up as it is. Me too. Sadly, being their creator doesn’t mean that I get to join in their games. You’re welcome. Thank you for the review!