BronxWench

Yes, poor Maglor. I blame Tolkien, really. I mean on the one hand you have: “These are elves, who are immortal! Look at them! They are beautiful, shiny things!” and on the other you have: “...and he never came back among the people of the elves.” Me, I put those two things together and it’s more ominous than the US election.

It’s just gone back to like how it was before I joined! With mostly different moderators and other users. Mostly. I do miss hanging out here, seeing threads, offering opinions, but the problem is you start reading something and suddenly an hour’s gone! I had to stop going to tvtropes for much the same reason.

Great to hear from you, JayDee, and I’m glad that you’re doing a lot better workwise.
I do hope you’ll get more time to write, though, and to visit the forum occasionally. You never fail to get a giggle out of me. It really hasn’t been the same without you.

You too BW! Hope things are going well.

Wait, there are “jobs you really enjoy” and you get paid for them too??? I knew I was doing this all wrong. On the other hand, my jobs that I don’t get paid for, for the most part, are pretty damned enjoyable, so…
Glad to see you again, JD!

Wait, there are “jobs you really enjoy” and you get paid for them too??? I knew I was doing this all wrong. On the other hand, my jobs that I don’t get paid for, for the most part, are pretty damned enjoyable, so…
Glad to see you again, JD!

Wait, there are “jobs you really enjoy” and you get paid for them too??? I knew I was doing this all wrong. On the other hand, my jobs that I don’t get paid for, for the most part, are pretty damned enjoyable, so…
Glad to see you again, JD!

Oooh! The like button is fixed on the new forum software – I miss all the good stuff
A lot of people would, I think, I’ve heard about these “Jobs you really enjoy” but am happy to settle for “job that isn’t terrible, just busy!” Plus, busy does seem to make the day go faster.

Employment is nice because it pays the bills, but man, I’d rather be doing other things most of the time!

Sorry to disappoint any necrophiles with particularly low standards.
I’m still too busy/tired to write anything but I was feeling totally Journally and don’t have a livejournal anymore so…. here I am! Personal rants and journals!
The rant portion: Frustrated not to get any writing done, and very little reading. S’a pain because writing is one thing that makes me happy!
The non-rant potion: Getting paid regularly is nice, there were a few years there where it was touch and go but not now.
The completely irrelevant portion: I liked the film Hook as a kid.
Well, that’s me done. Spirit of brevity, is JD.
Hope folks are well and such. ta-ra. and not a dig at people not getting paid regularly, hopefully things’ll work out for you.

My internet is going to be quite limited this weekend, so I went ahead and posted early, figuring nobody would mind
- DP

And there I thought the black diamonds indicated stories with a high level of difficulty.

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  --DG

Hi!
Yes, you can create the rewrite version. Just label it as such, either a bracketed mention in the summary, or in the title itself. As long as we know it's a rewrite, we don't treat it as a duplicate story.
Update the new version, and when you've finished rewriting the chapters, let us know so we can merge the hit count data and reviews from the old version to the new version. They won't overwrite any of the new reviews, so you keep old and new, and the count data should be combined, as I understand it. That's been my experience, anyway.
Thanks!

Vale smothered his own laugh in Yuji's ass, his tongue sliding in as far as he could go. One hand reached up to cup Yuji's balls, cradling them and gently rolling them in his palm, while he stroked the skin behind Yuji's balls with his thumb. He could smell the mingled scent of Yuji's cum and his arousal where they had joined on Yuji's cock. He curled the tip of his tongue, finding Yuji's sweet spot and teasing it a little.
 
Yuji managed to not choke on the last sip of his whiskey as he moaned happily, his hand visibly trembling when he put the tumbler on the nightstand. Yuji fisted both his hands in the sheets, and pressed back to meet Vale's tongue, mewling happily. "That's so good, baby," he purred, kneading the pillow under himself simply because he had no idea what else to do with his hands.
 
Vale drove his tongue in deeper and then withdrew a bit, only to thrust in again. He could feel Yuji's pucker loosening as he teased his husband, and his own cock was hard enough to ache as he contemplated the prospect of being buried in that glorious heat.
 
"Oh, fuck," Yuji moaned, his eyes crossing in his head, his cock already hardening again. "Baby, that's so good. Vale, my love, can we do it like this, at least at the start? I want to feel those piercings properly. They're just too fabulous not to."
 
Vale withdrew, his laugh loving. "Whatever you desire, my gorgeous husband." He reached for the oil, coating his cock and then sliding his oiled fingers into Yuji's ass. "Honestly, baby, I just want to feel you around me. Are you ready for me?"
 
"I was born ready for you," Yuji said and rose up on his arms, arching his back hard to offer himself up for the taking. "Move that mirror a little bit, so we can see each other's faces, though. I want to see your face, even though you're behind me." Yuji waved at the beautiful standing mirror that stood near the window, only needing the littlest of nudges to be in the perfect place for them to watch themselves make love on the bed.
 
Vale waved a hand and the mirror moved just right, so they could see themselves. Then he held Yuji's hips in his slim hands, his eyes shining as brightly as the emeralds decorating him. "My husband," he breathed, and he breached Yuji in a smooth thrust, sliding forward until he was seated balls-deep. He held there for a moment, reveling in the tight heat and giving Yuji a chance to adjust, his eyes closing for a moment in sweet bliss.
 
Yuji's eyes grew round and he gasped hard at being filled so thoroughly. "Dear sweet Seldarine, thank you," he breathed, the moment that Vale stayed still enough for him to catch his breath again.
 
Yuji moaned as he twisted, turning his head to beg for a kiss. "Please, love, move. I need to feel you in me now. Please move."
 
Vale bent his golden head to kiss Yuji, letting his passion fill him as he savored Yuji's plump lips. Then he withdrew, letting the carved emerald piercings slide over Yuji with tantalizing languor.  "How do you want me, my love? Should I love you properly, and show you how much I cherish being your husband?"
 
Yuji moaned into the kiss, then gasped as Vale moved. "Show me how much you cherish being my husband, my sweet love. I don't want tonight to be about hard and fast. I want to savor every moment of this," he answered, already breathless from the sheer intensity of the passion they shared.
 
Vale nodded, his eyes molten with desire in the mirror. He flexed his hips and slid back into Yuji, another smooth, deep thrust. He barely brushed Yuji's sweet spot, enough to let Yuji register pleasure but not enough to push Yuji into it too quickly, not wanting to sensitize Yuji immediately.
 
"Then I'll show you," Vale promised, and set a pace that was sweet, and tender, deep enough to send shivers through them both but languid enough for Yuji to feel every movement. When Vale would find Yuji's core, he would sigh as Yuji closed around his cock involuntarily, the sensation as perfect for Vale as it was for Yuji.
 
As he moved, Vale leaned over to nibble kisses from Yuji's lips, and to taste the golden skin of Yuji's neck and shoulders. He pressed kisses everywhere he could reach, savoring the silky skin and tasting the faint salt from their earlier lovemaking.
 
Yuji mewled as he found the right rhythm with his beautiful husband, the sight of the two of them in the mirror only heightening his pleasure. He reached out with one arm to brace himself against the headboard, lifting up a little more on his knees, his right hand reaching behind him to stroke Vale's hip, kneading his ass quickly before Yuji found Vale's right hand, and tangled their fingers together tightly. He savored his own taste on Vale's lips as they kissed, the heat of the elf's skin against his own driving him wild, and every time those delicate piercings drew over his sweet spot, his cock jumped and spilled a long string of precum.
 
"Oh, sweet Seldarine," Vale whispered, watching the image of their lovemaking in the mirror. Yuji looked almost elven, so gracefully did he move, and Vale was astonished by how beautiful they were like this. It was usually only when they played that they used a mirror, and Vale chose not to recall all of Akira's memories as sharply as he would his own, to keep them special. He felt his cock jump inside Yuji, and he shivered with the intensity of the image they presented, loved and loving, joined as surely as their souls were joined. In that moment, as he looked, Vale knew with a certainty beyond question that he was loved, and worthy of being loved.
 
Yuji caught Vale's eyes through the mirror and he could not help the smile that spread over his lips. He had always thought Vale was the most beautiful elf in the history of elvenkind, but in this moment, joined as they were, the sun elf looked perfect. They looked perfect. Vale all bright and golden, and Yuji dark and pale, their hair mingling where Vale's hair spilled over Yuji's shoulder.
 
And as he stared at them, Yuji thought he saw the tell-tale sweeping point of an elven ear peeking out of his own hair.
 
"Thank you, Hanali," Yuji whispered as his heart was filled with the certainty that this would be them, for the rest of their days, and when they finally reached Arvandor, Yuji's elven blood would manifest, and his true heritage become so visible.
 
Vale leaned in to kiss Yuji, his lips seeking Yuji's lips. "Come for me, my beloved husband. Come and take me with you." He shifted his hips, riding over Yuji's sweet spot with a slow, deep thrust, feeling the answering clench of his husband. "Gods, you are so tight and so perfect, my love."
 
Yuji moaned helplessly into the kiss, his cock rock hard and slapping lightly against his abdomen with each thrust, the head glistening with precum, his balls tight and heavy. His hands were tight around Vale's hand and the headboard, every muscle in his body trembling with the need for release.
 
"I love you, Vale," Yuji gasped, sobbing softly as he guided Vale's hand down to wrap around his cock. "You are so perfect. Thank you for this. Thank you for giving me this." Yuji sobbed again, tears of pleasure filling his eyes as he stroked his cock with Vale, matching their rhythm, and when Vale hit his sweet spot just right, Yuji fell over the edge, crying out as his balls emptied, his cum painting the gorgeous bed spread, his ass clenching so hard around Vale's cock that Yuji could feel each and every one of the carved emerald piercings as they slid over his sweet spot again.
 
Vale cried out with Yuji, the sensation of being gripped so tightly pushing his over the edge as well. His balls clenched hard enough to hurt, and when he felt the first rush of cum erupt, it was as strong as if he had not come for a week. "Oh, my love, my Yuji," he gasped, his cock throbbing as he filled Yuji with liquid heat. "I love you, forever." He held Yuji against him, feeling Yuji's hot cum over his fingers, Yuji's tight ass holding him firmly, his own scalding tears of joys dampening his lashes before dropping onto Yuji's silky hair.
 
Yuji trembled with the force of his sobs, sinking back against Vale as his own muscles decided to give up on him. "I love you, forever too," he managed to whisper back, guiding Vale's arms to wrap around him. "Lie down..." he tried, his voice still shaking. "Please, love, let's lie down. I need you to hold me. I need to rest in your arms for a moment." Yuji turned his head to look at his elf, trying to catch Vale's lips in another kiss.
 
Vale sat back, and he turned Yuji carefully, not letting himself slip free, until Yuji was facing him. Then he eased them to the bed, so they rested on their sides, and he wrapped his arms around Yuji as tightly as he could. "I'm here, my love." He kissed Yuji, soft, tender kisses, and he rubbed Yuji's back as he held his husband close enough to feel the beating of Yuji's heart against his skin. "I have you. I'll always be here."
 
"Thank you," Yuji whispered, wiping at his tears with his fingertips, and he lifted his chin to kiss Vale. "Thank you, for being so perfect. Thank you for giving this to me. This is one gift that I can never repay." Yuji sniffled a little without meaning to, and lay his head down on Vale's shoulder, relaxing perfectly in Vale's arms, the safest place he had ever known.
 
"Thank you for loving me," Vale murmured, his smile sweet and gentle. "You brought me out of darkness, and gave me everything I'd never dared to hope for. I can only repay you by loving you with all my heart and soul." He held Yuji, marveling anew at how well they fit together, how perfectly they complemented each other.
 
Yuji nuzzled into the crook of Vale's neck for a few moments, nodding his head, then giggled sweetly. "We're damned lucky we found each other," he said, looking up at his elf. "And now we're married, properly and fully. And I hope there's no way we'll be caught on a technicality now, with the consummating. Unless elf rules say you have to do it under the covers."
 
"No, we're totally in the clear now, according to elf rules. We're well and truly married, consummated, and hopefully not totally fucked out yet. I think we do need a drink, though." Vale grinned as he reached over to wave a hand, and refill Yuji's glass with whiskey and ice. "Is it cheating if I magic the booze into my glass?"
 
"I'm fucked out for the moment," Yuji said, shaking his head as he took a sip of his whiskey, purring at the delicious burn, and rich flavor. "No, it's not cheating if you magic the booze into your own glass, because you know that if I try it, you'll end up with it all over yourself, or something. But I do think we should at least look longingly at that bottle of Elverquisst you brought with you, if not crack it open."
 
"Oh, elverquisst," Vale purred. "Yes, we're going to need that tonight." He sipped his own whiskey, his eyes closing in bliss as he drank, and then he kissed Yuji. "Whiskey kisses. But you know what I remember most, from when we met? Ice cold bottles of beer, and drinking right from the bottle. You made my knees weak when you tilted your head back and took a long pull. That white throat, so gorgeous."
 
Yuji giggled and lifted his chin a bit, to show off his neck, his eyes sparkling. "We don't drink as much beer as we used to," he agreed, looking at the amber liquid in his tumbler. "I guess... It's probably because of the money." Yuji looked at Vale with a small smile, looking a fraction shy suddenly. "Before you came to be with me, we couldn't always afford the good stuff. It was just beer, and cheap sake, and Jack when I could afford it. And cheap wine for Willow. Now, it's twenty four year old, oak barrel aged whiskey brewed in Scotland, wine older than my great-great-grandparents, and stuff like that. Although Satoshi still likes the cheap sake. But if you want, we could start having more beer in the house. I liked that American beer that we were always drinking at the vacation."
 
Vale looked at Yuji, his smile wry. "I guess I was a bit of a handful, wasn't I? Throwing everyone into a tailspin, and upsetting everything like that. We can always blame Masato for the whiskey and the wine, though. He's the one with the good taste in booze. I was fine with the ale at The Sunken Flagon. Duncan's place, in Neverwinter. He always had decent ale. Or The Greymist, for some clarry, or some Berdruskan Dark when I needed a bit more of an edge." He nuzzled Yuji's long neck, savoring the scent of his husband, the slightly spicy fragrance that was Yuji. "Do you know what I still like best? Camping with you at the spot where your family estate was. Just you and me, and simple hiking food, and some beer we can chill in a stream. I never used to like camping before you took me there. I was the city elf, while Sand loved the wild places."
 
Yuji giggled at the nuzzle, but then he gripped the elf's chin gently and made Vale look him in the eyes. "You didn't upset everything, love, you really didn't," he said, kissing Vale softly. "You and Masato just wanted us to have a good life. Enjoy the good things in life. And we were swept away by it, we wanted to enjoy the things that we couldn't have before. But now, we've settled into our new life, gotten used to a new rhythm, and then we start to realize that we miss some of the things from our old lives."
 
Yuji kissed Vale again, stroking his cheek, the tiniest hint of a tremble in Yuji's fingers. "We need to go to the estate soon. Make sure it's running smoothly, and get it ready for the winter. And go camping at the ruins before winter starts. Maybe we can, at the end of our honeymoon. Maybe just finish it off there, a couple of nights, just you and me and a tent and some beers and we could even go hunt something here on Toril and take the meat with us."
 
Vale's smile was sweet and happy. "I'd love that, baby. A little time someplace simple, just you and me. I always feel so refreshed when we camp at the ruins, like it's filled up my reservoir of peace and beauty. I can handle anything then."
 
"Perfect, then we'll go kill something delicious, and take it with us to Miyagi," Yuji said with a bright grin, kissing Vale again. "And I love it up there too. It recharges my batteries like nothing else does. But, where is that elverquisst you promised your fucked out for now geriatric husband? I need my energy to keep up with you young thing."
 
"That means I have to move," Vale grinned. "Elf rule. No magicking the elverquisst. It's magical enough." The elf kissed Yuji as he reluctantly let himself slip free of his adored husband. He reached for the glasses someone--Sora, most likely--had thoughtfully left for them, small carved crystal glasses designed for the elven restorative wine. He poured from the ruby flagon, and handed Yuji a glass, gold flecks dancing in the brilliant red wine. He raised his own glass.
 
"To being well and truly married to the best husband any elf could ever want. I love you, Hayashi Yuji." Vale offered Yuji a gentle toast.
 
Yuji made a comical wail of protest when Vale moved, making pawing gestures at the elf's back with his hands. But when Vale returned to the bed with the wine, Yuji smiled his brightest and accepted the small glass with a bow of his head. "I can't make a joke to answer a toast like that," he said with a small giggle, and leaned in to kiss Vale. "To being married to the best husband any human could ever want. I love you, Vale Anorongil."
 
"Okay, serious toast done. We can check that off the list." Vale raised his glass to his lips, taking a delicate sip of the elven cordial. His eyes closed briefly as he savored it, feeling himself growing refreshed just from the scent of the elverquisst. "Oh, that's nice. There's nothing like elverquisst. It makes me feel like an elf of fifty again. Or maybe one hundred and ten. That was a good age. I was in Neverwinter by then."
 
Yuji giggled at the joke, taking a small sip, wanting to savor his wine for a bit. "This never ceases to amaze me, you know," he said, breathing in the fragrance of the wine, and then took another sip. "And now I know what is my happiest memory. This brought me back a full two hours..." Yuji paused to peek out of the window, then corrected himself. "Make that more like four hours."
 
Vale blushed, his eyes shining at the compliment. "I'm not even sure how to respond to that, other than to tell you how happy you've made me. I can't imagine anything better than being your husband, and having everyone know it. All I can think of to say is what I always say, when I'm all tongue-tied. I am yours."
 
Yuji let out a little possessive growl and leaned in to kiss Vale lovingly. "You have no idea what that does to me, when you say that," Yuji purred, nibbling on Vale's lower lip. "But I do thank you for that. And I am yours too. Now, you want to put down a plan of attack, or are we just going to wing it as we go?"
 
"I'm almost tempted to take the easy way out and tell you that you get to decide," Vale said, looking into Yuji's perfect eyes. "But that's not very fair of me. So, let's figure out a plan of attack while we finish our elverquisst. We could start at the top of the house and work our way down. You know, attic to cellar?"
 
Yuji giggle snorted into his wine, then glanced up at the ceiling. "We have an attic?" he asked, looking confused, and Vale could see the gears going in Yuji's head as the tall imp started to calculate just how many rooms they had in the house.
 
"Well, we'd have an attic in Evermeet. I might be wrong about Evereskan houses, though. I am sure about the cellar, in any case. That's where the wine is." Vale grinned cheekily.
 
"Well, there is that pretty top floor room at the Iradil house," Yuji said slowly, still looking up at the ceiling. "You know the one, where Kansas has his easel, and painting stuffs? And we've never really bothered exploring this whole place. We just come here, make a mess and then run away when Dae-san starts rolling his eyes at us, and Taren starts to complain about the kitchen being barren." Yuji giggled and looked at Vale with a perfectly boyish look. "You want to go exploring? There is that narrower stairs at the back of the south wing. You know, the one that leads down to the kitchen staff quarters on the ground floor."
 
Vale grinned, looking like a mischievous elfling. "Let's explore. Up or down? Either way, it sounds like a plan." He looked down at them, both naked and a bit sticky. "And since we're alone, or at least I hope we're alone, do we need to even bother getting dressed?"
 
Yuji was already half way out of the bed, draining the magical wine as he did, and he blew a raspberry of disapproval. "Clothes! Are you crazy? Then I can't trip and fall, and land in your ass by surprise. Come on, let's start with the downstairs, and work our way upstairs. But don't forget the elverquisst. You can magic the whiskey, but don't forget that flask," he said, grabbing a hair tie off his nightstand and pulling his long hair up in a messy ponytail. He stumbled over his feet for a moment, then started racing out of the room. "Last one downstairs to the foyer gets plundered first!"
 
"You're not giving me much reason to hurry," Vale called, watching Yuji with open appreciation. He followed, swiftly enough for Yuji not to lose interest in the game, but careful to be a few steps behind. The elverquisst gleamed with a light of its own as he ran lightly down the wide stairs, gleefully naked, his cock rising as he went.
 
Yuji stumbled to a halt in the middle of the grand staircase, the small elverquisst glasses in his hands, and a confused look on his face. The confusion turned into a comical frown when Vale froze perfectly still a few steps behind. Yuji turned to look at the blanket that was still on the floor of the foyer, looking surprisingly inviting on the white marble.
 
"Oh, damn it. Why is it that you're so much smarter than me, even though you're totally blond?" Yuji griped, frowning comically at Vale. Vale giggled as Yuji pondered his predicament, but when Vale took one step closer, Yuji instinctively took one step backwards, moving down the stairs.
Vale arched an eyebrow, and very slowly took one more step down, Yuji backing down a step further as well, the pair of them eyeing each other with quirked eyebrows.
 
After a couple of more repeats, Vale laughed and whispered teasingly, "This is turning into the one who makes it downstairs before tomorrow gets to tuck the other one in, if we keep going at this pace."
 
Yuji glanced over his shoulder again, estimating the distance to the blanket. "You're too good," he grumbled, his voice tittering with suppressed laughter. He thought about it for a moment longer, then shrugged a shoulder. "Alright, the one who makes it to the blanket first gets plundered," he yelled and took off again at breakneck speed, his sweet goofy laughter filling the airy foyer.
 
Vale let out a laugh and took off running, lithe and swift as he flung himself headlong down the stairs. His ass was already clenching in anticipation of Yuji plundering him, which was largely his goal. He knew he was cheating, just a little, but nothing made him happier than to see Yuji's face, when Yuji fell over the edge and filled Vale with cum until Vale was overflowing.
 
On the other hand, Vale also loved plundering Yuji, and bringing Yuji to an explosive orgasm. He still held out hope that Yuji would be able to find release with his other husbands one day, especially Satoshi. Until then, though, he was more than happy to enjoy his ability to make Yuji come undone, and kiss away those sweet tears of joy and release.
 
"Are you really planning on beating me, baby?" Vale teased.
 
"I'm trying to, old man," Yuji yelled back, not even daring to look over his shoulder, in case his feet decided to betray him and make him trip, breaking the beautiful elverquisst glasses and his own head right along with them. Deep down in his heart he knew he had no intentions of winning this race, and he also knew that Vale was pondering the pros and cons of both sides of the challenge. "The question is, which do you prefer?"
 
"Do you have to ask?" Vale laughed, and sailed past Yuji effortlessly. "I'm a bottom by choice, baby. There is nothing I like better than you filling me up and making me howl the house down." He got a foot on the blanket and cheered himself, bowing to Yuji, and making it look entirely natural for a naked elf to be taking a bow on a blanket spread out in the foyer. "So, how do you want your prize?"
 
"Catching me!" Yuji cried out as he tried to stop a moment too late, his foot landing on the blanket, causing Yuji to skate onwards with his momentum, his arms waving in the air and he over compensated, looking like he was about to fall over backwards.
 
Vale swooped forward, and slipped one arm around Yuji's back while he pulled Yuji close to him, tilting his face for a kiss as Yuji tilted forward. "You could have just asked me for a dance, you know," he teased. "Not that I mind having a gorgeous man throw himself at me, but don't tell my husband."
 
Yuji yelped and hooted as he was caught so easily, and kissed. He threw his arms around Vale's back to get his sense of balance back, being careful of the ruby glasses, and answered the kiss with little giggle.
 
"Don't tell your husband, you cheeky little thing," he grumbled jokingly, and pushed Vale back until Yuji could place the glasses on the ornate table that graced the middle of the foyer. Then Yuji wrapped his arms around Vale's waist and when the elf had put the bottle on the table as well, Yuji hooked his foot behind Vale's ankle and brought the elf down almost as gracefully as Satoshi taking down an opponent on the mats of the dojo.
 
"Making jokes, when I'm nearly thundering over and breaking my head open like a melon on the marble, you cheeky fucker," Yuji joked in a funny voice, pushing between Vale's legs and rubbing the head of his cock between Vale's cheeks. "I should make you howl for that one. And we'll just have to hope your husband doesn't hear it."
 
Vale arched his back and pressed up, looking for Yuji's cock, his cheeks sweetly pink with desire. "I would never have let you bang your pretty head. Especially not if you're offering to make me howl. I'm not only cheeky, you know. I'm also really eager, and you have such a gorgeous, thick cock."
 
Yuji giggled and growled as he nipped lightly at Vale's lower lip, his eyes dark with desire. "I know you wouldn't, my love. And I know you're not a big fan of making fun of me, but that was kind of good, you know. We'll need to import some anti-slip mats for this marble floor, you know. I really am as graceful as a giraffe," Yuji said, then leaned over his elf and plundered Vale's mouth, pressing his cock into the eager pucker at the same time, not stopping until he was balls deep in the elf's ass.
 
Vale moaned sweetly into the kiss, his ass opening easily to take Yuji's cock. "We'll work on the slippery marble, I promise. It's not supposed to be slippery. Maybe the spell failed." He moaned again, louder this time. "Oh, fuck, that feels so good. I can't even think about anything else."
 
"Blanket's slippery," Yuji mumbled, nipping hard at the shell of Vale's ear, his hands finding Vale's hands and tangling their fingers together. Then he pulled out, almost all the way, and slammed in again, setting a brisk, deep pace. "Now, I was going to tell you to think about something totally distracting, but I can't think of anything myself, other than how perfect your ass is."
 
The newlyweds worked their way through the ground floor of the mansion, one room at a time as the sun sank below the horizon and Evereska settled in for the beautiful summer night. They took a short break to enjoy one of the light meals that had been left in the kitchen for them, before Yuji left Vale’s assprints all over the counters, and Vale nearly dented one of the cabinets with Yuji’s back.
 
When they had marked each room as theirs, Vale made love to Yuji on the bottom of the stairs, only to be plundered again himself at the top of the stairs, and then they began to work their way through the rooms of the second floor, giggling like schoolgirls as they began to find toys and other fun items in some of the rooms.

In Satoshi and Masato’s bed, they found an obviously made to order blow up sex doll in the shape of an elf, with a note attached that suggested the two husbands could use the blow up doll when one of them needed a time-out, and some rest. Yuji put Vale in a fit of giggles as he grabbed the doll and tied it up with some silken rope he found in Satoshi’s toy chest, and ordered the doll to watch as Yuji plundered his husband silly. Afterwards Yuji teasingly complemented Vale on being able to fuck while giggling the whole time.

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The more, the scarier.

And here I thought it would be about a Spice Girls’ Reunion.
I am interested just need a title & inspiration.

Thank you kindly. I’m still avoiding all things pumpkin spice, so I thought I’d try and harpoon it in a tale.
 

Best title so far. Very trendy.

Okay, details…
Title: Pumpkin Spice
Summary:  There’s nothing like autumn in New York City, unless you happen to be sitting in a coffee shop and the Otherworld is ringing the dinner bell...

For anybody else using Firefox, selecting “Western” encoding instead of “Unicode” seems to do the trick.

Thank you so much, Bronx! 
Thranduil definitely finds Celeborn infuriating. Doesn't Celeborn know that NO ONE seduces King Thranduil, Master of all those he surveys? Even though Celeborn hasn't admitted to the reason for his visit, Thranduil senses it, and it does not please him. He's a handful, all right. Happily, as it turns out, Celeborn has large hands.
I have no doubt Galion watched the whole spectacle progress with great interest. I must confess I'm very curious about what happened and what was said when he and Celeborn spoke. So curious in fact that I might have to write it.
I'm glad you liked the sex scene. It's always difficult finding a balance as an author between the action, and getting across the emotional resonance you want it to hold. Plus, it takes so much to get Thranduil's character to participate in a scene like that I always worry I've failed him. But he's so sweet and almost vulnerable when he does it's worth all the effort.
Thank you for your compliments! You really give my confidence a boost every time you review, and it's great to see your reactions and responses as a reader. I'm glad that you had a good time reading. *sighs happily*

Wow… thank you so much!
It’s strange, but I’ve written much of my Sauron/Maglor from Maglor’s point of view, and I know my version of him so well. As well as Sauron does, so when I write a part from Sauron’s point of view, it feels all the more tragic and inevitable. Sauron (at least in my mind) would do this. He would enjoy it. He would be fascinated, and he would find Maglor’s despair beautiful. My job (for as much as I complain about what he gives me to work with) is to try and make it palatable, to make the reader feel an echo of that, and be unable to look away, because Maglor is so beautiful when he suffers. Your review indicates I had some success in that, so thank you!
Also, for completely different reasons, I really needed this today.
Although now I’m feeling that I should have warned you not to read before bed… *little evil laugh*

Blackbird
By CloverReef

Summary:
Blackbird is out for blood. Seven notorious criminals baited and raped his little brother, and he will do everything in his power to snuff them out. Enter Malti Arvika, one of the most infamous men of the city's underworld, and an irresistible opportunity to get the vengeance Blackbird craves. If only he could figure out whose side Malti was really on.

Feedback: Brightens my day.
Fandom: Original
Warnings: M/M, M/M/M/+, Anal, Oral, Bondage, S&M, Rape, Violence, Minor character death
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107958

I hope you like Blackbird. I like it, but it's possible I'm biased. Remote possibility, of course. Well, I had written this long, pandering thing here all about kissing the feet of readers and throwing engagement rings at reviewers, but I deleted it. After all the work I put into perfecting it too. Decided to go the dignity route, but this got real boring real quick... So...

Um...

Screw it. Where'd those friggin' rings go?

Happy reading!