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  1. So on the way home from a day trip yesterday I did re-listen to “The Loud House After Dark” and it was as lovely as ever. :) Thanks again for tying together so many delicious little stories so beautifully.

    1. GeorgeGlass

      GeorgeGlass

      Thank you! Of the Loud House stories I’ve written to date, LHAD is the one I’m proudest of. It was a gamble to write it in that first-person-plural perspective, but I feel like it worked. Not least because of your beta and warning to avoid “godmouthing.”

    2. FairySlayer

      FairySlayer

      Maybe that was a bit rash of me… After all, I'm sure lots of people would love having Lucy Loud telling them exactly what naughty things to do to her. ;)

  2. FairySlayer

    Review responses for "Enter the Sandboy"

    D'OH! You'd have thought that after the first time I'd have gone back to that part before saying anything else, but Noooooo… Oddly enough, as I've been overdosing on podcasts the past few days, someone mentioned that for all our fears about the technological singularity it turns out that the political singularity is already in full swing. Personally, I'd rather deal with the AI's robots because at least they'd end me quickly. As for LHAD, I think that one deserves another read (or listen) while I await the next chapter. Thanks again.
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    Fairy Slayer's Replies to Your Much-Appreciated Reviews

    Re: Fairly FlawedParents Thanks for the kind words, especially despite your concerns for the fairy couple. Nowadays I can definitely look back and admit that I was a bit ambitious with this story, and perhaps the later interactions between Wanda & Timmy are a prime example. (Cosmo would disagree with me, but only because of what he got out of it. ) Glad to know that the story is still getting some hits, and also that others are still fond of the show itself.
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    Review responses for "Enter the Sandboy"

    Ah, I'd forgotten that Lincoln was Lana's second choice that night. (Heck, I can't even remember the names of characters in a movie while I'm still watching it!) Oh man, Lynn Sr. could have been in for quite a shock otherwise! Now I have to wonder what Lisa's nightmare was about. Maybe she dreamt there was a crazed Sex Monster in the house and it was trying to get her! …but over the next few days she kind'a warmed up to the idea.
  5. Maybe Dipper's immediate reaction at that point would have been a good place to close and then give the situation "time to breathe" in the next chapter. Regardless, I love what you were doing with Pacifica being mean after her plan – which was supposed to allay her insecurities – backfired so massively (at least from her way of looking at things). Perhaps after reading so many fanfics where Dipper gets abused it just felt a bit dickish for Wendy to gang up with Pacifica – the person who did the bad thing – to mess with Dipper even while he was in such a fragile state. Though my ill health etc. has been making me pretty cranky lately too; so take my criticism of style with a big honkin' grain of salt. Also, I know that you had a decent beta reader or two look at it first, and judging by their input and other responses, it's pretty clear that I'm the outlier. Whichever direction you explore next, I look forward to seeing where you take it from here. (…though cross-Dipper sneaking into ladies rooms with Mabel sounds adorably sexy.) Thanks again for all your hard work (and patience with my mood ).
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    Review responses for "Whoops" [The Loud House]

    Sure, Lincoln may just be lousy pedophile, but with a lot of practice he could be a fantastic pedophile.
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    Fairy Slayer's Replies to Your Much-Appreciated Reviews

    re: "A Prisoner's Tail" [The Simpsons] I'm happy you enjoyed this (originally) simple little tale of revenge and reconciliation. Glad it hit a few sweet spots for you. A couple of the themes were a bit out of my comfort zone, but the reason for those kinks being included was to kick the humiliation up a notch. If these things felt like they had an actual purpose, then all the better. Thanks for your kind words, and I really hope you find some of my other stories entertaining as well. Meanwhile, I wish you an awesome Christmas and an excellent new year.
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    Review responses for "Whoops" [The Loud House]

    I like to believe that she wears them all the time, specifically for Lincoln. Oh yeah. "Tell me I'm pretty!" is her catchphrase. It's always my pleasure.
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    George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction

    Oh… I didn't even realize, and I'm kind of surprised. But now I see that the previous review was only for "Darla's Dad." People need to check the series. As for "Candy, Little Girl," heh yeah, I've gone to dark places, though writing "My Absolute Mostest Horriblest Day EVER!" is what really twisted my brain beyond repair.
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    Fairy Slayer's Replies to Your Much-Appreciated Reviews

    To be honest, I was just really happy to actually get a comment on one of my old stories. Let us wear our Sicko Badges with pride! (…under our assumed names, of course.)
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    Fairy Slayer's Replies to Your Much-Appreciated Reviews

    re: "Cheeky Girl" Honestly, I'd love to know how far you read into the story before coming to that conclusion. Ideally I'd have added a custom warning to the tags about how Maggie was involved with Lisa's compulsion, and I can definitely understand why – relatively tame as it is – that's still going too far for many people. In any case, sorry that the story bothered you. I hope you can find plenty of others here which will suit your tastes better.
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    Review responses for "Whoops" [The Loud House]

    I meant especially in the context of the pheromones' ever-increasing effects on Lisa as the story goes on, even though I know it was meant (and understood) like you say. I should have been clearer that I found it menacing in the face of her being not just an underestimated super genius but a potentially sex-crazed super genius. And yes, a lemon antidote would be an irony overload, and perhaps even more ironic since lemons don't have that much iron in them.
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    Need your ideas re: a sex-comedy story I'm working on

    Talk about the ultimate computerized fulfillment system! Anyway, I like the suggestions so far, especially DirtyAngel & BronxWench's idea that it could distribute aphrodisiacs (perhaps embedded in sunblock, drinks, etc. because it thinks that's what people want Hell! It knows that people want sex but just doesn't understand all this repression business). dafdes makes a great point too, though I can already imagine that after a few months of that the Daleks would happen to pick that very beach for their invasion fleet to land and demand total surrender. Best of luck on it, and as always I'd be happy to beta (if you aren't considering replacing me with a certain Nurse with a much sexier imagination ).
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    I'll Review Your Story

    Perhaps not one of my stories: Recently I'd answered Nomadic's request for someone to proofread the latest chapter of her story, and even though I'm not so much into the genre I offered. However and I'm heartsick about it I just wasn't able to get into it enough to give it the kind of attention it needed. So if the description of her "Eye of the Storm" has any appeal then maybe she could really use the encouragement. The short & long of it is that I kind of suck and am hoping that the universe will make something nice happen for her to make up for my complete failure.
  15. I like Darkalley_Muse's idea that most of the story is indented a bit to the right (but still left-justified) with Lincoln's narration fully on the left. Also, you may want to pick a different typeface for those interactions if you can make it look good. (In the dark ages of the '90s it was standard practice to use serif for one type of text and sans-serif for the other, but see what looks good of the available standard fonts if you're posting in-line.) Italics could work, but colors and such may be a bit overkill, IMO. (Actually, this reminded me to fix the centering and asides for my "Hex-ican Fiesta" advertisement and Yang's commentary in Payback's a Pussy, which is a similar thing though only for that bit, not the bulk of the story as you're doing.) In any case GeorgeGlass, I'm really looking forward to what you come up with.