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First time is the warning, the second time completes the set! :)

But actually made from the foreskin of the previous bloke who crossed her?

I agree that something shiny might be a good idea. A trophy kind of imply that it is something the owner would not like to part with. Exotic horn believed to come from a unicorn?

Happy New Year to everyone! Let’s hope 2022 brings us all some much needed joy. We’ve all had a lot on our plates with the pandemic, wildfires, floods, workplace upheavals, and just about everything you can imagine going on. But as a community of readers and writers, we can always fall back on the worlds we love to bring us some much-needed comfort. So find a good story to read, or write something that’s been tickling the back of your brain, and let’s see if we can find a bit of joy and peace in words.

Like Thundercloud, I may be late. Work at the lab is kind of strained at the moment (sometimes a lot of people call out and those of us who are there end up stretched rather thin). As a result, I haven’t gotten much writing done. I have the 31st off, so I’m going to try and spend most of the day writing, but don’t be surprised if this ends up being one or two days late. I am also struggling a bit with what to include. Don’t want to use all of the kinks, since that’ll make all my sex scenes rather similar. Makes the end result a bit tricky. I try and work around that generally by focusing on the emotional context of a scene like this, which is generally somewhat different from story to story, given what leads up to the sex scene. I do worry, admittedly, that the sex scene in a future story might end up looking familiar, but hopefully the stories as a whole will be distinct enough for audiences.

See you get it! If you must go, go all out if a female nobles does it spay her. Bam! no more problem.

If you’re going to do it go all out. His entire schlong with the family jewels turned to stone. jerkass noble walks in and comes out a eunuch (which is both fitting and underrepresented in fiction.) Nothing says plays nice more than a petrified reminder of the last noble who was under some mistaken belief he was a man.

Now that’s my kind of bloodthirsty, and yes, THAT would be a warning!

Go with something gold and expensive and or an artifact , like an artificial beating heart that he was slapped so hard it popped out of its socket. Shiny and or magical would fit perfectly. any bling would do. Since most nobility in fantasy almost always carry an nauseating amount of gold and or jewels on their person out of some inflated sense of self importance. And it would fit the bill for a noble to entertain notions that they’re above the laws of the common rabble.

Sounds like you liked it. Isn’t a shame that searching for erotic Navi cosplay gives you mostly Avatar hits instead of showing you scenes where Navi get what she deserves...

I would say that you should not worry too much. It is not like there is much difference between any two average popular porn movies out there. Building on the expectations about good porn tropes of the public and getting resonance from the emotional context of the scene is not always easy, but the readers imagination will fill the gaps and make them enjoy the scene if it is your normal quality of writing.

Okay...family has recovered from whatever it was (at least verified to not be Covid). This meant I could finally put some time to write and managed to wrap the my project for the Winter Holiday 2021. I thus present: The Exposition Fairy Story codes: M/F, Oral, Toys Summary: Peter is on a mission from the fairy king, but as solstice approaches, the weather worsens. Is it too much to ask for a night in the civilization to recover? The exposition fairy granted to Peter does strongly disagree. So is Peter in for a night of misery, or can he somehow find a way to make the fairy accept that he needs time to relax and recover?

Happy New Year, everyone! I hope 2022 will be what we all hoped 2021 would be. And now, the news. One of the next things I'll post will be that one-shot story I mentioned a while back called "Can't Resist Her." It's a first-person story told alternately by a young teenage girl and her mother, about the day when their relationship changed from conventional to sexual. Other things I plan to post in the next two months or so: The rest of "Stallion" (2 chapters and an epilogue) The first chapters of "Smooshed" The one-shot sequel to "Little Rose" The next Power Arcane story My Helluva Boss fic, "Heaven Help You" There may be other things, too, but this seems like a sufficiently ambitious list for now. In other news, I’ve been helping with the fight against spambots here on the AFF forum. The spambots have been VERY active, both posting their nonsense in existing threads (this one included) and creating new ones. As a group, the mods have been reporting and hiding literally dozens of spam posts a day. I hope the ‘bots lose interest in this site soon. Also, yesterday I decided that I wanted every story of mine that has a sequel to include a link to the sequel at the end. Adding those links to every such story on every site where it’s posted (potentially including AFF, AO3, Inkbunny, Lolicit, and the Palcomix Forum) took a while, but I’m glad I did it. Within a few hours afterward, some of my old stories got new comments on Lolicit because adding the links moved them to the front page, where they were read by people who hadn’t encountered those stories back when they were first posted.

As a frequent player of CRPGs in the sword-and-sorcery genre, I’m going to go out on a limb here and say a wine skin would not serve as much of a warning to me. Well, not unless you are looking to warn visitors to the tavern against bringing in their own beverages, which would be completely antithetical to the whole idea of going to a tavern in the first place and would make the tavern owner surly, to say the least. Because I am largely bloodthirsty, I’d say a scalp or perhaps a body part like a hand would serve as a better warning against touching the tavern girls. Anything else just seems to border on farce. “Oohh, see that sock on the wall? Stupid git touched one of the girls, and she walloped him so hard, he lost his sock, he did! So take my word for it, mate, unless you want your sock, or maybe even your breechclout hanging there for everyone to gawk at, no touching!”

My first thought was “this completes the set.” (of whatever).

Why would that stop us from creating a whole new one? To stay on topic, never got around to writing a holiday fic… heck, still on the Halloween episode to this story I’m working on.

On this forum, there’s probably a dozen old ones that would fit the bill.

Why do I feel that a discussion of sex scenes deserves a whole new topic?

I like to think of it like history itself. scenes should rhyme rather than repeat.

You’re good to go <3 take your time.

I used to worry about this a lot, and I still worry about it some. But as my friend and beta Jomahawk once pointed out, if readers like your sex scenes, then they don’t really want the scenes to be all that different from one another.

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From InvidiaRed on December 20, 2021 Thank you! I know it’s a long story, but it needed to be in order to build up to that ending.

“Naughty and Nice” is posted! Summary: Final story in the trilogy that began with “The Ninth Reindeer” and continued with “Checking It Twice” The mysterious hacker again threatens to ruin Christmas, and this time, Rudy is in no condition to save it.

Thanks!