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    CrossroadsMk2 - Ideas for next story

    In my opinion, I think replacing the prison gangbang with high-class, organised crime bosses gangbang would be better (including their lieutenants etc as you said). You can still make it rough (however far you’re comfortable taking that kind of stuff) but I think it’ll add nicely to making Lara look like a cheap whore for Angelica’s pleasure. It is subjective though i.e. I would prefer reading this theme whereas I’m sure some would prefer the common criminal gangbang. As far as original characters or referenced past characters: no opinion here, either one would be fine by me. I’m trying to think of who else you could add on top of the Yakuza; which Italian mob did Lara run into in TR2?
  8. InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    From InBrightestDay on November 28, 2020 And the holiday series continues! For those who were a bit confused by the previous story, the little dip into Norse mythology that Hel does here, though beyond just explaining a bit more about who Angrboda is, it also slips in some details of the relationship between Duncan and the other gods, namely that there are things other deities don't tell him, and there are a lot of things they don't seem to know about him. She had often wondered why her mother never visited Helheim. Even in death, Angrboda continued to have the last laugh. For her shade had never appeared in her realm. I'm assuming that the reason Angrboda never visits Helheim is because of the incarnation thing (i.e. as a past incarnation of Duncan, she doesn't show up because he's still alive), which suggests that Hel's info on Duncan is missing some key components. You are correct. Duncan does not share what some would say is rather relevant information. He could have once been more forthcoming but Odin personally is the reason why his M.O is largely knowledge is on a need to know basis and if you “need” to know clearly you don’t. Unless you have a valid pertinent reason. All his incarnations don’t have a shade mainly because yes, Duncan is still very much alive. The story formatting does cause one moment of confusion, purely due to a missing paragraph break: Will try to fix that. "You aren't Asgardian, are you?" Came a silky smooth baritone voice. She turned to behold an automatic shotgun in her face. A chuckle escaped her. "No, I'm Jotun." "Thank Jove for that. After, Duncan got past that injunction for an indefinite restraining order." Since a new paragraph starts every time the person speaking changes, the "No, I'm Jotun." "Thank Jove for that" threw me a bit at first, as I thought it was a joke, given Hel's previous speech about Odin, that she hated the Aesir so much that she was actually invoking the Greek pantheon (in spite of the fact that...well...most of those gods are dicks too). Alas, that wasn't what you were saying and I couldn;t use the joke! Loved the joke about how handsome Ganymede is, though. Not knowing what character from Greek mythology this was, I actually did think it might be Adonis It is kind of funny to imagine him housesitting for Duncan. going from pouring drinks for the Olympians to watching the house of another deity, though in this case he's actually crushing on him (awkward considering Duncan's married). Adonis might show up. And then Brigid showed up and this got sort of funny, with all these divine (well, sorta divine in Ganymede's case) figures converging on this house to share an awkward Thanksgiving. I liked the detail that Hel is super attractive, but Brigid inspires a significant amount of jealousy by being even more beautiful. (Its jealously inspired by insecurity, Hel is half corpse but Brigid is that wholesome enriching beauty. Hel can absolutely present a wholesome face but Brigid naturally has that face. Some more info about the setting comes out here, sometimes with small lines: "He's wiser than Chiron but the best part of him. He's kind, and he goes out of his way to help mortals." That part intrigued Hel. Not many gods openly admitted to that. Not all deities care about mortals. Some gods just treat it like a job. Others have an open disgust/ hatred because well we are as mayflies to them. There really isn’t a way for mortals to get around that. No point in getting attached if you blink and they’re dead or your attention was diverted for just a moment and not only is the person is dead but their thrice great grandchildern are old and feeble. Some gods believe that gods should be helping other gods rather than aiding brief beings who all end up inthe afterlife before too long.Some won’t even attempt to help until “after” the mortal in question is dead. Not many gods admit to helping mortals? I do wonder why they would hide such a thing. And of course the inevitable comes up with Brigid. "You are one of Danu's children. A goddess of the Tuatha De Danann. Sainthood is just a shawl you wear. So the good little Catholics venerate you." Hel stated in pettiness. Brigid merely looked at her unperturbed. This makes me wonder what the status of Vodou is in this world. If in this case the goddess Brigid and Saint Brigid really are the same person, then during Mardi Gras does she take on the alias of Maman Brigitte? Vodou exist but to add to the confusion some gods will adopt the same guise after conversing with one another. Friends and allies can share an alias no problem and Brigid is a great example since there are at-least three of her. "One could say the same thing about thee. Aiding the missionaries spreading the word of Nazareth." Hel looked away. Brigid is right on the money. Hel’s assistance was subtle but the missionaries was the perfect way to attack that warrior culture at its core. She might not be able to touch the Aesir so she went directly after their influence. By merely, preventing a death here, a word of warning there it all added up and Norse culture collapsed and she did it without spilling a single drop of blood or even putting herself at risk. Valkyries only choose heroes on the battlefield. So then the best method would be make it so the number and frequency of those battles decrease. "Idle speculation without teeth." Hel's heart hammered in her chest. Like Hell, she was going to admit to that. She would be censured for even indirectly aiding those genocidal zealots. Merely for spreading another metastasizing version of Atenism. The gods were always watching in case that solipsistic bastard ever reared his head again. Aten was the first to succumb to solipsistic madness, thus he’s the one all the gods blame for monotheism. And even the gods of Egypt admitted that there was a very good chance Aten wasn't dead. Much like the other monster that came after him. Mortals may call him Father, but the gods themselves would only call him Monster. I almost made a joke here about how Hel might not want to throw stones in her glass house, given that she's part of the pantheon of the people who would go viking (the Rape, Pillage and Burn crowd), but then I realized I have no idea how history went in this universe. History mostly went close to our even with prophecy broken. There are however massive events that just happened without apparent cause. (Like Jotunheim getting a trade deal with US and Russia seven days before Aesir envoys ever arrived. It shouldn’t have happened but its own inertia is now solid and Jotunheim is not willing to let anything endanger it and the post WW2 superpowers aren’t willing to ever let such a benefit slip from their fingers. Even during the cold war it was a diplomatic show of one up manship. And both mortal and Jotun have managed to successfully pin any “accidents” or lapses on Asgardian interference. This world the god’s only really returned after the atomic bombs dropped. (And no government will admit openly that gods and monsters are real.) So...leaving aside how viable the link between Akhenaten and other forms of monotheism is or isn't, if all the myths are real and Judaism, Christianity and Islam are "metastasizing versions" of Atenism, wouldn't that just make Aten and God the same guy instead of different gods? Also, given that you've clarified in response to some other reviews that humans know about the preternatural or supernatural stuff (the US has a trade deal with Jotunheim; rich people can tour Olympus), given that God is evil and angels are almost extinct and were (mostly) deicidal psychopaths...what exactly is the status of Catholics, Jews and other adherents of the splinter tumors of Atenism? This isn't one of those "different people believe different things" situations like in the real world; their faith is unquestionably wrong and outright bad, and all the gods have no doubt explained this. Is anti-semitism way more prevalent and vigorous because Judaism is basically the cult of an evil god? Are Christians a tiny minority religion working in deep denial about a whole lot of stuff? I'm very curious about the impacts on how history unfolded here. The gods don’t really have a full consensus on what they should do. Despite its horrible roots, It has done great things. And its been complicated now that Man is now capable of destroying the world entirely without their help or influence.So far, The general view is don’t address the giant elephant in the room and this unofficial arrangement works. Even if some of the gods have concerns that this god of hope might have inherited his father’s madness. He’s quite proudly and vocally Pro-Mortal. None are willing to poke the proverbial bear just in case its the very thing that sets it off. No one wants that particular albatross with certain guaranteed grave consequences. He successfully laid siege to Hell itself after all. As for Monotheism this verse. To the gods it would be like saying there’s seven billion+ humans on earth but you got people literally saying there is only “One, True” HumanTM When there is clearly multitudes of them. Other things at the house are deeply amusing. I particularly like the callback (I think it's a callback, anyway) to Logan's fuzzy slippers, and the scoreboard with all the notes written on it was hilarious and kind of cute. Finally, I grinned a little at the motorcycle gang of wolves, and... A defining thunderous howl that surely made the trees tremble in fright, and the ground rumble. What surprised her the most was that somewhere in the distance, wolves responded, and the peals of rumbling bark like laughter resounded. ... With a voice like a natural disaster, Boomed a cacophonous yet mirthful voice. Clearly excited see her again after so long. "Hello, Sister. Miss me?" Looks like next time, Fenrir enters the story. But Did He Escape? Or Was he set free?
  9. Tcr

    Heaven's Fall

    Chapter 24 (Bonum Mortem) is posted.
  10. Guest

    George Glass' Transparency Thread

    Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask if you had a nice thanksgiving. I also wanted to ask if you found anything interesting for Black Friday. I also have a question, when do you think the next chapter of ‘Wishful’ will be posted? No rush of course Anyway, i hope you are doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again, bye and have a nice day
  11. JayDee

    Activity? MAP, CP: TW

    There definitely are some Control Point (CP) Map specific stories in Gaming, but they don’t usually cause trouble here. I tend to prefer Capture the Flag (CTF) maps myself.
  12. BronxWench

    Activity? MAP, CP: TW

    Hi, there! We’re not as busy as we were the last time FanFiction decided to enforce its own rules and booted everything with adult content, but we’re still seeing regular levels of new stories being posted, updates to works in progress and some tomfoolery on the forums for fun’s sake. So, stick your toe in, and I promise, most of us don’t bite!
  13. JayDee

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    Zeus kinda got stiffed with all that, thanks to all the areas having their own local stories that then got melded together as eg Athenian influence went one way, Corinithian another… not to mention that habit of just assuming 90% of foreign Gods were the Olympians in wigs and fake beards, like old Herodotus’s cheerful attempt to compare everything in Egypt to Greece and claim it all came from Egypt first “Yeah, Dionysus is huge down there, only they call him something else. Definitely him though. I went for an interview and he was absolutely shitfaced, off his head on the wine, and muttering about flooding crocodopolis...” For my money the best bit that the later folks all quietly tried to ignore was Hesiod’s “No, Cerberus had 50 heads. Straight up, Guv. Time you’d petted all of them you didn’t want to get out of Hades anymore.”
  14. Hello, I have stumbled across this little place and was wondering if anyone was still active. I'm not comfortable on other fanfiction sites because of the blatant support of MAPs, or the staff jus ignoring the problem with the CP fics posted on their sites. I've seen a clear distinction here, a disdain for such behavior. So, is this place still popp'n?
  15. CrossroadsMk2

    CrossroadsMk2 - Ideas for next story

    General question for everyone: I feel like there's a lot of pushback on the rough prison gangbang idea and the lack of "real" criminals. I could easily re-write the last few paragraphs of the previous chapter and do something else. I could go with the stripclub idea for example, with rough criminal patrons that Lara will have to dance for on stage, flirt with and then give private lap dances with blowjobs. Higher class of criminal, so no STDs, and could perhaps end with Lara invited to a private room to dance for a mob boss and his lieutenants, with a gangbang at the conclusion. I could even bring out characters from Lara's past (Asian strip club operated by Takamoto and the Yakuza etc). I've only just started this chapter, so it'd be easy to change if you guys would rather have a this scene instead. It depends of what you think is hotter - Lara taken against her will or Lara forced to act like she's enjoying it. Also, if you vote for strip club, tell me whether you'd prefer original characters or Takamoto. I'll hold off writing until the end of the week and see what most of you vote for. Thanks.
  16. CrossroadsMk2

    CrossroadsMk2 - Ideas for next story

    Hi BigOof, yes the STD angle will just be an angst thing for Lara - she'll worry about it initially but forget as the gangbang progresses. When she wakes up the next morning in an empty cell, naked and covered in cum, she'll have a minor panic attack until she finds out it was a setup.
  17. InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    Olympus the Original “Alabama”. I wish I could joke but no. The more you research the worse it gets when it comes to Olympus. Zeus The Hapless Himbo Hera isn’t even his only wife but she is indisputably the main one.
  18. Guest

    CrossroadsMk2 - Ideas for next story

    Like the ideas so far, wrapping up to be a good chapter it seems! Regarding the STD stuff, it is there as more of an angst theme for Lara? i.e. she has a fear she might get it but she’s not actually going to get one? Also, will Gordon find out about this as well?
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    InvidiaRed's review responses

    Hera got *real* tired of hearing that from Zeus :p “How can you cheat on me with all these mortals? I’m your sister!” etc
  21. Thundercloud

    Thundercloud's Review Responses

    Actually that does sound like a kind of funny story idea. A demon that hunts good people to make sure they are not around to do good deeds. If he kill them they will reborn so better to keep them alive and semi happy away from people they could save… *smiles* Checking the number of times somebody decide to lock away good magic behind death traps might be a good start...but the Simpson style decision is also have merits if you want lots of sex.
  22. InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    Sorry for the delay in taking a look! Was fun to get back into the world again. SPOILERY REVIEW I can never shake the old fashioned half-rotted semi-skeletal image of Hel, so when you mention her applying lipstick my brain says “on one half only?”. I just wanted to share that, even though it doesn’t apply here… bah. Anyway. That might be what she looks like but she can assume a human guise like most gods can. Here she’s nowhere near as powerful as she was on Halloween. Thus she’s going the mortal transportation route. It’s weird, the previous parts had the various gods, but this one feels way more godly if that makes sense – I think because it’s calling back to the mythology more directly, Ganymede the cup bearer, the division of the old dead for Valhalla, and of course good ol’ Bridey from the land of the young… almost more of a myths/folklore subdomain story than originals! Ganymede is the god of gay love and Zeus being Zeus the fact that Ganymede is his Cupbearer well its not surprising big Z’s “companion” is not platonic. Hera probably loves him for keeping Z’s excessive libido in check. Ganymede succeeded where all the other illicit lovers failed. So messing with him means not just having to deal with Zeus it means dealing with Hera too. Bit of psychometry there reading the place and sensing Duncan – I kinda liked how she could tell all about the married state just from looking around the place rather than any kind of magic. Makes the setting where the married couple live feel more lived in – and the mention of the slippers, that’s a call back to when they mentioned in a previous story right? Yep Logan loves his favorite Goofy Slippers. Gotta feel bad for ol’ Ganymede, goes from doing all that cupping for Zeus to finding someone he really fancies who ain’t up for it. Plus Duncan might not be super happy about him letting Hel wander around while he’s watching the house I guess – something like that felt implied from the basement visit? Ganymede is definitively hot for teacher. Divine relationships can be more fluid than mortal ones especially with Olympians. Whether or not anything comes of it that is something Logan is going to have to deal with eventually. Vastly different morals and attitudes and being married to someone unapologetically ancient. Didn’t quite follow at the crashed vehicle if that was caused by the person calling sister, or if they were turning up to help out. Was pretty badass how it didn’t slow her down and she just up-and-out’d though! She is a Jotun and daughter of Loki. It’s partly why she’s so hostile to Brigid. Giants tend to be the negative aspects of nature. She may not know the Fomorians but giant pride and the snide harassment by the gods means she’s not really willing to listen to Brigid)Would this be an actual sibling, making it a wolf, a snake, or possibly Vali with that transcription error turning out not to be an error? Its meant to be Hel is preoccupied, excessively speeding and then her brother puts his paw into the road. And introduces his vast pack of werewolf and wolfwere bikers. Now Hel has been “borrowed”
  23. Guest

    Marauders Era Slash Stories

    Hello. I'm looking for 3 stories that I can't seem to find anywhere. All are marauders era slash. The first is a story about Sirius going to stay with James after running away. Remus is already staying there and Sirius ends up hearing them having sex and gets jealous. He confronts Remus which leads to them hooking up, but also damaging their relationship. It ends with them finally getting together, though. Next story is one where the whole of Hogwarts think James and Sirius are a couple, which James and Sirius think is funny. They even end up taking pictures of themselves together which get passed around the school. The pictures lead Sirius to realize he actually wants to be with James and they start really hooking up. Sirius gets Remus to take pictures of him and James together and Remus develops the pictures in a dark room, but ends up getting mad at Sirius. Story ends with Sirius/James/Remus. Last story is one where Sirius keeps ambushing James with sex and James is at first confused, but then grows to like it. He and Sirius even hook up during the middle of class which leads to them getting kicked out by McGonagal and I believe the story ends with them together in a broom cupboard. I can't find these stories anywhere, so if you can help with even just one, I'd be so grateful. Thank you!
  24. BronxWench

    Message 009

    We allow stories to be written in response to a challenge or request by another person, but NEVER for payment. The payment of money to someone to write fan fiction is illegal. Period.
  25. JayDee

    Thundercloud's Review Responses

    I’m really, genuinely, absolutely not offering any criticism of what you wrote, or having it in your story, or you! Some folks have different tastes and some stories just want to be told a certain way. It was solely about the need for the warning, so I absolutely appreciate you tossing one in. Thanks for the info on the rest of it as well – implied stuff isn’t such an issue, for example I can just imagine that the demon randomly decided that the kid should go to bording school in another world, grew up ok, and ended up woking in one of those shops that sells magic items that is never there when you go back. I mean, take my story ‘Whore of Heaven’ – Eparlegna takes over a chunk of city and everybody dies which implies babies got eaten. I just didn’t think about it, or whatever. Implied stuff doesn’t really hit the same as explicit! Thanks again for the new disclaimer, is appreciated. Absolutely did! Well, sure, but she does seem quite horny given how quick she was to jump bones in the cave so I wondered if the fertility was foreshadowing I totally get where that comes from– I had the same wanting to show off an idea in my Shokan story, with literally razor sharp nails… it’s like “Bush is cool, but this description sounds neat!” Background check tho… “The water could cure your sister.” “That’s good.” “It will also turn her into a sex obssesed cult member from the future.” “That’s bad.” “The sex’ll be pretty great though.” “...that’s good.” ...sorry, Simpsons.
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    Message 009

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  27. Guest

    Looking for a story.

    Involves three girls summoning some kind of extraplanar being who implants imps into their bodies that grants them powers. Involves a lot of stuff like angels fighting a war, fanatical church goers, etc. Any and all help appreciated.
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