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Guest GhostOfCovid
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Can’t wait to reach the tipping point of the story and see it’s consequences in the later chapters 

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Hi GhostOfCovid, this chapter will pretty much be the tipping point. After this, the rest of the story returns to Croft Manor, where the pace of activities will gradually escalate, as different plot elements come together.

Guest LHunt
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I like that Sarah has taken Lara on an all expense paid vacation....looking forward to all the renovations at Green Manor.

Lara will now be able to get some R&R in the sex dungeon, the charity dinners and the guests parties. I bet her staff and all the guests will be so happy when Lara returns.
 
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Guest LHunt
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Bravo...Bravo!

What a way to break her. Talk about swallowing her pride….among a few other things. Quadruple anal and double throat would have broken any normal woman...but Lara is far from a normal woman, Now, perhaps she won’t be so head strong and loaded with pride with an ego the size of Texas. 

Jonah had the right…..he and the rest of the prisoners had nothing to lose really....who could blame them. Loved the fights where she didn’t score a single point….and the protective gear was a great touch to rub it in….just like Mr. K did after she got her ass handed to her three times.

Keep up the GREAT work and looking forward to the next chapter when Lara wakes up.

Lead the Way Sir!    :yes:

  

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Hi LHunt, glad you liked it. I initially wasn't sure that quad anal but was able to find 2 really old videos of it online, so I thought surely an athlete like Lara could manage it.

I've actually changed my mind about the next chapter, and will make it the African tribal gangbang. I've decided to make Sam a bigger part of the second half of the story, so I want to be able to cover her internal thoughts, emotions and motivation early on. And since she'll be secretly filming the gangbang, this is the perfect time.

To further fuck with Lara's head, and to distinguish the next chapter from the prison gangbang scene, this will be a fun gangbang for Lara. In order to be given a fertility idol, she must prove that she is the avatar of their tribal goddess.  Lara will initially just be playing along, but is pretty soon having the time of her life with a couple of hundred well-hung, hard-bodied natives who think it is their religious duty to give Lara (who they believe is possessed by the spirit of their sacred goddess) neverending orgasms for an entire week - going down on her for hours each morning to get her juices going, followed by making her airtight for the rest of the day, and a huge bukkake as tribute to her every night. It's how Sam will get to see Lara's uninhibited inner slut.

Guest LHunt
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Hey CrossroadsMk2,

Morning, noon & night – WOW! Sarah better get her a palette or two of Red Bull – 

Anything that involves her bestie Sam, in my opinion, is awesome and hot as hell. I hope Sam has brought enough film, batteries and some wide angle lenses for the gangbang of Lara’s life. I love that her BFF is filming it all…..too bad she wasn’t at the gulag, especially during the quad-anal, double throat fucking and Grand Finale pissing scene. Filming a few hundred men in a one woman gangbang will no doubt be the first in Sam’s career…..she’d have to wonder if it’s Lara’s first involving so many men….gives a new meaning to more the merrier. I expect Sam’s gonna have plenty to talk about during a certain Charity party. I’d think Sam will need a few very high tech drones that can go up close at all angles….or some pre positioned platforms for different camera placements to capture all the men at once during the evening’s events...  I think when Sam sees the hundreds of native men and the enjoyment Lara’s showing – that would remove any remaining doubt she had, especially as she sees how much Lara is having such a grand ole time.  Fucking awesome story plot!

I’d hate to be in Sarah’s crosshairs is all I can say.

Lead the Way Sir!    :yes:

  

Guest LHunt
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Hey CrossroadsMk2,

I think you mentioned Wildeer Studios before, so I'm assuming you follow Max's work as well. The  ATWT with Lara reminded me of the double throating at the gulag and her quad anal had to make that tight little belly of hers bulge as well. I like how you put both of the Siberian gulag chapters together. My opinion, I think Lara could have went on forever just fucking the guards, then the prisoners while they were caged. I think she was getting a little too complacent until the fights and before the prisoners were let out of their cages. I'd think maybe it was Mr. K's plan to make her think she was safe and let her get a bit comfortable at first.....then change her whole outlook rather quickly. I think having to shoot one of them maybe showed her these men had no love or care for her well being at all.....not to mention practically impossible to escape.
 
You'll hear no complaints from me regarding the village chapter - especially after what she went through at the gulag (she deserves to be pampered a little). I think a few hundred well hung - hard body - African men, who just want to pleasure her from morning to night, should make her feel like a goddess. Looking forward to next chapter as Sarah’s plan slowly comes together.
 
Lead the Way Sir!   :yes:

  

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Hi LHunt, as to your first comment, yes all of the filming will be remote - Sam will be using hidden cameras and a few stealthy drones. Later, she'll edit together a highlight movie for the big reveal at a Charity dinner down the track, when Lara's dirty little secret is finally exposed. After the African chapter, it'll be back to the newly renovated Croft Manor (or perhaps we should start calling it Green Manor) for the final arc of the story.

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Hi Extreme, glad you enjoyed the chapter. Lara signing away her Title is just another mindfuck from Sarah to unbalance Lara. She'll rip it up to make Lara feel grateful, but at the same time casually mention that she won't tolerate any further bad behaviour and Lara could easily wind up back in Konstantin's care to correct her attitude. So on the one hand, Lara feels gratitude, but she's also fearful and forces herself to change her thinking and attitude.

She forces herself to think of Sarah as "Lady sarah", as she can't afford any more slip ups, and her attitude becomes more accommodating and submissive. At the same time, she's more hesitant to complain about her treatment - like waking up with some brand new tattoos. As a condition of tearing up the paperwork abdicating her Title, Lara also agreed to do some PR photo shoots for the game, which get progressively more revealing (and Lara doesn't know that the PR website in question is actually Onlyfans). By the time Lara learns the truth, she'll be so hooked on the attention and validation she receives from her fans that she won't be able to stop.

But again, this story will slowly be developed over the rest of the chapters. By the end of the story, not only will Lara unknowingly be Tomb raiding for Sarah, but Sarah's constant manipulation will have transformed Lara Croft from a snobby, high class aristocrat into a tattooed amateur pornstar on Onlyfans. And Lara will be grateful to her for it - the ultimate gaslighting.

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Ha I didn't expected description i just write that way because i am interesting what will happen next but still sounds interesting and hot af especially that Sarah will make Lara enjoy it :)

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Guest GhostOfCovid
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Just checking in to see if there is any progress updates. 
I don’t mind the wait as the quality of your work has always been great

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Hi GhostOfCovid, not as much progress as I would have liked, because of family commitments, but I'm about half way done with the next chapter. I'll post in the forum when it's finished, so if you've turned on email notifications, it'll let you know.

Guest LHunt
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This is a general question for anyone that can assist – Do you know anyone that can do a personalized photo. Not the kind you’d send to your mom. If so, please let me know at my email: lgmhunt@gmail.com    Thanks!   

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Hi LHunt, I'm not sure what country you're in, but my first instinct would just be to research photographers for your city. A lot of them will use Facebook and Instagram to drum up business and display their work. Can't really give any specific recommendations though. The only photographer I've ever hired was our wedding photographer, and my wife chose that.

Guest LHunt
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 Thanks CrosstoadsMk2….will look, I live in the U.S. so it shouldn’t be that hard. Like you mine was wedding pic’s but that was 46 yrs ago.  

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