George Glass' fanfic review response thread

[GeorgeGlass]

@Maxsteele1986

Re: “One Thing Leads to Another”

From Maxsteele1986 on July 17, 2025

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Even though this was set up as a One-shot story, I enjoyed it a lot as I can see this happening in the show if it was an adult cartoon. If you decide to continue it, I'll be glad no matter which sisters you decide to add to Lincoln's harem. I wonder who will get curious and hear what is going on in Lincoln's room, and if Luna will end up pregnant.

I’ll say this: I don’t have any plans to continue this story, but I think you’re going to like “Very Big Brother” very well.

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Traffic Stop”

From Seaman on September 15, 2025

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Outstanding story, an especially for the first of this movie.

Thank you! 

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Now for a sequel where Nick gets his canid knot stuck in her.

You mean, like, seriously stuck? Like “If your erection lasts more than four hours, call your doctor” kind of stuck? 

Okay, I wasn’t planning a sequel, but I’m gonna have to think about that. 

Edited 3 hours ago by GeorgeGlass

[GeorgeGlass]

Re: “Traffic Stop”

@JayDee

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What's the old saying "Fuck the Police" - Judy helping 'em take it pretty damn literal. 

In this case, the police really had it cumming.

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I really liked the description of Judy getting so horny as a natural rabbit spike, and just wanting to get laid. It felt very in character for Nick to have a way to record and enjoy it - especially that unautorised microphone!.

I figured that Nick, being a lifelong con artist and petty criminal, probably knows a lot about how to mess with tech—especially police tech.

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There feels like a hell of a size difference between the two, it's like Uruk Hai/Hobbit style mis-match and then I look up what an asian water buffalo looks like and damn those are some big boys. I suppose that kind of thing would not be unknown in a city of all different animals getting along though! There's one description, "gulping down gouts of cum that were each the size of a golf ball." that really drives home his massive size, thought it was great description.

Size difference was meant to be this story’s central kink, so I did a fair amount of research to find an animal several times Judy’s size that would also project masculinity. (It just wouldn’t have been the same if she’d pulled over, say, a giraffe, regardless of its size.)

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Other line I really enjoyed was "“Yes! Pound my bunnycunt, you big fucking animal!”"
It's not something you'd remotely hear in the canon and yet I can still hear it in Judy's voice in my head. It just works!

 

Thank you! One reason why I like writing porny cartoon fanfics is the challenge of making characters say and do things they never could in canon but that seem in-character nonetheless.

Thanks so much for the review!