Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

[Snake_King]

What about you, RexFan12345?  How would you do this scenario and with whom?

[Rexfan12345]

Not sure honestly

[Snake_King]

Okay then. Just thought I'd ask.

[Rexfan12345]

Would like to see more harem featuring Ben and Rex, but that's just me, not sure on scenarios yet though

[Praetor]

     Like, in the same story?  I’m planning on eventually doing a DC fic with Rex and a Mortal Kombat one with Ben, as well another Ben harem with another’s OCs.

[Snake_King]

Whose OC’s are you talking about?

[Praetor]

     Thebooblover has a challange fic on the other fan fiction dot com with Ben and OCs by one Drnedzed on Furaffinity or something.

[Snake_King]

Ah, I see.

[Rexfan12345]

I have other ideas for heroes, how about Hiro Hamada from Big Hero 6? Don't see many Harems with him.

[Snake_King]

I haven't really seen Big Hero 6, TBH. Although if you can come up with a scenario in which he gets one, we might have something.

[Snake_King]

Avatar concubine challenge:

I noticed that their aren't many ATLA-based stories out there where Aang gets a harem. So, to counteract that, I've come up with this & hope that someone decides to take it up.

Premise: AU - The Avatar is allowed to take concubines. Katara, tired of the life she's been forced to live with no one to teach her water-bending, becomes Aang's concubine in order to leave the Southern Water Tribe. This leads to Aang getting a harem.

Girls in harem:

• Katara 
• Sokkara (fem!Sokka)
• Zuka (fem!Zuko)
• Toph 
• Azula 
• Mai
• Ty Lee
• Suki 
• Yue
• June

Requirements and what is allowed:

• The Gaang and Ozai's Angels (Azula, Ty Lee & Mai) are all eighteen in this
• Aside from Aang, the other main male characters (Zuko and Sokka) are female
• All the girls in this are busty and curvaceous 
• Aang has an enormous dick and nearly limitless stamina due to the power of the Avatar, & can produce a plentiful amount of sperm in one round with a quick recovery 
• The girls dress in skimpy outfits when they become concubines and grow to enjoy the attire
• The girls in the harem are bisexual, and are willing to pleasure each other, but still love & will get down & dirty with Aang
• The issue of pregnancy is considered, so Aang and the harem get around it for the time being by having him cum in every other hole but their pussies
• Other girls/women may be added to the harem
• Anal is a must have, with some of the girls becoming addicted to it
• Spanking is allowed 
• Consensual debasing & dirty talk is allowed (i.e. "Tell me how bad I am!")
• The girls must choose to be Aang's concubines for their own reasons 

Big no-nos:

• Rape
• Mind break (at least not in the traditional sense)
• Futanari (at least, not for this story, anyway, maybe in a possible sequel with Korra)
• NTR (You all know how much I hate this)
• Bashing (waste of everyone's time)

[Snake_King]

If anyone has any thoughts or questions or suggestions about the above idea, I'm all ears.

[Praetor]

     All I got is using possibly waterbending to pull seed out of wombs after sex to avoid pregnancy, which is kind of gross.  I plan on doing the Booblover’s Avatar fic way down the road and even have half the first chapter sitting somewhere although that’s mostly because I want to do an Aang and Zuko duel harem type thing eventually.  I also plan on eventually doing a Big Hiro 6 story as well, also a Booblover challenge.  Hey!  I have half a chapter of that laying around too.  I really should get back to those...

[Rexfan12345]

Also, how is the Ben 10 x Avatar fic going?

[Snake_King]

8 hours ago, Rexfan12345 said:

Also, how is the Ben 10 x Avatar fic going?

It’s slowly coming along.  I’m about to the halfway point on the first lemon.

[Rexfan12345]

6 hours ago, Snake_King said:

It’s slowly coming along.  I’m about to the halfway point on the first lemon.

Cool, can't wait to read it. 

[Snake_King]

You know guys, I realize that we often do the whole “the guy always has a huge dick” thing in our stories, but I also realize that pretty much almost everybody does it in their fanfics and erotic stories anymore.  Not saying we shouldn’t or should, just observing that it’s practically so common among erotic stories that it’s almost a standard.  The website TV Tropes calls it this:

Bigger is Better in Bed – The bigger the penis is, the better the sex is.

At least, that’s what most people seem to think, although that in and of itself is subjective.  The website also offers up some ways on how to play with the trope.

Played Straight:

 – Bob, the hero of the story, has a great sex life because of his huge penis.

 – Emperor Evulz has a lousy sex life because he has a small penis.

 

But the deconstruction of the trope caught my eye:

 – Bob is unable to have sex because his penis is horrifying and extremely uncomfortable to his partners.

 – Bob feels like he's just being objectified and used like a glorified sex toy.

 – Emperor Evulz gets so obsessed about the size of his penis he completely ignores all the other ways to improve his sex life and makes the life of his harem miserable.

 – A young virgin, believing in this trope, decides to pursue a partner with an especially long penis, making her first time a really painful memory, perhaps turning her off from sex for a long time.

 

However, they did offer up reconstructions for the trope as well:

 – Bob has plastic surgery to reduce the size of his penis to a more convenient size, and is able to enjoy sex in a whole new level.

 – Bob finds a girlfriend who by innate biological features (alien with bizarre features) or sheer dimensions (tall or giant girl) is able to comfortably accommodate his penis.

 – Emperor Evulz realizes that penis size has nothing to do with how well he can pleasure a woman, and gets to it.

 

All I’m saying is that in the future, it might not hurt if we consider the above scenarios if we want to use the trope even a little seriously or realistically.

 

Edited June 30, 2017 by Snake_King
Repetitiveness

[Praetor]

     I actually want to take the Wonder Woman Super Man Small Penis Humiliation story challenge precisely for this reason.  It’s just something you don’t see often.  Since my works are literary hentai, they have all the elements of traditional cartoon porn, which often includes highly exaggerated sexual characteristics and are not meant to be taken any kind of seriously.  Except for when they are, which I do sometimes, for some reason.  It’s almost an accident.  Anyways, the longer my stories go on, the more often the second deconstruction pops up, with the leads feeling like the harem girls are more attracted to their giant dicks than themselves.  Since these are erotic tales, that is besides the point.  Even in porn we see this to be the case, where the men are basically living dildos and the women are the stars that get the focus.  I delve into the themes a little more in my original fantasy fic that is still under construction, where two of the protagonists are at or below average size.  They feel pressured to be big and perform spectacularly since they’re heroes and especially since one is also of a darker complexion and thus subject to stereotypes.  One of them is a celibate hero so it doesn’t matter but they eventually meet a half breed succubus that helps them through their angst.  Conversely, one of the villains is a poltergeist that posses a miko and gives her an enormous schlong and that’s a large part of what makes her/him/it villainous since they delight in ravaging holes and use their cock to subjugate women in their harem.  Why Girl’s Love Horses on literotica has a chapter that tackles the ideas very well so I don’t feel compelled to write one now the same way I feel compelled to write a good Naruto highschool fic.

[Snake_King]

That’s an interesting idea, Praetor.  I would personally like to see that scene where the half-breed succubus helps those two out with their angst, honestly.

And yeah, it is true that the women do tend to be the focus of the camera when a porn is going on and the men are secondary, although I suppose whether that’s a good thing or a bad thing depends on your preference.

You are correct, we do tend to write these literary hentai in ways that aren’t meant to be taken seriously.  One of my favorite ones to go back to time and again is a series of Naruto fics by EvilFuzzy called “A Lewd New World.”  It may bother some people, but I’m not simply because I recognize it for what it is; a non-serious smut-filled parody.  In case you don’t know about it, the premise is that the world of Naruto has been cast in an illusion (sort of), and we see a new perverted version of the story take place, where Naruto is the only man, every other character is female (even the ones who were guys in canon), and open sexuality is the norm.

Also, I tried looking up that story you mentioned, “Why Girls Love Horses,” but it seems to have been taken down.

 

[Praetor]

     Bam.  It’s chapter 10.  It ultimately depends on what you feel like fapping to that day.  As the joke in Ted 2 goes, sometimes I want to watch the tongue go the other way.

[Rexfan12345]

Have an idea for a Ben 10,000 story if you like to hear it.

[Snake_King]

21 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:

Have an idea for a Ben 10,000 story if you like to hear it.

Let's hear it.

[Rexfan12345]

It's a idea if Ben and Kai had two daughters (it features a genderbent Ken, not sure of a name yet), but his daughters start to have incestuous feelings for their father and have a threesome together and want to become his mistresses. Kai joins in as well, but not until latter in the story. 

Haven't seen much stuff with Ben 10,000, he's pretty underrated. I have ideas of Gwendolyn joining, but not sure.

Kenna Tennyson 

Gwen Tennyson (daughter)

Kai Green

Possibly Gwendolyn Tennyson.

What do you think?

[Snake_King]

Well, I do like the idea of Ben 10,000 forming a harem of his own, and I like Kai and Gwendolyn being a part of it.

However, I’m not entirely sure about how I feel about Ben getting it on with his two daughters.  And yes, I know that we haven’t shied away from incest before, I admit. We’ve written and discussed stories involving these types of incestuous relationships as well:

1. Mother x Son
2. Mother x Daughter
3. Cousin x Cousin
4. Aunt x Nephew

But “Father x Daughter”?  I don’t know…

Also, what do you think about that discussion I had with Praetor about the guy always having the big dick?

[Rexfan12345]

I get you, I'm not much of a fan of Father and daughter realtionships either, but I thought I would make a exception for Ben, but I'm cool with anything you have in mind. I think a female Devlin would be at least less incest even though she is now part of the family.

I'm honestly don't mind if a dude is huge or average, as long as he gets the girl I'm cool with any size you make the male character.