ChrissyQuinn Posted November 25, 2015 Author Report Posted November 25, 2015 Exactly so lets all agree it is sexy. Quote
KoKoa_B Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 So... can we talk about this latest chapter...? For you to adore Aneurin, your emphasis on his "death" was... well, it was lacking! LOL Then again, it's being told from Val's point of view so she could only describe but so much. Yorwrath's on the other hand was a bit more detailed and therefore more effective and meaningful. I know that she couldn't do anything about her husband's but I can see her want building for Yorwrath, no matter that she basically said she didn't like for people to die on her watch. I'm with BW: their budding relationship is definitely intriguing. He's annoying, cocky, demanding, racist... I could go on! But you're peeling away those layers and revealing that there are good reasons for him to be that way. And it's easier for us to see why Val respects him. My opinion: she'll probably never love him the way she loves Aneurin. And he's probably fine with that. So, I think that even if the Queen beds all three, it will be purely physical with the others. Maaybe a bit more with Islwyn but you're so contempt with making him untrustworthy... Great chapter, as always! Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 25, 2015 Author Report Posted November 25, 2015 So... can we talk about this latest chapter...? For you to adore Aneurin, your emphasis on his "death" was... well, it was lacking! LOL Then again, it's being told from Val's point of view so she could only describe but so much. Yorwrath's on the other hand was a bit more detailed and therefore more effective and meaningful. I know that she couldn't do anything about her husband's but I can see her want building for Yorwrath, no matter that she basically said she didn't like for people to die on her watch. I'm with BW: their budding relationship is definitely intriguing. He's annoying, cocky, demanding, racist... I could go on! But you're peeling away those layers and revealing that there are good reasons for him to be that way. And it's easier for us to see why Val respects him. My opinion: she'll probably never love him the way she loves Aneurin. And he's probably fine with that. So, I think that even if the Queen beds all three, it will be purely physical with the others. Maaybe a bit more with Islwyn but you're so contempt with making him untrustworthy... Great chapter, as always! Yeah... the death was lacking, part of that was just because of who Valentina is as a character. Aneurin's death was totally out of her hands, she couldn't do anything about it. Yorwrath on the other hand was something drawn out over the course of a week and a half. She just kind of threw herself at Yorwrath and his illness partly because she could turn off her grief for a while a tackle the problem she had before her. KoKoa_B 1 Quote
BronxWench Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 Because I've been miserable and depressed, I've been a brat. So, to apologize, pretties for DA: (Now that's a lady elf...) And one for Chrissy: And because I love MY elves: KoKoa_B 1 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 (edited) Not a brat, I was gonna apologize to you for being silly when you feel bad. Appreciate the pretties though, friken boring here :-/. And who puts the plugs like eight feet from the bed and why can't I use the ones on the bed? So getting stir crazy... Oh and I like muscly elves with swords That didn't come out the way I meant it, but yeah Edited November 25, 2015 by DirtyAngel Quote
BronxWench Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I like my elves with swords, too. All kinds of swords, but the bigger, the better... Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 Lol, and sigh cause magus is sort of ogrey cute ogrey but t still, he's definitely not pretty Shhh, don't tell him though BronxWench 1 Quote
CL Mustafic Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 Because I've been miserable and depressed, I've been a brat. So, to apologize, pretties for DA: I call dibs on this one, he's yummy. Oh and Chrissy, I know that Aneurysm isn't dead because you always tease me by killing off the character I don't care for and then bring them back. I'm sorta looking forward to having all three in Val's bed though Now that's an idea I can really get behind. BronxWench 1 Quote
BronxWench Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I call dibs on this one, he's yummy. Oh and Chrissy, I know that Aneurysm isn't dead because you always tease me by killing off the character I don't care for and then bring them back. I'm sorta looking forward to having all three in Val's bed though Now that's an idea I can really get behind. I get the dark one. He's all mine, that mage... And yes, I might possibly warm up to Islwyn if he's part of Val's three-pack. Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 25, 2015 Author Report Posted November 25, 2015 I'll never warm up to Islwyn, I keep expecting him to do something horrible... >.> Val will of course, but I won't. I'm going to write that scene glaring at the screen the whole time thinking "I don't trust you... you might live in my head but I still don't trust you" BronxWench 1 Quote
CL Mustafic Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I'll never warm up to Islwyn, I keep expecting him to do something horrible... >.> Val will of course, but I won't. I'm going to write that scene glaring at the screen the whole time thinking "I don't trust you... you might live in my head but I still don't trust you" Maybe Blondie will accidentally get Aneurysm pregnant making it an mpreg story... Then I'd have to hate him too because I'd have to stop reading. Never trust the people in your head Chrissy, they're all evil! BronxWench and ChrissyQuinn 2 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I'll never warm up to Islwyn, I keep expecting him to do something horrible... >.> Val will of course, but I won't. I'm going to write that scene glaring at the screen the whole time thinking "I don't trust you... you might live in my head but I still don't trust you" NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO! kill the elf...kill the elf...kill the elf... Quote
BronxWench Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 Kill the MPreg! And Blondie, too... just in case. Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I gotta say, I'm pretty hard to creep out, but mpeg does it BronxWench 1 Quote
ThinLizzie Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 who the hell invented that anyway? BronxWench 1 Quote
BronxWench Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 Some very desperate and sad people... Quote
ThinLizzie Posted November 25, 2015 Report Posted November 25, 2015 I think we can add sick to that list :-/ BronxWench 1 Quote
magusfang Posted November 26, 2015 Report Posted November 26, 2015 Alright , just remember without mpreg we wouldn't have had a prejudger Arnie: Or that winner the "Anal Cervix: Quote
ChrissyQuinn Posted November 26, 2015 Author Report Posted November 26, 2015 Why.... just so many millions different sorts of why? Quote
magusfang Posted November 26, 2015 Report Posted November 26, 2015 LOL, there is no why, there just is Quote
KoKoa_B Posted November 26, 2015 Report Posted November 26, 2015 Now that we've gotten that out of the way: Why are you guys so mean towards the elves?? Well, except for Bronxie who loves them... except for one... Because I've been miserable and depressed, I've been a brat. So, to apologize, pretties for DA: (Now that's a lady elf...) And one for Chrissy: And because I love MY elves: Those last two...? Lovely... Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 26, 2015 Report Posted November 26, 2015 Cause they have bewitched poor Val! Elvsese are evil...my precious Quote
BronxWench Posted November 26, 2015 Report Posted November 26, 2015 KoKoa, we'll love the elves together, you and me... KoKoa_B 1 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted November 27, 2015 Report Posted November 27, 2015 KoKoa, we'll love the elves together, you and me... I wish you would, evidently poor Val has a weakness for pointy ears! It's a character fault I'm willing to overlook quick question, are Vulcans elves? They have pointy ears... Quote
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