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romantic sex scene


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so im editing a scene in my story where a guy and girl are having a romantic ish moment of sex, the girl has loved the guy from when they were younger and now she is going to have him.

i have him starting with kissing her and slowly sliding down her body, planting feathery light kisses all the way down, lightly tending to her breasts for a few moments but eventually ends up eating her out to a small orgasm.

he asks her if she is ready for him and is very considerate of what she feels and wants, the sex is slow and personal and not a jack hammer.

she does eventually get on top of him and ride him hard so she can have an earth shattering orgasm, then they lay in bed cuddling, her still on top of him.

story is more detailed than this, but what more could i do so that the scene is more .... powerful?

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