Guest Dark lust Posted July 27, 2015 Report Posted July 27, 2015 Stop with the gay marriage stuff who cares it's done and over with this is about his stories let's keep it that way just saying geez Quote
Guest Dark Posted July 27, 2015 Report Posted July 27, 2015 Stop with the gay marriage stuff who cares it's done and over with this is about his stories let's keep it that way just saying geezAlright. Let's drop and begin with crazy story theories. I figure that Tara may end up getting a bpyfriend in the next saga, making Jack question his feelings towards her, especially due to the events of this saga. As for Tara's boyfriend, how about Rhona's brother, Evan. Not any crazier than the theory of her and Alan getting together. Quote
Joe Long Posted July 27, 2015 Report Posted July 27, 2015 (edited) Alright. Let's drop and begin with crazy story theories. I figure that Tara may end up getting a bpyfriend in the next saga, making Jack question his feelings towards her, especially due to the events of this saga. As for Tara's boyfriend, how about Rhona's brother, Evan. Not any crazier than the theory of her and Alan getting together. I think Tara's boyfriend will come about once school starts. She just move din from out of state into some suburban sub-division. I know I didn't know many of my neighbors who lived more than a literal stone's throw away. Many some pimply faced boys have seen her running around the block and then went inside to wank. Once school starts, it'll be just like Kayla the year before, the new girl in class. There will be older boys lining up. Evan is a senior, but I don't think it's at the same school, as Tara lives 30 minutes away. Edited July 27, 2015 by Joe Long Quote
Chester57 Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Once school starts, it'll be just like Kayla the year before, the new girl in class. There will be older boys lining up. Evan is a senior, but I don't think it's at the same school, as Tara lives 30 minutes away. No, it's not the same school. When I was that age, I lived 15-20 minutes away from my cousins and it was a different city and school system from mine. I didn't know their friends and they didn't know mine. We got together on birthdays, holidays and a few times over the summer but that was all we had in common growing up. Tara will settle in and find her own life. Jack and Kayla will be part of it, but not a big part. Oh, wait... UNLESS she turns out to be Jacks' half-sister. Quote
Guest Dark Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Question: what is the writing process some of you use when crafting your stories? Quote
Joe Long Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Question: what is the writing process some of you use when crafting your stories? I outlined the major points in the story, so I had the beginning, middle and end. As I write the first drafts I filled in more scenes, detail, dialogue, etc to push the story along the outline. Now that I went back to the beginning to re-write, I have a couple folks helping me with comments and suggestions. I'm getting more detail about emotions (which jashley does SO well) and adding in more subplots. The first time thru I think I did a good job of leaving clues and foreshadowing what was to come, but almost all of the story was the main plot. Now with some subplots (not just backstory, either hinted at or explicit) I'm leaving crumbs for parallel story lines which may or may not come to anything - I'll decide later. Quote
that-one-guy Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Question: what is the writing process some of you use when crafting your stories? I just wing it then redraft it Quote
Guest JohnnyBanana Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Seriously what is the point of a five paragraph essay on your political stance when you could just leave your thoughts out, no debate or argument necessary? There is no reason you had to go and do that. There's a time and a place. Here is not the place. Quote
Chester57 Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 HAPPY BIRTHDAY JACK ❤️ And you too, Jashley 13! Have a great 25th birthday today! Quote
jc1138 Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Happy Birthday, Joe! Hope it's a good one! Quote
Guest Hazem Orebi Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Happy birthday , Joe Wish you the best ....and have a great birthday Quote
Guest Bill Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Happy birthday Joe. Hope it's memorable. Quote
Mr_Fairplay Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 Happy Birthday Joe. Hope it's a good one, wish you the best, man. Quote
thismy Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 (edited) Happy Birthday 🎉🎊 Edited July 28, 2015 by thismy Quote
Guest Dark Posted July 29, 2015 Report Posted July 29, 2015 Has anyone heard from Nivek88 lately? Quote
Guest Dark Posted July 30, 2015 Report Posted July 30, 2015 As Jack will end up getting the PS4 soon, would that mean, later on in the story, there could be mentions of Dark Souls 2: Scholar of the First Sin, Bloodborne, and Dark Souls 3? Quote
that-one-guy Posted July 30, 2015 Report Posted July 30, 2015 As Jack will end up getting the PS4 soon, would that mean, later on in the story, there could be mentions of Dark Souls 2: Scholar of the First Sin, Bloodborne, and Dark Souls 3? And Elder Scrolls Online Quote
Guest Dark Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Anyone ever play Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance? Thinking of doing a dex build based off Raiden Quote
that-one-guy Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Anyone ever play Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance? Thinking of doing a dex build based off Raiden If you've played MGS2:Sons of Liberty, you wouldn't like Raiden because of the fact he's a little bitch in it. Sure he looks badass in Rising:Revengance but to be fair Wolf had better character development than him. Quote
Guest ChoCho Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Haha I feel like Rhona is eventually gonna make a move on jack. Despite she acts like she's interested but teases him. Also with the decreased sexual attention from Kayla jack could potentially give into Rhonas "demands"? Quote
Guest ChoCho Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Ps I am happy to see I have a direct communication line to te author. I have been reading it since from xnxx and am glad to see that you are able to continue to write these stories. I think what draws me is how I can relate to some of the characters and what they go through. Keep on writing! @jashley13 Quote
Jashley13 Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Hey everyone! Really sorry for the lack of updates! First of all, thank you so much for the birthday wishes It means a lot. I'm sorry the new chapter wasn't out before then but I'm working on it as hard as I can. Speaking of, I'm finally managing to push towards the end so, hopefully, it will be up this weekend. I've been feeling more exhausted lately so I'm trying to balance sleep, work, and writing, but I thnk I should be coming to an equilibrium. Good news soon, I hope! Quote
Guest Bill Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 Thanks for the update. Now I will be checking my phone all weekend. As always, take care of yourself first. Looking forward to a great chapter. Quote
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