COJimmyV Posted January 15, 2015 Report Share Posted January 15, 2015 Hmmm...either he's gonna surprise us with multiple chapters or RW stuff is still on the warpath. DEFINITELY hoping it's the former. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted January 15, 2015 Report Share Posted January 15, 2015 Id be happy with an update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest majormarioc Posted January 16, 2015 Report Share Posted January 16, 2015 Hope all is well just finished rereading everything have a simple question that was bothering me Was legion at the wedding? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2015 so am back, been a wild holidays but I am back at the keyboard and almost finished with 39 COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted January 16, 2015 Report Share Posted January 16, 2015 Yay, hopefully it wont be too long Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Yay, hopefully it wont be too longAlready has been! B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Ok, I do appologize for the wait but shit just seemed to pile up fast in the real world...but all dealt with and chapter 39 GITG posted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 wow, posted first draft...really rough...but fixed now, sorry bout that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Great chapter and MY GOD you found another way to keep us waiting on the reunion! COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEMINI Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 DAM Magus great chapter way to come back with a bang. Can't wait to see how this plays out with Cynthia and also with Joanne and Gerald. God your cruel but enjoying this storiy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Oh and wait till Cynthia meets Alice: "Oh, so who are you?" Cynthia asked as she stared into a face she should have only seen in a mirror. "I'm you silly" Alice replied with a small laugh and an evil grin that somehow made the litle brunette nervous. COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Oh and wait till Cynthia meets Alice: "Oh, so who are you?" Cynthia asked as she stared into a face she should have only seen in a mirror. "I'm you silly" Alice replied with a small laugh and an evil grin that somehow made the litle brunette nervous. You are truly, truly evil Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEMINI Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Oh and wait till Cynthia meets Alice: "Oh, so who are you?" Cynthia asked as she stared into a face she should have only seen in a mirror. "I'm you silly" Alice replied with a small laugh and an evil grin that somehow made the litle brunette nervous. I agree with one-guy, truly evil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 You are truly, truly evil Don't encourage him!! He brags on being evil as far as keeping us on the edge of the cliff. We already know that dad isn't really dad. Suspect sis is a fake also BUT the evil one will let us know in his own good time. The other interaction are going to be interesting reading IF we get to read them this month. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COJimmyV Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 (edited) Holy Crapanoli! That was AWESOME! (Sorry, just watched The Incredibles and the kid on the bike popped into my head). DEFINITELY worth the wait although the Cynthia cliffhanger pissed me off! I was already thinking "David" wasn't really David when he seemed so incredulous towards Max's "toys". Really hoping "Cynthia" IS Cynthia, though. The future tryst implications could REALLY be fun, especially with Alice and Amy. A Cynthia/Alice hookup would be SO cool to read. I also see some more interesting stuff happening in the VW. Besides the Samantha/Gerald/Joanne storyline, they'll have to interrogate David/Peter as well, most likely in the VW. DEFINITELY interested to see how that goes. Mike, Leia AND Mel? Sure didn't see that coming. Nice twist. I guess "The Family" tends to rub off on a person. Edited January 17, 2015 by COJimmyV Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted January 17, 2015 Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 As if two cliffhangers in the chapter weren't bad enoug.... you drop a huge teaser in here..... truly a sadist! Welcome back to the land of fantasy. Glad to know that rw crap is temporarily repaired, we all know it's never permanent. Loved the chapter, can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 17, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2015 Mike, Leia AND Mel? Sure didn't see that coming. Nice twist. I guess "The Family" tends to rub off on a person. Oh, it's not quite done twisting yet... COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted January 18, 2015 Report Share Posted January 18, 2015 Wait until Mel/Cynthia try to kill Mike & Max or Mel will bed both of them saying M&M melt in my mouth not in my hands. Cynthia is Alice's proto body rescued from the attack on the Orphanage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted January 18, 2015 Report Share Posted January 18, 2015 Wait until Mel/Cynthia try to kill Mike & Max or Mel will bed both of them saying M&M melt in my mouth not in my hands. Cynthia is Alice's proto body rescued from the attack on the Orphanage.I hadn't thought about that but it would take a level of expertise that may not be available outside of Max to repair it in that short of a time. As much as we guess he will probably take another path EVEN if it's not on the map. Look at his last post just above yours. I think he is sitting there with a evil grin and rubbing his hands together. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted January 18, 2015 Report Share Posted January 18, 2015 Naw, he's talking about his holiday dancing. As for guessing, it's more fun suggesting or teasing. I think fangface and I write similarly you start out with an idea and then the characters take over and you find yourself going down a different path. One that they choose. Vengeance was suppose to be about a thief who tried to kill th Emperor but suddenly it was his bedroom. Sklar doesn't go on about the swords' magic so much but that will soon change ... I hope. The two chapters that I posted are setting up more background for future fights/wars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted January 18, 2015 Report Share Posted January 18, 2015 (edited) I hadn't thought about that but it would take a level of expertise that may not be available outside of Max to repair it in that short of a time. As much as we guess he will probably take another path EVEN if it's not on the map. Look at his last post just above yours. I think he is sitting there with a evil grin and rubbing his hands together. B I think legion would have known instantly if he'd been injected into a mechanical host. Besides I dont think synthetic skin bruises. Edited January 18, 2015 by that-one-guy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted January 18, 2015 Report Share Posted January 18, 2015 I hope she - Cynthia - is who she purports to be AND has not been programed like Hans. COJimmyV 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted January 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2015 I hope she - Cynthia - is who she purports to be AND has not been programed like Hans. Hmmm, that would be telling Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted January 19, 2015 Report Share Posted January 19, 2015 Hmmm, that would be telling So tell us already. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted January 19, 2015 Report Share Posted January 19, 2015 Boy you give them a chapter and they're still not satisfied. Bunch of bibliomaniacs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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