JayDee Posted October 21, 2018 Report Posted October 21, 2018 6 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said: Snowdrift and more! (That doesn’t feel like too much of a spoiler.) Something something give a dog a bone something etc. I look forward to part 2! GeorgeGlass and BronxWench 2 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 22, 2018 Author Report Posted October 22, 2018 Re: "A Sweet Little Girl Like You" Quote From Jomahawk2694 on October 18, 2018 Jesus Just...wow you truly impress me, Glass. Thank you! Quote Make slightly scare me. Your talent for writing some of the most intimate and loving stories (stuff like Some Girl and it’s sequels), mixed with the hidden meaning roughness (Like The Cutie Patootie pagent and Giving her what she needs) is second to none. Which makes it all the more shocking when you write something...disturbing like this. Like, this right here could be an X rated horror movie. For me, part of the fun of writing is being able to tell a lot of different kinds of stories. Quote Please don’t take this the wrong way though. When I say “disturbing” I mean in the way one is supposed to feel when consuming horror media. Like the way I felt when I watched the original Alien for the first time. Thank you again. Quote Seriously. You are hands down one of the most talented writers I’ve ever read. Erotic or not, a story from you is like a movie from Spielberg or Carpenter or Kubric. And you are, without a doubt, the most diverse when it comes to Genres, tones, and situations for your characters to find themselves in Wow. I am glad to be in the company of any of those people. Quote I can’t wait for what comes next. (Specifically the next chapter of Wishful ??) Jomahawk Lots of stuff in the works, as usual -- chapter 2 of Wishful included! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted November 22, 2018 Author Report Posted November 22, 2018 Re: "Little Rose" From FlutteringWings on November 22, 2018 What a beautiful father/daughter relationship. They are lucky to have each other. I can't wait for Rose to experience even more fun stuff with her daddy. The dirtier the better. Definitely eager for daddy to pop her cherry. Can't believe he hasn't yet. Looking forward to the next update. Hopefully soon. Thanks for sharing this yummy story! Thank you! More "Little Rose" is on the way, where we'll discover more about our precocious little girl's desires. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted November 23, 2018 Author Report Posted November 23, 2018 Re: "The Happiest Place" From Jomahawk2694 on November 23, 2018 Quote I really like this. The potential for what can be done with this idea is as vast as the real Mouse and everything associated with it. Plus, the casual mentions of the sex, without getting too detailed, is just too much of a tease to let this be a one and done. I would love to see the palace, or the kids doing the honeymoon ;-3 what I’m saying is, please do more with this! Joma I had originally planned for this story to be a one-shot, but it could be fun to do an anthology of stories set in the Happiest Place universe. I shall consider this. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted November 24, 2018 Author Report Posted November 24, 2018 Re: "Caitlyn's Punishment" Quote From ramblingrobin on November 24, 2018This is so wrong but so yummy and well written. Thank you! "Wrong," "yummy," and "well written" were the exact things I was going for. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted November 25, 2018 Author Report Posted November 25, 2018 Re: "F**k Perfect" Quote From ramblingrobin on November 24, 2018 Love this story. It was sexy and it made me smile Thanks! This one was based on a Tumblr post I read from a woman who put a bunch of hers and her daughters' undies in the dryer right before the burly Russian dryer repairman showed up. I just took that and ran with it. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted January 3, 2019 Author Report Posted January 3, 2019 Re: “Quiet” From have_a_little_feith on January 02, 2019 Quote I’ll be completely honest... Quiet feels like she could be the very first autistic person, or first person with high functioning Asperger’s Syndrome... err... bearer? Whatever the proper term is. The reason I say this? I have Asperger’s myself, and a lot of these little bits she does feel like something I do. Now, I’m not the greatest artist, but I’m also so high functioning most people can’t even tell until they’re told that I have it, but they do notice some things. What Quiet has is something like Asperger’s or autism, but not exactly like it. I figured that people living in the paleolithic era, where the environment is completely different (different chemicals, different viruses, and some minor physiological differences from modern humans) wouldn’t necessarily have exactly the same neurologic issues that modern people do. Quote Anyways, even if I didn’t do much wanking to this, this was still nice to read. However, I don’t want you to think you have to answer this, because I’m unlikely to read the answer to this review. You can still answer it if you want, I can’t stop you in any way, but as I said, I’m probably not going to read the answer. Too much of a hassle for me to navigate the Forums trying to sign in, then read the answer... bleh, what a drag, just thinking about it... If you can’t tell, I can be quite lazy. Well, you don’t actually have to sign in to read the forums, but I guess you won’t know that unless you happen to try. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted February 19, 2019 Author Report Posted February 19, 2019 Re: “The Happiest Place” From Fairy-Slayer on February 14, 2019 Quote Too bad the meeting minutes at most corporations aren't nearly as stimulating and sexy as this report. It all starts off very nicely, but knowing that you wrote this gave me certain expectations, and I was not disappointed at all. Thank you, and thank you. Quote At first I wondered if the saucier concept drawings of new characters were just to make sure to make sure the Rule 34 crowd could make the most of them, helping spread interest, but it's even better that this unnamed mega-corporation actually produces such awesome shows and movies themselves. (It's the best way to make sure everyone stays in-character, especially the lucky boys who get to be in just about every character across their franchises.) In this universe, Rule 34 states that “If it exists, there might be some non-porn interpretation of it somewhere.” Quote It was also a fun twist that they were really focused as much on the parents' interests – and money, of course – whether making their kids happy or making sure they get to bed on time, plus satisfying the interests of the moms who watch certain shows with their daughters… or maybe people who just say that so they won't be labeled a weirdo; To that end, I actually applaud them for making sure adults don't push out the kids at the new attraction and make the little ones disillusioned with all the goodness that the company is selling. (Unlike Patreon, they clearly know who their customers are.) Plus I'm sure they're happy to let well-behaved adults watch all that's going on in the public areas, perhaps giving some parent's more incentive to spring for the private rooms. Like Disney, they know better than just about anybody what sells, and to whom. Quote Nice job skirting the names and establishing the timeline when mentioning a certain franchise that "has legs" in more way than one. Still, I'm sure some fear (and some hope) that in thirty years this tale will seem more truth than fiction, but despite the current trends I don't see things going this far. Yeah, me neither. It’s probably for the best. :| Quote Better still, I love the descriptiveness you used when describing the characters & actors, their scenes, and the clothing lines. The bit about how the boys clothes are designed solely to appeal to girls was pointedly cute, and the problem with the bestiality plans was too perfect. The bit about the dog was the first part I thought up, and it inspired all the rest of the story. Quote Also, it was a bit heartwarming to think that they'd put so much thought and effort into helping the boy actor with family problems, even at added expense; especially after discussing replacing the best-friend character if she wouldn't agree to a work-around with her demands. Rather different situation: Mommy-manager wanting her teenager to be a star versus crappy parents making their kid miserable. Also, I have a tendency to want to subvert the “corporations are evil” trope. Corporations are run by people, and sometimes, those people act like human beings. Quote While I'm not sure that the call from his daughter added much, since it only seemed to confirm that child sex was pretty normalized, the final line about looking at the numbers and that being the happiest of all was perfect. (I felt the same about the last bit of "Apprentice" too, since it didn't seem to add to what I knew. It could simply be that there are subtleties the denouements of both that I'm missing.) It was mainly to show that Colquitt’s line about putting smiles on kids’ faces wasn’t just said in the abstract. He’s thinking about an actual kid when he says that. As for the last bit of “Apprentice,” you probably just figured out the twist before most people. Quote Anyway, I think I've written out too much, but it was really a lot of fun. Thanks for another fun what-if tale. You’re welcome. And as always, thanks for another uplifting review! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted February 27, 2019 Author Report Posted February 27, 2019 Re: “Little Rose” From FlutteringWings on February 26, 2019 Quote Oh goody! This is the chapter I've been waiting for. Now Rose is all his. After reading your last comment, I predicted you'd like this chapter. I'm glad. Quote Love these two and I look forward to even more fun! Thanks for sharing! You're very welcome. More fun to come! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted March 5, 2019 Author Report Posted March 5, 2019 Re: “Wishful” From JayDee on March 03, 2019 Quote (Possible spoilers in review) Part 2 was a lot of fun! The whole exhibitionist aspect really does make it hotter as he’s fucking Aliss. Which is amazing because it was already pretty hot as he got his sister coming. Why, thank you. I don't do a lot with male exhibitionism in my stories, but it seemed like the thing to use here. Quote It was pretty amusing how thoroughly he changed Rose’s mind- Jomahawk, for whom I'm writing this story (as a thank-you for all the beta-reading he's done for me), asked specifically for that to happen in this scene. Quote and again, also hot the way he took the time to find out what she liked best with being touched before getting on with fucking her. I figured that King Jace's sexual prowess would have to come from more than just size and stamina. Quote Also smiled a bit at Philo’s work ethic comment. He's the kind of kid who always wants to impress the king. Quote Outside the sex, in the real world, it was just kind of sweet how the family had their games night and memories of the Dad still, and the completely non-sexual way he comforts his younger sister during the storm. Angelica didn't even get a mention in chapter 1 (except indirectly at the end, when Jace hears someone outside the Queen Mother's chamber door), so I thought I should hurry up and establish her in this chapter. Quote I think I’ll have to miss the Lady Angel chapter when it inevitably arrives – bit too young there for me (not a criticism, just personal taste!) No prob. Thanks for reading and reviewing! FairySlayer and JayDee 2 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted March 5, 2019 Author Report Posted March 5, 2019 Re: “Wishful” From Jomahawk2694 on March 03, 2019 Quote Woohoo!!!! Chapter 2!! Holy Ghost and all that isn’t!! That was amazing man!! Thank you so much for all the obvious hard work!! Joma My pleasure! I’m glad it’s living up to your expectations. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted March 8, 2019 Author Report Posted March 8, 2019 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” From JayDee on March 07, 2019 Quote Part 4 review - just out of curiousity, do you want me to post the spoilery thoughts I send in the email or keep sticking with the spoiler free ones? Spoilery is just fine as long as you start with a spoiler warning. Thanks for asking! Quote Anyway, enjoyed the heck out of part 4! Two girls-of-the-chapter to meet with Fay sticking out as an especial hotty. I was trying to make Fay pretty different from the other gals Mia has nailed so far. Glad you liked her! Quote Not a spoiler at this point to mention Mia coming in someone, and one of the very hottest bits in this story is definitely the reaction the first time Mia comes in someone in this part! The strip poker game is fun and sexy good and quick, too. You’d be surprised how nerdily I researched poker and did the math on Mia’s card-marking (not a spoiler, it’s in the chapter title) so I could figure out how much of an advantage she would have at various points in the game. Quote This is some quality dickgirl fantasy right here! Thank you! And thanks for your continued support. FairySlayer and JayDee 2 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted March 22, 2019 Author Report Posted March 22, 2019 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” From msmills on March 20, 2019 Quote I am so glad you're still writing this story. Won’t stop ‘til it’s done. 2 chapters left to go! Quote I love how it jumps from current day, to the past and back again. I’m pleased you said that. I wasn’t sure people would like that. Quote Your sex scenes are amazing but even better I like that despite her being an asshole, I actually like Mia I’m glad. Mia does a lot of terrible things, but she’s not stone-cold about them, or she wouldn’t be confiding in you in the first place. Quote and genuinely want to know more about her past and present. Looking forward to the next update. Then I have good news for you: You’re going to learn more about her past in chapter 5, and more about her present in chapter 6. Thanks for the review! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted March 23, 2019 Author Report Posted March 23, 2019 Re: “Little Rose” From FlutteringWings on March 23, 2019 Quote Thanks for the new chapter! Loved daddy playing with Rose's little titties. Quite erotic and I'm sure it felt hella good. Glad you liked it! Quote So, will Rose now beg daddy for a horny doggy? If I were her, I totally would. Daddy in one hole, the doggy in another. Yummy! Hey, no spoilers. Quote Hope you update again soon! We shall see. Thanks for commenting! FairySlayer 1 Quote
Guest Star Wars player 1 Posted March 24, 2019 Report Posted March 24, 2019 Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and hope that you had a nice weekend, I also wanted to let you know that I have just read chapter 7 of ‘Little Rose’ and I really loved, one of the best parts of this chapter is when Rose’s dad plays with her titties, and also when he talk about her wearing a bikini in a beach, by the way he talked about it, it sounded like something Adyson would say to Gretchen, except in their case, adyson would actually take Gretchen to a beach and let everyone fuck her:) anyway, hope you’re doing well, and hope you’re doing well with the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’ and good luck with the rest of your stories as well, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 1, 2019 Author Report Posted April 1, 2019 On 3/24/2019 at 6:12 PM, Guest Star Wars player 1 said: Hi it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and hope that you had a nice weekend, I also wanted to let you know that I have just read chapter 7 of ‘Little Rose’ and I really loved, one of the best parts of this chapter is when Rose’s dad plays with her titties, and also when he talk about her wearing a bikini in a beach, by the way he talked about it, it sounded like something Adyson would say to Gretchen, except in their case, adyson would actually take Gretchen to a beach and let everyone fuck her:) anyway, hope you’re doing well, and hope you’re doing well with the next chapter of ‘The More, the Merrier’ and good luck with the rest of your stories as well, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. Glad you liked that. And it’s funny you mention Adyson taking Gretchen to the beach and letting everyone have their way with her, because that’s a subject that might just come up in the next chapter of “The More, the Merrier.” Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 1, 2019 Author Report Posted April 1, 2019 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” From Thundercloud on March 31, 2019 Quote I have been looking around for some story of yours that suits my interests and this story caught my interest. This story sounded quite similar to one of my own stories and I was not disappointed. A dickgirl that really have some serious confessions to make and you manage to get some good really sex scenes a long the way even if the particular "powers" in play make it very easy for her arrange for things to happen. Thanks! I’m enjoying writing this as a series of confessions. The story requires a fair amount of exposition, and I feel like it’s more interesting (for the reader and myself) if the exposition comes in Mia’s own words. Quote The scenes with Rachel and Fay were extra nice. I really look forward to the next chapter I hope you’ll like it. The next chapter is going to be a bit different; it’s titled “The Worst Day of My Life.” FairySlayer 1 Quote
Thundercloud Posted April 1, 2019 Report Posted April 1, 2019 17 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said: From Thundercloud on March 31, 2019 Thanks! I’m enjoying writing this as a series of confessions. The story requires a fair amount of exposition, and I feel like it’s more interesting (for the reader and myself) if the exposition comes in Mia’s own words. I agree it gets more interesting in this kind of story when doing it confession style. There are a number of similarities between you story and my own Carmen Elisa story and the mood and style of the main characters retelling the story is one of those similarities. 17 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said: I hope you’ll like it. The next chapter is going to be a bit different; it’s titled “The Worst Day of My Life.” I think she had it coming… ;-) GeorgeGlass 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 7, 2019 Author Report Posted April 7, 2019 Re: “Darla’s Dad” From Josgonzalez189 on April 05, 2019 Quote This is whati like to call a bad ending. Great job Thanks! And thanks for leaving a comment on this fic, which many have read but few have dared review. FairySlayer 1 Quote
Guest Star Wars player 1 Posted April 9, 2019 Report Posted April 9, 2019 Hi, it’s me, I just wanted to say hi and ask how are you doing? Oh and also, if you didn’t know, I left a comment on the ‘transperacy’ page about asking if you were planning on watching Shazam last week, I saw it during last weekend and I really enjoyed it, it was really funny and full of heart and it seems DC is starting to get back on track with their live action movies:) Also, how are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? And the next chapter of ‘Mia:Confessions of a dickgirl? Let me know when you have the time, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and have a nice day. Quote
Guest Star Wars player 1 Posted April 12, 2019 Report Posted April 12, 2019 Hi, it’s me again, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 6 of ‘Auntie’s Home’ and I really loved it a lot, I like that Mara was determined not to disappoint her nephew or her sister and wanted to prove how much she loved them, I thought that war really nice:) anyway, hope you’re doing good, oh and a few questions if you don’t mind 1. How are you doing with ‘The More, the Merrier’ ? 2. What is your favorite Star Trek show? Have you seen the trailer for Star Wars episode 9 ? And 3. Are you a fan of The Twilight Zone, because I have just started to watch the show and it is really good:) Let me know when you have the time, anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, and hope to hear from you again soon, bye and have a good night. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 17, 2019 Author Report Posted April 17, 2019 On 4/12/2019 at 4:57 PM, Guest Star Wars player 1 said: Hi, it’s me again, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I’ve just read chapter 6 of ‘Auntie’s Home’ and I really loved it a lot, I like that Mara was determined not to disappoint her nephew or her sister and wanted to prove how much she loved them, I thought that war really nice:) This chapter is pretty much Mara’s awakening to who she is and what she wants. There will be elaboration on that in the next (final) chapter. As for your other questions, I’ve answered them in my “Transparency” thread. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 17, 2019 Author Report Posted April 17, 2019 Re: “Auntie’s Home” From Josgonzalez189 on April 12, 2019 Quote Nice to see another chapter up Hope you enjoyed it. Just one chapter left to go! FairySlayer 1 Quote
Guest Star Wars player 1 Posted April 18, 2019 Report Posted April 18, 2019 Hi, it’s me again, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read chapter of ‘Little Rose’ and I really loved it, I loved how Rose’s dad found a way for them to have fun in the abandoned ride in the amusement park, and I especially loved the part where he meets the woman named Opal and her daughter, I was left excited with anticipation with what could happen next:) Can’t wait for the final chapter of ‘Little Rose’ but no rush:) Anyway, hope you’re doing well, good luck with your stories, bye and have a good night. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted April 19, 2019 Author Report Posted April 19, 2019 21 hours ago, Guest Star Wars player 1 said: Hi, it’s me again, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I have just read chapter of ‘Little Rose’ and I really loved it, I loved how Rose’s dad found a way for them to have fun in the abandoned ride in the amusement park, and I especially loved the part where he meets the woman named Opal and her daughter, I was left excited with anticipation with what could happen next:) Then I think you’re going to like the next chapter. Thanks for the comments! Quote
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