Guest Star wars player 1 Posted July 2, 2018 Report Posted July 2, 2018 Sorry, I forgot to say Oscar and Adale in the question of when they are having sex with the drones. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 3, 2018 Author Report Posted July 3, 2018 SWP1, thanks for the nice comments about “Dil-Drones.” I don’t have plans to add anything else to the story at this time. Oscar and Adele were my favorite characters, as they were really the only ones that I spent any time fleshing out (other than DelNet, although “fleshing” doesn’t seem quite appropriate for an AI ). So I’m glad you liked them. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 3, 2018 Author Report Posted July 3, 2018 Re: “Pony Dearest” From JayDee on July 02, 2018 Quote Saw the FD tag on this one when I scrolled down too far looking for Curfew and mentally filed away "Equine + FD = Horsecock?" which is relevent to my interests. Ya didn't mention the futua on the forum! This was actually my first-ever futa story. Not the last, though; I've got another, multi-chapter story in the works about a (human) futa whose sex drive is such that she has had to build her life around finding women to fuck every day. Quote This isn't some kind of a "zero reviews pity review, because frankly you're massive popular and don't need 'em :p" *blushes* Quote Funnily enough I never saw the new MLP, but I read a couple of FairySlayer's stories and enjoyed them for the writing, and so reading an anthro-pony story with no MLP connection at all isn't a lot different. I don't really know anything about MLP except for what I see in porn drawings on Inkbunny. I believe it was one such drawing that inspired this story. Quote Title - I like it! Nice reference to Mommie Dearest, and without any wire hangers which may be for the best. Yes, wire hangers are about the last thing Mother wants Raema to have. Quote I've not looked at preg fetish much, but I did find the description of her suckling on Mother's lactating breasts for sustainence surprisingly hot. And then throatin' that horsecock unsurprisingly hot. I like the whole concept of cocksucking-as-nursing, so I had to work some "cockfeeding" in there as a follow-up to the regular breastfeeding. Quote The way the story establishes this has happened a bunch of times before, both with her multiple pregnancies and also Raema knowing what to do to get through quicker, understanding the short form instruction, that works really well. Thanks! I figured these details would really drive home the point that although Raema has a small amount of control over her situation, it's nowhere near enough for her to escape being her mother's perpetual breeding slave. Quote Well pregnant anthro horsewoman incestually raped by futa anthro horsewoman may be a new thing to look out for for me! It's the next big thing. I read that in Forbes. Quote This one's crueller than Curfew because although physical discomfort is lesser for Raema, she's stuck in the situation with little hope of escape. Which, really, is ok for furries. Yeah, the furry thing kind of takes the edge off. But it also creates endless biological possibilities. Thanks for the review! JayDee 1 Quote
JayDee Posted July 4, 2018 Report Posted July 4, 2018 Quote This was actually my first-ever futa story. Not the last, though; I've got another, multi-chapter story in the works about a (human) futa whose sex drive is such that she has had to build her life around finding women to fuck every day. If it’s not Minor1 tagged I’ll look out for it! Quote Yes, wire hangers are about the last thing Mother wants Raema to have. Those wacky pro-life ponies! Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 4, 2018 Author Report Posted July 4, 2018 2 hours ago, JayDee said: If it’s not Minor1 tagged I’ll look out for it! Nope, no minors in this story. This dickgirl likes ‘em fertile. JayDee 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 13, 2018 Author Report Posted July 13, 2018 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Quote From JayDee on July 12, 2018 I am going to try a spoiler free review for once since all the spoiler feedback went in the beta email. Thank you, for that and for the beta! Quote So: The sex is fuckin' hot both times it gets going. If you like dickgirl porn stories and you're checking reviews because you want to know purely from a masturbation perpective if this story is worth your time then the chapter 1 posted so far absolutely is. A lot of you have probably read GeorgeGlass before so know the great quality you're getting. *blushes* These sex scenes were really fun to write, particularly the whole strategy of Mia seducing Lorraine without revealing what she's really got going on down there. Quote The character of Mia is established well without a big expository info dump but with more revealed throughout. So's Lorraine's repressed/conservative but unable to resist character (that's not a spoiler, it's a fuckfic.) There's a genuinely laugh out loud line outside of the sex when Mia's explaining why she likes the women she does. So glad you enjoyed that. Quote Good story, I will check out chapter 2 as well! Thank you! JayDee 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 13, 2018 Author Report Posted July 13, 2018 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Quote From Melrick on July 12, 2018 I enjoyed this, but there is one thing that stood out to me. My heavy balls slapped repeatedly against her big, soft ass, even as they filled my prostate with an ever-larger load to shoot into her. That's not actually what happens with the prostate. As the semen travels from the testes, it reaches the area of the prostate, which closes off the opening to the bladder while simultanously releasing fluid into the semen. It also contracts and helps to propel the semen into the urethra and then out of the body. Ah, you’re quite right. I hate having factual errors in my fics (inadvertent ones, anyway), so I went back and fixed this. Thanks. Quote Otherwise, it was well done. Thank you. JayDee 1 Quote
JayDee Posted July 13, 2018 Report Posted July 13, 2018 This is part of why I am not a great beta. If I enjoy something too much I don’t think too closely about anatomy! Quote
Guest Star wars player 1 Posted July 15, 2018 Report Posted July 15, 2018 Hi, it's me, I just wanted to say hi and let you know that I am going to give a full review of 'Hot Yoga' since I've been wanting to review this story for quite a while, so anyway, I'm going to start the review so I hope you enjoy it, starting off with how I first read the story, I had begun to get really interested in phineas and ferb fanfiction stories on adultfanfiction, particularly 'Truth or Dare' and it's sequel 'Danville, we have a problem', which until recently a while ago, I didn't even know that you wrote those stories as well as 'Full Moon over Danville', Dark dreams, Forbbiden fantasies', and 'Sweet dreams', which are all really great stories in my opinion, now when I read the first chapter of 'Hot Yoga ', I found it quite interesting, but near the end of the first chapter, when Melanie was paired with Baltazar, that part hooked me even more and I found myself wondering how that story would continue. When I read the second chapter, I was really hooked on the story, and I was now really anticipating the third chapter, and then when the third chapter came, I even grew more fond of the story, and finally when I read the 4th chapter of 'Hot Yoga ' I thought it was a great way to end all the story. The beginning of 'Hot Yoga ' setted the story and as the more chapters came, the more the build up increased for the characters, and I really enjoyed that, and I really liked the shifting perspectives of the characters as well. So the story is a great, hot story and to me it is one of the very best stories you've written. Now moving on to the characters, I really love how they found their interest like Melanie interest in young boys, and Monty and Vannessa's interest in little girls, and Jenny interest in having sex with Midas, I thought that was a great way to tell the story. Now on to the pairings, I really love the pairings in the story, especially Coltrane and Dr. Hirano, when Coltrane got paired with Dr.hirano, I not only thought it very hot, but because of him becoming the Hirano family's boyfriend, and when Dr.hirano told him that he could be making Stacy and Ginger a another sibling, I really loved that part, because now Coltrane not only has become their boyfriend, but he realizes that he could become a dad to his girlfriends mom, and that of course makes him lose control and fuck her, and it is really a heartwarming touch their relationship an the story. Another one of the things I loved about Coltrane and Dr.hirano's pairing is the sex position the do, I am a huge fan of stories that include doggy style, and this story just provides a great example of that. I had first heard of Dr.hirano when she aappeare breifly in 'Dark dreams, Forbbiden fantasies ' , where she was giving baljeet a hot blowjob ( p.s. I really liked that part, and sometimes I wondered if you were planning on making that part longer, beacause I really would like to see how that turned out), then I heard of her again, and soon after that, I looked her up and she is a beautiful, hot, character and a very loving mom to Stacy and Ginger, and when she had sex with Coltrane doggy style, I thought that was really hot. so I really enjoyed their pairing and I can't wait to see how their relationship has developed in 'The more, the Merrier '. Now into Jenny, I think that she is just such a great character, and I really love her development throughout the story, when she becomes interested in having sex with other species, which of course is Midas, I really can't wait to see who she pairs up with in 'The more, the Merrier ', so 'Hot Yoga ' is a great story with great characters and very hot sex scenes, I love this story and it will always be one of my favorite stories of yours, so this is my review of 'Hot Yoga ', I really hope you enjoyed reading this review, and I hope to hear from you again soon, I hope you're doing well with 'the more, the Merrier ' , and I can't wait for chapter two, and I hope you're doing well with your other stories too, and I hope you're doing well, bye and have a good night. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 17, 2018 Author Report Posted July 17, 2018 SWP1, because this is a review of “Hot Yoga,” I’m going to respond to it in my review-reply thread for that story here. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 19, 2018 Author Report Posted July 19, 2018 Re: “Auntie’s Home” Quote From Josgonzalez189 on July 18, 2018 Now all thats left is eric impregnating his mom and aunt Well, that’s not ALL that’s left... FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 21, 2018 Author Report Posted July 21, 2018 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Quote From SailorNemesis on July 21, 2018 Enjoyable, hope to read more soon Glad you’re liking it. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 22, 2018 Author Report Posted July 22, 2018 Quote Re: “Pony Dearest” From SailorNemesis on July 21, 2018 Weird, but hot. Would like to read something similar with centaurs. Glad you enjoyed it. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted July 29, 2018 Author Report Posted July 29, 2018 Re: “Impulse” Quote From SailorNemesis on July 28, 2018 Sexy and unique Re: “Excuses” Quote From SailorNemesis on July 28, 2018 Very hot, would like to read more like this Thanks for commenting on these two stories. I’m glad you liked them. These two stories are somewhat different from all of the others I’ve written; whereas most stories take me months or years to write, the bulk of each of these was written in a day. In both cases, I just started writing compulsively and couldn’t stop until I was finished. I haven’t had that happen since, but I suppose you never know when the muse will body-slam you next. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted August 4, 2018 Author Report Posted August 4, 2018 Re: “Auntie’s Home” Quote From Sithlordshades on July 31, 2018 I have made it a point to read ever piece of writi g you have put up on this site. Many of them I have read multiple times. I have read them regardless of if they appeal to my kinks or not. Whether I am familiar with the series or not. Wow. That blows my mind, considering that I have NINETY stories posted. You must be a voracious reader! And, of course, I am deeply flattered. Quote I have done this because quite frankly I feel you are one of the best authors currently writing on this site that I have found. You and one other by the name of fanfiction360 are the only authors here who when I see them will immediately read the story and then make it a point to go through your complete archives to see if anything else has been updated. I will have to check out fanfiction360’s work. Quote Thank you for your writings and please continue. Thank you for reading and the comment, and I will indeed continue! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted August 8, 2018 Author Report Posted August 8, 2018 Quote Re: “Little Rose” From Knock-Down-Dan on August 07, 2018 Since I am still on anyway I would like to simply say, Hot! Like crazy sexy hot, Thanks! Quote I love the way he told her, not asked but told her that if he managed to get the head of his cock into her she was getting fucked, got the old heart racing. When I write in first person, it’s usually because I want to show something interesting going on in the main character’s head—in this case, the dad’s unusual libido. Quote Cannot wait to see what happens next Hope you’ll enjoy it. It may not be soon, though, because I’ve got a lot of other stories in progress. Hopefully you’ll like some of those, too. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted August 25, 2018 Author Report Posted August 25, 2018 Re: “Little Rose” Quote From Senpai11721 on August 24, 2018 Great story, love it can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks! And thanks for being the first to comment on this story. Next chapter coming soon! FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted August 28, 2018 Author Report Posted August 28, 2018 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Quote From JayDee on August 27, 2018 So minimal spoiler review on part 2 - I really enjoyed it, Nice bit of background for Mia and interesting to see the early effects of the pheromones. Especially liked the "Open your cunt!" line. Great continuation! Thanks! And thanks again for betaing. JayDee and FairySlayer 2 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted August 30, 2018 Author Report Posted August 30, 2018 (edited) Quote Re: “Dil-Drones” From SinfulWolf on August 29, 2018 Quite amusing, and original as has been said already. A pretty solid ending that seemed to hit all the points of what such an incident might well cause as well. Thank you! Quote I think the only thing really lacking in this story is detail. It really is just the giant beach orgy, but for all the zooming in on individual characters, we don't see too much or get much detail about what gets them off or how they're enjoying themselves. I’m rarely guilty of skimping on sex scenes, but in this case, I confess that I did, a bit. I was so concerned about the possibility of the “beach orgy” going on too long and the story getting lost that I overcompensated. Quote Still, it was a fun quick read that gave me a good solid chuckle. Thanks! Ultimately, that’s what I was aiming for. Thanks for the review! Edited August 30, 2018 by GeorgeGlass FairySlayer 1 Quote
Sinfulwolf Posted August 30, 2018 Report Posted August 30, 2018 I can see how what you wanted could have gotten swamped easily in a full on beach orgy scene fully written out, still I think overcompensated is a good word choice. It’s honestly a small point in the grand scheme of things. Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 4, 2018 Author Report Posted October 4, 2018 Re: “Mia: Confessions of a Dickgirl” Quote From JayDee on October 03, 2018 Really liked chapter 3, couldn't find a negative, so spoiler free like... The dialogue between Mia and Lorraine at the end was really fuckin' hot. Thanks! In sex scenes, I feel that dialogue often makes the difference between lukewarm and hot, so it’s something I think a lot about. JayDee and FairySlayer 2 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 14, 2018 Author Report Posted October 14, 2018 Re: “Wishful” Quote From Jomahawk2694 on October 13, 2018 Oh my god that was AMAZING You nailed it!! It was everything I wanted and more!!! Thank you, my friend. Thank you thank you thank you!!!! Oh man...I can’t wait for the rest!!! Joma I’m so glad you like it so far. After all the help you’ve given me over the years, I’m happy to write this for you. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 14, 2018 Author Report Posted October 14, 2018 Re: “Wishful” Quote From Almighty on October 14, 2018 Continue this story, very well! I shall do my level best. FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 20, 2018 Author Report Posted October 20, 2018 Quote Re: “Wishful” From Almighty on October 17, 2018 Continue it. What’s the magic word? FairySlayer 1 Quote
GeorgeGlass Posted October 20, 2018 Author Report Posted October 20, 2018 Re: “Wishful” Quote From JayDee on October 20, 2018 Scrolled down originals and saw this. The idea sounds like a heck of a lot of fun - did wonder, is it just the human woman in his life, or does Snowdrift exist in the parrallel too? Snowdrift and more! (That doesn’t feel like too much of a spoiler.) Quote The sex scene with the Queen Mother was very hot, and I liked the whole no choice but to come in her bit, and her being unperterbed about having his kid. That scene includes several elements that aren’t usually my thing (eg, the footjob), so I’m glad you enjoyed it. Quote I hope he gets the mortgage payment somehow though, that's gotta be a worry. We shall see. Thanks for reviewing! JayDee and FairySlayer 2 Quote
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