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In a story with multiple betas came these gems from the same chapter:

(staring at unconscious patient) "giving in she groined, nervously she leaned"

AND

he frowned, pulling the blanket around him tighter groining. "sorry for that."

After contacting about this typo in PM got small correction, including:

(staring at unconscious patient) "giving in she Groaned, nervously..."

Posted

::nods wisely:: Friends don't let friends post stupid shit...

Posted (edited)

This isn't from AFF but it is tear worthy funny!

The "K****** P*******" had a blank stove on his face but moved with the grace of a swan through the battlefield.

I am still DYING over this!

Edited by Danyealle
Posted

I had a bad case of fangirl fapping moment the other day and googled fanfics about my J-bois (my J-rock band, no, I won't name it) and found a blogsite that actually had a story with my preferred pairing... only in the reverse D/s roles that I prefer....

Anyway... I read, like a good little fangirl, but never made it to the finish because it killed me utterly when the sub in the story kept:

... sighing with relieve ...

repeatedly,

and then the story died utterly when he was all tied up and being happily plundered by his (oh, so totally not the type) dom, and the poor sub....

... breathed hardly ...

I would like to mention that it's 8 am right now, and I've been awake since noon yesterday... so if this post makes no sense, forgive me :)... but the story was supposed to be all sexy and heavy on the D/s stuff, but lousy writing and NO spell checking utterly killed it, made it laughable.

Although I'm wondering how my hubby would react if I started breathing hardly next time.... :blink:

Posted

LOL, Kera.

okay, I'm literally twitching - my left eye has developed a spasm.

She was just 'OVERJOIED' at the prospect. Note the sarcasm. Hermoine was terrefied of telling her potions professor that she was his daughter. She would fase that when the time came.
  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

Found in a review:

I found myself totally immense to the story

There are SO many punchlines for a straight line like that. :D

Posted

Now see, I can always count on you to make me flashback to badly written cartoon porn. (yes, there's a fic in there with clones copulating like bunnies - no this line isn't anywhere in it.) :lol:

Next entry:

she said in a rye voice
Posted (edited)

heehee!

So, I opened the StarKist SeaSensations box (I try new things occasionally, being on sale doesn't hurt), and out falls a coupon with a wonderful advertisement:

Try all of our 1 varieties!

...Then, shaking my head, I come to post that and I find this little gem in the archive:

i've never done thins with anyone
Edited by RogueMudblood
Posted

From the archive, and may the gods have mercy on my eyes...

...she got down and cleaned me up with her tong.

And just to make it even better...

She came bake up when she was tone and kissed me...

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