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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.3
Not all the monsters 22650
• he wtilltill living
• clock.d hed he
• ane ree remembered
• aeganegan to order
Her 3600
IN STORY
Ch 1
• betterse lse last
• crosseths ths with
• andked ked up
Ch 2
• I di you you all
Ch 4
• apparent itieities
• Buffyyes yes
• The ab mov move
• hands och och other’s
Ch 5
• fingers the the
• smacked ast tst them
• and and stalked
Ch 6
• sighed,uminuming
• she consid hed her
• talltall Scooby too
• dondon’t call me
The invisible vamp 1899
• reerteerted
• Duckingk ink into
• deliberate kes kes and
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.3
The difference between naked and nekkid 22649
IN REVIEWS
• by Spyke014, 195588: & that olloollop
Her 3600
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Joe Hundredaire, 20250: response to another reviewer (18500) who slammed his review (and who generally knows better than to do that kind of thing)
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.4
A place for everything and everything in its... 37305
• tho I’l I’ll get
Bad pet 36236
Ch 1
• Wil>Willow
• laughedhat hat
Ch 2
• hspanspan style='mso-spacerun:yes'>
Ch 3
• slayer r alr all
• bacd cad came
• smirk.< st style='mso-spacerun:yes'>
• Don’t, ll gll get
Dreaming of dawn 26000
—NOT slash, but femslash! but here, lemme go thru it anyway
• Slayer.as cas close
• crammed ie fre front
• somesome
• them thatthat
Treasures 24957
—wondering if her email as typed in the AN at beginning of story is wordord (extra “Mich”), check against her account email?
• timer funn onn on
• S’s s’s smile
• it aomesomes
• ope opening
• man’s , wh, whispering
• Thele sle squealed
Playing to win 13481
Ch 1
• wasn’ bad bad
Ch 3
• aponapon
• teretered
Ch 4
• anllowllowed
• ntarntary
• ofs cos coat
• worts vas vampire
Ch 5
• thinthinking
• woulwould
Ch 6
• definy sey sexual
• disted wed watcher
• throher her bag
• llowllow looked
• on he fhe fact
Ch 9
• 7-1SpikSpike [that’s a 1, supposed to be “7-11”]
• get he he needed
Thrall 14116
• askeust ust
Tainted returns 5493
Ch 1
• hsn’sn’t yet
Ch 3
• “Yo “You?
Ch 4
• suppose ‘s w’s why
Ch 6
• chin dis disappearing
Ch 7
• nodded on the the
Ch 9
• now now you can’t [maybe this isn’t wordord: “now, now...”? judgement call?]
• as his s sls slid
Ch 11
• what boy boy
• bue hee height
• floesideside him
• one one• but
• esieack.ack.
Ch 12
• tho thoughts
Ch 13
• a time as. N. Nite
Ch 14
• him for for only
Ch 15
• [in beginning AN] Pleae ind ind about
• to him him let go
• seemed”I j”I just
• feele yoe you’ve
• saidt! t!
Vikings, sires and siblings 9968
IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE)
• series.t hat happens [what happens]
I would, but i'm a little tied up right now 3741
Ch 1
• follo alm almost
Ch 2
• speredered with
• hav hav eve even
• the nigNot Not when
• that asn’asn’t quite
Life just is 11768
• Thers sts still
• I’m norcedrced
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.4
Bad pet 36236
DUPLICATE REVIEWS
Page 2
the mutt/youko jaganshi, 2035185645,46
Dreaming of dawn 26000
IN REVIEWS
• Samolly, 200928: -efulefully
Playing to win 13481
IN REVIEWS
• by nettie, 80860: sure it’ing ing to be
• by LipbalmAddict, 82668, responding BTW to a reviewer, this is not a review: sorry if thakesakes it
• by whoser_chick, 85382: well ten.ten. ... stors res really
Tainted returns 5493
IN REVIEWS
Page 2
• by Kiristeen, 17688—not a review but an author response to a reviewer
• by Green, 18654: the nextpterpter ... GBestBest
Page 3
• by Dust, 88363: I’m ly ely enjoying
Vikings, sires and siblings 9968
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Marion, 56165: better mat a t a double
•by TwistedAngel, 59926: lurker thatm, hm, ... gretorytory
In heat 12476
IN REVIEWS
• by Anon, 70979: ending is verte. te.
Something a little differeent 11856
IN REVIEWS
• by DeadFerret, 64917: empty review
• by DeadFerret, 64918: DAF.nAF.net
Quantum xander II: in wake of the curse 5708
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Verlassen, 18270: glesgles
Page 3
• by Angela, 19084: Or w it it be
• by Sparky, 19595: a way tong bng back
Page 4
• by Sparky, 20546: addtherther chapter [why is sparky such a problem child?!]
• by Emma Love, 21266: bashthatthat ... Xandereesreesome ... dit mat ake
• by NEONEX, 21512: ue que quickly
Page 6
• by Sparky (sigh), 23157: g cha chapter
• by Julie, 24644: crolcroll down
Page 7
• by Angela Brnikman, 24790: to love,kle kle
Page 8
• by Lissa, 25745: My -sak-sake
• by Kiristeen, 25836: aan Ian I say ... was readin, fi, finally
• by Leviathan, 25956: like. th. that
• by Angela, 26271: blow-up s bet between
Page 10
• by Sparky (i was wondering, it’s been a few pages), 28101: wbe abe able to
Page 11
• by kiristeen, 30706: sweet,y loy loving
• by Angela, 31598: shaking withtiontion
Page 12
• by charzy, 31995—author reply, not a review
• by Sparky, 33265: little e ate at the
• by Cathy, 35736: to thxt cxt chapter
Page 15
• by Leviathan 47950: yougringrin
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.5
Cause and effect 6565
Ch 1
• bl and and a
• of pig pig’s blood
• of a , ba, barely
Ch 2
• more . s . subtle
Ch 3
• He std ind in
• making a bee foe for the
Ch 4
• young chil wer were
• You eted ted as
• takesy mey me
• shois his head
Ch 5
• no Th Then
• close en to to
• more it it
• at rec recalcitrant
• pass uned. ed.
Ch 6
• on the bop. op.
Ch 7
• asking not not to try
• they se to to
Ch 9
• why why did it
• his l lip lip
Ch 11
• tell me *t.” [para] .”
• now had had?”
Ch 12
• the d He He
• the the metal
Ch 13
• lo to to mention
• as eling of
—a large section of text is repeated:
•• begins with •• He frowned, though. The best knife
•• ends with •• So, that was that.
—the last paragraph of it, which begins “Xander snorted”, is different in both places. in the 2nd iteration, it contains wordord in the last sentence (at the bac the the dark)
Ch 14
• just staght ght there
Ch 15
• It w tho though
Ch 16
• I ‘t.’t. You
Ch 17
• d bed been
• protested sily. y. He
• Spiad sad
• e pre problem
• ais fis family
Ch 18
• Itlly lly hadn’t
Ch 20
• I can If If my
Ch 21
• did he Spi Spike
• rece to to
Ch 24
• than anyth [drops off]
• was gro eve ever
• good re for for
Ch 26
• hard ard he
• was his his soul
• difnt, nt, something
Ch 27
• between elf elf and
Ch 28
• how much of a . p . ponce
Ch 29
• A cut cut him
Ch 30
• thrap rap on me
• get of of town
• has has an even
Through the eyes of a child 9256
Ch 1
• [in AN under “Thanks”] writer out e ane and
• infed. ed.
Preying on my mind 5619
Ch 1
• of of a century
Ch 2
• an’s m’s making
Ch 3
• Spike him him
A debt repaid 9724
• out out the window
• in the of of his
Binding 9303
• al tal themselves
• jus the the paramedics
Wearing my heart on my sleeve 9265
• Holding S’s g’s gaze
An amulet, a virgin and a frog?? 9189
• spikes aver ver it
• m if if we
• the the particulars
• well, e’s e’s certain
Payback 8974
• with hinghing
• began ing ing the
• aoaneoaned as the
• On Kne Knees
• continuo sti stimulating
• a te ite if
• laughut lut loud
N.O.D. 8319
• worn out Xr flr floated
Bringing it home/hand to hand 7362
—there are 2 separate stories here. separate them? leave them as is?
• will him him do
Buddy's b-day fic 69445
• withouuchiuching
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.5
Cause and effect 6565
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by nokia, 24761: g sto story ... enough >
Through the eyes of a child 9256
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Margie, 56614: child Xa go, go,
Preying on my mind 5619
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Mandylynn, 17620: Please?ivesives big
• by Jane, 17785: update fretly;tly
• by Kiristeen, 19365: hot, andny, ny, and
• by Kiristeen, 21302: excellent cer! er! ... seeinre. re.
Warphole 8999
IN REVIEWS
• by Aonikoi, 42818: to flameanytanything
Payback 8974
IN REVIEWS
• by Purple Mist, 55349: Gilereacreaction
N.O.D. 8319
IN REVIEWS
• by Sparky, 37445: this n a s a sequel
Buddy's b-day fic 69445
IN REVIEWS
• by ElizabethScripturient, 27033: “Bud” ri” right?
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.6
Night life 4393
Ch 1
• sharply ten uen up ... gretureturning
• me he ghe game
• was hng fng for
Ch 2
• up, e ree resisted
• i wer weren’t
• and pusthe the
• gappen,pen,
• arothe the boy
Ch 3
• connivisoulsoulless
Pretty 6036
• anhanchanced
Fever 5434
• was very imprd. Sd. Spike
Still haunted 5086
• gentle wae was
• and and sat up
Predatory acts 4426
Ch 1
• caught in ow sow
• grabbed at L, pu, pulling
• take n aln alley
Ch 2
• haen sen some
Ch 4
• waad. ad. It was
• Those ewereweren’t
Ch 5
• a on on the
• His cgot got what
Ch 6
• echo os prs previous
Ch 7
• chapter title in text cut off “Chapter Se”
Private memories 4637
•him ey. Iy. Ignoring
• as he ed ned nervously
Good nurse 4442
—definitely move this one to Threesomes; in latter chapters it’s S/X/Willow
Ch 1
• ed oed open
• Xander a m a millimeter
• Everyt we we nened
• too too was
• his aswn awn against
• Spikre hre his
Ch 2
• a to to run
Ch 3
• Make his his childe
• in the p Lo Lose one
Ch 4
• of me ofe of
• and ed ted the
• of hisk ink inside
Ch 5
• the car,’t ‘t you
• tr Sp Spike
• led led his toes
Ch 6
• the the bleedin’ hell
• to to look
• grin at hise. e.
• first taof hof his
• thruthrust
• tgh hgh him
Ch 7
• fla flaming ruin
• the bo the the neck
Ch 8
• Bloods *ts *tell
• have ave you
• then the the deep
Ch 9
“She”She’s
• her h in in delight
Lick. Suck. Nibble 4037
IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE)
• Spike wes. es.
Feed my will to feel this moment 3893
IN STORY SUMMARY (INDEX PAGE)
• makes wthe the small
IN STORY
• o ouo out in
Beer bad 3820
• He c do do this
Owned 3802
• was was going to
• oo sho shove
• [in end AN] or ho beo begin
Holiday cheer 3648
Ch 2
• “, I, I’m just
Ch 4
• > “...”
• < “M “Mmrrmph! not sure what’s with the < and > in these 2
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.6
Night life 4393
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Susan, 14760: get teh doughnuor hor his
• by sherebis, 18259: have more ady!!dy!!!
Page 2
• by Foraoo, 25033: to read t. It. It has
A world of their own 3250
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Saprky (who can’t even type his/her own name), 5859: the snse nse is ... worl kin kinda
Page 2
• by sherebis, 6821: spoiled thou dou do
Page 3
• by Saprky, 7503: react to g tog torn
Page 4
• by sparky (!), 7763: rock toge lo! lol and
• by QueenBoadicea, 8002: great mindink ink alike
Lick. Suck. Nibble 4037
IN REVIEWS
• by Cloud van Dyk, 89334: herehere a sequel
• by Purple Mist, 54001: Love ‘ hon ton that
Beer bad 3820
IN REVIEWS
• by Purple Mist, 55357: Jawdropen*pen
Holiday cheer 3648
IN REVIEWS
• by Angel, 6690: throu pho phone
• by cocoa, 7687: stories!,i hyou you
• by DittoSpikette, 12911: the sisterved ved them
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.7
Sweet memories 3487
IN REVIEWS
• by DittoSpikette, 12925: • read it moran oan once
• by Quiproquo, 144985: rs. rs.
Haunted 3491
• mattehagghaggy
• whe whe was
• Xanderody.ody
• closed his eye [drops off]
Just the way i like it 3482
IN REVIEWS
• print.ExceExcellent
IN STORY
• body.hit!hit!
The beat goes on 3393
• tongue.wantwants
• of , th, that’s
• cutting ofl sol sound
Colourblind 3197
• Some ts ths they’d
• ;you’re the l whe when
Healing 302
IN REVIEWS
Page 3
• by Sparky, 4201: read thet>act (not sure, but assume this is a glitch)
• by QueenBoadicea, 20310: incrts mts makes ... ot oot only
• by QueenBoadicea, 20325: got to bnew new
Page 5
• touching realathip hip
Page 6
• late from wornd ind it ... Damu! Ku! Keep up
The best part of waking up 3068
• eyes lion hon his
• desidesire
• Hrms rms come
Party games 3032
—inside story, title drops off at Party G
• Xander sig pus pushing
• seekthe the
My sticky valentine 2852
• dare wha what
• rackee vae vampire
• entrano hio his
• st bod body
My bloody valentine 2798
• lightver ver them
• mannDarkDark
Needs 2023
Ch 1
• as lo, mi, misreable
• human n, ev, even
• thatse tse things
• aidn’idn’t know
• Whe clo closes
• won’t d aga again
Ch 3
• me,k Drk Drusilla
• newple ple and
• Xandecentcent
Ch 4
• sriedried
Ch 5
• he mhe monster
• threlarelationship
In the dark 2328
IN STORY SUMMARY (ON INDEX PAGE)
• anndernder
IN STORY
• sil silky voice
The super hero party theme 2149
• All fhed.hed.”
• theas aas any
• shoulde swe switched
• BuffBuffy
• tospersper
All or nothing 2140
Ch 1
• great p” [para] “ [para] “HEY!
• guye upe up
• their lipt agt again
Ch 3
• about us?””No””No”
• took nce nce to this
• that!”SpikSpike
• wha what to say
• e sme smiled
Ch 4
• bareove ove he was
• che corner
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.8
The little things 1571
• Xanderkes kes his
• ing ing reluctantly
The phone call 1412
• before swoopin fon for
• think kng ing is
• jadmiadmit
• past two we” [para] “ [para] “Why do
You could have hung up the phone pet 1413
• thinthings he
• why e? [para] e?
• Xr plr please
Who i am 1415
• was somethhe whe wanted
• craf thf the whip
• tonguek hik his
• wrapped hisd ard around
• do say,say,
• not not let you
• ask him one thi [para] “ [para] “Why?”
• arnearned
The twelve days of christmas 1384
• membmember
• your comiack ack (you’re coming back)
• Tw whi whispered
The harsh light of day 1278
—weird line endings in this one. hard line-ends in strange places. oh well.
Menu 1
• [in AN] whegel gel makes
• [in AN] beesy lsy lately
• Ta Xan Xander
Menu 3
• Wi sai said
• loyok [para] at Willow
Menu 4
• ideas ove ave
Menu 5
• gett yot you
Menu 6
• good f Spi Spike
• tloodloody hell
• have af itf it
• S gla glared
• out he rhe room
Menu 7
• slell oll over
• o hio his
• for hi. It was e. Sh. She
• . Bu. But she
• wento tto the
Menu 8
• do Ddo Dawn
• mthatthat
• tll mll me
• god.llowllow
• themselves.”low low said
• Whameanmean
• worof fof fun
• Yould uld have
Menu 9
• her tr anr and
• ethicsn ten teacher
• told boutbout
• tell R.” B.” Buffy
Under the crypt 1276
• just thim him
• Gue Guess not
• guess nouldnuldn’t
Hunt-brother 962
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
—2 reviewers, Ro A and Nabi A, is that A some wierd character that didn’t translate right? in the case of Nabi, makes me wonder if it’s Nabiki as later on this page.
• by Nabi A, 76122: Angel reans. ns.
IN STORY
Ch 1
• Handingke tke the
• so verypy? py? No
• ams ams
• floppnto nto his
Ch 2
• knowl hel he
• thatthat’s fine
• of tingeingers
• panting hly, ly,
• heim wim while
Ch 3
• do wshe she
Ch 4
• wol wolfed
• Meccallcally
• supposo beo be
• f tra traces
• that wonul pul place
Play pretend 960
• “R, I, I’m
• bre breasts
• againim. im.
• de tde the
Coming out 720
Ch 1
• Bng tng to the
• weiI meI mean
• thot aot again
• you you two kids
• T’s a’s a rather
• tjgjbook
• hid Spd Spike
Ch 2
• be like that,. L. Lemme
• downdernder’s
• he pounc [para] S [para] Straddling
• the handsst ast across
• thrhardharder
• huld.uld
• Spiookeooked
• door.ed, ed, pet
• pajamcovecovered
• explain.e see
• covethe the boyody ody with
• hend ind in
• B was was still
• to do with...you [chapter drops off]
Escape to oblivion 852
IN REVIEWS
• by Am-Chau Yarkona, 424: majoobleoblems
IN STORY
• He seemsmet met up
• “Xand” [para] “ [para] “Hey
• tong ang anything
• helf elf around
• scing ing to
• T’s a’s a bloody
• mehe ohe owned
• I kand and
• de to to go
• the the chains
• moviThe The
• Better yetel iel in a
• “Oka”Okay we
• Where’s Xande [para]
• I knoat nat
• He’s right blo [story cuts off]
Bathtime 774
IN REVIEWS
• by Scribe, 359: Stille ite it
IN STORY
• Authorote:ote:
• inis lis love’s
• Spikesed sed the
• barebwithwith
• realmpormportant?
• oeceieceiver
Death becomes them 755
• shortly.br> br> Willow
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BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.10
Adorned 30
• the exchs ths that
• sootsoothe
• eyesike ike
BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.9
Cake 752
• Heeaseeased
• oth other in
Last night of our lives 751
• to tittlittle bits
Absence of thought 702
IN REVIEWS
• by DittoSpikette, 4013, in PS: loved alur fur fiction
IN STORY
• ot fot funny
• He ams ams sex
• cla class=MsoNormal>
The suicide plot 685
• abooingoing
—story cuts off in the middle of a sentence
Press 687
• give tustoustomers
• t’st’s so
• slightlrcasrcastic
Press "2" 688
• Umw abs about
Work sucks 684
• letgo tgo think
• more fun..> [para] >
• quivquivering
Turning point 676
• he answereeatheathlessly
How to cheer up a depressed slash writer 675
• refused ent entrance
• thrug deg deep
It's an adventure 455
Ch 1
• Well, RilI’dI’d send
Ch 3
• It’s a ter cor conference
Ch 4
• wigglher her feet
• youkingking
• ojustjust to
Ch 6
• Xander.stoostood
Ch 7
• Xr’sr’s,
• was ou nou needed
• just hit met?”t?”
• cockedauseause
• freshmI’mI’m not
• anntinntinued
• tastiXandXander
Ch 8
• to SireSire
Ch 9
• ouldould never
Ch 13
• “Yo”You and
• Itwondwonderful
Ch 14
• Cordeltryitrying
• Winks im. [para] im.
• tabevebeverages
Ch 15
• Xr anr and
• diamond.e ste stamped
• ulleulled
• din ann and
Ch 16
• both bed bed one
• reallyted ted to
Ch 17
• a too bigoon oon
• as handhand went
• and sng bng back
Ch 18
• Dilandland
Something's in the air 293
• babblat Xat Xander
• hreacreached out
•selfself to
• /p> at end of story...?
Drowning 36
• got got herself
• It yot you
Sta State we're in 38
—wordord in title on story index page, http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...=850&page=9
• c sto stop
• V bre breaks
• belly ns fes feeling
Ordinary boy 149
• alwaanteanted that
Dancing about architecture 31
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by spikesbabydoll, 161307: writre ire its
• by Randy Sex Kitten, 179088: just acroacross
IN STORY
Ch 2
• head tim time
Ch 3
• for a mo, th, then
Ch 4
• secu cam camera
Ch 5
• turne him him
Ch 6
• He ght ght his
• ex-wife...” /> />
Ch 7
• was was fidgeting
• “as aas an ex
Ch 8
• herat mat made
• used to ne one of
• couldn’t quite deciph [drops off, last line of chapter[
Ch 9
• “I WE WE’RE HERE.”
• andl anl and
Ch 11
• brush ofs, s,
• You’rth sth so
Ch 12
• better iniforifornia
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BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/XANDER — p.1 of 1
I won't let anything happen to you 600031127
—OMG! the entire chapter is CENTERED! how very annoying. and every 2 lines there is a double space? WHY?
—okay. i seriously have to wonder how old this author is. really. they don’t have a clue about capitalization, punctuation, i mean it’s beyond bad. it has a very juvenile feel to it. could you just check their supposed DOB maybe, just in case?
Just a bit bent 544197390
—Author’s profile states “Hi, I’m a teenager who...” Any way to get the actual DOB? And good grief, even if she’s 19, if she’s “been an avid reader of slash (for over eight years now)” that means...since she was 11? Good gawd!
Dark kisses 27116
• It was r thr that
• fa and and
• fannto not
• pn frn front
• ow aow asked
• vampattaattack
• innt ont of
• You get get the
• A.” A petite
• “Oh, I’llinitinitely
• afte bec became
• screwveryverything
• c wor work
• can have Wi.” [para] .”
• relashipships
The scarlet letter 13751
Ch 1
• eliaelia
Ch 2
• thechercher
• he branme lme like
Ch 3
• hamburge goo good
• his dr bir
Ch 4
• reservoir [para] W [para] When stray
Ch 5
• smashingindoindow
• tenderness,ng tng this
• upset here tre than
• bac back!
Ch 6
• the iresires had
• blacblack magic
• yo pre prefer
• rea really
• Break the the
• situsituation
• owhilwhile
• pro eac each
• d’t k’t know
Ch 8
• tiny littlewn cwn car
• as lid lid down
• No’s n’s not
• Whichuthfuthfully
• to the nd. [para] nd.
Ch 9
• m? m? No,
• “Mother [para] “T [para] “Time
• He ha get get
• Iryinrying to
• drousrous
• theoll,oll, and
• lipfew few
Ch 10
• glart hit him
• I’ell ell her
• bite lip lip
• my litslutslut
• wegoingoing
• shakiis his head
• able tol hel her
• kno know her
Ch 11
• “Sto”Stop it
• alliwhy why
• aing ing again
• cheeder der friends
• Xanup aup as
• odd feg ang
• by one one who
• wthatthat?
• stretchedr a r a
• slitsSpikSpike
• himy cuy cutting
• the the rest of
Ch 12
• was was terrified
• take my Wil [drops off]
• anyg abg about
• out him fom for
• fa tha than
Ch 13
• Cordelia n. n.
• recr it it and
Love, lies and regrets 12852
• Hek a k a deep
• let me at lesee see my
• aing.ing.
• the do sai said
• had a ch to to think
• lovrusirusilla
Hidden, but still there 7104
• withouinkiinking
• was ped ped with
• himsto bto be
• exacteniuenius
• log atg at your
• all over aga [para] “ [para] “Welcome
I'll never love you 2364
IN REVIEWS
• by sherebis, 3575: find out whaup wup with
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BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/SPIKE(WILLIAM) — p.2
Fall from heaven 7165
IN SUMMARY
• Post Cho Spi Spike
IN STORY
Ch 1
• Spwas was
• glimpsf hef her
• have to to to know
Ch 2
• his his hands
• day bef Ang Angel’s
• used i put put out
• Spi [para] Spike ignored
• e wae was
• reasoso hso he
• faceeareeared was
• thaory ory and
• forgow a w a good
• “H [para] “Hello, Summer’s
• he . W. Where
• “Landesteesterday
• Spikeu diu didn’t
• wilve yve you
Ch 3
• talk abit. it.
• I d blo bloody
• “W [para] “What did
• “I’m”I’m here
• middleFredFred’s
• WesAngeAngel
• littloup oup
Ch 4
• likat Aat Angel
• be h if if he
• to e hie him
• and lthemthem down
• fung wng with
• she sou uou up
• yWillWill
• seemo beo be
• thnvernversation
• was tnly nly way
Ch 5
• at wver ver game
• that hntednted
• cipacipated
• oowinowing
• move han hand
• he ed. ed. Angel
• not not a...he
• know alread [para] H [para] His memories
• anvorivorite
• ancipropprophecies
• thcumecument
• choiculd uld never
• her her did I
• wng tng to
• roadowndown the
A chuisle mo chroi 3067
• seekthe the
• releaoateoated
• and ned ind in
• battereeen een chair
• thinkwerewere
Sire and childe 2089
Menu 1
• Mam goi going
• at thor. or.
Menu 2
• morean 1an 12 (more than 12)
• betweer ler leg
• all tay day down
• he dit knt know
• unkile dee demon
BUFFY / SLASH / ANGEL(US)/SPIKE(WILLIAM) — p.1
The way we were 600030280
—Reviewer mentioned that Ch4 was missing, was actually Ch3 missing. Author put it in, but at the end of the story. Move it to proper order?
Old times 22389
IN REVIEWS
Page 2
• by Preety, 204661: yean ean of you
An irish preoccupation 10331
• it u the the hair
• implicit in the w.
• was s you young
• started it. , as, as
• a p a passion
• action cd and and he
• grag hig his
• calm t dit did
• pens wat watches
• metwithwith them
• even a vaa vampire
• turninto ato a
• l exl expect
• door od atd at two
• yoe doe doing
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.25
Come, come, come 7215
—Warning is for slash, but summary states “This is not slash.” Really? Then why is it posted in the slash section? It’s Faith/Spike/Xander, belongs in Threesomes in any case. But that summary statement was kind of weird. Obviously the lone reviewer agrees.
Ashes to ashes 544198132
—Ch 2 isn’t a chapter, just replies to reviewers and an AN
Rules of engagement 544198133
—Ch 2 isn’t a chapter, just replies to reviewers and an AN
Breathe 544195396
IN REVIEWS
• by HellHath, 2035377300: not sure what reviewer means, it should be posted under the Buffy category. It is—isn’t it?
This place and time 544182541
IN REVIEWS
—Page 2 has that thing where the page width is static even if you move your browser narrower. Don’t know if it’s fixable or if you’re doing this kind of fixes, thought I’d mention it.
—Hmmm...so, probably to compensate, starting in Ch 4 the author put hard line endings in making the entire text very narrow!
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.26
In the name of entertainment 27538
—almost the whole rest of the page had no wordord...so i guess this one story had to make up for it!
• [in AN] why no Or Or
• frandeander
• hopas das disgust
• tho it it was
• eithe the them
• thong.ong.
• then.”ke ske said
• in er’er’s
• and nt ent enough
• you to sto stay
• his his mouth
• bac back in
• Gos ass ass killed
• afterw. Di. Didn’t
• Heldnldn’t. He even
• jusnt ont over
• sttintting
• Gotdo sdo some
• er ser said
• oveselfself and
• an wan when
• arch nem for for one
• Xansaidsaid
• aust ust to
• Goy luy lube
• Hs ons only
• thrug. Xg. Xander
• on thd afd
In dreams 22016
• ke mke must
• his l bac back
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Forever mine 544196353
UN-STORY. This is a challenge, not a story.
—and—
DUPLICATE REVIEWS
Silvrei, 2x, id # 2035407601,02
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27
By the doubling of our joy and the... 544195399
—for some reason the preliminary info at the beginning of the story is stated twice; but in each section different parts got left out of the Notes. don’t know if you want to leave it alone or fix it.
Once it begins 23805
—general comment: this author is one of the worst spellers i’ve ever seen. half the time it’s pretty hard to tell if something is a glitch or just her crappy attempt at spelling.
IN REVIEWS
Page 2
• by jamie, 193328: actually b. I . I can’t
Page 3
• by Hyperbole, 199657: happypy Apy Angel
IN STORY
Ch 1
• nothingdo fdo for
• Xander. I” S” She
• to serou? ou?
• nternterrupted
Ch 2
• oanioaning
Ch 3
• [in AN] it’s my story - dea [should be “deal with it” i think]
• [remove first] 03
—so, this is very weird. in this whole chapter, the opening quotes whenever someone speaks is an odd special character of some kind, the quotes are at “ground level” instead of “up high”. i don’t know if you can do a search & replace or what—not sure what that character is. (i beta for a polish gal who uses them and it drives me crazy!)
• Corringringing
• invisivision
• h Sur Surpresses
• when uns uns in
Ch 4
• ‘t l’t like it?
• “’t l’t lose you
• opening OpenOpening
• Angel barkd led lets
• emotioweigweight
Ch 5
• it’svingving
• his o chi childe’s
• tdon’ don’t know
• his h as as good
• turnedris?ris?”
• e doe doesn’t
• lifts headhead.
Ch 6
• nearly hes hes her
• for himsel [para] “H [para] “How...”
• sobs nst nst his
Ch 7
—again with the weird quote marks in this chapter (just the very first one)
• calls to to his
• Come and get . [para] .
• affe by by that
• tell...y toy to...
• If he ehad had a
• comple wit without
• broodsionsion
• destroyechaichained
• De scr scramble
• Spikdisadisappointment
Ch 8
• arm s aro around
• himselfwer,wer
• hreatreath he
• able to ain ain his
• unheal [para] “ [para] “I really
• Yesgel’gel’s car
Ch 9
• nst nst the back
• Dissed,sed,
• of thf the shop
Ch 10
• sorry maout out that
• he hto cto come
Ch 13
—again, the strange down-low quote marks in this chapter—just the first one again
Chronos' puppet 14226
Ch 1
• [in AN] to ge don done
• for for his own
• Tfissfissures
• was was not the
• whel the the
• evhinghing
Ch 4
• the sses ses of time
• like An And
Ch 5
• the croas tas
• woras aas abruptly
Ch 6
• this awas a
• of teet ant any
• goingoing home
• thondeonde
Ch 7
• smearedinstinst
• domina Co Cowed
Ch 8
• to the the slackened
Ch 15
—not a chapter, just an AN
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.27
Why not 544194823
FLAME
Page 1
• by MadAnon, id # 2035372085, doesn’t like pairing so he flames
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28
Saying hello 544192822
—Ch 2 is not a chapter but an extended AN
Lost and forgoten series 544191415
—Ch 5 is not a chapter but an AN and request for a beta
Fade 25230
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by katie_k, 193870: wfor for the
• by mel, 194119: ‘t ‘t see that ... thisthis pairing
Page 2
• by Rhonda, 194490: Noat Iat I’ve
• by Kay, 195061: and the pags, gs, and
• by Spikefan, 195069: I ct wat wait
Page 3
• by Rhonda, 198403: wit hit him
Page 5
• by mel, 224897: I’sseissed you
Page 6
• by mel, 229743: rev(the(the site
• tgod god that
IN STORY
—Chapter 1 is at the end of the story and should be at the beginning. I noticed in the reviews that there was mention of chapter 1 “cutting off after you’d written hardly anything”, and I think the author tried to go back and replace the text but ended up somehow getting it out of order at the end. I think it probably was intended to go at the beginning (well, it’s chapter 1!) as the disclaimer is in ch.1. One review suggests that this placement was deliberate, but it doesn’t appear so.
Menu 1 (Ch 2)
• Hngrangraceful
• oved ved an
• ande hde his
• his to tto the
• his hauncto rto
• inb a mt.” t.”
• hear he he shut
Menu 2 (Ch 3, etc.)
—Beginning and ending AN usually in bold with this author but after opening AN she didn’t close her tag properly and entire chapter is in bold.
• slo slowly
• boy boy all too
• tried ull ull
• didthinthink
Menu 3
• backish,ish,
Menu 4
• woundseatseated
• haven abn able
Menu 5
• Undeterresleesley
• fteartears
• cellP> P>
• Darlamoremore
• tightighter
Menu 7
• thougf Vaf Valley
• was ted ted to
Menu 8
• at ei Rup Rupert
• Williagringrin
• hom home
• Heeen een
• to wWillWilliam
• and h knh knew
Menu 9
• musiarinaring
• tmselmself
• &For For the
Menu 10
• have a a normal
Fangless and the whelp 16273
IN REVIEWS
• by Becky, 106822: still laug now now
• by Godiva, 278919: and ng fng fun
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.28
You've woken up the demons 544192840
DUPLICATE REVIEWS
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Saying hello 544192822
DUPLICATE REVIEWS
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.29
I think some moving may have taken place; stories that originally appeared on p.29 when I started it but no longer do (and which I’ve already read thru for glitches) are Hearts and Secrets (544187342) and Fun in the Daytime (544189360). Ones now here which I’ve added since they showed up are Atlantis and Friday the 13.
Acquaintances 544189188
IN REVIEWS
Page 4
• by RemityGirl, 2035306827: and lwe ove the
Lycanthrope, vampirism, and magick 29314
IN REVIEWS
Page 2
• by Cathie-mac, 305575: I sasin:ain: well
IN STORY
Ch 1
• par lot lots
• deer,er wer
• sma chi child
Ch 2
• kids nd a d a
• Igo ggo get
Ch 3
• sto storieshad had
• Ju [para] Just as Spike
• followiehinehind
• thggesggest
• blooicklickling
• especialf hif his
Ch 4
to s in in the
• her. was was talking
Ch 5
• theots ots wanting
• their roand and put
• ngelngel had
• srts,rts,
• can ouslyusly
• do yont unt us
• neighborhood.ere ere were
Ch 6
• ne sne side
• goend end up
• MohaMohave
• no actpowepower to
Ch 7
• Did youw thw there
• to k thk these
• both tuo tho the
• for crifcrifice of
Ch 8
• up anr sor some
• could bareear ear her
• steal thod sod
• Nng wng was
• arof Cof Claifornia
• for ery ery long
• be diffe. T. That’s
• har sir sights
• thatng ing inside
Ch 9
• that ted wed wasn’t
• do rea really
• Spiklledlled at
• selfke hke he
• kisthe the
• hold er’ser’s cheeks
• ar and and
• on otheother side
• manato tto thrust
• staynectnected
• mornwithwith
• makout out on
• itot lot like
• theivalival
• a little something something
Ch 10
• Pipn thn the
• she wat tht the
• some.” .” He
• ainceince he
• grinne him himself
• whereher her
• okay’m j’m just
• coulde ite it to
• floofloor and
• widt tht the
• ndernder found
• ove over a year
Ch 11
• aser wer went
• my de Bde Buffy
• hurt T I I don’t
Ch 12
• Werewolit, it, [Werewolf spit, eew!]
• Angelld hld hear
• “Wha”What?
• supposemademade
Ch 13
• from hurihe ghe girl
• thave sve souls
• ncemncement
• with ees les like
• agent of taw law
• bstarstarted
Ch 14
• offgs wgs would
• as if soing ing was
• get jumpjump on
• olieflief as
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Lycanthrope, vampirism, and magick 29314
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Spikechick78, 3 duplicate reviews, id # 236469,70,71
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it's barely even worth reporting for this page!
BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.30
Redefining unlife 544181550
Ch 3
• “Shit Sp.Leigh
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BUFFY / SLASH / ROOT SORT — p.31
One and only show 544180405
IN REVIEWS
• by Mu-chan, 2035361758: nothing but *******s. does this count as a review??
Love's bitches 36832
Ch 1
• SlaySlayer
• sght ght
• kno knowing
• do it ag But But I’d
• br thr through
• cae spe spikey
Ch 2
• whau’reu’re doing
• minfor for a
Ch 4
• ght ght then.
Ch 5
• teabut but a smirk
• days oing ing a
• Taking car a n a newly-
Ch 9
• breakrougrough
Ch 10
• in in a partner
• not lihe she silence
Heat 37869
Ch 1
• “W Gi Giles
• hlf, lf, biting
• alons’ ns’ neck
• tryingconvconvince
• accomh hih his
• groaneyes yes
Ch 2
• the othen’s n’s gaze
White knight, black knight 28828
IN REVIEWS
Page 1
• by Little Tenshi, 232918: Aer mer marvelous
• by attirb, 248106: ke ike it
Page 2
• by Chibi, 250251: Except th wou would
• by Tracei, 256748: why woulnormnormal
• by chibifae, 301325: if you postr str stories
IN STORY
Ch 1
• tal talking about
• mais wis way
Ch 2
• at thele ale as well
• wipikepike!
• anyg hag happen
• underneat. H. He
• happenedthe the
Ch 4
• vesdvesdropped
• if it was use use of
Ch 5
• rat.aws aws curved
• likponcponce
• ribce hce had
Ch 6
• cheesRighRight
• spectacuof wof ways
• feele hee he
• going thin hin his
• nigsharsharing
• r mir mind
• Theyuredured
• was with g rel relief
• a chancter ter the
Ch 7
• us mis mind
• fallas pas pretty
• aning ing a
• hningning
• dependin ifn if he
• She’tchetched
• goingoing to be
Ch 8
• spread e wie wings [should be: spread these wings]
• (sd thd these [same as above]
• walkedk thk the
• deadll atl at
Ch 9
• othharaharacters
• yodn’tdn’t
• a noteboightight
• aeat eat me to death
• mumbmumbling
• birthdaym sum such
• a re dre darted
Ch 10
• gotbe abe any more
• throwselfself on
• becg alg all that
• out foe yoe young
• his toelt elt was
• busves.ves.
• in cheschest and
• heruys,uys,
• yu you can worry
• liome ome
• threalreally
• only onetwo two days
• it obv obvious
• as hs. Hs. He
• but’ve ‘ve got
Ch 11
• daysdays later
• shuld uld do
• regiregister
• she’s t tht that
• we gon gone
• Tara ed ted to
• but but he
• friends approv [drops off]
• zomb but but one
• S [para] Spike looked up
• visiGlenGlenda
• tmeanmeant
• Bice ice and [should be Beatrice and]
Ch 12
• woulve tve thought
• boy was n gang along
• could veell ell
• Sp Not Not
Ch 13
• telu anu
• didn’ve tve the
• wae moe more
• eyes im. im.
• cherwithwith
• help? Glin [drops off]
• se?”se?”
• tha’d a’d affected
• protest.l” he’d
• chd thd them
• strange?l”
• as thruthrusts
Ch 14
• back tot tht there
• fac fact to face
Ch 15
• and shs hus human
• headachetelytely
• litat tat the
• I wassesssessed twice
Ch 16
• he She Slayer
• le dro drop
• the bot the them
• Spiet tet
• tearsher her
• andmal.mal
• gettind. d.
• concrend snd ... litte the the place
• it it might
• had t to to
• Ribeinbeing
• olatolate
Fisi Mtima 34727
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• by JJ, 274995: quicklogulogue
Page 2
• by Argo_801, 288622: Xander’s rs –rs –
IN STORY
Ch 1
• a to to the zoo
• handsnywanyway
• rightis tis thing ... cheateeater
• lon long swords
• collapsedo tho the
• repl a t a torn
• Noat tat the
• libegabegan
• thaSpikSpike
• pointoss.oss.
• pulleck ack and
• tdevedevelopment
• tffy,ffy, who
Ch 2
• S [para] Spike growled
• Thr war was
• witsighsigh
• foughck ack a
Ch 3
• ofe kie kind
• lng cng
• let ougirlgirlish
• where’e mue mutt
Ch 4
• stolife.ife.
• alleywad bed began
• e gre growled
• in Iin I ask
• y.” y.” Willow
• a haa has taken
• Willowaredared
• wiowerowers
• stoppedr eyr eyes
• pointo tto the
• wihe rhe ritual
Ch 5
• ed ted the
• wasnure ure if he
• had withwith Spike
Ch 6
• Whave ave you
• is rec recovery
• Thawondwonderful
• Then tent of
Ch 7
• Thwas was a
• in ideptdepths
• mscrescreamed
• lallyally felt
wordord
in Glitched stories
Posted
BUFFY / SLASH / SPIKE(WILLIAM),XANDER — p.2
Vampire's hypnosis 600031102
• than than the vampire
Zeniths with vampires 600031077
—Apparently author posted this chapter (Ch 18 only) here because it can’t be posted on FF.net, where the rest of the story is. I guess there’s nothing to stop someone from doing that...is there? Seems kind of stupid and I agree with the reviewer who says hey, post the whole story here, or at lest the link! but no....
My may day human 31728
Ch 1
• and smirkedMindMind
• andippeipped