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  3. wordord

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    Souls standing by 28489

    Menu 2 — • lasslass=MsoNormal style='mso-pagination:none;mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none'>

    Menu 3 — • to ghe fhe fuck out

    • sgelygely satisfying

    • closs bes between

  4. possible misplaced story

    in Misplaced stories moved

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p. 5

    Scarlet rose 600090803

    http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090803

    not sure if this is a misplaced story or a crossover. the AN in Ch 1 says: “I know this is under the Angel sub-cat but when i was uploading it didnt give me the option of books or Harry Potter so heres a little surprise for all you Angel fans.”

    i’m not sure whether to take that as meaning it’s a surprise because it’s really a HP story and not an Angel story (in which case i have no idea why on earth she posted it here instead of asking for help) or will be a crossover down the line. the main character, scarlet larose, seems to be an OFC and the only other named characters are HP ones, so no clue there.

  10. un-chapters, questionable au acknowledgement

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p. 8

    Arezue: desire 544187615

    —good god. the author notes (front AND end of each chapter!) are longer than the chapters!!!

    Menu 11 — is a timeline, not a chapter. not sure if you want to leave it in. contains no story text.

    Menu 18 — is an author note, not a chapter, delete

    Menu 22 — SQUISHED

    Stonewall by carmilla 544206928

    —this story is by someone called Carmilla and merely TRANSLATED by rogiari, who posts it here. is it okay for the translator to post it under their own page or do we just assume s/he has permission from the author to do so? there is no mention of the author other than in the title.

  13. wordord, squished, un-chapter

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p. 9

    Soul stealers 544192726

    Menu 8 — is only an author note (response to reviewers), delete

    Angel's master 37103

    • shuttihe dhe door

    • standin fro front

    • thrThouThough

    Ruminations I 11655

    Ch 1 — • Sh She was

    • removed keyskeys

    • ale ile is

    • been crr). r). He

    • hests,sts

    • murmuring,ou kou know

    Ch 2 — • hace.ace. Smooth

    • slizelize

    • for pleasur [drops off]

    • We’s ‘s earlobe

    • violentllosilosing

    You go to my head 3720

    —SQUISHED

    • and kissed h [para] C [para] Cordy just

  15. wordord, un-chapter

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p.10

    Famously challenged 544187623

    —UN-CHAPTERS: Chs 2,4 are author notes only

    (and thank god for the break from the actual chapters, which are excruciating)

    Scar tissue 33521

    Ch 1 — • funcouncomfortable

    • Save ave the

    • not not you

    Ch 2 — • do ies?”es?”

    • crap.He opHe

    • it’st sst stupid

    Forgotton sons 16311

    • tinstinstance

    • as hed hid himself

    • witw frw from

    • sensationsil hil he

    • >Had>Had any of it

    Destiny 16177

    • thingike ike

    • readily,kingking

    • ... friendship. br>

    • She’swlinwling

    • and and there

    • his f dro dropping doo bio bite

    • be together a.” [drops off, should probably be “again”]

  18. wordord, possible minor, possible troll

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p.11

    Demon dreams 29782

    Ch 1 — • dafloofloor

    • ts ars are

    • demor.” [para] r.” [para] Before she

    • he ghe guards

    • blurut “ut “you’re

    • over pikepike]

    • tiontion back

    • Hs tos to

    • officem tim time

    • himseor for

    • Proves hn’t n’t

    • whi whimper

    • theakinaking

    • bis biscuits

    • “Youd?” [para] d?”

    • hedy sdy so

    • inevita”tal”talk”

    • Scene 2: l’s l’s [those are Ls]

    • gemegement

    • detece moe mood

    • esleesley:

    • ond and about

    • Lor”Me “Me

    Ch 2 — • stag; Tg; To

    • S [para] Scene 4:

    • if itour our

    • aorksorks his

    Ch 3 — • fslowslowly in]...ar as

    • somessure tre to

    • ane one of

    • or easteast

    • ocnot not too

    • riundeunder

    • imingming

    • arounrvourvously

    • angri [para] H [para] Harmony:

    • shtersters

    • cesscessing

    • Illyrllyria:

    • Sike,ike,

    • of the g” [para] “ [para] Angel:

    • Angelh, yh, yeah

    • tretureturn

    • mit cit clear

    • Wesleyhe dhe doesn’t

    • WeslePerhPerhaps

    • ovee toe top

    • dropprecprecum

    • to to pull

    • preparinr thr the

    • compcompliment

    • swimmind cnd

    • r shr she leaves

    Ch 4 — • re-rts rts itself

    • somep anp and

    • llamplamps

    • the the problem

    • gettingrterrter

    • touchdisbdisbelief

    • mg thg the

    • to be her [para] D [para] Deth: “Came

    • ally lly move

    • not not knowing

    • neve her her

    • ring ing the

    • formsich ich

    Ch 5 — • hair,n’t n’t it?

    • nowsnows

    • honestly] “n’t.n’t.”

    • ues ues with• thig abg about

    • arecerncerned

    • enatination

    • kill vams. [para] s. [para] They go

    • Iginegine

    • dicertcertingly

    • Ycertcertainly

    • ideridering

    • Hends nds there

    • stopby hby her

    • fromearbearby

    • glaSpikSpike

    • havea baa bar

    • fee of of pride

    • mifindfind

    • dot fot for

    • meaeforefore

    • to fthe the

    • actualeus eus or

    • ke tke tries

    • tng the edges

    • sing ing mix

    • Time ps les

    • ba bia bit coy

    • lot cof cocky

    • theas aas a

    • really goin dra draw

    • hlicklicking

    • spreadr ler legs

    • touchouch ... thr Thi This

    • theirstnestness

    • tok hik his

    • tdrawdraw

    • figura pre present

    • erfuerfully

    • iose ose

    • eatherther

    • movemenywheywhere

    • Gohe’dhe’d do

    • She s hes herself

    • eflutflutter

    • unshe she

    • legslegs and

    • to kW&H W&H

    • conted ted

    • muc a p a phone

    Ch 6 — • havee soe something

    • Spi”Tha”That’s

    • gibbh sph

    • bed forit. it.

    • hongueongue

    • her her head

    • motipullpulls

    • ignoer fer first

    • sonayinaying

    • bor body

    • roppeappears

    Dust 544185576

    OOPS! FORGOT TO LEAVE THIS ONE IN THE REVIEW BOARD WITH THE REST:

    • UN-REVIEW: tubbyk 2035261860, author response

    Déjà vu - the updates 544173943

    —author profile states “i’ve had to reregister as the web site is denying me access to my original user profile”. i’m wondering if it was because she was a minor and if this was one of the stories she wrote as a minor. might be worth checking.

    MENU

    The beads of jupiter 25779

    —okay. i’ve looked at all of the author’s other stories and they are all very similar to this one, with the exception that the on NOT in the buffy fandom (star wars) got GOOD reviews, and mostly the buffy ones, esp. this one, got flamed up the ying-yang. and rightfully so. makes me wonder if this person’s a troll...deliberately wasting everyone’s time and not having any actual interest in the fandom(s) or the stories. hmmm. really. the writing is worse than goolecap’s, and i’ve wondered about him for a long time.

  19. flames galore

    in Review boards/AN Chapters/Excessive AN fixed

    Posted

    Demon dreams 29782

    IN REVIEWS

    • HellH [name unreadable] 251675: notthe the

    • UN-REVIEW: Mad 267435, author note

    • UN-REVIEW: Mad 2035272949, author response

    The beads of jupiter 25779

    IN REVIEWS

    • FLAME: Disgusted 200795

    • The Last Kitten 200974: crazd yod your

    • FLAME: Not gonna bother 202350

    • FLAME: Anon 208026

    • FLAME: Anon 208028

    —are we seeing a trend here? i almost dread reading the story!

    • HammiePoo 218509: an, and thus

  20. wordord, un-chapter

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p.12

    Unforgiven 544181003

    Ch 1 — • UN-CHAPTER, author note only

    How to be human 24694

    Ch 1 — • his r. Hr. He turned

    • e cle cleaned

    Ch 2 — • e hae had seen

    • cle clean the

    • sel del demons

    • Remembee wee werewolf

    • witcougcough

    • wit ant antiseptic

    • Spiruncrunching

    • hisce wce when

    Ch 3 — • Harmony’ood.ood.

    • to to go to the

    Ch 4 — • lookedAngeAngel

    • theirks iks into

    • copushpushed

    • coche lhe looked

    • NOFredFred

    • was was softening

    Ch 5 — • “Th [para] “Thanks guys

    • Oh yOh yeah

    • hcockcock

    • str fro from

    • tr nar navel

    • next er. er.

    • expg heg her

    • ou Fre Fred

    • mov moved

    • strokinr clr clit

    • cout, ut, crawled

    Ch 6 — • bumps.y wey were

    • Spi [para] Spike entered

    • onho aho are

    • sght,ght,

    • Pushthesthese

    Ch 7 — • “y!” y!” Lorne exclaimed

    • introduur gur group

    • OUCH!ndernder

    • oubiesbies

    • uffyuffy nodded

    • feelingwardwards

    • therght ght be

    • excuserseerself

    • thechenchen

    • somethinge one on his

    • “Xr, wr, were

    • BSpikSpike

    • hadsed sed this

    • wor worried

    • Befounnyunnydale’s

    • and fell ap. [para] p. [para] Buffy had followed

    Ch 8 — • knowey aey all

    • happe” Xa” Xander

    • atherther

    The guardian 30764

    Ch 1 — • thtuattuation

    • dly tly thrilling

    • hise ite it was

    • staver ver and

    • seemormaormal

    • bursto a o a

    • easyt... jt... just

    • saith ath a

    —if the french text is wordorded, i would never know!

    • tandtand

    • thoit dit did

    • basicalaid:aid:

    • againseemseemed

    • saidsaid the

    • touplouple

    Angel: bi sex party 544177354

    —SQUISHED

    Another sire, please! 25884

    Ch 1 — • [in AN, Disclaimers} nothing.se yse you

    • ryinrying

    • hadnt tnt the

    • exa exactly

    • elu cig cigarettes

    • har hard to

    Ch 3 — • not not see

    Ch 4 — • [in AN#2} Spike’s S [cuts off]

    • and sillsilla

    • lasslass=MsoNormal>”You wanna

    • restes fos forehead

    • maim gim gulp

  23. wordord

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    TV / ANGEL / General p.13

    The naughty series 38335

    Ch 1 — • statem “Wh “What

    • cog hig his

    • freencufncuff

    • theidroodroom

    • toy hoy held

    • littlb inb inside

    Pax 544171991

    • then.” [para] A.” [para] We should

    The violence of existing 24995

    —reviewer says Ch 7 is “just Ch 6 repeated”

    Ch 2 — • ankleskles.

    • dgreygrey

    • restingone one

    • Harexplexplained

    • Slayensidnsidered

    • ineraleral

    Ch 4 — • ttlettle hollow

    • encain rin red

    • boothardearded

    • warr They did

    • longi at at her

    Future children 31790

    Ch 1 — • [in AN] tglangland

    • hisd ond on

    • theiartmartment

    • wasll ull unwritten

    Ch 3 — • awhilforefore

    • peoplBuffBuffy

    • Shcidecided

    Ch 4 — • tos hes her

    • tap taped

    • Spto tto their

    • roughlilesiles

    • hcockcock

    • of the . Fi. Finally

    • was was glad

    • d thd the order

    • Angelgaingainst

    Ch 5 — • ansd wid without

    • Howedowed

    • his his mother

    Ch 7 — • on thech, ch,

    • hangingm thm their

    • brthrothrough

    • while she she

    • moremore glance

    • younman man

    Ch 8 — • knowknow!”

    Ch 9 — • [in AN, Disclaimer] JWhedWhedon

    • grandpar’ he’ help

    • wiDamiDamian

    • beookiooking

    • vampbreabreathless

    Frost in eternal summer: a hole in the world 38790

    • lanybanybody

    • staavinaving

    • auseause

    Solidity 38789

    • [in AN, Disclaimer] burneto oto oblivion

    • all all I can

    • whispto sto show

    • I wao beo be

    • thrld rld to see

    • lighnd Snd Spike

    • easedselfself

    • leano lao lap

    • acrthe the

    Spike experiments with fred 38291

    • “Ahh Spi Spike

    • cand tnd try

    • &nb/p> /p>

    • “Juwhatwhat

    • woit bit be

    • word”You”You

    • &al>

    Old ghosts 37449

    • her bac back

    • “s als alright

    • You sd god go

    • “I t wat want

    • buo hao hadn’t

    • ee aee a friend

    • abo about

    • baown own

    • truttruth is

    • A s sig sign

    • Thers srs slid

    • to sou, ou, Angel

    • haveideaidea

    • annou the the

    • disants nts you

    • acknowledhe dhe

    • shors. rs.

    • lower lihe she strong

    • satchatched as

    • inentlently.

    Please forgive me 37135

    • look.e poe pointed

    • to leftleft and

    • wholee. We. Wesley

    • to ect ect

    Angel's little sister 34520

    Ch 1

    — SQUISHED

    • iill ill living

    Ch 2 — • fromnor nor

    • despery noy not

    Ch 3 — • and and let them

  24. wordord, un-reviews

    in Review boards/AN Chapters/Excessive AN fixed

    Posted

    Pax 544171991

    IN REVIEWS

    • UN-REVIEW: Jo The Librarian 2035101348, author response

    • UN-REVIEW: TheCharmer 2035132554, response back to author

    • UN-REVIEW: Jo The Librarian 2035143584, author response

    The violence of existing 24995

    IN REVIEWS

    • Nat 200656: Ca wai wait ... Ple Please

    • Anon 201533: great sto can can’t

    Future children 31790

    IN REVIEWS

    • DUP REVIEWS: myladymystere, 2035349172 so delete 2035349174

    Old ghosts 37449

    IN REVIEWS

    • Sofia 304870: so kind eld elighten

    • UN-REVIEW: Jo The Librarian 2035101160, author response

    Angel's little sister 34520

    IN REVIEWS

    • UN-REVIEW: angels girl85 273973, author response

    Breaking in a new pet 27994

    IN REVIEWS

    • budgetshahrazad 223217: of howel sel sired

  25. wordord

    in Glitched stories

    Posted

    /GlitchesANGEL.doc TV / ANGEL / General p.15

    Hell is in the details 24443

    Ch 1 — • pief trf trash

    • &nbso:p>o:p>

    • wopasspass

    • liuslius

    Ch 2 — • to to damage

    Ch 3 — • si va vampire

    • beaut, pr, pretty

    • demon’s s was was

    • doing,tty tty boy

    • cla clas=MsoNormal>”Here it

    • heled led

    Ch 4 — • thoughleetleeting

    Ch 5 — • puream eam

    • Anfeltfelt

    • throwoff off

    Ch 6 — • dovetawithwith

    • if of uof us

    • >&nb>

    • it off ne one of

    • bindinnd hnd harness

    Ch 7 — • lasslass=MsoNormal>

    • clasclass=MsoNormal>

    • bloopikepike

    • n cln class=GramE>”Almost

    • ovn hin his

    Ch 8 — • bacn thn the

    • in hims tms those

    • Nothto sto see

    Ch 9 — • never gon>gonna

    • kingking out

    • heaved a put sig sigh

    • nottwittwitchy

    • pof hof her

    Ch 11 — • honsionsigned

    • wavenovenous

    • reerinering in

    • runningy, by, but

    • just nee cra crawl

    • llE>Ramone (those are lower-case L’s)

    • shoulders> >

    —right after “What’s the what with little Miss Buffy Summers?” suddenly the rest of this chapter indents. i don’t see any code visible and onscreen it looks fine, just not in word. not sure why, maybe not worth worrying about. if you see any coded indent instruction there you might want to take it out, up to you.

    Ch 12 — • an <i>inkling</i> [not sure why this code is showing]

    • “n’t n’t suppose

    Ch 13 — • chainand and

    • belt ador wit with

    • Nn> Nothing

    • o:p>

    • sky.an>And

    Ch 14 — • slowlyas as not

    • give itme gme good

    • clasclass=MsoPlainText>”I was

    • [last line of chapter] p;

    Ch 15 — • heBut,But,

    • pI diI didn’t

    • p clp class=MsoPlainText>

    • hrms rms and

    • ourr frr from

    • of ove overly

    • thet dat day

    • Lost m’fangs ft

    Ch 16 — • yoo:p>o:p>

    • sense tyletyle

    • stray eetseets

    • weiit’sit’s

    Ch 17 — • Go sitwn, wn,

    • would tak take the

    • theittlettle

    • as she rante: “Y: “You

    Ch 18 — • dt het he

    • the th his his

    • and and practices

    • pan>

    • HHhhHow

    • VampVampire

    • heondiondie

    Ch 19 — • where Fred’s section starts, the rest of the chapter is in bold. only the names of the various POVs should be in bold, the body of text between should not be bold.

    • /p>

    • rescue.oursours

    Ch 20 — • ext>There had to

    Ch 21 — • Spike’srgy rgy

    • kilmethmething

    • convoluas ias it

    • vampirefracfractory

    • foem aem all

    • Spi and and

    • Spgetsgets

    • tosectsect

    • thannd ond on

    • holding out her wr [cuts off]

    • balcauscausing

    • rwarrwards

    • wiggins.”> >

    • Hol>Holding

    • Thefereference

    • Danteess ess

    Ch 22 — • ryonryone

    • demonnstenstead

    • cla class=MsoNormal>

    • to him is of no [cuts off]

    —at this point the word “no” where it cuts off is in italics, should not be. the remaining text in this chapter is in italics. it should not be. also the rest is bold. it should not be. only the paragraphs beginning “That is sufficient” should be in bold.

    Ch 23 — • first paragraph is in italics, should be bold but not italicized

    • ped. ed. We

    • n cn class=SpellE>Pret

    — in para beginning “The issue before the court”, the tags are showing for italics around the word “not”. remove them, i guess?

    • wweigweigh

    • won’low low

    Ch 24 — • &:P>

    • “Oiity>

    • workr usr us both

    War over wolfram & hart 19599

    —after zipping through this very short, very worthless story i have to wonder if the author is a minor. might be worth a quick check. author URL is http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=3771 . possible that they are just mindlessly boring, like the story, and have the attention span of a flea (like the story) and are on some personal mission to get as many sex scenes into as small a space as humanly possible with absolutely no description, just zip zap, in out, on to the next scene. and they are extremely specific about numbers—sizes of everyone’s cock, how many minutes things take, etc.—which is a classic sign of a young writer (they think it adds authenticity). but really, my daugher can write better than this. and she’s not much more than a teenybopper. i would almost say the author is a troll except i don’t think there’s that much thought behind what they’re writing.

    Menu 1 — • thof pof powerful

    Menu 2 — • be ed aed and

    • pdresdress

    Menu 3 — • gainitaretares

    Menu 4 — • rour our balls

    Menu 5 — • hado goo gone

    Menu 9 — • Evuck uck her

    Menu 10 — • rep Spi Spike

    • theckedcked

    • was treato a o a

    • doordoor

    —wow! who knew lindsay had a 12-incher!!! >snicker<

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