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P.S. Jennie—I have to apologize for pointing out some of the "dawn as a minor" stuff as TOS violations. When I read #15 more carefully I realized it only referred to writing about REAL PEOPLE who were minors, so apparently all the stories involving Dawn (and i think Faith or Willow was in one) as a minor are okay. Sorry! eek. Just a TAD overzealous.
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I’m not going to search for glitches in
Web of Dark Desire
or
Buffy the Vampire Slayer: Luck of the Irish
because they are both plagiarized (I reported them in the TOS section). The reviewers are the ones who know the genre well enough to have figured this out—I never would have known.
No glitches on p.16 stories. I wonder if this is because most of them are late 2005 (i.e., December) and 2006, after the crashes? not sure. On to p.15!
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Schehreade’s Challenge (misspelled, but then it is)
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27855
• His demosagesage, so familiar
• completely,ssinssing a kiss
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She’s the One For Me
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=17609
Ch 1:
• That ry may makes
I think the author made most of the fixes already, judging by the AN at the front of all her stories acknowledging the crash glitches, and in this particular one, by the weird line endings in many places compared with the mostly smooth flow of line lengths (i think that’s where she made the fixes)
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Rituals, Bonds and Unification
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=13803
Menu 1:
• made r esr escape
• BrenBrendon
• Bumockmocked him
• happily b dee deepthroating
• rapidly ben hun human
• what thel hel he
• just nod yad,”d,” he said
• Giles...uhwoulwould like
• is to fiomeoomeone normal
• really sha lia listened
• with ttlettle help
• There wasethiething
• Both Angnd Snd Spike
Menu 3:
• aggressive sonuvch ich in
• el del dressed
• bag a hea headed
• it isRIGHRIGHT!
• el sel stood
• ey bey back
• Yeah...w I w I was like
• out of me mia cha chip
• her hair std. d.
• a f a feeling
Menu 4:
• growled almoalmost sed fed forward
• tilltill weak I see
• ae vae vampires
• matterednd And Angel
• yellowshe she stood
• that ad nad no
The Contest
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=12213
Ch 1:
• was stin hen her
• grinned ar owr own
• request bhe mhe made it
• the Harin win website
• Angel thinhat hat would
Ch 2:
• before int tnt too far
• open tedroedroom door
Ch 3:
• &quoffy ffy ran
• took it agestgesture of
• notepad, shgan gan
• think yobe fbe finished
Her
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=3600
Ch 1:
• betterse lse last
• crosseths ths with
• stopped andked ked up
Ch 2:
• bac sch school
• apikepike gave
Ch 4:
• Buffyyes yes narrowed
• The ab mov move
Ch 5:
• lowered head ead and
Ch 6:
• “’;Dawn?
• all demodemonic
• talltall Scooby
Brought to Heaven
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9700
Ch 1:
• have madee joe joke
• thatchetches the
Ch 4:
• Hearihe the
One Clear Shot
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=5168
Ch 1:
• hefenefenses
• triedsurvsurvey her
• when yoke uke up
• things on yown own was
Ch 7:
• wrapped his arounround her
Ch 8:
• that CordCordelia’s
• stressed twn twn that
• he looremaremarkably
• was was a bare
The Shock of the Normal
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1921
Ch 1:
• open doordoor a notch
• the irritateoughought came
Ch 3:
• setting up our ca&quo”
• The op cop computer
• his undeadrt art and
Ch 4:
• Hegs lgs locked
Ch 5:
• Anya a pointed e ane and she
• been at leawo wwo weeks
Ch 6:
• The lastng sng she
• ripped at tee tee and
Ch 7:
• baby thiintointo a bag
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Whose Shanshu?
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=7190
Ch 1:
• debating thuestuestionable
• would haotheothered
Ch 2:
• and b sor sorting
• weird. had had half
• patrolling wier. er.
Ch 3:
• her. A . A cold
Ch 4:
• and disaping ing into
• now? Tguy guy said
Ch 5:
• be ato mto make it
Ch 6:
• decision to Con Connor go
Ch 8:
• ot;Sot;Sit down
Ch 9:
• You had tideaidea for me
Ch 10:
• find &quo” [cuts off]
Ch 11:
• is not a chapter but a recipe for cookies — delete?
Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=4161
• “Almost.t; [para] t;
• uot;uot;What part
• would ma gre great human
Three Strikes You’re Out
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1925
•all the housemaiemained unlit
The Invisible Scooby
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1898
Ch 1:
• spook...&qk...
Ch 2:
all.”contcontinued
Ch 3:
• the lust warongronger
The Invisible Vamp
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1899
• deliberate kes kes and
• pressed againis ois own
• same , he, he clenched
Joan
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1905
Ch 1:
• Wre yre you calling
• Is there a Lord of the [at the word “Lord”, the underlining was mistakenly turned on; not sure if it’s a crash-related glitch
Ch 2:
• did you seat? at? The
• skills, b can can’t
• meantime, jrelarelax
• offero uso use his
• at bizabizarre
• and trto sto smooth
• rt crt craved
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2 B/A fics
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544208467
• story search
PAGE 18:
Crossover Challenge
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544210071
• challenge
PAGE 17:
Wanted: A Challenge
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544214190
• challenge
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PAGE 17:
She’s the One For Me
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=17609
• rev 6, Josie id # 117006 — flame
• rev 8, biggest GD bitch on the block, id # 119783 —flame
• rev 9, Anton Figg, id # 121362 — flame, although he does bring up the bumping-up problem deservedly
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Discovering Dawn
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544215639
• sexual situations, Dawn (minor)/Spike
Dawn Meets the Principal
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544215645
• sexual situations, Dawn (minor)/Principal Snyder
Who Are You (Faith’s Edition)
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544216135
• rev 2 isn’t a review, just a plea FOR reviews by the author
Buffy the Vampire Slayer: Luck of the Irish
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544215083
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544215083
• most of this story is plagiarized according to rev #2, themayoman, id # 3000012861
Web of Dark Desire
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544215087
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544215087
• again it is obviouis from the first couple of reviews that this is plagiarism—of the same author, BY the same author as above! maybe a closer look needs to be taken at anything written by this MASTERFICTION person. on his profile page (or her) it’s clearly stated that he is “rewriting” a bunch of jimmy orthac’s stories. boys and girls, can you say “all i do is plagiarize”? (i knew you could.)
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PAGE 19:
Reditum ad se
IN REVIEWS:
• rev #3 sinkore, id# 2035535722 — flame
Get the Bastard
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ead&no=4279
• rev 3, Anon id # 12736 — flame
Joan
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ead&no=1905
• rev 3, L. id # 20610 — brings up a good point, although i don’t know if there’s anything you can do about it. i’ve seen this, too, although in the harry potter archive. someone wants to drag their story up to the front so more people will read it, so they go into chapter edit but don’t really edit anything, just to bump it up. TOS violation? don’t really know....
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What a Slayer Needs
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544200810
• story may have been abandoned; AN at start of Ch.1 states Faith is a minor. no sexual situations thru Ch.2 but appears to be an intended Faith/Giles pairing later in the story. so, not sure if this is a TOS violation YET...?
The Adventures of William the Bloody
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=11733
• rev 1, Jasmine id # 64076 — flame
Her
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ead&no=3600
• rev 7, Coolestchick8000 id # 14211 — she admits she is an author who bumps her stories up higher in the queue under false pretenses to generate renewed interest but here she is knocking the author of this story for doing the same thing!
• rev 8, Joe Hundredaire id # 14297 — flaming rev 7
• rev 9, arguing with rev 8, and on down the line, a big thread of argument with other reviewers, GEEZ!
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Connections
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=6592
Menu 1:
• Xander fosomesome reason
• The e Sce Scoobies
Menu 2:
• Younow now how
• and std hid his old
Menu 3:
• shoutingbscebscenities
• attentiDamnDamn Travers
• powerful ke tke things
• Xanlooklooked at
• like my ,Al,Alexei, and
• you, Pottehe ghe gasped
Menu 4:
• The biesbies had run
Menu 5:
• with the knoge tge that
Menu 6:
• The Sunnydalerl sal said
Menu 7:
• Ethan would wat wake until
• the beautifulng mng male
Menu 8:
• are in hell,ara ara answered
• kept urginem aem ahead
• they burned awayitheither noticed
Menu 9:
• reaso woo worry
• would be ly sly stronger
Menu 11:
• Bloody ,” ,” Spike
Menu 13:
• back to the le. le. I need
Summer of Redemption
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1618
Menu 1:
• fornfornia
• was reale, le, that she
• No, yet.yet. It’s too
The Confession
IN REVIEWS
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ead&no=1714
• rev#2, Jess id#1367 — That ed! ed!
Captured
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=498
• He cry twy tweaked
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A Bat A Feather
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27225
Ch 1:
• Watching as lletllet, in seeming
• Random cockammiamming into
• The [para] The images swirled
Ch 2:
• first AN: started thising ing the break
• the mood’ whhat’hat’s the
• we’ve g be be bored
• of the ceme. Th. The
• “Phil is itll Pll Phil, your
• call me G-man...” [para] enteenter>~~~~~ i think this was supposed to be a centered dividing line?
• the groundin ain and
• raised histle tle to the
Ch 3:
• in AN: not a glitch, but...”reviews are a MUST”—??! okay, sorry, i’m over it now. oh, also a plug for her yahoo group
Ch 4:
• in AN: oh my. her yahoo group is “a good place...to read the stories without site induced mistakes”
My Sweet Valentine
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=7848
• the . He. He could
• as at uat up on top
• fall rign ton top of her
• side of couccouch
• Angelus sned ned for a
• to her alk alk her dog
• leanedk ink in the
• his shirt,tilltill holding
• she said quie [para] as [para] as she moved
• come and geu.”u.”
• propped up sup still
• growled htlyhtly and
• feeling up heg; hg; his eyes
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Jaded
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=383
Menu 1:
• gauntas ias if she
• withprojproject?”.
• sed sed in mud caked
• to gro ground
• her brodefedefenses
Menu 2:
• she smilrettrettily
• usual rnoornoon activities
• choor hor high
• have luwithwith friends
Menu 3:
• the artc fac face of a
• clumpsom tom the catwalk
• pong tng that thing
• But the g gir girls
• into the ows.ows.
• military psionsion, she ju the the weight
• ring of cursese she shoved
Menu 4:
• eight yesincsince he’d
• in nearlght ght years
• to si out out the
• Willowrmurrmured
• nodded, hovemovements going
Menu 7:
• Keep in mwherwhere you
Menu 9:
• start to snin pin past
Menu 11:
• arms ed wed with
Menu 12:
• She followeke ake a docile
Menu 13:
• “D [para] “Died? Sure
First Love
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=385
• Ceeliegledgled
• log upg up ticker
• quiet, f she she said
• undermihem.hem.
• Angel. Noteluselus
• know,n a n a blind man
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Difference Between Naked and Nekkid
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=22649
• I was thinkinout out that
• aren’t famr wir with
Not All the Monsters
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=22650
• while he wtilltill living
• clock.d hed he gone
• phone aeganegan to
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Dark Gift (after i started working on p24, this story mysteriously moved to p.25! but hasn’t been done yet, so here it is)
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27175
Menu 1:
• Buffy Sus, ys, your
• througr mir mind
• need to gsomesomething
• delicately. [para] k’>
• former Scourf Euf Europe’s
• Tara’s lips> [para] “Be
• Joyce pulSpikSpike into
Menu 2:
• behind hReacReaching
• Posterpearpeared on the
• most ridicu scr scrapes
• cats for s. [para] s.
Menu 3:
• and eupa. [para] a.
Menu 5:
• mentioned in TOS violations — not a chapter, merely an AN
Menu 6:
• in beginning AN: Single quote marks = thos [para] s
• lead ofom iom it
• you’robabobably the
• shadows. MastMaster Vampire
Menu 7:
• as sressressed her face
• find a heartbe”It’”It’s so
• Shuld uld also
• was the Sihildhilde bond
• Itood,ood, cos I
Menu 8:
• quickly cld upd up the
• drink from h [para] B [para] Buffy
• entire bodyok wok with
• face, “I a [para] “ [para] “Stop fishing
• stuff of hildesldest dreams
Menu 9:
• from S’s p’s pale
Menu 10:
• has done [ para] Bu [para] Buffy
• bursts ofo afo and then
• fangs inim.”im” Tara
• walked, pa, panting
Menu 11:
• sensn ofn of
• unused to. wer were fragile
• Joyce and Dnoddnodded
Menu 12:
• I geI get it
• Selfishtardtard
• Spike’s e hae hands
• delectabloodlood into
• pulling ar bor body
Menu 14:
• you legsney,ney,” Buffy
Menu 15:
• it an enthusiastuck.uck. His
Menu 16:
• Buffy ped ped his
• fy sfy snarled
• on sma small fangs
Menu 17:
• loadsman man I wish
• s, Is, I love you
Menu 18:
• into his h wih with a
• had saiandeander was
• sigh. [para] [missing text] can can write
• stood annt ont over
• in his randyughtughts he
• stared siesslessly up
• Buffy? [para] [missing text] e hae had lost
Menu 19:
• snorted ateretared at the
• to stopselfself he
• dra Joy Joyce’s
• Not badpes,pes,” Spike
• Taour.our... whatever
Obeying Nature
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=25573
Menu 1:
• tired I s. Ws. What
• said tha sho should
Menu 2:
• things wstarstarting to
Menu 3:
• alonTheiTheir intended
• rays gracine sue surface
• said wi rue rueful smile
Menu 6:
• In her oon ton the
• raising suspis. As. At
Menu 8:
• own, GileGiles wouldn’t
Six Inches Between Us
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=25313
Menu 1:
• spilled dher her cheek
• no, ofrse rse not
Menu 2:
• “Until la” H” He took
Menu 3:
• startled expres. [cuts off] [para] . [para] “Ha bloody ha
• owedowed yawned and
• kitchen talkingut Gut Giles’
• jumpedn shn she
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Nobody’s Supposed to Be Here
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544204134
• IS this a story? it’s not what i would call a story, more like...i don’t know...poetry maybe? not sure if it’s OK for it to stay or not. a judgement call (not mine), maybe?
From Out of Nowhere
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544187294
• from the AN at the beginning it sounds like author has deleted the rest of this story from AFF and posted it elsewhere and says “Please ignore the fic below”. if the rest has been deleted and will not be posted here, should this intro chapter be deleted also? not sure why she didn’t do it herself.
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Dark Gift
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27175
Ch 5 is not a chapter, merely an AN
PAGE 21:
Unfinished Business
IN REVIEWS
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544204510
• rev 1, anon id#1035482592 — flame
PAGE 20:
Unspoken
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1884
• AN clearly states Dawn is a minor (16) and story involves her in sexual situations
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A Want, A Need, A Craving
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=35352
Ch 1:
• but todayometomething was
• the remainingls. ls. These
Ch 2:
• girls rea ready for
• She knew thatshe she were
• out the cosatisation but
• retrieved a sk, wh, white tank
Ch 3:
• all sexual thougconcconcerning the
• with persistenrce.rce. She
• Dawn went wat tat the
Ch 4:
• dark sparsparse hair
• around hhoulhoulders, and
• Dawn ded tod to give
Tempus de Muto
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27834
Ch 1:
• to pull oer mer make up
• Ie Bue Buffy
• of hin ren reaction
• their arguingknewknew that
• them aou?ou?” Her
• Wsomesome more
Ch 2:
• Xand’s the one for’ [para] ‘ [para] She
• that?’; Hilentlent presence
Ch 3:
• That’ll be en.’ [para] .’ [para] She
• skin costedsted briefly
• The [para] The two black-clad
• But, thgaingain, you
• No, blng... ng... My
• in her grasp. [para] !” [para] !” [para] Amy
Ch 4:
• in AN: much for tuppoupport hope
• what’ppenppened. She
• snorsnorted in derision
• May fri fried his brains
• He pauseockiocking
• Every nihe she
• power emanatinom Wom Willow
• were safr thr the night
• I’m finejustjust used
• and ware gue guys
• He unruunruffled, as usual
• two hem,hem, as she
• on her tis, ss, she reached
• between the co. Bu. Buffy
Ch 5:
• will beyingying away
• Maybeethiething to
• “Oh [para] “Oh come on
• backpack by hert. [para] t.
• W? Wh? Why?
• navigated the fic.fic. He
• away ‘cauou tou thought
• What Angeied ied to do
• a sigh elieelief, she
• gloves anme bme back to
• wince oionaionally.
• so surprised, p” Sp” Spike snarked
Ch 6:
• Blanc ask asked.
• heard he ahe abandoned
• firmly on tnconnconscious
• dug tgh tgh the ice box
• to allhe vhe vampire
Ch 7:
• in AN: havso tso taken
• the ruh ish isn’t
• nofigmfigment he
• Watche fac face
• with us unnyunnyhell is still
• “Wo”Wonderful
• No letplayplay. Just
• Found itWillWillow leapt
Ch 8:
• They co’t ‘t see who
• gonna ha dri drink now
• and not explainit. it. She
• AbouAbout Connor
• gro growled
• rip their heoff off to joking
• rulElboElbows and
• you made o and and then
• expectedBuffBuffy commented
Ch 9:
• I got w kiw kicks and
• sorry knocknocking you
• with t jus just like
• warm blon onn one hand
• through thndowndow
• Buffy sobbShe She had
Ch 10:
• Relief flooderougrough
• you for everyg. Ig. I mean
• “Wel”Well, I figure
• tired watcher ste, se, slightly
• peerhrouhrough the crack
• managedstaystay
• was wrappeoundound
• theupanupants
• cotee.tee.” He
• that whe wae was ready
• musimusical beds
• his tenderneBuffBuffy
• pikepike nodded
• mouth, savou it. it. He
• golden girln ann and would
• gentgentle curve
• chin. coolcool thumb
• was she [cuts off] [para] B [para] Buffy
• out of them. “m. “Just
• “Ee [para] “Eep!
Ch 11:
• kept chantias das did
Ch 12:
• Anyak a k a deep
• kiss offy’ffy’s upturned
• mean? [para] “H [para] “He means
• “W [para] “Willow
• closed hyes yes and
• Anya pd und unable
Ch 13:
• ffy ffy shook her
• sheet to heest.est. Running
• glared hop hopefully
• again!e rae ran into
• on drg leg lessons
• everyg oug out
• from sicksick bed
• on me.ngernger! Shoots
• “Gettertter
Ch 14:
• hiccuppedo hio his
• a lotta thithatthat’d turn
• toven... ven...”
• Bwrapwrapped
• ou rou ready
• “ [para] “Sorry,” Groo muttered
• I call aleralerus [not 100% sure this is a glitch but i think so]
Ch 15:
• imagininike’ike’s pale
• looked u her her sleeping
• throatell,ell, it’s
• scarred mane toe to retrieve
• wrappimseimself around
• bring thrcerrceress
Ch 16:
• know thatngs ngs might
• their pocketshelphelp out
• into large f. [cuts off] [para] . [para] Spike stormed
• Okay, pla plan
• in S’s ‘s arms
• I’m gonnaan uan up a
• used in the s.” A.” Anya
• made a mentate tte to make
• poisoned,roo roo
Ch 17:
• vowed imseimself to do
• replangrangrily
• can I hel [para] T [para] Tara
• So du thu think
• a haa hand on
• at the scarren whn who
• investigated thisk pek person
Ch 18:
• stroked hean ean fingers
Ch 19:
SEE TOS VIOLATIONS FORUM
• this is not a chapter, merely an AN and plea for reviews and advertising other fics of hers and her friends on AFF and other websites — should be deleted
Cretian Escape
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=22554
• Revs 2,3 from the end (Anon, id#205944,945) are duplicates
IN STORY TEXT:
Ch 1:
• I am so sorrNot.Not. I should
• Ma sho shoved his friend
• turned his ntiontion back
Ch 2:
• So LA iugh?ugh?”
• doi The The Survivors
• It was suchhamehame that all
• painted white wa rea red or
• for a monmaybmaybe two
• for Ir Irakleio had
Ch 5:
• ne, ne, hook him
• proving to be sm Th The minions
• Yithion anlamalamata on mainland
• from tew Wew Watcher’s
Memory Redux
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=5210
Ch 1:
• in AN: want to t t_g t_geyer
• Whistler td awd away from
• wouldn’t kn [cuts off] [para] T [para] The silence
• belt stocstockings
• new profon, on, the only
• trial. he phe perp doesn’t
• kept traf slf slayers
• end AN: I neede fee feedback
Ch 2:
• ondeondered as he
• waiter ttheitheir order
• disgust, nly nly saw
• back in j No Not to mention
• engaged whundeunder Red’s
• ten perceny isy is higher
• her fhot.hot. Just
• for both of thbut but he
Ch 3:
• out of otherple’ple’s business
Ch 4:
• favorite happace,ace, his new
• could WillWilliam better
• CuriousSpike also
Ch 5:
• want ande bae back
• like we were ed, ed, I would
• this second ch, he, he was
Ch 6:
• opening AN: But - Adulnficnfict Rocks
• Caribbea [cuts off] [para] T [para] Their
• his qion,ion, Buffy
Ch 7:
• breathing wat net necessary
• a cat likile ile before
• Betn hen her tongue
Ch 8:
• dem demon in him
• “, wh, whoa, I’m not
• intenallnally reminder
• he mhe much dreaded
• Thllowllow and Xander
• were around eotheother. He
• Ok cou couldn’t
• Asthinthinking, Spike
• William’s. , wa, wasn’t
Ch 9:
• standing acrorom rom him
• heard himwl bwl before
• didn’t kher,her, Beth
• when shnallnally eased
• her haabovabove her
• With a ho voi voice that
• him saying t wor words
Ch 10:
• Buffy wast ant and
• him, anythiim. im. Now
• Oe ote other
• two men.vertvertheless
• had juiveniven up
• any possible problem,h wah was
• felt y wiy with
• hundred on pon party
• and Frihealhealing up
Ch 11:
• in the chapter title: in theht Dht Direction
• told storof hof home
• Literally rnto nto him
• and nodded.eadieading
• kindtosstosser to offer
• lok for placou wou would
• at Spi “Ma “May I
• Holda sea sec
• le Wle Willow and
Ch 12:
• funeral ho Whe When he
• beauty waeepiepping in the
• than any r hur human in
Ch 13:
• even cder der any other
• Jumpingm thm the unexpe swa swat
• before hen een entered
• Always, no matter wh [cuts off]
Ch 15:
• ponce, ‘h, sh, she had
• some nicetaurtaurant and then
• the all tSummSummers’
• “B [para] Holding up his hand
• public xicaxication, and
• romantic restnt. nt. However
• wickedly ssistsister. Come
Ch 16:
• five ts wts were
Ch 17:
• restraining hnot not pushing
• heel os has hand
• “ve yve you so
Ch 18:
• study?pikepike inwardly
• in samesame room
• unwanted parentst net never
• low cutrgunrgundy dress
• in hernionnion
• her pperspersonality
• carried ?” [para] ?”
• Willow aara ara dissolved
• Beth nd and and
• before wheth eth was still
• make with thves ves on
Ch 19:
• as shoeplaeplaced
• him twenty-/sev/seven was
Ch 20:
• get injuredo sho she
• ninety-five perceuffyuffy. No
• long, anr vor voice
• sit in har oar over
• Be werrprirprised
• never eac each other
• slayer voicitchitched low
Ch 21:
• in chapter title: Infy [para] y
• his rrectrection I broke up
• me the r to to bargain
• purpose. nguinguin with one wing
• “we’rwe’re up to
• some participa thi this time
• mys An And boom
• were ablyably celebrating
• it blo blown up
• of the coct gct gets a little
• last timen yen you died
Ch 22:
• DoesDoesn’t surprise me
• he shoos hes head
Who Is Who
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=301
Ch 2:
• hear Spi Spike
• witpertpert hands
Ch 3:
• elongateninenines plunge
• cou Pau Pausing,
• to teandeander you
• As [para] As the
Ch 4:
• final line in final AN: TB [para] TBC. Please
Ch 5:
• to, pe, pet
Ch 6:
• Spike, thatthat*
• own eyereadreadable
Ch 7:
• was she thng? ng? This
Ch 8:
• Ne [para] Never fond
• even soconvconvincing to herself
• happpy, cy eny enjoying
Ch 9:
• should e, ye, ya know
• w miw minutes
• but thumpeumped in
Ch 10:
• it.”ffy ffy led the way
• which Buffyediaediately wanted
• have spmoremore time
• but somng hng had been
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Wonder of Oz
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=14623
Ch 1:
• feel hea heat they
Ch 2:
• MINE, excluly. ly. Now
• summon an erec on on his own
• with ohelmhelming need
• swollen nubsvingving han hand back
• been en, en, claimed
• toe dee deep breaths
• over as quicks his his sore
• yourst I t I say
• didn't matce coe collar
Mischief and Mayhems' Meddlings
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=11877
Ch 1:
• beginning AN: the ps wes were
Ch 2:
":What are you thinking over theres." s." Mayhem
• before sg sog someone
• Mischief glanat Mat Mayhem
^----fixed
The Boarder
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=22552
Ch 4:
• with the e. He. He had
Ch 5:
• from the restthemthem. Love
• William thra his his head
• A pau paused, reality
Ch 7:
• I stlovelove you.
• put itply,ply, she
• from theigh, gh, Angel
Ch 8:
• that he wasing ing love
• go in pin public
• relaxFor For the
Ch 9:
• William de ode of him
• back teartears, William
• " mig might change
The Penny Series
IN STORY SUMMARY:
• the show sta (Co (Complete)
^----fixed
IN STORY TEXT:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=6031
Ch 2:
• on outta he [para] H [para] He border
Ch 3:
• eyes, moren enn enough
• hy, hy, thank you
Ch 4:
• and huld uld almost
• the depf itf it for the
• a bad sig [para] Lo [para] Locking
Ch 5
• There's a pecy ecy coming
• He's mini m [para] W [para] What had
Ch 7:
• we still havchanchance
• Thert hrt had been
• insidce knewknew no boudnds
Ch 8:
• brow at , he, he slipped
• thougddindding blood
• rest and bft tft to dreams
Ch 9:
• pretty cful.ful.
• onldustdustrial part
• Later pWe'rWe're
Ch 10:
• rge rge cool hand
• tickled hinguengue. She
• "Wha"What sort
• I'll see latelater.
• So we'tilltill on for
• was infiniteetteetter then the
• e lie lights were
• So ISo I take it
• ear, e she she
• Youk lik like a
• and teaser oer other one
• back of heroat,oat, before
• you wwearwearing your
Ch 11:
• of her innce;nce; he felt
• gruffly, "Turn o" [para] "
• as he d ind in behind
• I pre,"e," he vowed
• beforunteuntering off
• Angel?"fy afy asked
• It's notard ard problem
• shiny co pen pennies
Ch 12:
• o noo not create
• Them ecm echoed
• knew he weoo foo far
• pluottoottom lip
• on a losky sky scream
• his lingerinnguinguistic
• dis disappeared into
Ch 13:
• to peallyally ask her
• this giruld uld be so
• pounding in hirs, rs, he barely
Ch 14:
• penny in hissonasonal war
• Damn it ers ers go away
Ch 15:
• how in theld dld does he
• the Slawillwill get
Ch 16:
• but she'ver ver love
• book torevireviously marked
• tru s of of self
• its occupanell ell in
• fueling hs . Th. The world
• movement ade ade was
Ch 17:
• Caution pntednted him
• the shadowall.all. At
• she wo wan want you
• toesteestep him
• shook in reliend snd she
• before hisep gep grew
• A s of of dread
• fell backw fro from the
• ComeCome on vampire
Ch 18:
• his fingas has he
• cinch of hiw ow [para] H [para] Happiness
• gos?gos?" he asked
• on her . "W. "Well when
• a brooding g. "W. "What the
• and Bufskedsked with
• you patalonalone without
Ch 19:
• leave bue see seemed
• Buf he he choked
Ch 20:
• aboumethmething-something
• use of thry cry convenient
• he glandowndown at her
Ch 21:
• conseqes oes of it
• the chanceuse use mirrors
• makeup haphazy sty stuffed
• common wier der deadbeat
• thast it wasoke.oke. Faith
• to the bookshelv [para] B [para] Buffy
• Hed, hd, his voice
• she waroanroan, and it
• then her s, us, up and up
Ch 22:
• did quiz hveryvery now
• canncanned, soup
• she mo sen sensually
• Surpd, hd, he accused
• hit the nailthe the head
• when his childlledlled out
Ch 23:
• constructed Lati [para] "H [para] "Hmm
• shudderi"Ho"Horrible
• through the ss tos to track
• It was ifs if those
• still bhinghing, he
• army wasn'tng tng to bad
Ch 24:
• to the devhe whe wasn't
• said a squaeaseeasely man
• secbadlbadly dressed
• along bd hid him
• "Ge [para] "Gee
• reflectingemosemost on the
Ch 25:
• Angel,"growgrowled in
• are you doin?" [para] ?"
• I am yourde,"de," said the
• flung theer oer over elf elf and
• Christ,"breabreathed in
• into next next room
• evil socide ide suddenly
• demon sna, ya, yanking
• effect of thndrendreds of
• he'd red,red, expecting
• making damndamn rules
• corridors u he he thought
• Without a bardsards glance
• T tas tasks in, and
• picked elf elf up off
• its unibroerhaerhanging its
Ch 26:
• the plathatthat she'd
• to save he [para] A [para] A light
• had expl in in an emotional
Ch 27:
• Your Johnn [cuts off]
• of the ache ihe idea of
• she arelirelieved
• Buffhe yhe yelped
• orriorried, he
• going on aboungelngel, it's
• or Willow'sm. Sm. She
• Angs te temperature
• tasks I didle Ile I was
• Frozen, he lookp. Hp. Hope
• Ryan f boy boy?
fixed through p 11 (Pennies in an Open Palm)
A Life to Remember
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9046
Menu 7:
• up to her. r.
• Hey s."s."
• soon.llowllow was
• Agent Milleor Gor Gates
• just wato kto know
• gel,gel, knowing he
Menu 8:
• her way ode ade and into
• rang doordoorbell
• night?" ow aow asked
• opened the do [cuts off]
A Spot of Dreaming
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=5809
• make it intereg—ang—and arousal
• touch iThatThat's mine
• aware hen hen he drifted
• attention onder'der's mouth
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When She Loves Me...
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544187312
• Rev #3, anon # 2035440370 – not really a review...borderline flame? or not serious enough?
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Uncontrolled Desire
IN REVIEWS:
• Rev #2, "N" #2035366640 — not a review
Ties That Bind
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34717
Ch 2:
• false alarm bec his his human
Ch 4:
• Xander day ort?" t?" Xander
• Was Giflusflustered?
Ch 5:
• Nibblind tnd tugging
• "No [para] "Not a very good
• whole bodemblembled in
• Finally sulleulled back
• him in head ead a hundred
• was not decenis bis bare
• nightmare ane wae was going
Ch 6:
• hisSh. "h. "Drink?
• But omoromorrow night
• He could understand P. [para] H. [para] He considered
• imagination. flu flushed a
• Slayer. ow eow every
• jumpjumped to her feet
• And she smibackback
• deal witotecotective, and
Ch 9:
• smirked up at She She gave
• force herseo tuo turn away
• down to thigthighs and up
Ch 10:
• And he's alotecotective and
• so much of hersen Ozn Oz that
• hoped he d led learn
• accepted it spvoluvolumes more
• hadn't missed e cae calling
• had after jus just told
• inches from h his hiss has hard as glass
Ch 11:
• himself alongsidr bor body
• to place bot both on the
Ch 12:
• it was wroHe aHe also
• about him tng lng like
Ch 13:
• search and replace maybe? all the quote marks are odd characters. there are too many things to write them all here. just about every line, literally. i don't know but i think single quotes also are "bad", double and single quotes
• here are the wordords:
• sat in thertyartyard under
Ch 14:
• fortunately back to regular quotes!
• leaned slightlyhis his strength
• got a fainto ofo of grief
Ch 15:
• we're back to the "foreign" quote marks. don't know if this was part of the glitchery or what.
• here are the wordords:
• found herselfventvently hoping
• fine beforecamecame along
Ch 16:
• geez. quotes normal again!
• I know I c I can and
• rea really? Just
• brokenly whie cle climaxed
• into the kitchWillWillow was
• It's allht Bht B
Ch 17:
• trouble wng Ang Angel
• That was a. Or. Or the time
• Howg hag had
• resolving a damn t. Wh. When
• from her pla placed it
Ch 19:
• he had prob wai waited for them
• She shrie She She knew this
• And you ar hon honorable
• He pulled heose ose to him
Inevitable
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=37851
Ch 1:
It's XandHe aHe asked
^----fixed
Reflection of Love
IN SUMMARY (out on p.27 of Buffy> General):
• inherits a hoand and finds
IN STORY:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=19812
Menu 1:
• Buffy's gentle attens cns couldn't
• because e wee were
Menu 2:
• she was q cer certain
• than a le ole of feet
Menu 3:
• by his late fat had had also
• not repeat lf, lf, he deduced
Menu 4:
• dark la [para] th [para] that gave
Menu 5:
• answer wit without causing
• wonderful c be be anything
• Williamome ome on
Menu 6:
• feel muche ate at ease
Menu 7:
• going to storkiorking, he
• FirmFirmly shoving
Menu 8:
• she gradualbecabecame
• cheeks a l a light
• even [para] wh [para] what I'm
• righrougrough the mirror
• of the ng, ng, making
Menu 9:
author accidentally posted Part 8 in both Menu 8 and Menu 9, Menu 9 should be deleted
Fatherly Advice
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=20282
• was in tod hea heaven
• at the blo [para] vam [para] vampire
• ke fke father
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Stimulate
IN REVIEWS:
• final reviewer, “Heavy Metal Alchemist” #2035438578 — flame? highly deserved but no effort to couch the review in helpful terms
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FROM PG 29:
Hell To Pay
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=35480
Ch 4
• was enjoyinery ery minute
FROM PG 28:
Roses for Lucifer
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=27326
Ch 1:
• hugecificifix that
• so much immonmmon
• about AndrYou You must
• girl was a vae. [para] e.
Ch 2:
• looked around the h “L “Leave us
• and, mosportportant, her
• seed was sing ing into her
Ch 3:
• get accustoto tto the
• was in a y, sy, she
• A thousand thougwerewere running
• next to Fai [para] Wil [para] Willow sighed
• Hey, you gotell ell me what
• of a c toc too great
• Just teal eal away
• you to Ans, js, just to
• assume Asus’us’s position
Ch 4:
• but thele dle did not
• “.n tin times the
• , m vem very sorry
• “Aru hau happy
Ch 5:
• Buffy tht. Tt. This time
• are yoing?ing?”
• Catholic monaste dev devastated
• purchased by D fro from a
• TheyThey are part
• You’avidavid
• felt for pul pulse
• when setureturned to
• Thmpirmpire was
• upright positionSo wSo what
• many haggedgged for
• hadeen een human
Lesson Plan
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=36235
Menu 1:
• found a bode wie will go
Menu 2:
• first line: eluselus gazed ... she peacefulleptlept next
• ing ing back through
• Luxuriaccoaccommodations
• could als cou counted
• just wto lto let go
• nature.coulcould not
Menu 6:
• barrier ofthinthing that
• the objef hif his
Menu 9:
• they had t tot together
Menu 10:
• And he ady hdy had something
• Antelus purre hin hint
Menu 11:
• final line: Perhaps Willow’s plighthad [cuts off]
Night School
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30161
Ch 4:
• look here? I e the the location
• ahis his was the thanks
Ch 5:
• texture and tastet wat was so
• The e ofe of her blood
• pulled her dohe bhe bed to
Ch 6:
• tight and his firhrushrust caused him pain alwithwith her
• illoillow could
Ch 7:
• those Willod evd ever cared
• state of paralyzinnfusnfusion once
• I’m here,gelugelus murmured
Ch 9:
• was experiencing w mak make
• enough to notwhetwhether he
• thas nas no sacrifice
Ch 11:
• sense of incred pri pride
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Dirty Little Secret
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=37572
• first/only review - pretty much a flame!
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i can't believe how many looooong stories there were on this page! so, sorry, but here we go:
Violently Happy
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=16572
Menu 1:
• in AN: light siSeasSeason 5
• past es. [para] s.
• on top of gs, gs, but
• however dus dust...
• no body,worrworries.
• played oppe Rue Russell
• to think t, wt, who
• grimacis shs she
• Noting,es ses says
• "of co" [n" [now
• [conf; tu; turning
• ", ab, about that
• themily,ily, friends
• to wha what happens
• pack of cigtes tes on
Menu 2:
• always pathelly lly illegible
• Most definit If If I'm
• another nicknam [para] G [para] Giles
• ya: ya: "They're
Menu 3:
• Vofromfrom the
• Spike: sidesidering it
• wanted to sel. 10. 10,000 pounds
• bring coe container
• Sp [para] Spike: "The
• youth. e's e's always
• find a wa Buf Buffy-proof
• Wi: "O: "Oh right
• "Can'tfight? By what mechani [cuts off]
Menu 4:
•The Br (or (or somewhere
• a little eyow fow flick
• will I sou tou tomorrow
• up in Frn Francisco
• floor [2x unknown char]—sounds
• of ce. Se. Sorry.
• : "T: "There's
• Am I wrong ?" [para] ?"
• [thri at at this
• the look os fas face during
• Sce0 [para] 0
• like a shape-shr orr or
• And anteanted..??
• her refre dri drink
• you'd be g heg help.
• Mirahomehome.
• sort of e hee her head
• And ye wou would
Menu 5:
• know, sitisitic or
• as eginegins moving
• think goingoing to
• in AN: for the timeng, ng, she
• something importanthat'hat's true
Menu 6:
• you go on an abn about
• about yobilibility
• [Hemeaemeanor moves
• thiwoulwould be
• Anya tok pak part-time
• it's anult"ult"
• comes thr wit with
Menu 7:
•the "gallerevalevaluating
• I see l anl and
• dealer is ased aed a space
• swords/kniveth hth handles
• then ths ths the way
• [a quiaughaugh escapes
• on the rityrity for the
• interest iese ese items
• I t may maybe
• could forgo hot hotel
• driveut yut you'll
• scope out grougrounds
• you canss uss up
• with you in thuit uit without
• you comple ign ignored
• you didnBut But
• black hairownrown eyes
• Nothing needneed to
• has od dod deal
• in thate wee were
• ahen hen I say
Menu 8:
• I wasrollrolling with
• "He migh [cuts off] [para] X [para] Xander
• Where aru gou going
Menu 9:
• Thought ouldould hide
• ,I ,I think
• sorry, I tho Mir Miranda
• Calur dur dogs off
• Welln gen gentleman
• Aou tou think
• who are runniith ith a decent
• eyes are closShe She is
• eyes]whatwhat is the
• stops him bri—a f—a fleeting
• with sues. [para] es.
Menu 10:
• She loorounround,
• He dthisthis first
• just s whi while,
• let thatpen.pen. This
• bag, stuffullfull
• dressed a c a cowboy
`• [confusedks fks from
• the axekingking his
• from a naihe whe walks
• hits Drurlurtling her
• and whi white rose
• rdelrdelia: "Yeah,
• a small rfor for him
• An [para] Angel: "Buffy
• wander. r a r a few minutes
• gettingideaidea
• if he met soe hee he liked
• get olriglright?
Menu 11:
• Someonprobprobably
• Spike walksalks first
• giggle as sinksinks a bit
• Wesortsort of
• and has ak ouk outside
Menu 12:
• witbit bit of school
• when I geck. ck. I need
• best to sta hom home.
• still bit "Fi "Fine
• Ink Ink I can
• Right. Oou'rou're right
Menu 13:
• touch of morninckneckness
• Chron 'Di 'Distracted
• seeing the wrapped pges]ges] Oh
• for thelishlish folk
• escaped fa raa rather
• small tow had had been
• D [para] Dawn:
• remember vly nly notiing
• and repeawhatwhat she'd
• absolutel wil will of
• So THAT is I l I learned
Menu 14:
• Just a k suk summary
• luring people ou.g.,.g., at one
• more ling]ing] Sorry
• pregnancy anl." [para] l."
• Mirandnexpnexpected
• Spike bes ses some
• room andnds nds next
• lookarouaround for
• out]t's t's why
• of thprespressed
• dismve tve tone
• reachesn ann and
• upstairsd, id, it's
Menu 15:
• B nod nods
• Please,el. el. We don't
• front seat sta starts
• his fwithwith her
• dssedssed, but
• G: [u: [upon
• the drugs to caer, er, the
• randranda:
• myselfh ach acid
• it's a pal enl enough
• Sp [para] Spike: "For
Menu 16:
• her sheatsworsword and
• weapon cd Lud Lucifer's
• and have aer der drink
• pausell,ell, a while
• slowly onis fis face
• rips it , re, revealing
• with honguongue—he
• she bres...s...
• a pof mof me
• againis fis fingers
• face,nkinnking in
• they've rered red for a
• ike:ike: "There
• Now it' tur turn.
• claing]ing]...during
• ke: ke: [A sideways
• is aThinThings you
• over, away frim, im, pulling
Menu 17:
• Flashb Gla Glasgow
• Threate kil kill her
• She needn't haied.ied. We
• up to seike,ike, whose
• and genttroktrokes her
• in the boom.oom.
• habit aindsinds himself
• to worry abou [cuts off] [para] M [para] Miranda:
• I'm Sti Still not
• [to hef] Wf] What a
Menu 18:
• Thwas was still
• here aiggliggle like
• ignoring heOh gOh god
• no chemistry soevsoever.
• they cup wup with
• drop &H t&H this
Menu 19:
• before—sondeonders if
• interestingces.ces. I had
• It'sood ood story
• leave.backback to
• front of thoseots.ots.
• come to loou, ou, no
• painedressression
• Gladiator on y [cuts off]
• hear thr the door
Menu 20:
• 2ndto pto physically
• nda:nda: [Not
• genuine on [cuts off] [para] T [para] They
• aid aid you were
• little lo, bu, but
• inside you [cuts off] [para] Co [para] Cordelia:
• bit morebriebriefing',
• Gohow,how, mate
• Spi[def[defensive
• the e—ite—it's
• shouver ver get
• course, youuld uld get
• more conce] "N] "Nah
• "AngeAngel: "I should [this should be starting on its own line]
• have Sunnydale?esn'esn't quite
• and and frustration
Menu 21:
• doy—ity—it doesn't
• yollocllock
• some d. [para] d.
• as aas always
• started cg. Hg. He told her t bac back
• with deeplddenddened eyes
• It was hid I d I was
• points to atureture as if
• 30 minulatelater or so
• sword lyinrossross the
• you're goaheaahead with
• thew inw in this
• So he was h bef before
Menu 22:
• a rea real
• help brin rin back
• happy andaxedaxed
• and pushhe hhe hair
• She's noverovering
• and so." [para] .
• Father D "I "I see
• Father Dundishdisheartened
• Sry: ry: Time
• has to bkay.kay. I think
• [He s a s a step
Menu 23:
• guilt on hice. [para] ce.
• Looking vernoyenoyed,
• brilliant—it was an a [cuts off]
• ThisEVEREVERYTHING.
• quick once-obefobefore
• really reme it it much
• grab what thant,ant, ignoring
• I thI goI got most
• in paind pnd pleasure
Menu 24:
• not quiure ure why
• Heofteoftening, but
• and of his lovme. me. What
• her qui quickly
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• close enouo too touch
• away froodenoden objects
• shakes ahey hey all stop
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• always beble ble to say
• lists."SpikSpike: "We [and should break at spike's line]
• No one oe dre dream-team
• sensing thnsionsion in the
• just the adrenaline, is al [cuts off] [para] M [para] Miranda
• musterill tll the energy
• looks aro try trying
Menu 26:
• he just letncanncan stand
• front vam vampire
• bleeding fongernger than
• tear or two.etlyetly
•rdelrdelia: [wanting
•moving her if dn'tdn't know
• Not somng ong ol' Lucy
• fall aslen thn the cold
• but I dothinkthink your
• Spi [para] Spike: "Sorry
• 100 yeof bof being
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• she trots of [cuts off] [para] Mi [para] Miranda
• I broughtr hir his
• his earu aru are such
•smile and dis disappears
• it out andks aks at it
• the] "I] "I love
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• on the couchya oya on
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• Giles n Enn England
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• structure. sil silence
• pe who who deserve
• bloslayslayerettes
• stop—e ite it's not
• Buffy's a's an evil
• Nowhere.he'she's this
• likely tha tha that your
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• thought werewere...
• and then at l, wl, who is
• all a bluf [cuts off] [para] M [para] Miranda: "But
• by thea tha that she
• anything bre breathes
• It'll ohurthurt for
• don't thinu'llu'll be
• under houseest est until
• : "J: "Just another
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• not gettinf thf that
• that sounovelovely
• the pree bue build
• makes hey toy to the
• everythingt a t a bit more
• pus push her off
• pikepike: "With me
• well lasme. me. And
• He bac back in
• in AN: daydream than mngerngers have
Menu 29:
• actually the seion ion that
• heroiingsings every
• surprisingly eto cto come by
• insisted I do the readiA shA shame, toocauscause I
• I won'trkenrken to your
• butputsputs up with
• of it."SpikSpike: "Oh, I'm [break at Spike's line]
• in the tt oft of the most
• feel tharpharp pain
AND IN THE REVIEWS FOR
Violently Happy:
Rev #3, Anon #107435
• if youed ted the
Rev #4, kimber #107979
• in the immortalsalwaalways love
• but go go over
Rev #5, buffysaki #112963
• character i Ang Angel now
Why do we writ this? pt9
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=23341
• her suchet, et, sweet
• hellmouth.osenosen
Closed Door Conversations
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=17402
Ch 1:
• shut thor. or. The
• Anwoulwould have
Ch 2:
• It heen een two;
Ch 3:
• made lf clf clear?
• him every . Go. Got the
• Yeah,leg'leg's clotted
• into a pul sul smile
• make mint.int. Wounded
Ch 4:
last line, oddball characters at the end
Ch 5:
• the hee cae can
Ch 6:
• be hen a n a minute
• Shok aok a step
• cheek, catchingear.ear.
• into her was was a l bit bite
• In a montimntimate spot
Ch 8:
• would try tpe ype you
• kind of wildts ots of times
• slayer stre." [para] ."
• Dawn d. [para] d.
^---fixed
Christmas Baby
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=15305
Ch 1:
• he ahn Shanshued and
AND IN THE REVIEWS FOR
Christmas Baby:
Rev #4, shippy # 95744
• sweet moreaseease
Ritual of Fire and Ice
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=4391
Ch 1:
• "Oka"Okay, okay, man
• began tse fse from
• shattering intstasstasy
Ch 2:
• "s drs dreaming
• Tara's armandeander striding
• first was thaell ell of
• that turnut. [para] ut.
Ch 3:
• arc [para] doo [para] doorways
Vikings, Sires and Siblings
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9968
IN THE SUMMARY FOR
Vikings, Sires and Siblings:
• series.t hat happens
IN THE STORY BODY:
Menu 1:
• kissed softsoftly;
Menu 2:
• Pistols pos- a - a gift
• The BronzeWillWilly's
• The opposiampiampires
• kept arm erp eye out
• ri We We'll
Menu 3:
• had cd ind in bnlood
• been de yea year yet
• remaif hif his clothes
Menu 4:
• we gwe going
Menu 5:
• you ing ing anyone
• wonderherehere she had
Menu 6:
• talk abou. I . I know
• but I haveknowknow what
• how he bee been
• badly t stt started
Menu 7:
• good all and and sweaty
Menu 8:
• Ry!"y!"
• ody ody hell
• adamant thae hae had
• little s? Ok? Okay, so
• Only you [para] "Y [para] "Yeah?
Menu 9:
• knowing it w't o't over
Menu 11:
• grabbed n thn the descent
• S [para] Spike waited
Menu 12:
• "Iw, Sw, Spike.
• being as."s."
Menu 14:
• it'd say 'see Xander Hs'.s'."
• destroy spelspell
• to mto mention
Menu 15:
• soft grorom rom across
• pretty obut but nowhere
• head sadleacheaches was gng sng slow in
• him a app approached
• you're scarinr."r."
• and thougor mor minute
• they do t" [cuts off] [para] "
• You. as yas you
• to find s. [para] s.
Menu 16:
•feelfeelings
• Because of yo [cuts off]
• grimaced and ed fed for
Menu 17:
• to his waitentrentrance
• pikepike's eyes
• What's a haa happen
• toware pae patron
Something a Little Different
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=11856
• Anysn'sn't around
• tu jac jacket he
AND IN THE REVIEWS FOR
Something a Little Different:
Rev #1, DeadFerret #64917
• glitched, only 1 character in review
A Viking in L A
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9871
Ch 1:
• conditiooverover to
• he saiike ike was
• Whre yre you going
Ch 5:
• okay? n'tn't want
• pissing me off.d 'd 'He
• Angelld fld feel
• guess we starstart by
• back to tore ore pleasant
• into a d muc much
Ch 6:
• three pilnto nto the
• He wd tod to kill
Ch 7:
• quicklarcharched the
• snarling Xa and and an
• He atenatened to rip
• not h lov love
• know. Cw. Completely
• But ve ave a soul
• Spike wasnnednned
• I're lre luv
Ch 8:
• and hets mts me now
• For wha [cuts off] [para] " ppara] "For
• hear S ins inside the
Ch 9:
• me in ass ass and veil
• calmer, mucre hre himself
Ch 10:
• colourblooblood
• less than an h [cuts off]
• Although, I k yok you
• look in her e [cuts off]
• The thihe dhe did to
• still bos yos you
Ch 11:
• into his mo Spi Spike
• end ay. ay. It was
Ch 12:
• They remaineat wat way for
• NAngeAngel's not
• front desk.ke dke decided
The Viking Hunter
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9864
Ch 2:
• the bi big deal a about him h having
• Childeat oat of
• I I I'm sure there is Sweety. D Don't w worry, we'll f find it
Ch 3:
• the shwrapwrapped
• supposo beo be
• I will teacu evu everything
Ch 4:
• with outkingking like
• living blood ed hed his
• the prospectvoolviolence
Ch 5:
• little inforon. on. Thor
Ch 6:
• want a demratiration
• popped truntrunk and
• had beeree ree days
Ch 8:
• love theat eat outdoors
• S sure. no
Ch 9:
• surprised hav haven't
Ch 10:
• planedoss oss the
• Whloodlood Spike
• blood. ess ess it
•Lack of pnce nce mate
• threat to hs ovs over
Ch 11:
• invest it,t bat banks
Ch 13:
• Willy brt ant
• causcause it's his
Ch 14:
• well, ad pad placed
• strengtuffyuffy
Ch 16:
• Bnya.nya
• relationshiph anh an unsouled
• sorta ha'bo'bout it
Ch 17:
• onearedared the
• hinghing Xander
Ch 18:
• notice ofke'ke's new
• thr thrust up
• groannd snd started
• hisght ght onto
• wan Spi Spike.
• for aood ood vampires
Ch 19:
• problem lastht cht concerning
• purring.der der chuckled
• Ancienmpirmpire secret
A Viking New Year
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=9873
Ch 1:
• were to thw Maw Master
• hard ove over
Ch 2:
• woft oft music
• wherebelobelonged
Vengeance
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=300
Menu 1:
• realwn, wn, poorpoor
• onco Wio Willow
Menu 5:
• his shohey hey went
• fate shuld uld give
Menu 6:
• and ed fed for
Menu 11:
• Whateveppenppens in
Menu 12:
• to pie the the man
Menu 14:
• woulde doe done
• hated Spiket Alt Alex
• someir dir dye
Menu 15
• for hurchurhases, he
Menu 17:
• I'm orryorry Alex
• and toos has hand
Menu 20:
• stopped by boo bookstore
• to for fore and
• me tok yok you
Menu 21:
• Just as Ales abs about
ˆThmpirmpire chuckle
Menu 22:
• to the grounforefore
Menu 26:
• each our our own
• said,erieerience
• shop clotodatoday and
Menu 27:
• first plaOf cOf course
Menu 29:
• woulse tse the
Menu 32:
• he wosellsell the
• willing toe upe up his
• his shoulderil sil stood
Menu 33:
• about uslls lls he
• that wer were
Menu 35:
• pay wha what
^---fixed through p 4 (chapter 3)
Fan Fic Made Me Gay
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=1555
Menu 1:
• vampire r frr from
Menu 2:
• wash mnds nds and
• he was ng tng to hide
• she didknowknow the
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http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544198693
• flame, reviewer #3 Anon #2035418252
(although all 3 reviews are bad, the other 2 are couched in slightly kinder terms)
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?no=544198697
• flames, all 3 reviews
• possible minor author
same author as above story 544198693. looking at the stories, the flames were definitely “earned”, but still! also, i do think the writer is a minor. possibly a non-english-speaking one but still sounds an awful lot like a minor.
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=30856
• a compliment couched as a flame? don’t know what you want to do with this one. 4th review from the end, Anon # 3000011603. (in the immortal words of hermione granger, “what—an—idiot!”)
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Acting the Part
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=21423
Part 1:
• the conven cen center had
• fan convention! voi voice
• closed .” .” and
Part 2:
• Williamghedghed at the
• What?e ade added
• Okay,” whi whispered
Part 3:
• fun ay?ay?”
Part 4:
• Melanie cho chosen
Part 5:
• very ome.ome.”
• Sutomutomatically shook
• “Melanie’s Gn” [para] n”
• that he’d id wrd written
• to bethfuthful
Part 6:
• most of all,d wed we were
• itike ike a wet
• and wonul, ul, and
Part 7:
• hos hostess handed
• knew he wasembeembering the
Part 8:
• little girl tread. d. Stuffed
• he std hed her flow
Part 10:
• said, reing ing the
Part 11:
• more appea tha than
• until a co of of days
• “Sou”Sounds good
Part 12:
• loudly eh foh for
• a light , Bu, Buffy
• He keis ris raging
Part 13:
• thought,e ofe of a
• down her cupcakd jud jumped
• “Veryny.ny.”
• Star to to bend over anck tck the
• made heood [para] ood
Part 14:
• willing to giv m [cuts off]
• lovely. E inc inch
• and rth rth movements
• against hamp amp skin
Part 15:
• to youfeltfelt this
• his upper h. [para] h.
• THESEre dre directions
• until shs ons on
• “It’thinthing.”
Part 16:
• ...I feel snorenored,” he
• jumped. as tas thinking
• ending AN: want to do ido it
Part 17:
• of his vo and and she
• ontopptopping to grab
• for our h, th, too.
• that t’out’out for
• ending AN: (Stwithwith me
Part 18:
• back of theezeeezer,
• Buffy star [para] sea [para] searching
• out he phe package
• hrurrmured
Part 19:
• as los its it was
• all of t his his eyes
• and everything Pick Picking
Part 20:
• meet hist [para] tt [para] thrust
• that Angedn’tdn’t called
• spoiled ho [para] io [para] insane
• dishes weone,one, she
• looked nd snd smiled
Part 21:
• phone d you you?”
• rollier eer eyes
• “Is your hai?” [para] ?”
Part 22:
• you learn th [cut off]
• tra trade I
• throbbing v; hi; his hot
• he was eing ing until
• S [para] She
• ‘d I’d love to
Part 23:
• sugar into hoffeoffee
• peppermint smellinouthouthwash
Part 24:
• ThinThinking it over
• n hen he’d
• they’rill ill there
• who hadtle tle faith
• a brief . [para] .
the real survivors ch. 4
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=544199136
• the inchiative
(not sure if this is a glitch or just crappy, careless writing...if you go here you’ll see what i mean!)
Something Wicked
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30856
Ch 2:
• Spikes s Sp Spike
• around herst, st, tears
• B’s g’s gaze
• but she wt ast as small
Ch 3:
• Joyce nerly rly
• bad as irstirst thought
• on sev occ occasions
• the feelingde rde running
• just fai. C. Catching
The Choices We Make
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=28053
Ch 1:
• before she cnuednued.
Ch 2:
• or whosage age they
Ch 3:
• her mother’sce wce was
Rules of Engagement
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=23791
• askeder er a long
• spot on thuch uch and
Buffy > General > 14
in All Other TOS Violations
Posted
Spike Rapes Buffy
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=600005334
• rev #2 Denimm, id # 3000011972 — flame
• rev #5 Anon, id # 3000012504 — flame
• rev #6 aks, id # 3000013044 — flame who should not be reading this if it offends them (i agree, it’s pretty angry and ugly, but this IS aff after all)
On Parade
IN REVIEWS:
http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...mp;no=544213596
• about 2/3 of the way down there is more mention of Jimmy Orthanc. smiley, id # 3000011704, says he has a story very similar to this...more plagiarism?