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Not supposed to exist with each other (600030488)
—ORPHAN STORY: there is no AU link shown in archive-page summary or in story.
archive page link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/main.php?...=746&page=9
story link: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600030488
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New paths (600030741)
In reviews
Page 2
• dup reviews by Invisabell (3000018588,89)
Two fronts (544175322)
In reviews
Page 1
• by omnikool (2035133647): flame
• apologized for on page 6 (2035643203), good grief, these people make me tired
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• by Dylan (2035134932): fired-up reaction to omnikool’s flame
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from buffy / femslash /root p. 10
FEIOD (600030346)
—shouldn’t she write out the title so it will display on archive page, instead of abbreviating it, which means nothing to anyone?
RR (600030351)
—again, she needs to write out the title instead of abbreviating. this seems to be her M.O.
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Living on the edge (544173591)
In reviews
Page 3
• 3 dup reviews by Ally (2035131122,25,26)
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What if (544207057)
In reviews
—one reviewer made mention of a chapter that had been posted twice, but i didn’t find any sign of it
Page 2
• by Anon (2035612015): s/he posts a URL, not a review. can’t find anything in the URL that is germane—they are reviews of something else apparently
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Happy oh happy (26850)
In reviews
Page 1
• by Anon (212026): flame
• by Joe Hundredaire (266456): flame
• by Joe Mama (267065): flame
good grief!
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from Buffy / femslash /root - page 12
Their vampire (600030175)
—duplicate story, is also posted as 544195967 by shadowed1figure (was on a previous page i did of B/FS/root)
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 13
Her destiny's will (544207129)
Ch 1
• not a chapter, just an AN
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 14
Buffy's bitch (8653)
In reviews
Page 1
• in Warrick (40731): what ens ens next . . . thdy sdy switching
In story
Ch 7
• on the brink of an orgas the then
• found to be somewunseunsettling
• any pas, ss, suddenly
• blonde a beseechinok. ok.
• told the watche [para] Wi [para] Willow nodded
• threthree males looked
• the safe si. Th. Though
• enjoyed Buf Buffy
• which wouou pou prefer
• your othandhand to
• occupied spa spanking your
• instrument fquasquashing flies
• five more,Co” B” Buffy
• m rem really loving
• occasionalringringing her
• humans anllmollmouth
Ch 8
• claws slodescdescending
• sigh of relturnturned into
• with ver-ver-increasing
• days.rdelrdelia became
• Creative-withkes kes Summers
• many prts, ts, Xander
• run out.ce mce most of
• silent for ale ble before
• Michael Fay –ay
• his personal s aga again
• whhe bhe blonde
• your assongsongs to
• bitch. [para] Cor [para] Cordelia’s moans
• blonde. ep fep finger-fucking
• the bl tho thoughtfully
Ch 9
• blonde Slayerrtedrted
• pretty youomenomen were
• watchinglittlittle girl
• his braor aor any kind
• librarian thin [para] “ [para] “I know it’s
• then thmon mon is
• from its h! [para] h!
• daddy’s g hav have to pay
• the blondemedemed to
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Broken (544173412)
Ch 8
• an AN, not a chapter
i'm not really sure if this is allowed—posting a "chapter" that is really only an AN, nothing else. if not, this is one and you can delete it or whatever you do with them. i've been listing these as there seem to be a lot of them....
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Kragdon (544198572)
In reviews
Page 3
• dup reviews by Wicked1 (2035589606,7)
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 16
The third slayer (544215658)
• not a chapter, just an AN and plug for another story of hers
Do what you have to do (544215245)
—for some reason, entire story is centered. and in boldface.
Can never reach her (544215247)
—again, entire story centered and in boldface
Just a little bit of fun (23537)
Ch 1
• orgasm caippiipping through
• of the redd. [para] d.
Ch 4
—centered and in boldface (sigh)
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 17
Butch (544212999)
• ##Ever heard
(and no glitches/wordord at all in page 18! will wonders never cease?!)
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 19
Their vampire (544195967)
Ch 5
• a lot of ¡¥ and ¡§, punctuation mis-cues of some sort?
Ch 6
• AN, not a chapter
It's not a sister thing (544173774)
Ch 21
• not a chapter but an AN posing a story challenge.
Unspoken emotion (1884)
In reviews
• by corey (2051): holy fucat wat was awesome
In story
• have a good ti Aft After I
• Hey, dyouryour sister
• before, In, Bn, Buffy
• wearing Rans. [para] ns.
• And,courcourse the
• better than pil pillow or
• as she gd hed herself
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Challange (544216071)
—story challenge (un-story)
located on Buffy/Femslash/root p.16
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 20
Make me forget (544186531)
In reviews
Page 9
• dup reviews by Anon (2035467857,8)
Just because you can't see me (21053)
In reviews
Page 1
• by demonblues (152463): was wwritwritten
• by charmed1 (153165) in p.s.: the word sd bed be
Page 4
• in charmed1 (188253): on fX anythlikelike that can
Page 5
• in Sarah (213976): I’m sorrnevenever reviewed before
Page 7
• in Cristina (272975): your d (yd (your fic
• in Eos (276820): great thingu’veu’ve come up with
In story
Ch 4
• Joyce is sittit tht the counter
Ch 5
• You’ve nineninety seconds
Ch 8
• “I’me.” e.”
Ch 9
• looks houghough what
• need a fav” [para] “
• Dimmitt I can Buffy’s
Ch 10
• How iing ing killed
• would be fferfferent story
Ch 11
• it’s myth.””You”Your the
Ch 13
• Were in tasemasement
Ch 14
• cut inte bae bars
Ch 15
• “And the sd?” [para] d?”
• wring the sck. ck. ck.
Ch 16
• I grab onis his hair
• I can’t h thh them
• planed isn’t pr. Do. Don’t try
Ch 20
• I’vntednted to make
• not lookat aat anything
• bottom li I o I open
Ch 22
• get back ir per pervious
Ch 23
• Shes los losing her
• my voice booking no argu. [cuts off]
Ch 24
• on his lis pri priorities
• I’m alregonegone
Ch 25
• know that one [para] “Be [para] “Because if you
Ch 27
• Heds mds me a piece
• happen.”hrowhrow my own
Ch 30
• I kilikelike it
• I cuI cut him
Ch 31
• back against the . “B. “Better than
• Rng tng the lapses
Ch 32
• She says casually as she pas [cuts off]
Ch 34
• with your s bes behind
Ch 36
• one andh ith it deep
• andklinkling me to
• weapon inshoushoulder just
Ch 37
• The otis pis pushed
Ch 38
• want me tI neI need to
• slaty terunnrunning along
Ch 40
• heart beat. Not g [cuts off]
Ch 42
• Which ged Ied I don’t
Ch 43
• of “Fa “Faith.” She says
Ch 44
• one of her ands on my s [cuts off]
Familial games (544184740)
Twin of a slayer (16322)
In reviews
Page 1
• in Anon (162498): much more of a ew. ew.
• dup reviews by syou (166647, 166648)
• in FC (203091): leaving ed oed out reviews
• I’ve sta starting
In story
Ch 1
• the mouth piec [para] “N [para] “Not up
• for yousomesomething
• onto thedle.dle.
Ch 2
• told her ahen hen dumped
Ch 5
• be theWe nWe need
Ch 7
• I knI know she
• brushiast ast it over
Ch 9
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 21
Rest stop (544200787)
In reviews
Page 4
• dup reviews by s (2035463040, 2035463041)
That post-apocalyptic tension (28292)
Ch 1
• in AN: Yourrediredible stories
• younger brue [para] e [para] “Yeah, I dont
• to do othern sln slaying
• rested on thotchotch of
• yea,you lthatthat
Ch 2
• is only a one-sentence AN, not a chapter
She walks the night (544188378)
—au is a minor (see post in Review Board forum) i don’t know that there’s any point in looking for glitches since you’re probably going to wipe either her stories (both stories by her were written in 2005 when she was 16) and/or account as. ‘zat okay?
Although i did notice in the reviews:
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• dup reviews by cristina (2035314706, 2035314707)
Unexpected redemption (544191251)
In reviews
Page 1
• by me (2035324464): is gsettingfreally good
She was curious (27021)
In reviews
Page 1
• 6 dup reviews by Anon (307445,6,7,8,9,50)
Page 2
• and another dup for a total of 7 by Anon (307451)
In story
Ch 3
• touch, hece ice is flustered
Ch 4
• an AN, not a chapter
Lost without her (33417)
• just going ake ake these
• You were stig a g a bit so
• in her life,th eth easily
• h reh returned from the
• Buffy moaneudlyudly and
• to go averyverything will
• She pointed rd trd the door
• Growing impat, sh, she began
• F [para] Faith reached the
• guess thatkay.kay.”
• the older sl’s m’s mouth
• forehead on tlondlonde’s
Waking up beside you (31463)
In reviews
• by ChO (251521): Dssinssing fics are
• pantAs IAs I did
• those wordsore ore and
Slayer and shadow: interlude (17201)
Ch 2
• Don’ase ase me, please
• that were pl aro around
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 22
The glitch (21518)
—In reviews
Page 2
• by lele angel03 (237510): i like thst cst chap
Page 3
• by toria (291333): to reaffy’ffy’s reaction
—In story
Menu 1
—is an expanded AN
• story is formetitltitled . . . Queagonagon
—per her AN, sounds like she may have a 2nd account with this story also posted under that name...although i can’t quite tell due to the glitch what name that Q-word IS...
Menu 2
• lotion, ma bo, books
• that th las last night
• standing tiontion and
• clasclass=MsoNormal style=’text-align:justify;text-indent:.5in’>The first pizza
• good to knwherwhere the
• After aI onI only
• going oboutbout the
• Whe>When she
• cla class=MsoNormal style=’text-align:justify;text-indent:.5in’>”That’s what
• by the timtauntaunia left
• Nataunia sigand and let
• on her fromfrom
• the middlea lea lesson
• hearing. qui quickly
• a bra and thirt.irt.
• admit th Nat Nataunia
• laughed a bit.spanspan>She thought
• was in a stof pof panic
• done it herselpan pan style=’mso-spacerun:yes’>Then, the
• in a towke tke this
• Ya g adm admit
• clawggingging ruts
• Xander sa win winged
• clasclass=MsoNormal style=’text-align:justify;text-indent:.5in’>”I happen to
• Thn>The intro music
Menu 3
• come yaed hed here
• group? ‘> No one’s
• weren’t ing ing right
• Yes.es’> You know
• h noh nodded and
• you andffy ffy have
• knows how ba is is until
• but the sightseeiseeing bones
• turned heardsards over
• shirt probprobably what
• p clp class=MsoNormal style=’text-align:justify;text-indent:.5in’>”That’s nice
• She didwantwant her
• what shs trs trying
• to our conveion...ion
Menu 4
• though, San>She’d die
Menu 5
• Willow aauniaunie
Menu 6
• out of youad.”ad.” Willow
Menu 7
• and fed ted to herself
Menu 8
• I ththatthat’s what she’s
• panted and glaat tat the
• I knoWherWhere’s the
Menu 10
• them, tuitauitar striking a
• No, re. S. She’s
• interesting toHoweHowever, she
• noticed appeappen for the
• a song abou [para] “ [para] “Pardon?
• don’t ha cra crush
• Faith’s lter ter immediately
• like Buand and Dawn
• helmet wilobabobably fit
• When Dwas was in
• So weverever
• the doubeanieaning of that
Menu 13
• girl downss. s.
• who youe.” [para] e.”
• face agaiagainst
• then mosdestdestroyed
• like ing ing with that
• traded tlowslows carefully
Menu 14
• a few thithatthat I wto tto tell
Menu 15
• with Ww. w. “You . . . good gh tgh to tap
• return. gir girl was
• of it at the mt. t. Willow’s
• sleep on gro ground
• their elestlest they
• with a gigglblusblush
Menu 17
• are so revng ang and slutty
Trials and restorations (30994)
In reviews
Page 3
• by cristina (296612): Or rathfeelfeels lost
• by Kecky (296628): some soe soon
In story
Ch 1
• going , ki, kid
Ch 2
• with you or not at a” [para] “ [para] “I’m not
• in the oppositeectiection
• the youngstressressed on
• them werone,one, the
• as the be spe sped up
Ch 4
• door tr ner newly
Ch 5
• LitJoycJoycey Summers
• loving Newk. Ik. Is he
• moves you goere,ere,”
• prompted,w yow you’re
Ch 6
• Joyce std, bd, before
• obvious. Joy Joyce
• Stamazamazed
Ch 7
• J rel relented
• she onedoned the bartender
• way to hearre, re, the
• the psychiatristhis his shirt
Ch 8
• let me go Ido ado anything
• done anythto yto you
• Faialkealked away
Ch 9
• No,” Faitplieplied
• at iat is it
• Three srs?”rs?” Giles
• Buffy toim. im.
• Kennedy chimed in. re sre should
Ch 10
• for the sittinoundoundh thh the
• sheepishe the turned
Genesis (19494)
In reviews
Page 1
• by lycanthrope (142329): And the ‘Date,Date is
• by lycanthrope (142580): just left mndinnding
Page 2
• by Ami (166473): You ly dly developed
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• by AcidBurn (184260): this prs probably been
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• by Eos (233413): forward eveeek eek to read
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• by lajolie (244088): Aneaseease don’t let
• by Eos (249879): next updatCanCan’t wait
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• by michelle (292614): U havallyally . . . fic q an an epic
• by maximum (300341): ‘trulykingking wonderful
In story
Ch 1
• and rem remembered
• all for itybe ybe it will
• past anf thf the bus
• would nitenitely be a war
• Buffy t fot for
Ch 2
• awoke as the mng sng sun
Ch 3
• time hame fme for everyone
Ch 4
• as then arn around
• Yeah a scr screwed
• rapped hers ars around
• was tht thinking
Ch 5
• se bse baby
• Willowtterttered
Ch 6
• on her upprm. rm.
• orniorning Faith
• werepineping me warm
• Once agtheythey were
• X-men totall r” Sh” She
• eyes,on’ton’t do puppy
• as if a er oer of fact
• enough e cae can train
• log atg at the
• h leh leaned
• what, ow aow and
Ch 7
• Sorry G Giles
• spas grs groundrrurrounding the
• school lry bry back
• third rs, rs, they
• all signeHe oHe offered
Ch 8
• were y toy to start
• stated in htalitalian accent
• at what tlderlder slayer
• Cajoinjoin you
Ch 9
• to anyon pon presence
• the variousght ght lifting
• another peac sle sleep
Ch 10
• come on .” W.” Willow
• eah eah G-man
• ere,ere, only you
• yours aga Buf Buffy
• on one couc Buf Buffy
Ch 11
• Faith’s lipshershers.
• of hng Ang Avril’s voice
• on the r cor corner
• Yeah, um betget get in then
• had aat tat time
Ch 12
• Sherehere’d you go
• “I [para] “I know but
• all thoks oks that
• come iFaitFaith offered
Ch 15
• their nellmellmouth
• demons non none of
• sweath andked ked extremely
Ch 17
• kiss foromenoment
• stood watcwatched waiting
• ‘s m’s mine, na B
• Shilediled.
Ch 18
• drop to floofloor
Ch 19
• much er.”er.” Faith
• as goosmps mps appeared
• and seedeeeded it now
• Iu c u c cumming
• her tongnto nto the
• thlastlast memeting
• replieding ing to
Ch 20
• locating tew sew slayers
Ch 21
• Buffhe she saw Kendra . . . shathatthat had to
Ch 24
• and bega sta stand
• eye con she she bowed he head
• grinned ananedaned in lacelace a chaste
• looked deepo heo her
• fingers aroune wae waist
• taking pan pants down
Ch 26
• Illyrian er [para] “ [para] “Good
• He [para] He could hear
• “wontwont get nothing
• were broughtut, ut, well
Ch 27
• began a gruellinsaulsault there
• do you ksomesomething
Ch 28
• The w loo looked a
Ch 29
• maybe, but sti still the
Ch 30
• snugly with e ree ree replied
• Buffe’s e’s not really
• they coAndrAndrew and
• readingdon’don’t mind
• little wenougnough to . . . lunc [para] Bu [para] Buffy left
• darver.ver.
• spoppropproaching
• bad wayaithaith winked
Ch 31
• lives wouhey hey not be
• Buffy toolot lot on herself
• other’cks cks
Ch 32
• currently nuzzlat tat the
• the lighgan gan to fade
• blood ted ted the grain
• kiss and sut het her exposed
• in her ets ets for her
• way dohe hhe hall to get
• Looking aroanxianxiously he
Ch 33
• heat sing ing to radiate
• couldn’rk ork out how
• So mauestuestions running
• it to her m she she
• there png rng rabbits
Bittersweet goodbye: faith's return (36795)
• but Gilet a t a hand on
• you’ll havecomecome to LA
• it’s drivie cre crazy
• she spots me,rin rin forms
Bittersweet goodbye (36375)
• sayssays as she
I'd go anywhere with you (36045)
In reviews
• by cat (285146): slayers ery ery well
In story
Ch 1
• Sougreagreat
• “H “How are we
• Srummrummed her fingers
• once wer were in the
Ch 2
• do it whsittsitting up and
• sobbsobbed
• Iled led her
• hadn’t been t int in at all
• finally makinogreogress
Ch 3
• I’mry ary about your
• thought hadnhadn’t seen
• awhilet I t I had to
• No, you di,” F,” Faith
• I waokinoking for
• I really orryorry
Ch 4
• Shehed hed again
• her as possibburyburying her
Ch 5
• gonna fuck u. I. I always
Ch 6
• water, I can tell you’re “ Bu” Buffy
• loweFaitFaith gently
Ch 7
• “I [para] “I didn’t think I was
• crook offy’ffy’s neck
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 23
Only time (544193661)
—there are about 5 sentences in this; not sure why she bothered posting it. says she’s busy now, doesn’t have time, blah blah blah. written in 2005 so probably safe to assume it’s not going to be added to. do you leave stuff like that or delete it?
Running (544185914)
—thought this looked familiar! it’s also posted as story ID 39011 (femslash p.25) by au a “LottieluvsSpuffy”, posted here by au as Lottie. ID 39011 only has 7 chapters and was first posted in 11/04, 544185914 has 10 and first posted in 5/05. will go ahead looking for glitches in this version anyway. [none]
Starting over again (38699)
In reviews
Page 1
• ‘nuaidhaid (1920270527): is this reviewer’s name glitched? starts with a ‘ so not sure
Page 4
• 3 dup reviews by allie (2035170554, 2035170555, 2035170557)
In story
Menu 2
• I just wyou you to know
Menu 11
• is an AN excusing lateness, errors, whatnot—is not a chapter
Silent voices (38123)
In reviews
Page 1
• by rma (300849): looks bot both ariliniling
Ch 1
• br> A myriad
Ch 2
• p clp class=MsoNormal>
• from Faith. [para] p> [para] Guess that proves
• to the bar toce, ce, drink,
• if it wust ust a dream
Love is blind (544188468)
—i would delete the rest of the crap from the title display on the archive page, but maybe that’s just me
Don't go! (17694)
—ditto, i would remove the little AN from the title display on the archive page?
• guiding it wi her her
• shggedgged
• gasped uncinlyinly, having
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 24
Something wicked (544186274)
In reviews
Page 1
• dup reviews by Janell (2035260582, 2035260583)
• dup reviews by Evi (2035263735, 2035263745)
Death do us join (544187105)
—there is some weird coding in here. close to the beginning, para 2 of a flashback has some weird symbols (¡ followed by something i can’t duplicate) in place of an apostrophe, this goes throughout the chapter.
—in para after flashback there are more ¡ symbols this time followed by K, i have no idea what that’s supposed to be.
—in para beginning “Then, some flashbacks” there is ¡§ as a symbol, no idea what that is either!
—there is only 1 short chapter in this story. if you want to (?) do a search-and-replace of these weirdies fine, there are no other glitches that i can see, just the odd symbols.
Obsidian moonlight (544180158)
In reviews
Page 6
• by Nikki (2035200051 and 2035200055): accuses au of plagiarism
• and Ms Ice (2035200823, 2035200825) puts out a duplicate denial/apology
Faith has my bed (544181963)
In reviews
Page 3
• dup review by chantel (2035256962, 2035256963)
In story
Ch 4
—for some reason the entire chapter is centered
Rebellion (35950)
In reviews
Page 1
• in Anon (1920271631): incredible,anding ing ing it
In story
Ch 1
• in AN: ARY:ARY:
• until she comes baspanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> But I doubt
• I casit sit still
• an invasion. s”> I fell to
• and std std struggling
• I l>I put the kid
• damage blet’let’s face it
Ch 2
• Dawn qui dra dragged
• It’s not enoI kI know but
• to defehat hat darkness
Ch 3
• more than you k.&qk.” I add
• in the last feekseeks
• you this t&quo”
• Ft’>Faith closed
• clasclass=MsoNormal> endiendif]>
• Wit knt knowing thveryveryone else
• whateverpenepened to you
• &q’>”It wasn’t enough
• I’ll help.&qu.”
• clasclass=MsoNormal>
• into hiss, ps, pressing
• p clp class=MsoNormal>”I think
• purred be pu pushing the
Ch 4
• To Live Forever?”< <
• He ple pleasantly while
Ch 5
• night of Tdancdance, her
• and Spike. pan>pan>They all
• < sty style=’font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:10.0pt; font-familiy:”Times New Roman”’>The preparations
Ch 6
• lasslass=MsoNormal>”Oh hey
• living. pan>pan>
• s’> She turned
Life's what you make it (38511)
In reviews
Page 1
• well, this is odd. both Anon (304117) and Tor (304118) are basically the same review, except there’s wordord in the Tor one. duplicate reviews? different author accounts?
In story
Menu 1
• in AN: i nehe ehe encouragement wel well
• raindrops e doe down
• trusting i person ema email
• place is chi children
• don’t knowim rim ready
—hard to tell the glitches from the crappy spelling! e-x-e-c-r-a-b-l-e, OMG! (fer shur)
Menu 2
• weird—page won’t collapse, so after the first little bit she puts in hard line endings to make it all very narrow. easier to read, but hmmmm
• What whats wrong Buffy
• in that ure ure i almost
Menu 3
• not a chapter but a winding, wandering AN. delete?
Menu 6
• sadly, even reading this piece of crap word for word i’m having a hard time telling what might be glitches and what is just crap. i truly think it’s all crap writing.
Menu 7
• not a chapter, another AN begging for reviews
Menu 9
• Oh. My. GOD. it’s ANOTHER non-chapter AN!!! we can cut out half her story if we delete the “chapters” that are just ANs!!!
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Life's what you make it (38511)
—i think i mentioned this author before as a possible minor (Tallerthanastump) and this story makes me think so even more. the writing is so immature and just has the feel of a youngish teenager writing it. yeah, i’m pretty convinced it’s a kid. and a review whore at that. 3 ANs disguised as chapters, asking for reviews and offering apologies for why she hasn’t posted lately. GAH!!!
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 25
Wanting what you can't have (544180020)
Ch 5
• is not a chapter, just a very long AN
Bad girls win faith dominates buffy's family (544176937)
In reviews
• by Thanos6 (2035202309): link doesn’t work
• by b (3000011399): not a review, blank (one letter)
In story
Ch 1
• you..you..ohm doing
Electricity flows (38997)
In reviews
Page 1
• by LJ13 (1920271912): i hope datedate soon
Honour thy father (544177641)
Menu 1
• is not a chapter, just the summary and background info
Menu 4
• as sh shifted gears
Menu 12
• is not a chapter, just an extended disclaimer
Menu 13
Je me souviens (35281)
In reviews
Page 2
• in mint (302379): so good. pe tpe to see more
Page 3
• in mint (305567): is definy wey welcome
In story
Ch 1
• Author’sond ond Note
• Fa [para] Faith gave her a
• The weiof tof the
• She tried tcidecide on a
Ch 2
• Buffy she’dhe’d get here
• boiled in hermachmach
Ch 3
• to be a cncinncing actress
• start to k, bk, but in the
The spell unspoken (19462)
—this whole story has very weird line endings.
Ch 1
• okay” y try tried
• \” B” Buffy
Ch 2
• you finis” W” Willow
• Willow sed bed back
• He’s da Any Anya
Ch 4
• y shy she’s not
• patrolled thmetrmetry with her
• So whxactxactly does
• at the memorHe wHe would
Ch 5
• Bufrasprasped Willow’s
• an impressio Buf Buffy that
—i think the au finally noticed because in Ch 6 the lines are all manually ended!
Ch 6
• . So. So are you
• Willow waarinaring
Ch 7
• Nouffyuffy said gaining
• at!at! A tall lithe
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 26
The brink of your mind (ID 29416)
In reviews
Page 1
• response by ELR (233934): i hahe che characters . . . of mworkwork popping
Page 2
• response by ELR (236494): so basicall’m ‘m filtering
• dup reviews by EvilDoer (237141, 237143): of the pre. Th. This
Page 4
• by Calamity (294634): Gotta knhat hat happens
• by Cat (302948): Ie yoe you continue
In story
Ch 3
• was just a litbit.bit. Because
• do you eveplaiplain that
Ch 4
• always abowasnwasn’t it?
• even as ste stepped
• whate a e a slayer so
• might be fae family
Ch 5
• causing her ind ind the eyes
Ch 9
• Sheecomecome slightly
1.01 life’s short (ID 544174253)
Menu 6
• this is just an AN, not a chapter
Why do you exploit me? (ID 38786)
In reviews
• by kai (306946): an update felcoelcome to
In story
• I mastmasturbating last
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 27
My love (ID 29841)
In reviews
Page 1
• by blugrashopr (249970): really likes fis fic
Page 3
• by Anon (271955): was at fullengtength
• by omnikool (272144): Keeptingting and maybe
• by omnikool (276182): torture him somev more in
Page 6
• by blu (279849): how faith onnaonna take it
• duplicate review by lycanthrope (279954, 279958)
Page 8
• by Ashley (280963): He’s m’s me again
• by cat (281283): And oh one mohinghing
Page 10
• by maximum (287125): fuckingd std story
• by michelle (287244): I am very interestn sen seing
Page 11
• by M Kennedy (287323): keep up the incrediblb. Mb.
• by rma (287574): dealing wa Sla Slayer’s
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• by michelle (289536): He sucks I t I think . . . writing e & e & I can’t
Page 14
• by rma (292119): Faith will fintointo her
• by rma (292227): very same day thet ent engaged
• by Deacon (292243): seeing her ex l’s c’s cold
Page 15
• by firecracker (292348): I just rehis his whole . . . long to updaI woI would
Page 16
• by alllie (3 L’s) (298118): the warning of y. iy. i liked
• by michelle (298161): theirdingding & all
Page 17
• by M Kennedy (298219): The s wis with Angel
• by Cat (298581): terms of futuraps,aps, there
• another dup review by lycanthrope (303747, 303749)
Page 18
• by allie (303803): were wihe hhe honeymoon
• by Celestria (1920270783): wedding jittjitters
• by Cat (1920270932): faith inglanglasses
Page 22
• by Blackie (2035311938): just 3-1/2 lines of ?????? (leave in? remove?)
In story
Menu 1
• “Sl” Sp” Spike finished.
Menu 3
• ke ske stopped beside
Menu 6
• ter ter the dance
• someone walk thenthen she smiled
• B* Buffy and Faith
• got the rigrinkrink baby
• my super strengthghlyghly protective
• loudlyFaitFaith moved
• Sh gon gonna pay
• couple of tes tes later
• watchers councild fod for in
Menu 7
• tho though Riley
• on for afereferent reason . . . theds ‘ds ‘I’m sorry
• She’ll b, sh, she’s
• who was sig dog down
• looked ae doe door
Menu 10
• to massage heeasteast
• sat up aookeooked at her
Menu 11
• out of here [para] e [para] “No”
Menu 12
• kissed him on theek [para] eek
Menu 13
• on her chest asth pth played
• do I sue” Se” She said
• Buffy anssedssed the top
Menu 14
• Bufookeooked who’s
• in AN: think onnaonna happen
Menu 15
• Angel was th [para] “ [para] “Yeah,
• Faitd Spd Spike turned
• SpikSpike see tears
Menu 17
• ands obs obviously
• poured a large s ofs of Jack
Menu 18
• looked up affy ffy for the
Menu 19
• down at the fl [para] F [para] Faith saw
• happiness of yengaengagement
• for a li cha chat
Menu 20
• bestest frie’ve ‘ve ever
• their SpikSpike, Faigh and I
• so are yonnaonna paint
• e toe took off
• giggling anumblumbling again
Menu 21
• hangover glasseBuffBuffy asked
• I love yBuffBuffy
• She ssimpsimply
Menu 23
• not a chapter, just an AN, really a plug for other stories she’s writing – remove?
Menu 24
• Se said nipping at his ear nipping at his ear
Ginger snap (ID 33882)
In reviews
Page 2
• by meri (287671): i loveadieading the
• by memet (300878): i’m so very verypy! py!
Page 3
• by Cat (302927): Faith in the mhis his time
Page 4
• by Faith (1920271959): pleasetinutinue
In story
Ch 1
• Faith, doe doesn’t even
Ch 4
• seemed perfectormaormal to
Ch 5
• carry in bundlessignsigns and
Ch 6
• au has mistakenly typed “Chapter Seven” at top of story text, should be 6 (previous was 5, pull-down menu says 6, text says 7)
Ch 7
• Faith’sglesgles subsided
Ch 9
• “Ozit!”it!” Buffy
• sign leg agg against
Ch 10
• again text shows “Chapter Nine” when it should be 10, per the pull-down menu plus prev. ch. was 9
Fleeting (ID 28107)
In reviews
Page 3
• by Cat (294637): I wouealleally like that
In story
Ch 1
• I’ve had thportportunity to
• I felt about hehe’dhe’d had the
• through thekingkingn ringer
• wasn’t aoraborable day
Ch 2
• as one. /> />
Ch 3
• stomach againstmachmach. Heat
Ch 4
• not supposedbe hbe here
Ch 5
• into hea head, as it
• to the aga again
Ch 7
• wallets be dus dusting
• reaching ss tss the table
• that wnato bto bark
Ch 8
• exista As As if my
• head, I r I realised
Ch 9
• reality on tanvaanvas of
• and cont tht throbbing
• crude blood splrs ors on the
Ch 10
• shovshoved him back
• contempt dropprom rom his
Ch 11
• looking outit. it. it was
Ch 12
• word,fy nfy nodded
• to pop ity ouy out of
• wondered idelythe the red head
Ch 16
• almoithoithout touching
• Hen eyn eyes ignored
Wicked (ID 38781)
• her crazy witst ast and I
• covein Bin Buffy
• howh thh this little
• off my ces. es.
The bet (ID 38779)
In reviews
• by AMY (307083): read it befon yon your
In story
Ch 1
• youdy, dy, mind
Ch 3
• with anotwomawoman, but
• My lif Bos Boston was
• almost violy. Iy. I was also
Ch 4
• to my humabodeabode
• jacket thaneedneeded to feel
Ch 5
• hookhook my head
Ch 6
• give . Sh. She seemed
• toue?!”e?!” Buffy’s
• my pusspussy was as wet
• wanna ravyou.you...
• head fsideside to side
• on it, mng ang as her
• I r [para] I released it
Mile high club (ID 38782)
In reviews
• by LJ13 (307468): story considepecipecially cause
In story
• Then Ie hee her taste
• ind ind up against her
• ow row raises an eyebrow
Hot (ID 38785)
• with aal. al. They’d
• Hey Wills, whatp?” [para] p?”
Enrage (ID 38784)
• ng mng my neck
• yes. I th” He” He looks
• can make sone cne come
Just a little (ID 38783)
In reviews
• by DushkusBitch (306874): *ent ent sigh*
In story
• she’s wwarmwarm and
Lost without you (ID 29291)
In reviews
Page 1
• by ELR (233977): you ca lea leave them
Page 2
• by slayer (239969)
a pit tht thats
In story
Menu 1
• move atay tay quiet
Menu 2
• forming on my fees. es.
Menu 5
• many differwaysways.
• streaming dmy fmy face
• “Tha”Thank you,” I whisper
Menu 6
• gonna go finme -me -man?-?”
Menu 7
• this should be chapter 7, otherwise 7 gets skipped. she has it as 8 both in the text and the pull-down menu
• at meDamnDamn
• face wshe she came
Menu 8
• this should be chapter 8—7 was skipped in numbering
She's mine (ID 36944)
In reviews
Page 1
• by Dylan (292224): you say yere ere writing
• by Electra126 (292780): Faith doesn’cidecide to
Page 2
• by Cat (302428): and Faith’snineniness.
In story
Ch 1
• inhaled mof hef her
Ch 2
• to me,ningning heavily
Ch 3
• shut upuffyuffy threw
Ch 4
• but acce my my answer
• it pays t thi this hot
• Thys, ys, well they
Ch 5
• Faith was gogo. go. Shed rush
• She wrettretty sure
• I jlikelike her
Ch 6
• down to herts. ts. I
Never was kissed (ID 33207)
In reviews
Page 4
• by Order of the Otter (281593); Keritiriting, anad
Page 6
• by greens (305649): but pe noe no end or
In story
Menu 3
• loved theses. Ts. They were
Menu 5
• tutor, maGracGrace could
• the rionsionship between
Menu 6
• Thanks.ileyiley shut the
Menu 7
• should be titled chapter 7, not 6 again!
Menu 8
• incredible breathtakkisskiss that
• searched thourgh pap the then
Crimson regret (ID 30494)
In reviews
Page 2
• by QueerDragon (249917): your locatisn’sn’t given
Page 3
• in lajolie (251853): losin! Ho! Hope I can
• in becky (255015): would be kinachy chy to her
Page 4
• in cristina (257625): it is YOtorytory
• duplicate reviews by ChO (260097, 260098)
Page 6
• in Electra126 (286017): starting tolectlect my own . . . an emicemic
• in cat (290078): things arekingking up
Page 7
• in kultamuna (305378): faith who is wrg thg this story
In story
Ch 13
• Shened ned one eye
Last night by the lake (ID 19317)
wordord
in Glitched stories
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GLITCHES - Buffy / femslash /root - page 9
Unused (600030082)
Menu 21
• okay, this is odd. this chapter apparently got lost and is supposed to be posted between menu 9 and menu 10 (in the menu she calls it chapter 9.5)
Menu 22
• just an AN announcing the cancellation of further chapters, not a chapter
Inside (18052)
Ch 5
• with all thosmonsmons you
Ch 6
• me not elebelebrate?
Change of season (544211639)
In reviews
Page 2
• by Sandra (3000012598): Fantastic ChapherFantastic chapter!