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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Nearly done with the last preview. But here’s a writer question isn’t it a nice thing
Seems I forgot the </sarcasm> tag there, was assuming irritating the editor was the point!
More professionally, it’s always good to make sure it’s about the best you can do (obviously, don’t get so stuck to never submit).
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JayDee reacted to BronxWench in Nearly done with the last preview. But here’s a writer question isn’t it a nice thing
It’s always a good thing to spellcheck a manuscript, and make a grammar check before you submit it to an editor. I can promise you, your editor will still find plenty for you to fix.
@Desiderius Price makes a point, though. If you’re using British English, because your story is set in Britain, or simply because you are British, you should make sure your spellchecker is set for the right language. However, if you’re submitting a book to an American editor, expect pushback on the spelling unless it’s integral to the story.
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Nearly done with the last preview. But here’s a writer question isn’t it a nice thing
Well, suppose you could put it through a checker for British English?
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JayDee reacted to InvidiaRed in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
Lol I have the rest of my life to expand the verse as it were hahah.
Now off to find a decent editor!!!
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
The Return of the King also had a bunch of appendices too, histories, family trees, etc – clever way to info-dump without over-burdening the prose.
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JayDee reacted to BronxWench in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
I do actually make it to the end of things. I just never seem to get around to actually posting them.
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
“End of things” … that does not compute.
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JayDee got a reaction from InvidiaRed in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
I dunno, I think the Return of the King film had about 15 epilogues. Still, always room for an afterword!
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JayDee got a reaction from BronxWench in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
You guys are making it to the end of things?
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JayDee got a reaction from Desiderius Price in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
I dunno, I think the Return of the King film had about 15 epilogues. Still, always room for an afterword!
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JayDee got a reaction from Desiderius Price in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
You guys are making it to the end of things?
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Note to self, I can’t keep adding inches to this character’s todger every time he vis
I do like to stay semi-realistic with sizes, so no forty feet (unless there’s a potion/spell involved). A few inches is average, and this particular character’s still growing, so he’ll be above average when done.
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JayDee reacted to InvidiaRed in Note to self, I can’t keep adding inches to this character’s todger every time he vis
Not with that attitude you can’t =p
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
Lemme shift the decimal… 3M?
Just kidding, congrats, and I hope it’s everything you want it to be (&more).
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JayDee reacted to BronxWench in well i just found out the hard way that there are shitty people in this world. I lost
I’m glad you got your phone back.
I’m curious as to how the carrier was able to trace your phone to a specific person, however. It doesn’t seem like the kind of information they would be able to get by pinging your phone/sim, unless the thief was stupid enough to contact the carrier and provide that information in an attempt to unlock the phone or some other such thing. This has absolutely tweaked the research portion of my brain now, since my carrier wasn’t able to trace my mother’s lost phone because its battery was dead (I wanted gps data on its location).
Just as a side note, I’m one of those exceedingly paranoid people who doesn’t use her phone as a banking link, email hub, or anything much other than as a phone and occasional camera. What happened to you is why, although I’ve never lost my phone, keys, or even an umbrella. Gloves, on the other hand, vanish with alarming regularity...
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in well i just found out the hard way that there are shitty people in this world. I lost
Congrats on getting your phone back! (Don’t know the odds, but I figure they don’t favor the owner...)
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JayDee reacted to BronxWench in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
:dies laughing:
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
Pull a typical Hollywood. “It was all a dream, the real story goes as follows….” Now, you’ve got a sequel to write!
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JayDee reacted to InvidiaRed in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
Ooh I could put a sneak peak preview after the epilogue
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
Well, suppose you could rewrite it, go for the extended director’s edition, add in another 20k? Or, add in some extra tentacles?
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JayDee reacted to InvidiaRed in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
Oh lord its making me anxious. I want to be done but at the same time what if I screw it all up forever? Yet at the same time I know statistically a few people will like it.
Its like an envoy that I have no control over after its out there.
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JayDee reacted to BronxWench in Finally, my labor is nearing its ebb. 3k words left @BronxWench
How does it feel? I’m always torn when I make it to the end of something. I’m thrilled to be done, but never quite ready to let the little story go out into the world all alone…
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JayDee reacted to InvidiaRed in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
=p Already have one. It’d be kinda strange to have Epilogue 2: Boogaloo haha
just two thousands words and *chef kiss*
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JayDee reacted to Desiderius Price in http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099588&chapter=11 Just a quick
Epilogues, don’t forget epilogues.
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JayDee got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in I feel like there is a whole untapped subgenre of what happens when a zombie apocalyp
@GeorgeGlass Max Brooks*’ short story The Extinction Parade and the comic miniseries adaption pretty much matches that.
*The World War Z guy.
Edit – https://www.amazon.com/Max-Brooks-Extinction-Parade-1/dp/1592912346
“As humans wage their losing fight versus the hoards of the subdead, a frightening realization sets in with the secretive vampire race: our food is dying off. This is the story of the vampire's descent into all-out war with the mindless, hungry hordes of the zombie outbreak as humanity tries to survive them all! “
