Wilde_Guess

Chapters 5, 6, and 7 have now been posted. I still desperately need a ‘beta.’

Chapter 18 is now posted

Author: Wilde_Guess Title: Third Time’s a Soul Bond? Summary: After the “Girl Who Conquered's” girlfriend ambushed DOM Battle Mage Ron Weasley, he'd hoped he was back in his original world, even with starting from conception yet again. But he discovered that he should have learned a LOT more about that magical mystery, the Soul Bond. Now, while dealing with four Soul Bonds, he has the future of the wizarding world both in his hands and between his legs. He is now the chosen one of a "Chosen One" far stronger yet far more fragile than he'd ever imagined. The prophecy only said "The one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord approaches," not that he'd win. Feedback:Fandom: Reviews greatly appreciated. Beta also needed. Fandom: Harry Potter Pairing: Harry/Ron, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Luna, Neville/Hermione Warnings: Abuse Anal Bi HJ HC Inc MF MiCD Minor1 MM Oral Rim Solo Spank Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story, 4 of ?? URL: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099686

I meant “soft’ in a purely “biomechanical” manner, not emotionally. The exact nature of their encounter would tend to turn most people off, no matter the physical attraction. Besides, he’d be a horrible date for her. She could never take him to a bar, because beer goes right through him! Okay, ducking and running now...

Not the protagonist, the “character” the protagonist encounters. However, if the “character” wasn’t a murderous thug among other things, he will never get “soft” for the protagonist, and she did say she thought the character attractive before the actual nature of their encounter became clear..

Chapter 17 in now posted.

No, and I’ve only driven through Mokena.

Thanks. “Number 10” is pouting at me right now. She was about to give her first blow job when I switched windows to read and answer your response. Have you gotten past Chapter 1 yet? Thanks.

I just read the linked page. To my advantage, the protagonists are only about four years younger than me. On the not-so-good side, in their version of ’real life,’ my protagonists are all pushing 50, hard. I don’t remember all the ‘slang’ from then, and I didn’t use it then. The site is a good one, though, and I’ll keep reading through it. The entire school-age ‘ensemble’ will be introduced by Chapter 17, and ‘revealed’ in Chapter 18.

Thanks again for your kind words. When I was growing up, I actually knew a pair of brothers involved in such a relationship, though not well. As for the facial expression and voice tone, that is part of what I need to work on, for all of the characters. I have started to do this, but I do need o work much harder on that for this story.

Arian-Sinclair wrote a review to Chapter 1. Arian-Sinclair, I had not seen the term “demisexual” before I read your review. Yet, at least as far as homosexual attraction goes, it fits both of the Dvorak boys, particularly Danny. Out of the ten school-age protagonists, only ONE is actually a “full bisexual.” However, out of those same ten, only two will have exclusively heterosexual encounters. Those two will only have one partner each, and they are NOT partnered with each other. I will need to “improve” the descriptions of Danny’s tone of voice and inflections. While he is not quite as expressive of emotions as Michael, he does express as well as feel the full range of emotions, whether in private conversation or otherwise. The comparison that keeps coming to mind for me would be to compare Danny to Robert De Niro and Michael with Joe Pesci Thanks.

It took a while, but I received my first review, which I will respond to in the next message. Author: Wilde_Guess Title: Riding the Lincoln Way Summary: Danny Dvorak is a 14 year old Harley fanboy and honors student getting ready to start Lincoln Way Central High School in New Lenox, Illinois, in the summer of 1982. He has silver eyes, a silver tongue, and his issues have issues. His almost 14 year old brother and classmate has turned from closest friend to something else entirely. His new girlfriend has more issues than he does, and her younger sister is dating his younger brother. Will Danny make it through adolescence and High School without getting bad grades, a haircut, or the spanking of a lifetime? The story is currently ‘slow-paced’ because a lot of things are happening around Danny. The pace will pick up. Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated. Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Abuse Anal Bi HJ HC Inc MF MiCD Minor1 Minor2 MM Oral Rim Solo Spank Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story, 12 of ?? URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108829 Thanks.

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Chapter 16 is now posted.

In canon, Petunia and Lily were the only two sisters. What if they were only the youngest two? Instead of Aunt Petunia, he goes to live with his Aunt Hyacinth Bucket which she pronounces ‘Bouquet,’ thank you very much. Rules: All Waltons become Evanses. “Daddy” is still senile and widdowed, which is why Harry couldn’t stay with him. All of Harry’s aunts and uncles will appear in the story, including Petunia and Vernon. Sheridan Bucket is born in July of 1980, and is a muggle-born wizard who will attend Hogwarts with Harry. He and Harry will not be spoiled or abused. They will get along with each other at least as well as normal siblings. They will get far more guidance from Richard Bucket than from Hyacinth. Hyacinth likes magic and loathes Petunia, despite Petunia’s being married to a Managing Director of a largish company as in canon. Hyacinth knows Snape, and loathes him ‘now’ even more than Petunia. She was previously indifferent to him, and accepts that Snape’s feelings for Lily were genuine. Harry grows up knowing some things about the Wizarding World, but not others. He knows his birth parents were murdered by magical terrorists, but not that he’s the “Boy Who Lived,” as the biggest example. Richard actually likes gardening with Harry and Sheridan, but only to take a break from Hyacinth for a while, and to show the “Bitch and Bastard Dursleys” what a garden should look like. Hyacinth should, but doesn’t have to maintain “physical intimacy” with Richard, just to give him a break. Any rating is good, but no crack romantic or erotic pairings, such as Harry/any Death Eater, bigot, or adult. Non-crack but non-canon pairings, including Harry/Sheridan or Harry/Sheridan/Ron, or Hermione/Ginny, etc are fine. Can anyone out there help Harry in “Keeping Up Appearances?”

I’ve done some editing and revising on Chapters 14 and 15, including adding short driving lessons, and moving a day from Chapter 14 to 15.

I’ve done some editing and revising on Chapters 1 and 2, to improve readability and story flow. Chapter 16 should be up later in the week.

Chapter 15, “June Bride Again,” is now posted.

Here’s a sneak preview from a near but not next future chapter. ___________________________________________________________________ Michael looked sternly at Debbie, who replied with “He told me ages ago, Michael. You know what a jealous bitch I am, and you haven’t seen me freak out on him, have you?” Michael stood up, hugged her, and gave her a ‘heavy-R’ kiss which she returned. He told her, “You aren’t a bitch, and never will be.” She asked in return, “You said nothing about jealous?” He quipped, “Because I won’t lie to you. You are getting better, kinda…” She huffed, and they kissed again

If a story becomes a series without plans to continue on, it can stagnate rather easily. I don’t think that the creator of Batman thought the series would still be in ‘original publication’ almost eighty years after the first issue hit the news-stands. Cubby Broccoli’s daughter had to reboot James Bond because people were no longer willing to suspend their disbelief of an early-Cold-War licensed assassin continuing to work when the daughter of the King who first commissioned him was a white-haired grandmother and the sons of the Prime Ministers who had that duty had died of old age. Whether by accident or design, the Star Trek and Star Wars universes were open-ended and broad enough to allow for countless stories and adventures.

One needs look nor further than real life to find every type of “villain” you could desire. From the sociopath, to the eternally greedy, to the hypocrite, to the fanatic, to the horrifically misguided, they’re all there. Even honest and honorable people can find themselves on opposite sides of a “front” in a “conflict,” where absent that conflict they would share meals and be friends with each other. In writing, just like in real life, every villain has their place.