Hi, Deadman and all.
Beyond what GeorgeGlass and Desiderius Price wrote, I would add that you should try to go more for “telling the story” instead of “telling about the story.” I.E. show the “action” directly as much as possible without making the story too unwieldy for either your readers or yourself. You could briefly describe the first seduction as the “intro,” and have the protagonist flashback and compare “key” parts of the second seduction to the first, comparing the two.
Cheers!
Hi, InvidiaRed
I would be interested in reading Doctor McCoy’s “Medical Officer’s Log,” myself.
Damnit, Jim! I’m a Doctor, not a… Oh fuck, I am a doctor! Okay, whip it out, and let’s see what you’ve caught this week…
Cheers!
Hi, GeorgeGlass.
By itself, no. While the spaceships from the Star Trek universe keep Captain’s and Ship’s Logs, other ships of notable size also keep Ship’s Logs, and the ship’s Captain might also keep a “Captain’s Log” or journal/diary of personal observations he or she doesn’t wish to keep in the main ship’s log.
Seeing the erotica/pornographic bent of this site, I would also assume that the “Captain” just might be well-endowed (or tragically not endowed,) and was (at least trying) to get “busy.”
Cheers!
Hello, all.
Molly Weasley is reincarnated as Cersi Lannister. She is absolutely faithful to Robert Baratheon. She gives birth to at least three black-haired and blue-eyed children. She decides that the only thing worse than a bad king is a bad father, and Robert is both. So, she has him killed.
Thanks in advance.