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  3. Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread

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    For the Dipper fic and monster girl suggestions, I’d recommend the girls from Monster Musume.

    For the TMNT 2012 fic, I’m leaning towards male-Leo being the focus of it.

    As for the combat one, I’ll need to think more about that.

    What’s the name of your account here?

     

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    4 hours ago, Guest Guest, maybe writer said:

    again, sorry if i’m late. or taking it in too much of MY direction.

    I like the ideas you presented, and you bring up good points about how to avoid having characters act OOC.

    I think I read a Naruto fic a while back that deconstructed the whole “OP-Dark!-Harem Master Naruto” fics that you see so many of.  It showcased how there’s no way the characters would act the way they do in those stories, and pinned those actions as the manipulations of other-dimensional entities that are basically the stand-ins for the authors of those fics.

    Of the two Overlord Jon ideas you presented, I guess it’s probably no surprise that I like the second one best, where he’s transported to a mishmash world where all of these characters co-exist at the same time, and where he tries to stay as a good guy despite his surroundings, which makes for a more interesting story in my opinion.  After all, we live in a day and age where anti-heroes are seemingly and literally EVERYWHERE, so that way it stands out more.

    I saw Tayu Tayu as well, although it was a few years ago, so my memory is a little sketchy at the moment.  I remember the ending being that the main guy did the main girl so good that when it was over and she was tired, the other girls stepped in and said they were having their turn with him, and she said, “Oh do whatever you want,” and then collapses from exhaustion.

    As for the harem fic ideas, I like the Dipper one as well, although I might need a bit more information on the other two.

    BTW, 2 things:

    1. Have you seen Konosuba?
    2. Any luck with getting a profile on this site?

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    Just now, Red_Light_Zone said:

    These are actually the people that inspired me. Ive wanted to write for a while and i figured porn would be the most fun. The hardest part is starting.

    I set my mind on havong Jon be the overlord.

    Works for me.  And I wish you luck.  PM me and maybe I can help a little with editing and what have you.

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    2 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    I actually like this idea a lot more than I thought I would. Idk, maybe its just my inner roll-player demanding I keep a consistant tone when in the end of the day this is all porn and Im taking things too seriously.

    If all els fails, I'll likely end up doing it because it all sounds fun.

    Glad you like it, and hey, the story is what you want it to be.  You can keep the porn and sex and maybe get serious here and there while having the fun sex time in between.  This is just a suggestion I made for coherency.

    I recommend checking out megamatt09’s story “Side Effect” when you can, as it balanced the sex with the more serious story to great effect, and combined Marvel and DC together effectively into one universe with Spider-Man as the main focus.

    Another that I would recommend is EvilFuzzy9’s story “A Lewd New World” where Naruto is the only man in the world and everyone else is a female for him to fuck.

    I’m using both of these as inspiration for how I’m handling RexFan12345’s Ben 10/ATLA challenge where Ben goes to an AU of the ATLA world.

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    If it were me, I’d go the mish-mash route of combining these worlds into one.  Plus, I can see how these girls could be molded to fit into a dark fantasy world:

    1. Toph, the daughter of a prominent noble house that secretly practices earth-bending magic, and whom her parents offer to the Overlord in order to get in good favor with him.
    2. Korra – has her elemental powers and is the leader of a roaming band of mercenaries that the Overlord inducts into his service.
    3. Azula – the tyrannical princess of a foreign land that seeks to conquer the rest of the world before falling at the hands of the Overlord, who takes her as a slave.
    4. Ty Lee – a court performer that the Overlord inducts into his service and whom he beds from time to time.
    5. Gwen – a practicing mage that is sort of the “court wizard:” for the Overlord that he has regular sex with
    6. Wendy – a woodsman’s daughter whom the Overlord picks up and serves as both his architect and someone to share his bed with.
    7. April O’Neil – the Overlord’s spymistress (sneaks around to dig up dirt for him) and sleeps with him, of course.
    8. Velma – the Overlord’s librarian and record keeper that he makes plenty of noise with (wink-wink)
    9. Shego – a wood elf assassin and magic-user that the Overlord keeps around.
    10. Lord Dominator – another would-be conquerer that the Overlord brings to her knees
    11. Panda Delgado – a human assassin that the Overlord keeps around like Shego.

    Just an idea, but what do you think?

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    Well, I’ve seen a couple fics where he ended up being corrupted into the role of Cur or had to play the part in order to keep his remaining friends and family safe.

    And on the subject of why the girls stay, you understand what I mean, right?  Still, it’s your story, so your decision to make.

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    Possibly, although I’m sure they might get curious as to how things are going on back in their own worlds, or someone could come looking for them and just happen to find the portal to the Overlord’s world.  My thought was that if you remove the old life, they’ve got no reason not to stay with the Overlord.

    I’m good with him, yes.  I saw Secret Saturdays way back when, although I don’t think I was able to catch all the episodes.  Why do you ask?

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    7 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Yeah, dimension hopping is hard to write, but I was going for more comical chapters where the Overlord is taken to an alternate world for a while to dick around for a while and band a new girl.

    If you want to do that, that’s fine, it’s your story.  Although I think this would still be nice to see:

    Image result for korra the barbarian

    I feel a little stupid for asking this, but would anal be involved in the sex scenes?  It’s kind of a must for me.

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    3 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    No that was be an accident, I meant to say just Korra. And I had this idea that the overlord, more than once, tried to take over other worlds, leaving “Gates” to come back to, the girls would unwittingly wall into the gate and into the overlord’s chambers. or the opposite happened and the Overlord ended up sucked into their world. A funny thought is that the Overlord is sucked into the Avatar world multiple times.

    This is Panda, and that’s actually how big her boobs are.

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    Oh, so this would involve dimension-hopping.  That can get tricky if you’re not careful.  Plus, I was under the impression that this fantasy world the Overlord takes control of would be a sort of mish-mash of multiple worlds rolled into one, but if you want to do the dimension hop, that’s fine.

    I looked up the character in Google after I saw her on the list, although the way she was drawn had her waist be so thin it made me wonder how she didn’t snap in half.

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    54 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Right, and so long as we all enjoy it and no one gets hurt, it’s all good clean fun!

    Indeed.

     

    40 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Oh, just some standard stuff along with some unique girls. All of whom are busty I might add. Just to name a few:

    AtlA (LoK)

    Toph

    Korra

    Azula

    Tylee

    Korra

    Gwen (Ben 10)

    Wendy(Gravity Falls)

    April O’Neel (TMNT)

    Velma (Scooby Doo {she’s my waifu guys})

    Shego (Kim Possible)

    Lord Dominator (Wander over Yonder)

    Panda Delgado (Body Baggers)

    Yeah, my least is either good girls to be cherished or bad girls to be dominated.

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    Neet choices, although you mentioned Korra twice.  Did you mean Katara for one of them?  Also, would it be safe to assume that they would all be reimagined to fit in this dark fantasy world?  I can imagine Korra as either a type of Red Sonja-like barbarian queen or a tribal shaman of sorts, both versions with her elemental powers.

    I haven’t read Body Bags so I’m not familiar with Panda Delgado.  The rest of them I’m familiar with.

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    16 minutes ago, Praetor said:

         A friend was watching that while I was in his house playing with a Switch.  I remember thinking it wasn’t as good as Log Horizon.  For heroes, if you’re shooting for younger ones, Link, Beast Boy, Dipper, or Marco.  Marco, in particular, I think is worth exploring since he is technically in his 30s.  You could also do a futa lead, or even a woman, which I was thinking of doing for a similar fic.  She usually cross plays  in game as the opposite gender and so, in either male or futa form, goes to town now that she has a penis of her own.  Could be a serious analysis of gender roles, sexuality, penis envy, and double standards; mostly en excuse for a character to swing around a whale dick with reckless abandon.

    I haven’t seen Log Horizon, so I can’t make a comparison between the two.

    Yeah, porn and smut, often regardless of whatever else you put on it, are thinly veiled excuses to get one person’s genitals to another person’s genitals.  Just something I heard a while back and there’s a bit of truth to it.

    But still, we’re just here to enjoy ourselves with it, right?

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    13 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    No, while there have been Overlords in the pastof this world, there hasnt been a real one for centuries. He might meet characters in other shows if he were transported there. Also, my rule for the harem would be one to two from each race like an orc, a goblin shorkstack, a dragon lady, etc. There is one must have, the daughter of darksied and the kryptonian goddess Cythonna. For refference look up Lady Darkseid and just give her blue ice skin.

    Neat. I'll look this up later.

    What I meant was would he meet other characters from the Overlord anime?

    Interesting choices for the harem members.  If you include girls from other worlds, who would you pick?  I got a few ideas if you’re interested.

    Enjoy!

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    3 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Sorry about the long reply, but here.

    Kazuma and Jon Kent are easily the most interesting.

    For Jon, I can see a story with him. His a teenager who’s starting to be more and more conflicted with his parental teachings and the real world issues he has to save people from. He starts to get tired of the monotonous cycle of catching the bad guy only for them to be free and ruin more innocent lives. This comes to a head when Lex builds a device to control reality on a planetary scale and nearly makes him and his family disappear. Jon stops him, but is then left stranded in the source (The DC’s equivalent to a Blank canvas where all other multiverses reside like Marvel and Dragon Ball).

    He then appears to be stranded on a fantasy universe like WoW, LotR, and Final Fantasy XIV. Only this time it looks like George R.R. Martin directed it so it’s a sort of Grim Dark fantasy filled with political intrigue and strife where people of different fantasy races suffer, are at war, or are in some way evil. Even many the gods are either insane, evil, or power hungry. He then finds a man named Telos, a wizard who who ascended to godhood status and wants Gohan to save this world from itself while he goes off into the multiverse. Jon agrees and is given the Tome of Telos, a magical text book that contains knowledge on all the magical arts there is and can teach the user to bend the fundamental laws of reality in accordance to their very will. Jon starts Kicking ass, and gains the title of Overlord, a derogitory term for villain.

    Of course he gains a harem along the way.

    Interesting setup, so would Jon meet other characters from Overlord or would he meet other characters from other shows and what have you as well?  Also, who would you pick for this harem?

    6 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    I still need to see Konosuba, but if it is what I think it is, I’ll have something worked out.

    Well, I definitely enjoyed it.  It subverts a lot of the expectations you might have from having seen other shows, where you expect it to play out one way, but then it does something unexpected, which is often the setup of the joke.

    Kazuma might work as well in this because he’s a bit of an entitled nerd and a pervert.

    2 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Also, Gohan would be a good candidate.

    I figured you might think that given how you mentioned him in the one with Jon Kent.

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    Perhaps, although I consider ALL fanfics AUs, no matter how much they stick to canon.

    As for a list:

    1. Peter Parker (teenaged)
    2. Jack Darby (Transformers Prime)
    3. Jon Kent (Superman and Lois Lane’s son)
    4. Kazuma (Konosuba)
    5. Dick Grayson (Nightwing/Robin)
    6. Jake (The Dark Tower)
    7. Ben Tennyson (Ben 10)
    8. Any of the main male leads from ATLA or LOK reimagined as modern boys in our world.

    That’s about all I can come up with at the moment.  If I think of any more dudes, I’ll let you know.

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    Just now, Red_Light_Zone said:

    No, I mean the old videogame overlord, with minions and evil heroes. I want to do something like thebooblovers challenge where hiccup is the overlord. But lets make someone else have the mantel. Any thoughts?

    That’s actually what I meant, someone else having the mantel.  As for thoughts on who it should go to, I’m not sure.  A few characters I can think of are the kind who wouldn’t do that kind of thing.

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