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1 hour ago, thebooblover said:
I would have Dana and Terry having broken up before the events of the story, but they would still be friends.
Well, that’s good to know. And I’m assuming that Terry would have a non-active role in this story?
Also, would the female characters become buxom and curvaceous due to Matt’s amulet or remain as is?
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2 minutes ago, thebooblover said:
They would be characters from Batman Beyond.
Like Max Gibson and other female characters?
Would Terry still have Dana or would you have Matt steal her away from him and leave Terry alone? Just asking because I want to be sure and I’m not big on cheating.
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3 minutes ago, thebooblover said:
I was thinking he could be like a mini-Superman (with Super strength, flying, resiliency, super speed, x-ray vision, super hearing, etc...)
Though obviously without the Kryptonite weakness.
Well, it seems you have your story set up, but who would be the harem? Would they be characters from DC or OCs?
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10 minutes ago, thebooblover said:
So this is what I wrote so far. Why’d you think, needs any fixing?
“After saving an old lady from a mugging, Terry’s younger brother Matt finds a strange amulet. When he gets home and puts it on, the amulet shows him a holographic projection of a woman that tells him where it came from, a planet where its people had superpowers.
The amulet explains that it was made by one the residents of the planet, who was planning to come to Earth and made the amulet to retain his powers since they don’t work on Earth. However, the amulet detected its creator’s evil intentions, and escaped to find someone who could use the powers contained in it for good, and chose Matt because it saw him helping the old lady.
During this conversation, Matt feels the power of the amulet coursing through him, but also notices a strange feeling in his crotch. He also notices the hologram’s very sizeable bust. When the amulet finishes its story, it talks about all the powers that Matt will now have.
She also reveals one more thing about the citizens of the planet: they’re very well-endowed, and when they get to Earth, their endowments disappear, and the amulet was not only supposed to make its creators powers work on Earth, but keep his endowments intact. Matt then undoes his pants and finds that indeed his dick is now much bigger than before.
Meanwhile, the creator of the amulet arrives on Earth, and seeks for it.”
Sounds like a good set-up to me. What would be the powers Matt has, aside from having a big dick?
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I don’t know if anyone is still interested in this, but I just wanted to clarify something. When I put the part about all of Shinji’s girls having Guyver units of their own in, it was in consideration of a fact about the Guyver. Namely, those who have units tend to be immortal, with them remaining the same age forever and/or being cloned back into existence with their memories intact if their bodies are destroyed and the control medal is unharmed.
So, if Shinji was the only one with a Guyver Unit, then he would outlive all of his loved ones and his harem. However, if they had units of their own or had some other means of remaining alive, then the problem would be side-stepped altogether.
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Because of the time scarcity?
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I see. Well, I guess the question to ask is if you want her to go to that extreme or stay with what you had in mind originally.
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11 minutes ago, Praetor said:
I could, and plan to gradually increase her own proportions in relation to her powers but most reviews on my stories ask to dial down the extreme. Science fiction and fantasy mostly but I actually don’t really read stories anymore as my interest shifted to writing and spare time became scarce.
Is there a limit on the extreme that you take them to?
I haven’t been able to read much myself, to be honest. The most I’ve been reading these days is bits and pieces at a time in one book; Niel Gaiman’s “American Gods.”
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31 minutes ago, Hide_My_Sins said:
Deadpool! Deadpool should be the one that know Frank messed with the Universe. But he is okay with it, as Lady Death has also become a sex crazed bimbo that worships the ground Deadpool walks on.
That could prove interesting to see. Although, I wonder how the male heroes and villains would react to Franklin getting so many women.
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Glad you like it. Anything else that you need help with?
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Well, one way to start that scene would be to describe how awkward and uncomfortable he’s feeling at seeing someone viewing images of his mother like that. After that, you can do a little exposition describing his life before getting back to the scene with him trying and failing to keep his eyes off of those images before the Avengers show up.
Something like this, maybe?
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Franklin Richards was not having the easiest time at that moment. And who could blame him? Someone was looking at porn images of his mother for crying out loud.
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And then you add to it from there. Does that help?
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Well, I don’t know about that thing with Reed, since I’m not too big on taking canon heroes and having them turn evil out of the blue, although both Marvel and DC tend to do that in massively convoluted and stupid ways.
As for the Sex Ed thing, I only suggested it because for normal education it tends to be a requirement, even if you know about that stuff beforehand. I suppose the porn thing might work just as well.
What do you want the scene to be at the very beginning?
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Just a suggestion and you don’t have to do this, but how about starting it in the normal world before things get erotic? Franklin’s been homeschooled for a lot of his life (since, you know, super-genius parents and all that) and has only recently started to go to public school, only to find that his upbringing has left him unprepared for life among ordinary people. One day, he comes home after a class that taught about sex ed and then has that dream before waking up to the sight of his bimbofied mother sucking him off.
Just an idea.
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I see. Well, which of those starts you mentioned do you lean towards the most?
Also, I would mainly suggest these few things:
- A dilemma where he tries to decide if he wants things to go back to the way they were or not
- A contemplation of what he could do with this power
- Someone else is aware of the changes made (it’s a superhero story, someone else is bound to notice)
BTW, would the outfits of the female characters change to become skimpier or just enlarged to accommodate their newly enlarged assets?
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Well, if he can do all that, couldn’t he alter people’s perception so that no one sees him unless he wants them to? That way, he could go to school, deal with the monster/emergency, and then be back in time without anyone even noticing. Hell, he could even have sex and make it so that no one notices or pays any attention unless he wants them to, right?
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3 minutes ago, Guest D-Strut said:
Wow you’re fast. Well… I’m in a bit of a pickle. See, I’ve taken on a few challenges plus some works on my own. I have like 10 stories in total, but I’m focusing on 3 challenges.
The one I’m having trouble with is the Marvel Comics challenge where Franklin Richards is going through puberty and accidentally bends reality turning the women heorins and villainesses into slutty, overdeveloped sluts after a surreal wet dream.
The issue I have is starting the damn thing. Since everyone knows that his family are superheroes, he doesn’t have a secret identity when he’s going out to be a hero, something many villains teas him for (Until Franklin one shots him with his powers.) But how should it begin? Should he go to school and try to be a regular kid taking notes at school until he’s called for an emergency because everyone knows who he is, or he come back after dealing with a monster in time for lunch? Should he not go to school and just be trained by SHIELD? Should he just go solo and patrol during the day?
Well, for starters, what are the limits on Franklin’s powers? If he can bend reality, can he also alter people’s perception?
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2 minutes ago, Hide_My_Sins said:
What kind of advice are you looking for?
I was about to say the same thing.
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And I can mix in some ideas from my “Avatar: The Last Man” challenge, although without the male Aang, obviously. Might cause some changes to the first lemon, though.
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Not much to tell. Mainly it’s just ideas for how to go about the next chapter of the Ben 10/ATLA fic, and maybe a few for beyond that.
Would you be okay if it was an ATLA world that was predominantly female, and men being a rarity?
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Not much, just waking up and going over ideas in my head. You?
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35 minutes ago, Rexfan12345 said:
Really great job on the first chapter, the meeting and dialogue was great and can't wait for more
Thanks, Rex. Sorry that there were no lemons, but I tried to make it good and make sense on the reactions. Any other thoughts or critiques?
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Well, it’s been a long time coming, but it’s finally here. The first chapter of the Ben 10/ATLA fic that I agreed to do for RexFan12345 months ago. I’m afraid there are no lemons in this chapter, just set up, but we’ll get to the lemony goodness soon enough. I was going to make it longer and have it cover the first two episodes of ATLA and the first lemon, but that would take too long and probably scare off the readers.
Hope you all like it, and give me feedback when you can.
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I see. Not all that surprising, considering how many other stories and challenges you’ve taken up. I just thought I’d ask.
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I mean will Terry appear in it or not?