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    2 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    Doh, i meant queen of fables. I just call the ‘strong with strong’ shipping eugenics because of subtext. she, however, calls the unpowered ‘peasants’ and doesn;t understand wy ‘prince charming’ (clark)  doesn’t want ‘snow white’ (diana)

    Oh, I see.  Sorry, I haven’t read Fables, though I’ve heard of it.

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    Not sure about the Queen of Hearts, as I tried looking that up and I didn’t find anything about eugenics shipping in regard to her.

    Yes, thank God they changed that.

    Indeed, it was a stupid argument to base having the characters get together.

    Glad we agree on the DCAU.  As for Wondy and her amped up bloodlust, they have played up the warrior woman aspect a bit much in the last few years.  Thankfully, they seem to be playing that down a bit.

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    One problem that I have with the “Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex” argument is how it’s used to justify pairing Superman up with Wonder Woman.  Let me explain.

    You see, a lot of people like to define superheroes by their powers.  Superman, in particular, is mocked for being nothing but a flying brick (among the strongest ever, but still...).  Wonder Woman, whom many people don’t actually know her powers outside of super strength, assume that she’s the world’s strongest woman.  Hence, world’s strongest man and world’s strongest woman.

    While they may have some qualities that might make them romantically-inclined, on the whole, I find the idea of the relationship to be boring.  As stated above, it’s just two strong people and maybe one argument between them (Wondy is more willing to kill than Supes).  So, really, the relationship has no appeal to me, and yet I see a lot of fics and even some official stuff that likes to pair the two together simply because of their strength.

    Personally, I rather liked the ship-teasing we got from the Justice League cartoon where we got hints of a possible relationship between Batman and Wonder Woman.

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    Just curious about something, but what do you guys think of the “Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex” argument?  In case you don’t know what that is, it’s basically the idea that Superman can’t have sex with anyone unless they match his strength, or else he’ll accidentally and literally rip them apart.

    Personally, I see that there are at least 2 problems with this mindset:

    1. The people who believe this don’t seem to be aware of or don’t care about the fact that there are sexual positions where Superman’s partner, whoever they are, could be the active participant instead of him, like the cowgirl position, reverse cowgirl, etc.
    2. The believers of this don’t seem to realize that Superman has complete control over his strength.  Otherwise, he’d rip the doorknob off a door every time he entered a room.

    Anyway, I was curious about what you all thought of it.

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    1 minute ago, Strange_idea said:

    make sure azula is still…. azula when she’s having her breakdown, and at least puts on a show of her old, chessmaster persona. they just have a way of taking advantage back. until she goes COMPLETELY into ‘make me your slave’

     

    3 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    also, there’s ‘a new world’ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10023670/1/A-New-World which has a suprsing amount of pacing but is very lemon-y.  girls are introduced several chapters before joining up, dozens of chapters before sleeping with ash, and some even leave the story for a while

    I’ll give it a look sometime.  In the meantime, I’ve still got the next chapter to finish writing (as well as for other stories) before I can worry about how to have Ben and the Gaang pin Azula down for good and mark her ass as theirs permanently.

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    2 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    thing is though, that azula is your best villain, and it’d be a shame to waste her.

    what’s I’d do is have her breakdown over her next few appearance, subtly but gowing. she becomes flirtier with the gaang, but catches herself, and their encounters become more and more charged, with her liking to hold them down and lean in close etc. she also gets more reckless and agressive, and had new plans. Ben and the others figure out that flirting with her REALLY gets under her skin and makes her slip up, but try not to overdo it. mainly to make her slip up information

    she breaks down earlier, but not too early and it feels earned and satisfying.

    I’ll consider it, though it seems like it might work.  Ozai is still the main villain that has to be taken down in the end, though.

    1 minute ago, Strange_idea said:

    yeah, i’d go with the ‘take time’ thing. it’s always satisfying if you do it right. have you read ‘pokemon reset bloodlines?’ excellent pacing, though a non lemon story, but still quite lovely buildup

    Can’t say that I’ve read that, or even heard of it until now.

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    Well, part of it is that I considered that people might be asking a lot about when Azula joins the harem.  Plus, as so many shows, movies, and whatnot have shown, people can lose interest if you drag stuff out.  Not to mention, I’m already trying to figure out what I can get away with in keeping and/or leaving out things from the show.

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    6 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    I had a thought, have you seen lurkerggs ‘melon lord’ pictures? well, i was just talking about an azula/aang harem story in a nother thread, and i had a thought, what if in your ben 10 story, azula was less a sociopath (still kinda one) and more just had an aburd libido. the firenation could be capturing ‘enhancing’ and brainwashing girls for her to enjoy. like in this picture: https://lurkergg.deviantart.com/art/Jun-Melonlord-Universe-676118947 though it’s toph running things in the pictures.

    Given the fire nation already practises kidnapping and brainwashing, and azula’s lust for power and control freak tendencies it makes some sense. it wouldn’t be openly happening, it’s an agenda she’s building for herself in secret.

     

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    I think I may have seen a few of them here and there, though not in depth.

    It sounds like an interesting idea, although considering that this is a world where open sexuality, harems, enhanced figures are the norm, that may not work as much.  The idea that I was running with a bit did involve something similar, where the Fire Lord’s family taking girls for their harems has been something that’s been going on for a long time, and it’s one part of what started the war.

    I’ve had a few ideas for what to do with Azula:

    1. She captures Ben at one point and tries to have her way with him, admitting that she finds the lifestyle she’s been living to be incredibly boring, only for the Gaang to swoop in and grab Ben before she can finish her fun time with him.  This would then result in a growing frustration that comes with the absence of Ben’s dick, to the point where, when she’s defeated in the incident with the drill, she surrenders and strips herself naked, demanding to be Ben’s slave.
    2. She has Mai and Ty Lee as part of her harem, though in the case of Mai, it was more in an effort on Azula’s part to spite Zuka (fem!Zuko) due to the latter’s feelings for Mai.  When she’s defeated at the end of the drill incident, she’s captured and Mai and Ty Lee surrender while Azula is held prisoner.  Then, while Ben and the Gaang, plus Zuka and Irah, interrogate her for information, but get nowhere.  During the interrogation, though, she mentions that she doesn’t see what the big deal is about men and real cocks anyway, prompting Ben to offer her a chance to see for herself.  She agrees, thinking it won’t amount to anything, but then she finds that she likes it so much that she surrenders herself to him willingly.

    Not sure which, if either of those directions to go, honestly, but it’ll be a little bit before I get to Azula and her part in the story.  What do you think?

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    I don’t mind the pictures, and while I got the gist, it was a lot to read through.  Most of what I and others do with these threads is post one idea at a time and discuss each of them before coming up with the next one and repeating the process with that and so on and so on.  Yours is...well, it’s not bad, but...the ideas are all posted one right after the other and it can be a lot to process at once, especially given the length of some of them.

    And you’re right, writing the story should be fun.

    I sent you a PM not too long ago clarifying what NTR meant, so you can respond to that and we can go from there if you want.

    The reformatter one makes more sense to me.

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    37 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    forgive me for asking here, but what did you think of the ideas in my new thread?

    Took me a little while to read through them all, but the ones that interested me were the Kim Possible, Gravity Falls, RWBY,  and Transformers Prime ones.

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    3 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    good point. maybe for kenny 10?

    Possibly, if I decide to do a sequel.

    2 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    actually, better question, are you including any other ben 10 characters

    I was planning on having a few of them appear at the ending for after Ben returns back to his world.  PM me if you want to discuss it in more detail.

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    8 hours ago, Strange_idea said:

    actually, that reminds me, have you plans of including korra and company?

    it’s doable i think

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    I’ve thought about it, though that would mean adding more to the list I already have planned for the harem:

    1. Fem!Aang
    2. Katara
    3. Sokkara (Fem!Sokka)
    4. Toph Bei Fong
    5. Suki
    6. Yue
    7. Zuka (Fem!Zuko)
    8. Azula
    9. Mai
    10. Ty Lee
    11. June
    12. Irah (Fem!Iroh) (Maybe)

    With the edition you suggest, it would be this:

    1. Korra
    2. Fem!Mako
    3. Fem!Bolin
    4. Asami
    5. Lin Bei Fong
    6. Suyin Bei Fong
    7. Eska
    8. Fem!Desna
    9. Opal
    10. Ikki
    11. Jinora
    12. Fem!Meelo

    Quite a load, don’t you think?  Although I could probably find a way of reimagining them into the setting.

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    4 minutes ago, Strange_idea said:

    While I'm here, have ypu thought about having an omnitrix freakout mutate appa into an anthro?

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    Not really, as I was pretty much planning on just having Appa be Appa.  Plus, there’re plenty of characters to work with as it is, and a good number of Ben’s aliens look like anthros themselves, don’t you think?

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