Snake_King
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Indeed. Plus, taking advantage of someone while they’re under the influence of something (scientific mind control, magical mind control, alcohol, drugs. etc.) still qualifies as rape, wouldn’t you think?
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11 hours ago, Praetor said:
Strong no on the nipple sex, that's just gross and looks painful.
Yeah, I never really got why that was a thing myself. Same with vore and others.
11 hours ago, Praetor said:I am trying to ultimately deconstruct and reconstruct the mind breaking aspect. Or at least subvert it. The only one who is too far gone is Harley because she starts off broken but I am aiming to have everyone eventually rebound and retain themselves, or at least a more perverted sense of it. They're still heroes and Joker is still the villain.
1I say go for the subversion. It’s not often that you see a fic where the girls who’ve been broken get “fixed”, for lack of a better term.
11 hours ago, Praetor said:I am also thinking of one day doing a megacrossover where Gwen accidentally creates a magical singularity or something that draws Ben, Terance, Naruko, Hiccup, Hiro, Link, Horse Cock Girl and any other male leads I have by then into a single place with 2 or 3 of their main or most popular harem members for a huge orgy.
That should be interesting. How goes those stories, BTW?
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Honestly, I would like to see more harem fics with Aang, and I actually came up with a challenge for it as well, one with plenty of girls/women to choose from.
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Well, if want a Spider-Man challenge, I’ve got two, if you’re interested:
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19 hours ago, Strange_idea said:
Well i had this idea going where korra, asami and pian were juggling the roles of mary jane, gwen and peter. Specifically the spectacular spiderman versions, so they have a love triangle where they date him one after the other before falling for each itber two and winding all uo together. I say juggling roles because the love triangle between them is actually revolved a little. Though i keep changung my mind which direction.
Part of this, to keep the roles from vetting too clear cut, was that asami was black cat AND the lady octopus. And both after regaining her legs with the use of advanced leg braces that make her superhumanly agile, which she uses combined with her ock arms.
The idea is asami appears at fist to be heading down a 'ron the death eater' oath to free up the shipping by being crabby and enaging in questionable activities, but it's really a plot hook leading to her beig a more prominent possibilty.
My idea was that venom was built up as a mysterious gang leader sending his loyal goons after korra and appearing in what appears to be nervous breakdowns where nightmare korra appears with unalaqs voice and raavas colours..... but that's the real venom. Meanwhile the spirit vines are rotting.... turning black…
Venom turns out to be behind it all. As a true dark avatar, all the worst of korra, and a blight in both spirit and material worlds. The final boss is giant csrnage-korra powered by corrupt spirit vines which is destroyed when it trys to absorb her and asami and piana both ease her worries and show her they love her, in a nod to the finale of the webcomic girly.
I also had an idea about amon being the goblin that refernces his use of hobgoblin as a puppet.
35Heh, you really seem to like the idea of the symbiotes being more psychological, don’t you?
I was leaning towards the Goblin being an OC based on Norman Osborn and a business rival to the Satos.
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13 hours ago, Strange_idea said:
Idea for a character building bait-and-switch. Asami is badly injured early on, allowing for butterfly effect.to happen, and her dad begins building her a prosphetic. One that STARTS out as just a steampunk wheelchair. The turns it gets a pair of arms.....and asami starts acting snappish under the stress..... though of course she's horrified when she does. She's built up to be doc, but no she's really an unwilling lady octopus and the TEST SUBJECT for the greater oc suit, one designed to keep her safe from benders. It IS made for her, but when her dad outs it on out if desperation to gwt it to her and begs her to use it she refuses. Then it turns out the little moments where a sign something is wrong with the life support fluid..… and he's plugged himself in...
We can have korra caring for the injured asami and telling her "you'd do the same in my position"
Oh and venom? Or carnage? She's not just a spirit touched, she's vaatu, mixed with the memory of unalaq combined with the 'ghost korra'. Basically, she's everything korra hates about herself mixed with all of their hate of her, forming a being which has no idea qho or what it is but 'knows' it's the better avatar. It's part spirit, part living, can bend elements (but not without twisting them somehow) and shapeshift. And it carries all korras memories because it IS korra. And it's in love with asami.... and like a symbiote it can makez others into more of itself. Carnage is either it's avatar state or the result of ALL it's peices being overcome with rage. It's very presence cracks the earth, sours the air and turns fire into thick, choking smoke, among other things.
Or maybe each of the above becomes a venom and combined they are carnage.
25Actually, when I came up with this idea, I had Asami in mind for Black Cat.
And about Venom, Carnage, and Vaatu, the idea that I was going with was that the two were Vaatu’s dark spirit servants, as well as rearranging things so that Vaatu is the final boss that it all ultimately leads to, and all the other villains are in some way connected to him.
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3 hours ago, Guest 368 said:
I liked chapter 3 ... you know it would be interesting for girls to use their breasts as weapons.
I will wait patiently for chapter 4.I’d keep that sort of thing for between the girls of the harem as part of a game between them.
Glad you liked the chapter, and I’ll start on 4 as soon as I’m able to. Any other thoughts or critiques?
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Well, here’s chapter 3 of “Ben 10: A Bend In Reality.” Let me know what you all think, and I’ll get back to you as soon as possible.
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6 hours ago, Guest 368 said:
Hey snake king continue the chapter 3 to ben 10 a bend reality
I’m working on it.
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True, sometimes a return to form is needed in order to shake things up.
As for using an audience's expectations against them, sometimes doing that all the time can in and of itself get repetitive. For example, using a non-hentai/ecchi case, one of IDW’s Publishing’s “Transformers” comic writers, James Roberts, tends to use the constant setup of evidence in history being supposed fact only to pull the unreliable narrator trope and reveal that the events in question went about in a different direction. He does this to the point of predictability and, as far as I can tell, is unapologetic for it. A common way he tends to do it is having the heroes about to meet something/someone supposedly divine/supernatural, only for that person/thing to be revealed as either fake or mundane in nature.
I haven’t seen Change 123, but I just looked it up and I’ll have to check it out later.
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Yeah, it does add to it. I think Kevin Smith said that these days, because people are so cynical and jaded and are so used to how stories tend to work, writers have to rely on more and more absurd and out there plots to keep their interest. And let’s face it, Japan knows how to take fanservice and make it over the top and funny.
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Has anyone seen the anime Keijo?
In case you haven’t and don’t know what it’s about, it’s basically a sports anime where the contestants are all women and girls, have to compete against each other on floats called a land in a swimming pool, and have to knock each other off of the land using only their boobs and butts. It’s pretty ridiculous and funny at the same time. I think you can pretty much describe it as taking fanservice and turning it into a sports story.
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Either that or they were on an acid trip.
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The whole thing just sounded like someone melted the author’s brain.
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If you’ll pardon me for saying it, sounds like a bit of bull.
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Uh-huh, it does.
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Not T’Challa, his father, T’Chaka is the one who said it. Although, it was written by Reginald Hudlin, the man who turned Black Panther into a God-Mode Sue and Wakanda into a Marysuetopia.
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Maybe, but are you saying that doctors can’t be corrupted?
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Just now, Strange_idea said:
well, magic is too easilt abused, the lazarus is right out if you don;t want EVERYTHING to go gotham, and most of the others take time and personal attention from specific individuals. i think she meant commonly available, not stupidly expensive but available
I know what you meant, though I there are other drugs and miracle cures in the DC Universe that DON’T induce insanity.
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Then again, there are people who believe that if the cure for cancer was found and made widely available, then doctors and medical professionals at large would be out of a job. After all, as King T’Chaka said in the Black Panther comic and motion-comic, “Why cure a disease when people pay for medicine?”
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I know, although that does raise the question of why those remedies weren’t made widely available to the public.
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Indeed, Didio has a questionable grasp on what makes the characters good, same as Joe Quesada over at Marvel.
However, there is one creative decision Didio made that I could kind of see where he was coming from on. Namely, the decision to remove Barbara Gordan’s paralysis. He didn’t erase it from existence. Instead, he had it so that she got the use of her legs back through one of the various magic/super-scientific methods that are spread throughout the DC Universe. Namely, Didio said that with all of those remedies available in the DC Universe, it didn’t really make sense for her to stay as a paraplegic.
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True, as can poorly-handled ones.
Take the New 52, for example. There was no single cause to the New 52’s demise, but there was one thing that they could’ve done that would’ve saved it, one thing that, if they had done it, would’ve guaranteed the new readers that DC was trying to get. That one thing? Commit. They did not fully commit to the idea of the New 52 as a fresh start.
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Yeah, it can be confusing when multiple characters have the same title, although I do like the idea of legacy characters.
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All I meant was that we agree on why it’s not a good angle to go with.