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Rape is a common lazy way to give a female character a “tragic” past. TV Tropes has a page about this, as well as other aspects of fictional rape. Since we’re talking about porn stories, one presumes the rape is to be explicitly shown and is for the excitement of the reader. Lots of women get off on the concept of rape, i.e. as long as it’s pretend like a story or a roleplay, so there’s actually a sizable audience of women for stories with rape in them.

I've always shied away from this sort of self-promotion before, but I'm dreadfully excited about a new story so I'm taking the plunge. Stories are here: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296954634&view=story (mostly original works, some fanfic from time to time.) The new one specifically, is Cheer Raider & SABRE Panther, a magical girl/mecha team-up story with plenty of fun sexy times. I figure especially around here that's right up everybody's alley. It's a 13 "episode" series with new ones going up weekly. Also things got a little out of hand and I ended up with theme songs for it. So, enjoy that, and the other older stories, and future stories, and feel free to reply here with comments, questions, and discussion.

I forget the author that said this, but use a coincidence only to get your characters into trouble, not out of it.

Write stuff that doesn’t excite me, well not often, but I definitely have some ideas that are begging to be stories but don’t really feed into my personal kinks. So it will be interesting when I get around to them.

Some erotic fanfiction is used to create insane crack pairings, other erotic fanfiction is used to fulfill the sexual tension that obviously exists but the original show can never do anything about. Sometimes it’s about an actual canonical pairing and we just want to see them have sex rather than infer it from the fade-to-black. Lots of anime shows are practically sex farces but without any actual sex, and we are just dying for the hapless guy to go to bed with all the girls that are always fighting over him. In short, it matters a whole lot what show you are doing, what character pairing(s), and what your motivation for that is.

I’ve seen sites with name generators keyed to several specific genres, too. Sometimes I’ll just flip open the phone book to random pages. One time I did that with the in-flight magazine on an airplane.

It's a conscious design choice of HTML, the language that web pages are made of. The coding for paragraphs automatically provide a blank line between and no indentation. I could name a couple of ways to force it back to the more traditional presentation if you have full access to the code, but most story sites restrict the coding to a handful of very basic formatting features.

LockedBox: I'm just the messenger. I didn't invent those fetishes or the names for them. Though it's a porn story site here, you should probably expect to come across the "c-word" from time to time, used in the anatomical sense rather than the slur sense for the most part. Actual futanari characters in manga seem to hew more towards hermaphroditic since most I've seen have a pussy tucked away under their cock, but I presume there is a large cross-over between futa fans and fans of porn involving transitioning male-to-female transsexuals. There is also a large cross-over with furry fans for some reason I don't understand.

On another site that has a restriction against bestiality, the rule of thumb seems to be reproducibility. Mythical animals are fine, animals you can find here on earth in real life aren't. This is similar concept to the "nobody that looks underage, but under 18 and clearly looks over 18 is okay" rule I mentioned before. And obviously the rules, or lack of them, vary from site to site.

I'm less into writing manga/anime fanfic and more into writing original stories inspired by manga/anime genres. That's not quite the same, I guess? Other than for very recent series, there's probably enough fanfic on the web to last a while. I remember looking up Tenchi Muyo erotica fanfic years ago and there was a shitload available. And of course a good portion of Japanese porn doujinshi (fanfic comics) get translated and posted online.

On another forum I've been made aware of a thing I'd never encountered before. It's the inverse of futanari (girls with a penis) known as the cuntboy. Yep, a male with a vagina instead of a penis. Thereby enabling Mpreg quite easily. Don't ask me why this exist, I've never grasped the appeal of futanari either, but to each his own, yeah?

Any time somebody in some erotica site forum starts complaining about underage character restrictions, the inevitable dodge attempts come up. The android that looks like an adult but was only built five years ago. The 200-year-old vampire that was turned when she was 12 and hasn't aged since. The extraterrestrial that is well over 18 and an adult for her species, but adults of her species look like 12-year-old humans. The rule of thumb that is generally agreed upon is to consider what age actress would be required to play her in a film. If you've concocted some excuse why the underage girl having sex isn't really an underage girl, you are most likely trying to play to the pedophile fetish while using a rules lawyer type dodge to "technically" escape an anti-pedophile restriction.

Here's an idea for you, then. A while back, XKCD did a comic that explained the functions of a rocket using only simple words. Then he did a whole book of such diagrams. To facilitate this writing, he made a word checker tool that flags when a word is not in the most common words used. Afterwards, he made this checker publically available: http://blog.xkcd.com/2015/09/22/a-thing-explainer-word-checker/ I have decided to write the story in a much more simple style to reflect the character though. It's hard trying to remember that an 18 yr old who isn't all that bright probably wouldn't have a great vocabulary.

The examples given are poor, because no villain in a cartoon or video game meant for children will ever be allowed to even kill someone, much less do something really horrific. If you want to use, say, the Joker as a model, use Joker from the comics, not any television depiction. You are asking about a villain that has crossed the moral event horizon, rather than one that merely kicks the dog. Since we are talking about porn stories here, one obvious option is rape.

I've been using that sort of slang to help indicate intoxication in characters that are otherwise well-spoken. If a specific character is very informal and slangy all the time, that's fine, it helps them stand out, especially if you have many protagonists. The extreme form of this is http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FunetikAksentwhich is okay right up to the point where the reader has to think too hard to understand the dialogue. The process of reading should be seamless, without having to slow down or read things twice.

Your entire premise is off, because valkyries aren't warriors of the Norse gods, they are grim reapers for fallen human soldiers. I don't really recall any myths where god or the gods have an army of warriors. Such servents tend more to be messengers if anything. Most wars in the old myths where the gods are involved are proxy wars where each god choses a human side to represent them and helps their guys out in much smaller ways, or battles that are so big that only the gods themselves can fight in them. The view of Norse valktries or Judeo-Christian angels as a army of heavenly warriors comes more from modern pop culture, which usually borrows names from old myths more than it does portray the myths faithfully.

Porn stories are a form of escapism, especially those that focus on fetishes that are a little more out there, or would be difficult to manage in real life. Rape and sexual violence stand out as something that is best enjoyed vicariously through fiction. The interesting thing for me is, I don't have a rape fantasy fetish specifically, but women with a rape fantasy fetish fascinate me and I do rather enjoy assisting them with that.

All of that bullshit is fine if you're writing a travelouge for a fictional place. If you're writing a story, plot comes first. All world building elements presented to the reader should be related to the plot at hand. Incidental stuff is easiest, you can drop in names of your alien foods if the characters are having lunch, for instance. The longer the story goes, the more world building should sneak in naturally. The thing you should never do is digress from the story to spew world building at your reader. Sometimes there is necessary exposition, yes, but even that needs to be handled carefully to keep it from being boring. Television shows have more world building than a movie series, beacuse there are more episodes, more individual stories, and more hours of story. One thing about television shows, though, they do have what is called the series bible, which in a way actually is the world building you don't see. Because TV shows have a lot of writers, it's a document that is used to make sure they are all consistent on the crucial details, especially for the first few epsiodes that are written before anybody has actually seen the show on screen. The other thing about the series bible though, nothing there is set in stone until it's shown on screen. What I'm saying is, when creating a alien or fantasy world, hammer out the broad elements, and hammer out your storyline, and let them influence each other. Then, don't get too mired in the details of the world that are things you'll never be able to use. If you get an idea you like and don't know what to do with it at the moment, great, file it away for later. But don't sit with a checklist coming up with things that are unimportant when you could be writing the actual story instead.

I guess I'd never really thought about height all that much. I kind of figure the important features to mention are hair color, hair style, and (for women) breast size. I do lean twoards mentioning cup size, just because it's a familiar shorthand I can use to distinguish between "big" and "BIG". I throw in eye color as well, we tend to think that's important although I don't think it's something you really notice in people most of the time. Height, I just figure everybody is within the normal range of average height. There are times when I put more effort into describing clothing than the characters. We all know what people look like, though. It's hard, and probably unnecessary, to be hyper specific on appearance without hiring an artist to draw them or an actor/model to portray them.

Naga, or Lamia depending on who you ask. See also http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SnakePeople Satyr is Greek, as are harpies and the Gorgons. (The Gorgons are another interesting case, depending on what rendition of the Medusa myth you are reading.) Neko is just Japanese for "cat'. Catgirls, also known as "nekomimi" (literally "cat ears"). These are fandom names, actual species names are often something else. There are two different names for the catgirl race depending on which Final Fantasy game you are playing. Lots of feline races in western sci-fi, too, but far more in Japanese works, which is why the Japanese terms are popular. I think if you are doing alien races, they should have made-up names, though humans might be prone to using nicknames based on resemblences to creatures from their own culture. If a fantasy setting, go ahead with the traditional mythological names, as long as the setting is appropriate. A purely medieval European type setting would use "cat" over "neko", but if the catpeople are in-story native to a far east type region, they probably would go by "neko", and might be referred to with either name by people from the western type region.

Yeah, at this point I agree you're overthinking things. Sounds to me like what you're really after is something known as the "Upsuck Hypothesis" of the female orgasm. Or just use magic and be done with it.

Acedemic research, as opposed to commercial research, government research, and military research. If it is acedemic research, it would almost certainly be affiliated with a college or university. The facility would most likely actually be on campus, and second most likely be near to the campus, because these are professors and students that still have classes to attend. In rare instances, a professor might take his graduate students with on a research expedition, so if this is a remote facility they might go there for a few months to a year as part of that, but that's unlikely if you want a fully staffed building with ongoing research since it's hard to keep that going with a constant turnover of the people who are there.

I've read a lot of Japanese hentai manga (porn comics) in which the cervix is penetrated as if it's nothing. At least when it's a tentacle monster doing it, the length is there. When it's a supposedly normal guy doing it, it shows the author is ignorant of penis to vagina proprotions or just doesn't care. In a tentacle demon story I wrote, I made a specific point of saying the demon doesn't enter the cervix. However, I'm totally aware this fetish exists, and the imagery of the girl's abdomen protruding from the cock or tentacle pushing against the inside of the womb is a strong one, if only because it is so goddamn absurd. So in the interests of giving the audience what at least some of them apparently want, I've put some thought into this. So as long as you're in a fantasy or scifi setting to begin with, there are two "plausible" things to remember, which has already been mentioned. One, the cervix opens fairly wide during childbirth. This is generally a function of hormones, all the inner workings of reproductive systems are regulated by hormones. Introduction of the right hormones at an inappropriate time could have interesting effects. Two, during normal periods the cervix is closed but its opening still runs through it. It's just very small. Something, or rather a lot of something, that is similarly very small should be able to get through unnoticed. Once on the other side, in the womb, they can have a little more fun. It's not quite the same as a full blown cervix penetration, but the end effect should be just as good to fulfill the fetish.

Two ways you could take it, then. One, give enough information for context of these two movie characters getting together. You not going to want to retell the whole movie, but just drop a nutshell version of the danger they're in, what's brought them to this point. Then after your inserted sex scene, bring it back to the movie events briefly, say they are still afraid of dying but maybe just a little bit less now, and end. You wouldn't even have to put the original movie's title in your story title, make that something that will draw readers in. Mention the original movie in your disclaimer, and that will be enough that readers can go look it up if they want. Or, as the other folks said, drop the original movie and just port the concept to an original story. The main downside of that is rather than just the one scene, you'd be pretty much expected to have an entire story, from the introduction of the threat all the way through to the last survivors defeating or escaping it. The upside to that though is you could expand things to many, rather than just one, sex scenes on the theme of "since we're going to die anyway". That gives you a lot of opportunity. Instead of just your one "girl fucks a guy she would never otherwise even look at because right now she'd fuck anyone" you can have things like: A virgin that was saving herself for marriage decide to give it up so she won't die a virgin (bonus irony if she survives) Someone finally confessing to their secret crush since this will be their last chance, and either the other person feels the same way and they fuck, or they don't feel the same way but given the situation they go with it and fuck anyway. (bonus points for a same-gender crush, especially with the doesn't-feel-the-same-but-let's-fuck-anyway version) Somebody getting to cross something off their fetish bucket list since this is going to be their last chance (something as simple as anal, or double/triple penetration, all the way to fulfilling their bicuriosity)

The mechanics of things, grammar, sentence structure, you really should have down by the time you get to high school. Classes on writing would, I expect, help you with things like story structure, common themes and how to use them. Though honestly, it's likely nothing you wouldn't pick up by spending time at TVtropes or just reading/watching a lot of stories.