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Hey Samara, hope your doing OK over there

Hey Joe, have you seen the new Assassins Creed trailer?

Which means its almost done

Agreed, anymore than chapter 5 and I think it will have been stretched too far. Unless (as always) you manage to throw in a lot of twists.

A friend and I had an arm wrestling match similar to Alan and joes, with almost the same result. We were tied for a few minutes until another friend poked me in the side (I'm really ticklish)

Maybe the sub that was stationed near the house blocked and intercepted the signal

Maybe legion is rebelling

Cliffhangers should be one of the seven deadly sins... But aside from that I liked this chapter, and this book already seems like it will have an overall more emotional feel to it. Kinda disappointed the SG didn't attack but I'm sure it will come in good time (and I think now is a good time)

If you called it brains in the grass we would have to call it bitg2 so we dont get confused lol

I never said he was SANE, just that I would lose hope in what itty bitty piece of sanity he has

If this actually happens I will question what little sanity you have lol. Guessing its a flashback to whichever girl dies.

OK, of no one else is gonna say it I will... Wat dafuq lol

Better to crawl than just give up completely, that would be more embarrassing.

Is it weird how there's 141 pages on this forum? Just goes to show how much we like to talk about the evil ones masterpieces.

How's it going Joe?

I'm thinking the first offensive will be legion. Max will be distraught over any deaths to do anything for a while but with the influence of jazz tali and cat legion will let loose his power.

To the major, good luck and god speed your recovery. You really are a lucky SOB. To Magus, EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH.But great chapter and hurry up and write more

Just read it there. In regards to Tommy I haven't really developed him yet shearley because um still a little on the fence on how I want him to turn out. The entire last scene was just so I could make some cameos for other stories (my three favourite, bitg, She is the one and being more social)

I'm looking for some reviews of my stories while I'm on a break for exams. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107123

He can be downloaded

Its not showing up for me?

So is more alcohol

Me neither, 63 chapters seems to be just long enough for all your little convoluted mind fucks and Cliffhanger's

What are the odds the next book will be 63 chapters long as well?

A prolonged update guys. So, its that time of the year, as many of you know, called exam season *sigh* :'( And since I have ALOT of material to go over I won't be able to right anymore than what I already have (first two scenes). At least until the end of May. But what I wanted to do in this gap was ask, in all honesty, full critique mode, what do you guys think of my story? What do you like about it? What maybe you don't like about it? I want some full blown rants because I love CONSTRUCTIVE critisicm, stuff to do with a specific persons morales aren't ignored but take a side seat. Anyway, thanks in advance and I'll see you all in june, hopefully with more of the chapter (I will still be active on here by the way)